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Post by Littleflower on Jan 24, 2018 22:41:31 GMT -5
(I'm really torn between the two, Spider will be furious with her mate either way and I'm just not sure)
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Post by ravenbreeze on Jan 24, 2018 22:42:00 GMT -5
(Interesting....I vote for the kits to live!)
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Post by ~Skyblaze~ on Jan 24, 2018 22:43:27 GMT -5
Oooooooh....On one hand, the kits dying means GG Duskblade's sanity, but the second one means Pounceclaw's plan unfolding....they're both really good options!
If I can offer another option, for more drama's sake...What if Starclan chose to let just 1 kit live...and the kit ends up looking like Galeheart....XD)
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Post by Deleted on Jan 24, 2018 22:44:15 GMT -5
(I think it would be interesting if the kits lived. Like you said it would put Pounceclaw at a greater advantage, it would make Spiderstar even more doubtful of her leadership, and if anything would give the kits quite a story to tell when they're older )
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Post by Littleflower on Jan 24, 2018 22:45:41 GMT -5
(That, is what we in the industry call pure evil, Sky, but I think I'm going to go with the kits surviving)
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Post by ~Skyblaze~ on Jan 24, 2018 22:46:39 GMT -5
(Alrighty sounds good to me! I still think it would be fun if one of the kits resembles Galeheart though )
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Post by monarch on Jan 24, 2018 22:47:14 GMT -5
(And the plot thickens this is about to get fun)
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Post by Littleflower on Jan 24, 2018 22:48:49 GMT -5
It seemed to be an eternity before Spiderstar began to breathe again, the way her flank rose was jerky and struggling to take in breath, but she was alive even if she had lost a life. Spiderstar opened her eyes with a gentle whimper, looking more weak then anyone had ever seen their young leader. She said weakly, "My kits, my kits. Are my kits ok?" Her words were croaky and painful. Eyes brimming with terror and upset in spite of the pain which continued to ripple through her, she lowered her nose to desperately nose at her distended belly, only able to find the smell of blood.
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Post by monarch on Jan 24, 2018 22:51:20 GMT -5
It seemed to be an eternity before Spiderstar began to breathe again, the way her flank rose was jerky and struggling to take in breath, but she was alive even if she had lost a life. Spiderstar opened her eyes with a gentle whimper, looking more weak then anyone had ever seen their young leader. She said weakly, "My kits, my kits. Are my kits ok?" Her words were croaky and painful. Owlgaze jumped slightly, caught off guard that Spiderstar had come through so quickly. The tom glanced to the leader's stomach and saw with disbelief that her pregnant belly remained unchanged. C-could it be? He thought to himself as he pressed his paw gently to her stomach. As if in answer he felt something pulse. "My Starclan! It's a miracle!" He burst out. He turned his wide eyes onto the she-cat and gasped, "Your kits are still alive!" He looked back at the rest of the clan in shock.
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Post by rosesong on Jan 24, 2018 22:51:27 GMT -5
(how is she gonna find out she lost all those lives? Dream from starclan? An elder has been in this situation before?)
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Post by ravenbreeze on Jan 24, 2018 22:53:53 GMT -5
Duskblaze felt his paws shake with relief and covered his mate in licks, “Spiderstar can you hear me?” His heart beat quickened
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Post by Littleflower on Jan 24, 2018 22:53:57 GMT -5
(I don't know honestly)
Shaking with the effort of everything she'd been through, the expectant queen pressed her nose into her bloodied belly fur and held it there, for a brief second she felt nothing, wondering in panic if the medicine cat had been mistaken and her heart broken. Then she felt the slightest shift of a kit within her and she let out a triumphant yowl at the sensation. "Thank StarClan," she stammered. Broken and hurting from her wounds, but she didn't care, she had something to live for.
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Post by Squirellfire on Jan 24, 2018 22:55:08 GMT -5
(Back. Last thing that happened was Stormfeather and the she cats fixing holes in the nursery wall. Other than that I skimmed it and not much changed except Pebble has a plan for kits living... Spiderstar's kits...? )
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Post by Deleted on Jan 24, 2018 22:55:27 GMT -5
Redwing sighed in relief, glad that Spiderstar and her kits were ok. She wasn't sure why Owlgaze had said that it was a miracle though. What did he mean by that?
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Post by monarch on Jan 24, 2018 22:56:28 GMT -5
(Maybe Foxstar can come to her in a dream?)
Owlgaze's eyes were bright with happiness, but doubt began to creep up on him. How are her kits still alive...they should've went along with her first life. The medicine cat wouldn't let his worry ruin this moment, however. Their leader was safe as well as her kits. This was a victory.
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Post by ravenbreeze on Jan 24, 2018 22:59:24 GMT -5
Duskblaze nuzzled Spiderstar gently, “I’m so sorry...please forgive me! I-I don’t know what I was thinking, I wasn’t thinking..” he tried to come with a good explanation for his actions but he had none. He just wanted his mate and kits to be alright
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Post by Littleflower on Jan 24, 2018 23:00:20 GMT -5
As joyful as she was, the young leader looked to her medicine cat with a concerned frown. Wrapping her tail around her belly, notably ignoring her mate. His idiocracy had nearly killed their children, and that was not something she would quickly forgive. "How Owlgaze? Surely they should be with starclan right now? I died?" she stammered, uncertainty and fear to her voice. At the touch of her mate against her fur the queen let out a low growl. "You and I are going to be having words you mousebrain," she warned. No hint of her normal humour or affection to her tone. Only anger and hurt.
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Post by Squirellfire on Jan 24, 2018 23:00:25 GMT -5
(I'll pretend that he was asleep during the whole ordeal with the kitting...) "Spiderstar," Stormfeather called. "Great Starclan I am glad o see you and the kits are alright!" He touched her shoulder with his nose respectfully. "Have you got names for them yet?"
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Post by ~Skyblaze~ on Jan 24, 2018 23:03:14 GMT -5
Galeheart let out a relieved sigh that came out more like a warbled owl screech from all the tension he had been holding in, happiness flooding him. "Thank StarClan you and the kits are okay..." He croaked, nuzzling her.
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Post by monarch on Jan 24, 2018 23:03:50 GMT -5
Owlgaze quietly just shook his head. "I'mm sorry, I have no idea..." He hated that he didn't have the answer to her question, but he smiled at her softly and added, "Your kits are safe, though and that's all that matters right now."
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Post by Littleflower on Jan 24, 2018 23:06:16 GMT -5
Returning the gesture weakly to her deputy, she pressed her nose to his cheek. Exhausted and hurting she was barely thinking straight, she wrapped her tail around the small swell of her belly weakly. Her gaze finding Pounceclaw and she let out a low growl and directed it towards her mate as well. "I don't know what any of that was about, but I hope you understand your a pair of foxbrains, we have newborn kits in the nursery. Imagine if one of you would have slipped, you could have killed a kit." She scolded, ever a leader in spite of the ordeal she had gone through.
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Post by ~Skyblaze~ on Jan 24, 2018 23:11:20 GMT -5
"I don't know what either of you were thinking." Galeheart growled in agreement. "Thank StarClan that Spiderstar and her kits are okay, or this would've been far worse for both of you. I'd put you two in the apprentice's den, but even apprentices wouldn't endanger kits like that. I want you both to stay away from each other until Spiderstar's well enough to decide your punishments. In the meantime, once the storm subsides, you can make yourselves useful and hunt for the mother of the kits you very nearly killed." He decided with a glance at Fawnfur's litter.
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Post by rosesong on Jan 24, 2018 23:11:41 GMT -5
Fawnfur let out a low growl, very uncharacteristic of her, as the idea of one of her kits being killed was mentioned. She looked from Pounceclaw to Duskblaze her pelt bristling as she pulled her kits tighter to her belly with her tail and pressed herself closer to her mate.
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Post by monarch on Jan 24, 2018 23:13:05 GMT -5
Pounceclaw was staring at Spiderstar in a cold silence. The tom had overheard his brother announce that the kits had somehow survived and it was a miracle. At least she lost a life. He thought to himself, feeling his claws flex slightly. He then turned his amber gaze onto Duskblaze and meowed loud enough for everyone to hear,"I hope we can learn from this and put our differences aside Duskblaze." His voice laced with deceptive remorse.
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Post by Littleflower on Jan 24, 2018 23:15:46 GMT -5
Brokenfrost settled close to his mate too, a much more characteristic growl coming from his throat as his eyes narrowed drastically. He would have personally torn the tom limb from limb had they as much as harmed a single hair on either of his kits heads.
Nodding in agreement to her deputy, the leader managed to sit up, though the gesture was somewhat ruined in the way she struggled to keep herself in an upright position. "And you'll be lucky to get out of your punishment by the time you retire," she warned.
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Post by rosesong on Jan 24, 2018 23:19:13 GMT -5
(how is she gonna find out she lost all those lives? Dream from starclan? An elder has been in this situation before?)
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Post by Littleflower on Jan 24, 2018 23:19:43 GMT -5
(I'll vote for a dream from starclan)
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Post by monarch on Jan 24, 2018 23:19:54 GMT -5
(i'm going to have to turn in for the night, but i'll be on tomorrow! Bye y'all!)
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