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Post by phantomstar57 on Sept 27, 2018 11:49:24 GMT -5
Thanks!!
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Post by ยป ัะฝฮฑdฯฯ โ๏ธ on Sept 28, 2018 0:19:31 GMT -5
I need to read this...  |
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Post by mintedstar/fur๐ฆ on Sept 28, 2018 0:36:56 GMT -5
Yes you do. :3
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Post by ~Sapphire~ on Sept 30, 2018 2:17:33 GMT -5
Awesome chapters! Interesting how Hollyleaf is like a StarClan cat, just in the living realm. And hmm, I don't think that was a Dark Forest cat Dovewing saw |
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Post by mintedstar/fur๐ฆ on Sept 30, 2018 3:00:40 GMT -5
Another chapter should go up tomorrow (today) if I have my way.  Yep! There is, actually, more in that Hollyleaf chapter than meets the eye. I just have to say you all need to pay attention to it. There may be a quiz. She says death might as well be following her around. Well ... she isn't wrong. |
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Post by mintedstar/fur๐ฆ on Sept 30, 2018 3:01:31 GMT -5
I do have to look back, because I think I make a very heavy Discworld reference about mid-way through and I want to make sure it's there as an Easter Egg.
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Post by ~Sapphire~ on Oct 3, 2018 7:47:30 GMT -5
Hmm, I'll bear that in mind o.o Argh, no more quizzes! I get more than enough of that at college.
Not wrong. Just more... literal than she thought she was being. |
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Post by mintedstar/fur๐ฆ on Oct 8, 2018 16:16:02 GMT -5
*large sigh* School, give me peace.
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Post by ~Sapphire~ on Oct 9, 2018 11:50:06 GMT -5
School, I demand you stop being so... school-y
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Post by mintedstar/fur๐ฆ on Oct 10, 2018 19:16:20 GMT -5
Agreed. Like ... I want to update ... but haven't had time to edit.
Next time I get a chance I'm editing a whole lot. So I have a buffer.
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Post by ~Sapphire~ on Oct 12, 2018 5:28:13 GMT -5
Same... School is such a time sink.
That might be a good idea. But with all the other projects you're doing, you're definitely allowed to take your time x'D
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Post by ~Sapphire~ on Oct 23, 2018 11:33:50 GMT -5
I love the new chapters! (Even though they are very, very heart-wrenching.) I really feel for Brackenfur and Sorreltail - I want things to work out for them, but I have this horrible feeling... I was me. That was all that mattered, right? I was not what had been done to me. Yet I still looked at my paws as if they werenโt my own.That line pretty much killed me  Therefore I love it. |
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Post by mintedstar/fur๐ฆ on Oct 23, 2018 19:15:31 GMT -5
(Oh, you bet. :3 ) This was why I wanted to do POVs other than the expected. All these little side characters are really pretty important, so seeing them move around and interact means a lot to me. Oh yes. That line really was very important to me. |
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Post by ~Sapphire~ on Oct 24, 2018 5:45:23 GMT -5
Definitely! It really shows the scope of what's happening, too, when you see how it's affected so many characters
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Post by mintedstar/fur๐ฆ on Oct 24, 2018 17:15:23 GMT -5
On that note I may be getting another chapter up today!
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Post by phantomstar57 on Oct 25, 2018 11:41:57 GMT -5
Finally caught up!!
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Post by mintedstar/fur๐ฆ on Oct 25, 2018 17:15:36 GMT -5
What'd you think?  |
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Post by phantomstar57 on Oct 25, 2018 19:51:15 GMT -5
I am enjoying it very much. The mystery deepens.
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Post by ~Sapphire~ on Oct 26, 2018 13:06:26 GMT -5
Nice chapter! It'd be interesting to see more of Hollyleaf's and Leafpool's interactions, you do a good job of hinting at the difficulties between them. Blackstar's 'have ThunderClan done being the centre of attention' made me smile because it's so accurate, both to Blackstar and to what actually happens in canon xD And I agree with Phantom, there's certainly some plot stuff to chew over here...
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Post by mintedstar/fur๐ฆ on Oct 26, 2018 14:05:13 GMT -5
Oh yes, I'm certainly making notes of all the little character things that will be good to do.
Blackstar is great. XD
Glad you both like it!!
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Post by mintedstar/fur๐ฆ on Nov 11, 2018 17:53:18 GMT -5
Updates soon-ish? I think I've edited a new chapter.
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Post by mintedstar/fur๐ฆ on Nov 20, 2018 17:08:15 GMT -5
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Post by ~Sapphire~ on Nov 21, 2018 13:50:44 GMT -5
Nice chapters! The plot thickens some more... Wait, if Russetfur's come back, does that mean that more cats who died earlier in canon will eventually come back to life? And I like how you deal with Cloudtail's faith - since he didn't believe in StarClan for practical reasons, it makes sense he'd change his mind now he's seen they exist.
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Post by mintedstar/fur๐ฆ on Nov 21, 2018 15:47:32 GMT -5
Aaaaah, but Sapphire .... was it Russetfur? As for earlier canon death ... we shall see, we shall see. Yeah, I wanted to deal with that because I really liked the concept that he wouldn't believe in them, but I wanted to see how he was dealing with the mess that is absolute prove that they do. |
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Post by ~Sapphire~ on Nov 22, 2018 7:49:25 GMT -5
Now you're just being mysterious... But fine, I'll stop asking for spoilers xD
Agreed! It's really interesting to see how you explore it, especially since it was glossed over in canon a little
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Post by mintedstar/fur๐ฆ on Nov 22, 2018 19:06:27 GMT -5
Thus is my prerogative. Hopefully I'll continue to do things like that. I like the slow development of all this, quite honestly. |
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Post by mintedstar/fur๐ฆ on Nov 26, 2018 15:18:25 GMT -5
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Therefore I love it.
