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Post by Katanaheart on Sept 24, 2018 16:23:23 GMT -5
(That’s hard since loners travel from place to place. So there wouldn’t exactly be a storm of them, without their being a group, and in which they wouldn’t exactly be loners by Clan definition then... Take some time to try and remember your original idea!)
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Post by ivysaur on Sept 25, 2018 0:46:11 GMT -5
(hopefully this is good enough for the next line i cant really thing of anything that good either) The treasure-hunters are all stumped with the next line. While hunting though, Eveningpaw and Morningpaw see the IvyClan cats arguing with some strangers. They stay hidden until IvyClan walks away in frustration and approach the strange cats. They were a large group of loners who all acted very cryptic and tricky, even encouraging the two to get mad at each other. They both snap out of it and bring the rest of AppleClan to them, convinced that this is what storms of loners meant. Leader: Mothstar - A small golden-brown she-cat with blue eyes. 9 lives remaining. Apprentice, Eveningpaw Deputy: Cloudmint - A fluffy dappled light grey she-cat with dark green eyes. Apprentice, Mistpaw Medicine cats: Iceflower - A white she-cat with blue eyes. She is deaf. Wolfleaf - A short fluffy dark grey and white she-cat with blue eyes. (Treasure-hunting.) Warriors: Kingflame - A fluffy black tom with a white chest and golden eyes. Apprentice Shinepaw Gazelleleap - A golden tabby she-cat with amber eyes. Apprentice, Morningpaw Lionsky - A handsome golden tabby tom with green eyes. (Treasure hunting.) Apprentice, Scorchpaw Nightfire - A beautiful tuxedo she-cat with green eyes. (Treasure hunting.) Roseshard - A dark grey tabby she-cat with pretty green eyes. (Treasure-hunting.) Longflight - A large, handsome, black-and-white Siamese tom with one green eye and one blue eye. (Treasure-hunting.) Shrewclaw- a reddish-brown tom with green eyes. Apprentices: (All treasure-hunting but Shinepaw) Eveningpaw- a tortoiseshell she-cat with bright yellow eyes Morningpaw- A gray and cream patched tom with green eyes. Scorchpaw - A fluffy dark grey she-cat with brown spots on her nose and tail. Mistpaw - A fluffy pale grey tom with black stripes. Shinepaw - A pure white she-cat with golden eyes. Queens: Streamlily - A beautiful golden Siamese she-cat with blue eyes. (Expecting Shrewclaw’s kits.) Elders: None
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Post by Katanaheart on Sept 25, 2018 0:47:28 GMT -5
(I still have nothing. Hopefully this all ends soon.)
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Pansexual
Sparkly
Unofficial Forum President, and the unofficial patrol saint of black cats with blue eyes.
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Post by Sparkly on Sept 25, 2018 1:06:33 GMT -5
(You're amazing, Ivysaur!)
The AppleClan cats follow the loners secretly to their camp - well, sort of camp, unaware that IvyClan is following them. After a fight outside the camp, where Eveningpaw loses an eye, the AppleClan cats are allowed into the camp, where they find a medium-sized box buried in camp. They open it to find that the knowledge and treasure is inside. Hysterical with excitement, the group thanks the loners profusely, before bringing the box back to the Clan. This astounds Mothstar and Cloudmint, who both assumed the hunt to be a hoax. In thankfulness, all four apprentices are given their warrior names - their training was near-complete anyway, and they learned a lot whilst away.
Leader: Mothstar - A small golden-brown she-cat with blue eyes. 9 lives remaining.
Deputy: Cloudmint - A fluffy dappled light grey she-cat with dark green eyes.
Medicine cats: Iceflower - A white she-cat with blue eyes. She is deaf. Wolfleaf - A short fluffy dark grey and white she-cat with blue eyes.
Warriors: Kingflame - A fluffy black tom with a white chest and golden eyes. Apprentice Shinepaw
Gazelleleap - A golden tabby she-cat with amber eyes.
Lionsky - A handsome golden tabby tom with green eyes.
Nightfire - A beautiful tuxedo she-cat with green eyes.
Roseshard - A dark grey tabby she-cat with pretty green eyes.
Longflight - A large, handsome, black-and-white Siamese tom with one green eye and one blue eye.
Shrewclaw- a reddish-brown tom with green eyes.
Eveningstorm - a tortoiseshell she-cat with one bright yellow eye.
Morningfang - A grey and cream patched tom with green eyes.
Scorchgolden - A fluffy dark grey she-cat with brown spots on her nose and tail.
Misttrail - A fluffy pale grey tom with black stripes.
Apprentices: Shinepaw - A pure white she-cat with golden eyes.
Queens: Streamlily - A beautiful golden Siamese she-cat with blue eyes. (Expecting Shrewclaw’s kits.)
Elders: None
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Post by Katanaheart on Sept 25, 2018 1:10:36 GMT -5
(I wanted punishment, not rewards. :/ )
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Post by Katanaheart on Sept 25, 2018 1:10:58 GMT -5
(Also it’s just a box, you don’t even mention what’s in it.(
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Post by Katanaheart on Sept 25, 2018 1:12:32 GMT -5
(Also with the context of one moon passing, all of the apprentices are still apprentices with Eveningpaw and Morningpaw being the eldest ones.
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Post by ivysaur on Sept 25, 2018 1:13:06 GMT -5
(hopefully it was alright with how you wanted the plot to go! what was in the box?) Despite returning home as warriors, Mothstar wasn't ready to let all of them go without punishment. They are assigned apprentice duties for a moon and are banned from gatherings for five moons. They seems to accept this, saying that the journey itself was worth it. Leader: Mothstar - A small golden-brown she-cat with blue eyes. 9 lives remaining. Deputy: Cloudmint - A fluffy dappled light grey she-cat with dark green eyes. Medicine cats: Iceflower - A white she-cat with blue eyes. She is deaf. Wolfleaf - A short fluffy dark grey and white she-cat with blue eyes. Warriors: Kingflame - A fluffy black tom with a white chest and golden eyes. Apprentice Shinepaw Gazelleleap - A golden tabby she-cat with amber eyes. Lionsky - A handsome golden tabby tom with green eyes. Nightfire - A beautiful tuxedo she-cat with green eyes. Roseshard - A dark grey tabby she-cat with pretty green eyes. Longflight - A large, handsome, black-and-white Siamese tom with one green eye and one blue eye. Shrewclaw- a reddish-brown tom with green eyes. Eveningstorm - a tortoiseshell she-cat with one bright yellow eye. Morningfang - A grey and cream patched tom with green eyes. Scorchgolden - A fluffy dark grey she-cat with brown spots on her nose and tail. Misttrail - A fluffy pale grey tom with black stripes. Apprentices: Shinepaw - A pure white she-cat with golden eyes. Queens: Streamlily - A beautiful golden Siamese she-cat with blue eyes. (Expecting Shrewclaw’s kits.) Elders: None
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Post by Katanaheart on Sept 25, 2018 1:17:46 GMT -5
With the tales of what they have learned, and the unfair punishment given the risks involved. Scorchgolden becomes displeased enough with the punishment period alongside, Mothstar’s angry Glares piercing into her back. As if she was to blame for the various deaths while on the hunt. Enraged the she-cat leaves the Clan, becoming a loner and uses only her prefix as a name, Scorch. She then leaves the Clan entirely, not even telling her brother that she is leaving. Leader: Mothstar - A small golden-brown she-cat with blue eyes. 9 lives remaining. Deputy: Cloudmint - A fluffy dappled light grey she-cat with dark green eyes. Medicine cats: Iceflower - A white she-cat with blue eyes. She is deaf. Wolfleaf - A short fluffy dark grey and white she-cat with blue eyes. Warriors: Kingflame - A fluffy black tom with a white chest and golden eyes. Apprentice Shinepaw Gazelleleap - A golden tabby she-cat with amber eyes. Lionsky - A handsome golden tabby tom with green eyes. Nightfire - A beautiful tuxedo she-cat with green eyes. Roseshard - A dark grey tabby she-cat with pretty green eyes. Longflight - A large, handsome, black-and-white Siamese tom with one green eye and one blue eye. Shrewclaw- a reddish-brown tom with green eyes. Eveningstorm - a tortoiseshell she-cat with one bright yellow eye. Morningfang - A grey and cream patched tom with green eyes. Misttrail - A fluffy pale grey tom with black stripes. Apprentices: Shinepaw - A pure white she-cat with golden eyes. Queens: Streamlily - A beautiful golden Siamese she-cat with blue eyes. (Expecting Shrewclaw’s kits.) Elders: None Read more: wcrpforums.com/thread/59002/history-clan-game?page=75#ixzz5S5jeeGs0
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Post by Katanaheart on Sept 25, 2018 1:18:46 GMT -5
(I like to think that inside the box, there was a stash of stored herbs and prey, and the loners would pass on the information. Also, I think that cats that literally brought their Clan new battle moves and information on the other Clans deserve a reward. Plus, you wanted it to end. Stop being so picky.) (I also kept hinting at punishment. Which you had decided not to carry out.)
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Post by Katanaheart on Sept 25, 2018 1:21:36 GMT -5
(Not that it matters since Ivysaur fixed that... I had wanted to handle the punishments since it would’ve been more severe. But what’s been done is done.)
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Post by Katanaheart on Sept 25, 2018 1:25:37 GMT -5
(THEY DON'T DESERVE PUNISHMENT FOR CRYING OUT LOUD!!!!!!!!! When will it get to you that not everything has to involve murder or punishment or leaving the Clan!?!? Why can't you just let other people be HAPPY, rather than constantly dumping in angst and drama and whatever!?) (Probably, because that’s actually exciting? And builds emotional attachments, you waved aside potential tension that could’ve been exciting to explore earlier at the beginning of this hunt, for one example! They can be happy at times, but that is merely the fleeting images of Light. There is plenty of darkness around, which involves suffering, death, and drama. It can’t always be happy.)
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Post by Katanaheart on Sept 25, 2018 1:27:38 GMT -5
Mothstar considers Scorchgolden exiles, and of Eveningstorm does not return soon. She shall be exiled as well, her punishments could have been worse, and it is not her fault if young cats wish to question the order of their leader. Leader: Mothstar - A small golden-brown she-cat with blue eyes. 9 lives remaining. Deputy: Cloudmint - A fluffy dappled light grey she-cat with dark green eyes. Medicine cats: Iceflower - A white she-cat with blue eyes. She is deaf. Wolfleaf - A short fluffy dark grey and white she-cat with blue eyes. Warriors: Kingflame - A fluffy black tom with a white chest and golden eyes. Apprentice Shinepaw Gazelleleap - A golden tabby she-cat with amber eyes. Lionsky - A handsome golden tabby tom with green eyes. Nightfire - A beautiful tuxedo she-cat with green eyes. Roseshard - A dark grey tabby she-cat with pretty green eyes. Longflight - A large, handsome, black-and-white Siamese tom with one green eye and one blue eye. Shrewclaw- a reddish-brown tom with green eyes. Eveningstorm - a tortoiseshell she-cat with one bright yellow eye. Morningfang - A grey and cream patched tom with green eyes. Misttrail - A fluffy pale grey tom with black stripes. Apprentices: Shinepaw - A pure white she-cat with golden eyes. Queens: Streamlily - A beautiful golden Siamese she-cat with blue eyes. (Expecting Shrewclaw’s kits.) Elders: None Read more: wcrpforums.com/thread/59002/history-clan-game?page=75#ixzz5S5mZccov
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Post by Katanaheart on Sept 25, 2018 1:29:17 GMT -5
(Maybe it's time to just step back for a page or two, and let the Clan be happy for once. There's enough darkness in the real world, and for some people (Including me), it's too much to have the things they enjoy be dark as well. Just let them be happy. Please. Just for once.) (Plenty of cats have been happy. So I do not see anything in this argument. There have been plenty that have had happy lives. You have also not allowed cats to have happy lives either, so I do not want to hear this argument.)
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Post by Katanaheart on Sept 25, 2018 1:31:55 GMT -5
Streamlily, Kingflame, Iceflower, Cloudmint, Gazelleleap,and Shinepaw all agree with Mothstar to varying degrees. The punishment was not horrendous and it could’ve been much worse, more paws could’ve stopped the ottracities from happening previously, instead that was not the case. The hunting cats need only to endure their punishment, Mothstar is not a bad leader, only a bit overly strict. The herbs and supplies were useful now, but they did not save the various lives lost when trying to obtain them. Leader: Mothstar - A small golden-brown she-cat with blue eyes. 9 lives remaining. Deputy: Cloudmint - A fluffy dappled light grey she-cat with dark green eyes. Medicine cats: Iceflower - A white she-cat with blue eyes. She is deaf. Wolfleaf - A short fluffy dark grey and white she-cat with blue eyes. Warriors: Kingflame - A fluffy black tom with a white chest and golden eyes. Apprentice Shinepaw Gazelleleap - A golden tabby she-cat with amber eyes. Lionsky - A handsome golden tabby tom with green eyes. Nightfire - A beautiful tuxedo she-cat with green eyes. Roseshard - A dark grey tabby she-cat with pretty green eyes. Longflight - A large, handsome, black-and-white Siamese tom with one green eye and one blue eye. Shrewclaw- a reddish-brown tom with green eyes. Eveningstorm - a tortoiseshell she-cat with one bright yellow eye. Morningfang - A grey and cream patched tom with green eyes. Misttrail - A fluffy pale grey tom with black stripes. Apprentices: Shinepaw - A pure white she-cat with golden eyes. Queens: Streamlily - A beautiful golden Siamese she-cat with blue eyes. (Expecting Shrewclaw’s kits.) Elders: None Read more: wcrpforums.com/thread/59002/history-clan-game?page=75#ixzz5S5nU0AEk
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Post by Katanaheart on Sept 25, 2018 1:33:10 GMT -5
(SO LET EVERYBODY BE HAPPY!!!!!!!) No. That’s unrealistic and boring. There is darkness everywhere, especially amongst Clan society.
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Post by ivysaur on Sept 25, 2018 1:40:29 GMT -5
(Can everyone calm down a bit? All the tension for the past few pages is really discouraging me and a few others from playing the game Sparkly, while letting the clan be happy is nice, it can also be very restrictive and at times even boring. There is a point to their punishments- if more than half of your clan left to go on a scavenger hunt that no one knows the truth of, it can definitely cause stress for the leader. I understand that you seem to be using the game to feel better about real life? Im really sorry if your current situation is affecting you negatively but whats happening with the game isn't really healthy either. Its causing infighting and discouraging others from participating. You both want the game to go in different ways. Trying to come up with a middle ground is causing so many restrictions that is causing people to get uncomfortable with the thread. the entire purpose of the game is to have fun and clearly, neither of you are having fun. so maybe we should just relax a bit and move on?)
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Post by Katanaheart on Sept 25, 2018 1:49:06 GMT -5
(Then maybe you should leave for a little while whilst there's some goddamn light. I have some especially awful stuff going on IRL right now, and this game is literally one of the only outlets I have. To fill this one with darkness too would just be too much. All I want is one or two pages where nothing bad happens. Once we agree on that, I'll tell you when it starts. But really, I think that you're just being a rulemonger at this point. What's the point of having a "Realistic" plot if it's depressing your audience?) (No. I will not be evicted just because you want your way. I understand you may be having difficulties, but you should perhaps find another lighter outlet then, to counteract whatever is going on in your life. One on one rp, even making a game similar to this if you want, etc.)
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Post by Katanaheart on Sept 25, 2018 1:52:52 GMT -5
(Then maybe you should leave for a little while whilst there's some goddamn light. I have some especially awful stuff going on IRL right now, and this game is literally one of the only outlets I have. To fill this one with darkness too would just be too much. All I want is one or two pages where nothing bad happens. Once we agree on that, I'll tell you when it starts. But really, I think that you're just being a rulemonger at this point. What's the point of having a "Realistic" plot if it's depressing your audience?) (Also how am I being a rulemonger when I haven’t even mentioned the rules for a while now? )
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Pansexual
Sparkly
Unofficial Forum President, and the unofficial patrol saint of black cats with blue eyes.
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Post by Sparkly on Sept 25, 2018 1:58:27 GMT -5
(Okay, listen up. When you kill off a character, or end a plot, you aren't simply getting rid of an idea. You're killing a story. A story that somebody has crafted, and moulded, and carried through countless events, just to die because you said they had. Just to die because somebody came along and slit their throat when it served no purpose to the plot. And over time, as you shape and mould and carry that story, it becomes your being. You, as a person, are a story. So, when you kill a character, it kills the story. A story that could've gone on for a lot longer. It kills you. Scorchgolden had a story. The treasure hunt plot had a story. Onestar had a story. Every character that you have loved, hated, felt neutral on, created, killed, and manipulated during the 75 pages of this game was a story. So maybe it's time to stop seeing the character, and see the story. See the story that would die if you killed this character. Maybe it's time to think twice before submitting a death.)
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