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Post by ʀᴀɪɴʟᴇᴀғ 🍁 on Jul 10, 2018 15:00:26 GMT -5
[ I'm not quite sure. I'm not exactly sold on the past plot because no one seemed to exactly jump on it?]
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Post by Deleted on Jul 10, 2018 15:02:58 GMT -5
(I quite like it! And was looking forward to breeze x spider XD)
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Bisexual
#ffc5c5
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Post by ʀᴀɪɴʟᴇᴀғ 🍁 on Jul 10, 2018 15:12:52 GMT -5
[ Eh.. I'm just not sure about it. I may try to work on a new one.]
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Post by Deleted on Jul 10, 2018 15:16:40 GMT -5
(ok, would you like to roleplay in the meantime?)
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Post by Sand on Jul 10, 2018 15:24:07 GMT -5
[ will get my replies out tonight ]
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Bisexual
#ffc5c5
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Post by ʀᴀɪɴʟᴇᴀғ 🍁 on Jul 10, 2018 15:49:36 GMT -5
[ Who would we role-play? We're all in weird positions in my opinion.]
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Post by Deleted on Jul 10, 2018 15:52:11 GMT -5
[sub(spider could return?)[/sun
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Bisexual
#ffc5c5
Official Queen of Fan Clans
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Post by ʀᴀɪɴʟᴇᴀғ 🍁 on Jul 10, 2018 17:13:27 GMT -5
[ I could message Pommy and let her know her characters are free?]
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Post by Deleted on Jul 10, 2018 17:14:29 GMT -5
(pommy?)
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Bisexual
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Post by ʀᴀɪɴʟᴇᴀғ 🍁 on Jul 10, 2018 17:15:09 GMT -5
[ I could message Pommy and let her know her characters are free?]
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Post by Deleted on Jul 10, 2018 17:18:44 GMT -5
(I still dont know who pommy is? Blue moon?)
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Post by Sand on Jul 10, 2018 17:28:34 GMT -5
[ Yes, Blue Moon = Pommy. ]
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Post by Deleted on Jul 10, 2018 17:32:39 GMT -5
(ah, thank you and sure)
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Post by Sand on Jul 10, 2018 17:49:58 GMT -5
[ No problem! ]
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Post by Sand on Jul 10, 2018 18:19:42 GMT -5
Thistlepaw ; accompanied by Robinpaw .. {{ ʀᴀɪɴʟᴇᴀғ 🍁 }} {{ dawn - hollyclan's camp }}
Had Thistlepaw realized that Robinpaw was pulling another trick on her, maybe she would have thought things through. But now-- it was too late, she was too invested in his pranks and she wanted to show him all she had to prove that she could fight her battles. Even if they were meaningless pranks. Slightly dazed as she landed on the tom's back, she gripped onto him with her claws. As he huffed and collapsed to the ground, she was sure she could win this fight even though she was smaller and unexperienced compared to Robinpaw. "Ha! I knew you were weak!" she proclaimed, eyes glistening with certainty.
To be honest, Thistlepaw wondered why the brown tabby hadn't answered her questions, but maybe it was simply an answer of guilt. If he was guilty, then her theory was proved. However, she was hesitant to believe that was the truth. After all, Robinpaw only bothered her and none of the other apprentices which only made her question his tactics. Was he trying to fool her again or was she wrong yet again? She had to be wrong, it wouldn't make any sense if he was after her because she was easily angered. Letting out a short huff, the tortoiseshell kept her claws in Robinpaw's fur but swayed when he began to mrrow louder. He was trying to shake her off which made her lose part of her grip. "Stop moving around!" the feline growled sharply. "I'm going to fall off if you continue, Robinpaw!"
As soon as the older apprentice tried to flip around, he had suddenly stopped without any warning. Had he listened to Thistlepaw? Surprise was plastered across her face until the tabby began to cry. She couldn't see the mischievous look on his maw, though she grew skeptic of his tactics yet again. "Hey! I'm not mad! If anything, you're the mad one!" Thistlepaw meowed loudly in response, trying to put her other paw in his face. It was difficult for her to move, especially with him lying flat on the ground after she had lost her grip on Robinpaw.
Growing frustrated, the tortie let out a hiss, "Shut up, Robinpaw! I'm not doing anything to you, so don't act like a kit! My claws aren't even digging into your pelt!"
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Post by ʀᴀɪɴʟᴇᴀғ 🍁 on Jul 11, 2018 2:34:05 GMT -5
[ When you fall asleep and forget to reply.. I'll do a poll for a remake. Along with that, I'll make a post of possible changes. Mainly rules and plot suggestions. I'm open to ideas as lpng as they are appropriate.]
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Post by Deleted on Jul 11, 2018 2:40:40 GMT -5
(ok! Are you open to ideas? I had a couple)
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Post by ʀᴀɪɴʟᴇᴀғ 🍁 on Jul 11, 2018 2:47:01 GMT -5
[ As long as they are appropriate.]
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Post by ʀᴀɪɴʟᴇᴀғ 🍁 on Jul 11, 2018 5:17:34 GMT -5
m a j o r u p d a t e [ remake | plots | changes & suggestions ] remake general Due to absences of mine, HollyClan has gone inactive in my opinion. I want to make it more active and address potential issues. One idea that could fix this is remaking the Clan. Of course, this would mean different scenarios for what could happen. I will try my best to go into enough detail, but swiftly explain those scenarios as well as potential ideas to encourage activity. I have also placed a poll, depending on the results will depend on the Clan's remake.
scenario one The entire Clan is rebooted from square one. Those that do not wish to rejoin or continue will be deleted and all relations will be reset. This means you could have a different mentor, apprentice, mate, crush, and so on. You will be allowed a week to change out characters (however you're welcome to make characters you do not want to role-play NPCs). We could have different cats in the roles, just an overall mix-up. Everyone gets a fresh start if they wish.
scenario two We continue on with our role-play, but perhaps skip to the Gathering to introduce everyone to the Tribe. Members of the Tribe are free to make, but note they will not appear often. Those that do not wish to rejoin or continue will have their characters deleted and we will introduce a sickness subplot to the Clan. This will kill off characters that will technically no longer "exist" without breaking continuity. (If you have other ideas in mind, like role-playing the exit of your character, please pm for more information.)
plots general In addition to my little breaks, we have not had a proper plot. I was intending to take suggestions but each suggestion was for a side plot. I'm welcome to more ideas as long as they are not focused on one character in particular, they include everyone in some way, and it does have some meaningful impact on the Clan other than just drama.
plot one To get the Tribe more into the role-play, I was thinking of there being a forbidden romance between a Tribe cat and Clan cat, leading to half-Clan kits and a war where the Tribe and Clan raids each other for the kits until either the mother moves or the father moves. To add on, I want to make Brackenswipe a villain. He wants to chase HollyClan out so the Tribe can prosper, but Cloudwatcher wants to remain as peaceful as possible. So he uses the war to his advantage and maybe aims to kill Cloudwatcher so he can become Brackenwatcher as well. I think he may end up succeeding and stuff happens.
plot two It rains and storms for several days, causing damage to the forest and the river and streams to flood. Sections of the territory are blocked off by water or fallen trees. The camp is deemed safe until the rains continue, causing the ravine to fill with water. The Clan must relocate to a new area and quickly before the river bursts again. The rain stops and the Clan must scout out the damage. This can lead to the damage of old landmarks and also the creation of new landmarks. They must also clear the camp. The plot will end with a small timeskip to a moon later.
changes & suggestions rules & joining I'm considering going through the rules with a fine tooth comb and perhaps making changes where the rules are a bit cloudy and there are loopholes that need to be addressed, as well possibly making some additions. Regarding joining, I may make it a requirement that at least one of your characters has a relation other than friendship to another member of the Clan. I was hoping I wouldn't have to enforce that, but everyone seems to be related to their own characters. I also thought about changing the joining form to where you have a shorter, easier to read form over a longer, more detailed. However, I'm not too sure, I need to talk to some people because it could mean coding changes. The form change will also only happen if there is a remake. If we continue on, we'll use the same forms.
suggestions If you have an appropriate way that won't change the Clan much for a better function as well as not taking away certain requirements, I'm open to those. I also see now that my intention of being swift and to the point has gone out the window, so my apologies.
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Post by Sparkly on Jul 11, 2018 6:24:12 GMT -5
(Personally, I don't think that HollyClan should be remade entirely (Eg: Deleting the thread and reposting with a lot of things different). I'm okay with either scenario if HollyClan is remade, but Scenario 2 would be preferential personally. With plots, I think that Plot 2 would be better, maybe as a lead into Plot 1. As the Clan is rebuilding, Brackenswipe might lead a portion of the Tribe to attack HollyClan, which leads into some sort of war? Just an idea. I hope that my input has helped. )
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Post by ʀᴀɪɴʟᴇᴀғ 🍁 on Jul 11, 2018 7:54:45 GMT -5
[ I didn't make it clear, but we can also do the scenarios without remaking everything really? We'd use the same thread, but start all over and keep everything the same instead of me going through things and revamping them. I also like your idea to combine the two plots, Sparkly.]
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Post by Sand on Jul 11, 2018 9:32:52 GMT -5
[ I do like Sparkly’s idea of combining the two plots! I think it’ll work really well.
In my opinion, I don’t think it’s necessary to remake the thread. It’s been a tad inactive, yes, but that’s been the forums overall at least from what I notice. ]
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Post by Deleted on Jul 11, 2018 10:28:37 GMT -5
(In agreement that its not necessary to remake the thread)
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Post by ʀᴀɪɴʟᴇᴀғ 🍁 on Jul 11, 2018 10:42:33 GMT -5
[ Alright, what about a reboot?]
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Post by Deleted on Jul 11, 2018 10:46:20 GMT -5
(II personally think its fine as it is, if you just change the plot bit )[/]
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Post by ⁻ ⁻ ☾ ᵇˡᵘᵉ ᵐᵒᵒᶰ on Jul 12, 2018 1:02:06 GMT -5
hello! i'm here! i think a reboot would be a fine idea, sorry about my absence as well ;o; I'm going to try to be more active, but my mental health is not agreeing with me. I'm alright, just having a bit of a depressive slump that really drains my RP muse.. ]
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Post by Deleted on Jul 12, 2018 2:55:36 GMT -5
(so sorry to hear it pommy)
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