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Post by Deleted on Jul 28, 2018 20:32:57 GMT -5
ValeClan If it is our fate to fall,Introduction...
Rules...
Joining Form...
^^^ this clan XD basic layout at least, finally got it working - took an age
Sorry Broken, but you've failed to follow multiple rules. Fix them and you'd be welcome )[/b][/sub]
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Post by Jekyll on Jul 28, 2018 20:33:42 GMT -5
I'll be sure to check it out and possibly join velveteen))
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Post by Deleted on Jul 28, 2018 20:51:15 GMT -5
(I attempted to fix the form.and I didn't know if I had to put the code thingy on both forms)
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Post by Deleted on Jul 28, 2018 20:53:48 GMT -5
(you still need your forms to be a minimum of 6 lines long?)
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Post by Stealthfire on Jul 28, 2018 20:54:52 GMT -5
Stormstar was bound to come up in conversation at one point or another, as it seemed that was what every cat was talking about. Well, every cat besides Nightshriek. He was so caught up in stressing about his day to day activities, and how he'd go about them without making a fool of himself, that he had hardly even thought about his leader and her recent kitting. He took a moment to think about it, seemingly coming up with his opinions right on the spot. "I think Duskfrost will do fine, taking her place for the time being." He meowed with a slight shrug. He had hardly lifted his head from laying on his paws, if that gave the she-cat any hint about how he felt about the topic. "Plus, it's not like she's dead. She can still advise him if he needs it." He pointed out. Duskfrost was a fine deputy, and he didn't think the clan would go to ruins immediately if Stormstar wasn't exactly fit to do her role. "I don't think it was exactly smart of her to have kits in the middle of her leadership, but that's all said and done. The clan isn't a bunch of mouse-brains. I think we'll be fine." He concluded. (Looks sweeeeet Velvet! You can count on me to be a member ) Palewater watched Nightshriek carefully. He was honest, and she appreciated that when so many cats couldn't bear to seem anything but interested in the leader and her choices. "Of course. Duskfrost is very capable," she agreed blandly. "Stormstar made her choice, which in the end is the only thing that matters naturally...You're right, some cats in this clan are strong enough to hold us all together for now." Palewater finished speaking, and noticed Nightshriek's disinterest in the topic. To be honest, she also cared little for talk of Stormstar. The grey tabby she-cat much preferred action. "Well apparently, there's already a hunting patrol out. And if we don't have to worry about food, want to brush up on some battle moves?" She got to her paws. "I'm feeling rusty these days. And it sure beats hunting. Let's go." Palewater made her way to leave, having given him little choice. She believed he'd follow, Palewater didn't judge the tom to be too fond of staring at fish bones in a hectic camp.
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Post by Deleted on Jul 28, 2018 20:55:38 GMT -5
(sori for wasting your time,I'll fix em)
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Post by Deleted on Jul 28, 2018 21:06:54 GMT -5
(as Sky has made us aware of them being busy, shall I just have storm wake up so we can continue with her?)
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Post by Deleted on Jul 28, 2018 21:09:35 GMT -5
Sootclaw nodded in agreement to Addereye's comment. He found it hard to think of any cat who didn't hold Stormstar in the highest respect after all she'd done for them. Far ahead, the grey tom spotted the slightly pronounced line of trees marking Shadow Woods. Although he had scented a few mice along the way, the trails were stale. Sootclaw pressed on, certain that the very edges of the territory would be home to the best prey, since hunting patrols rarely ventured as far as the border. Addereye followed, she looked around the new scenery, she'd never gone this deep into the territory before. She wagged her tail from side to side as her eyes shined with excitement. She looked at Sootclaw, she didn't really know him that well and maybe now was their time to bond. "So what's the deal with you can your sis?" Bonding to Addereye was just, hey let me bother you until you tell me your secrets. She walked beside him and looked at him straight in the eye.
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Post by Stealthfire on Jul 28, 2018 21:09:48 GMT -5
(Sure, I have Lichenstone if he's any help lol..I'm also thinking of making another cat, any ideas for where to slot her in or a plot line we need filling?)
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Post by Deleted on Jul 28, 2018 21:12:18 GMT -5
(Yeah, I was thinking about creating a cat. That'd be my third cat meaning I'd have to create a darkforest ally. I'd like to have them help fill in a slot for the plot if you need any.)
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Post by Deleted on Jul 28, 2018 21:13:09 GMT -5
(anyone in the den is of use right now )
Lurching from her nest with a sudden scream, her heart racing and eyes wide. She was covered in fresh wounds from nose to tail tip and she was bleeding heavily from multiple places, especially her neck and underbelly. Barely noticing the mewls of protest her sudden movement created from the tiny kits beside her, a growl tore from her lips as though terrified the battle had followed her into the real world. Looking around, eyes wide and entire frame shaking until she could barely keep herself on her paws. "Bleakfang," she growled. Tail lashing from side to side, she didn't move to soothe her kits, delerious and in a panic.
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Post by Deleted on Jul 28, 2018 21:16:19 GMT -5
(I'm 97% sure I need to fix something again but I attempted to fix them again)
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Post by Deleted on Jul 28, 2018 21:17:44 GMT -5
(SSSSSOOOOOO close. check your spelling of the password)
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Post by Stealthfire on Jul 28, 2018 21:19:42 GMT -5
Lichenstone started awake. He had curled up against the far wall of the den after falling asleep visiting the kits. His pelt stood on end, it had been a long time since anyone had spoken with such terrible emotion. The old tom's eyes adjusted to see Stormstar's panicked state and her kits confusion. Had he missed something? "Bleak.." he trailed off, desperately trying to put together the pieces. "What makes you say his name? What is it, Stormstar?" His eyes shone with concern and fear at the mention of the monster.
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Post by Stealthfire on Jul 28, 2018 21:23:07 GMT -5
(Also I'm gonna be real sad and have Lichenstone having lost some of his kits and his mate to Bleakfang's reign?)
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Post by Deleted on Jul 28, 2018 21:24:02 GMT -5
Panting heavily, her russet coat growing heavy and matted with the blood seeping from her wounds, the new mother desperately tried to pull herself together in spite of the panic and pain. Looking to her mate's father, eyes wide and tail active and panicked. "I had a dream," she stammered in response, looking to her sister with a level of desperation in her gaze. "He attacked me." She stared down at her kits, eyes darkened with panic as she remembered his promise for her tiny newborns. Lowering her nose, ignoring the blood dripping from it as she checked her kits protectively, touching her torn face to their tiny frame's, as though desperately checking for injuries or signs of harm. "He tried to force me to give the kits to him, or he promised to take them for himself."
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Post by Deleted on Jul 28, 2018 21:24:21 GMT -5
(that's the longest I've ever been confused about something lmao.I can't read)
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Post by Deleted on Jul 28, 2018 21:24:24 GMT -5
(that would be fine with me and realistic too unfortunately)
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Post by Deleted on Jul 28, 2018 21:28:05 GMT -5
(you got there in the end bn XD all added)
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Post by Deleted on Jul 28, 2018 21:29:36 GMT -5
(thank you.You,aside from Dark,have the most patience with me lmao)
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Post by Stealthfire on Jul 28, 2018 21:30:58 GMT -5
Lichenstone's nose noticed the blood before his eyes could. "StarClan.." he uttered. "Help!" he yowled, jutting his head out of the den's entrance. "Cinderdove! Bramblepaw!" The tom trembled with stress. He was alarmed at the state of his leader, but couldn't bring himself to leave her. As her words began to sink in, Lichenstone's face changed from panic to a grave horror. "He has no power anymore, no power here anymore.." he spoke, more to himself than Stormstar.
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Post by Deleted on Jul 28, 2018 21:34:12 GMT -5
(so,anyone wanna RP?I have Snaketail the manipulative one I should've named Snakeeyes and Dirtfur,the reincarnation of Dirtpelt.)
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Post by Deleted on Jul 28, 2018 21:35:00 GMT -5
Most would never see the leader so shaken, but she could barely keep herself upright as fear soared through her veins and made her stomach turn over. Hushing the tiny kits to sleep, she didn't lay back beside them as she turned her head to her mate's father. Trying to think straight, but her head pounded from the pain. "I thought so too," she whispered. The encounter with the tom who called himself her father left her shaken, long tail wrapping itself around her kits she drew them close to her side in a protective manner. "I was clearly wrong."
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Post by Stealthfire on Jul 28, 2018 21:38:55 GMT -5
Sootclaw's pace faltered for the first time since their departure. "You're asking about Palewater?" he replied nonchalantly. Sootclaw shrugged. "She clearly doesn't want anything to with me, and I don't need to bother her." Sootclaw prayed he could leave it at that, but he knew it wasn't the whole truth. If anything, Sootclaw was more adamant about being distant from his sister, and she stayed away from him out of a general indisposition to most cats.
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Post by Stealthfire on Jul 28, 2018 21:40:29 GMT -5
(Mine are all occupied broken sorry, unless I finish making my new one soon here))
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Post by Stealthfire on Jul 28, 2018 21:46:52 GMT -5
Lichenstone's old frame shook as he drew closer to the she-cat. "No," he tried to comfort, "The Dark Forest's power could never be strong enough to take your kits from you." He grew angry as he said those words. They were useless. The Dark Forest's power already did this to his leader. The normally calm tom was struggling to collect himself. He prayed help would arrive soon, and carefully found a patch of fur on Stormstar's pelt that wasn't torn. He tried to give a comforting lick, but found himself having to press on through the tang of blood which covered her. He wasn't sure how much more he could speak of Bleakfang without collapsing into the grief that consumed him for so long.
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Post by Deleted on Jul 28, 2018 21:52:15 GMT -5
Burrowing her nose into the pile of her mewling newborns, she was shaking impossible hard and it seemed as though for a moment she hadn't heard what had been said by the older tom. Her eyes cold, she grew still suddenly as she tried to sit straight with a shake of her head. "I've never heard him sound so certain," her voice was hoarse with a grief already having embedded itself into her heart. "I don't know why, but he demanded the kits." She whispered, cuddling the kits closer to her flank, where the kits continued to mewl and squirm in confusion at the sudden change. 'Before their eyes open and they gaze upon the stench of weakness this pitiful Clan now reeks in. Give them to me, lest your Clan find itself broken once more' she quoted her father's chilling words with a pitiful whimper.
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Post by Stealthfire on Jul 28, 2018 22:08:40 GMT -5
(For reference AKA so I don't forget -- Lichenstone's love Rainlark was a former kittypet, and was one of the first to go under Bleakfang. His two daughters from the litter after Bumbleberry died fighting the Black Forest. This is why he loves Bumbleberry so much and ALSO sad because he loves Stormstar like his daughters))
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Post by Deleted on Jul 28, 2018 22:11:11 GMT -5
(gosh darn it stealth)
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Post by Stealthfire on Jul 28, 2018 22:16:19 GMT -5
Lichenstone shivered without meaning to. The words sounded so raw and real, there was no questioning what Stormstar experienced. Lichenstone glared into the darkness behind Stormstar. Both cats were there, yet both were in another world. Stormstar, caught in her dream, and Lichenstone, trapped in memories fit for nightmares. "You are not helpless in this." He told the she-cat. Bleakfang had a way of making his intentions seem inevitable, but he was still gone. Lichenstone was a powerfully faithful cat, and knew that as long as Bleakfang had the Dark Forest, his clan had StarClan. "You cannot believe he has already won. Whatever he means to do, it's not unstoppable. He's not unstoppable."
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