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Post by 🍁Searipple101🍁 on Jan 31, 2018 20:57:55 GMT -5
Chapter 9 up!
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Post by phantomstar57 on Jan 31, 2018 22:18:04 GMT -5
Answered the poll too. Darkapple seems too obvious, but, it could still be him. . . .depending on what happens next!
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Post by mintedstar/fur on Jan 31, 2018 22:35:35 GMT -5
Never trust the obvious, right Phantom? And yeah! It's fun writing, Sea! Still, plotting out A Sky of Shattered Stars should really start soon. ^^
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Post by 🍁Searipple101🍁 on Feb 1, 2018 9:33:58 GMT -5
phantomstar57 But then why Lizardpaw? Maybe he seems a bit too obvious, too? In fact, they could all be obvious! XD mintedstar/fur I like the title already! Sounds pretty cool.
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Post by phantomstar57 on Feb 1, 2018 12:56:40 GMT -5
Never trust the obvious, right Phantom? And yeah! It's fun writing, Sea! Still, plotting out A Sky of Shattered Stars should really start soon. ^^ Tho sometimes it could be, but only if somehow Ravenpaw falls for Darkapple and in that sense he becomes close to her. But Lizardpaw is the least likely culprit being so friendly goofy and such. But sometimes things change a cat. . . And then it could be someone completely different LOL.
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Post by mintedstar/fur on Feb 1, 2018 16:30:08 GMT -5
Why I love mysteries. It make you double and triple think yourself. XD
And yeah! It's another rewrite of an old idea. It used to be called Falling Stars.
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Post by 🍁Searipple101🍁 on Feb 1, 2018 21:06:27 GMT -5
A good mystery is always a fun time. I just hope I can write this in the best possible way.
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Post by mintedstar/fur on Feb 1, 2018 22:55:18 GMT -5
Oooh, I hope so! You've got it though, Sea!
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Post by phantomstar57 on Feb 2, 2018 15:52:53 GMT -5
phantomstar57 But then why Lizardpaw? Maybe he seems a bit too obvious, too? In fact, they could all be obvious! XD mintedstar/fur I like the title already! Sounds pretty cool. I guess because at the moment he seems least likely to be any threat, but that can change. I like Lizardpaw, too. Darkapple to me seems the most obvious but, that too can always change depeding on what happens and how relationships change. Or sometimes its that supporting character like Lightpaw, or another cat. Could even be a leader that gets corrupted. I hope its not Lizardpaw because I like him,but that is my official guess.
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Post by 🍁Searipple101🍁 on Feb 2, 2018 17:54:03 GMT -5
You've got some pretty good reasoning there, Phantom. I can see where you're coming from for all of them, but only I know the truth! And it will honestly be a little while before we see who it actually is. It's gonna be soooo sad, though.
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Post by 🍁Searipple101🍁 on Feb 6, 2018 15:36:12 GMT -5
Chapter 10 up!
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Post by mintedstar/fur on Feb 6, 2018 17:42:36 GMT -5
You make such interesting polls. Are they just to see opinion or do they ever influence plot?
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Post by 🍁Searipple101🍁 on Feb 6, 2018 20:53:36 GMT -5
My polls are honestly more geared towards letting the audience interact with me more. Like, I know not everyone is going to want to post or post all the time, so I figure it's nice to let them at least share some of their thoughts through the polls. I like to come up with the most engaging and intriguing questions just for that purpose. But it is also pretty nice to see the opinions, too.
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Post by mintedstar/fur on Feb 6, 2018 22:46:46 GMT -5
I love voting on them, I will say that!
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Post by Pyropelt on Feb 6, 2018 23:11:40 GMT -5
Hey! Wow such a great chapter! I wonder if Snowdapple will know what to do with the kits coming. Hopefully! And it's so interesting, the whole gaining NightClan's trust and then deceiving them in order to make sure no more SunClan cats have to die. Man I look forward to seeing it all play out! Wow things sure run differently in NightClan. Hopefully down the line, Ravenpaw doesn't slip up too badly and get herself killed.
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Post by 🍁Searipple101🍁 on Feb 7, 2018 21:51:58 GMT -5
mintedstar/fur I'm glad you do! Always happy to know people are enjoying not only the story, but also the polls as well Pyropelt Ravenpaw is doing it not just for SunClan but for the good cats of NightClan, as well. She's doing it all for peace. I can say that much. But you're right about how interesting it is becoming. Though, the next chapter will be a bit darker, so be prepared. So glad you're enjoying the story, and I so look forward to seeing what my readers think! Thanks!
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Post by mintedstar/fur on Feb 12, 2018 13:06:56 GMT -5
How's life?
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Post by phantomstar57 on Feb 13, 2018 0:26:28 GMT -5
Gotta read soon! Don't want to get behind. . .. too late this eve tho. Tomorrow!
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Post by phantomstar57 on Feb 14, 2018 0:10:57 GMT -5
Dang missed the poll but here is my choice anyway
Ravenpaw just seems trustworthy.
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Post by mintedstar/fur on Feb 14, 2018 2:19:22 GMT -5
Catching up! Finding time to read a bit again, around doing schoolwork. I really want to draw Snakeheart. (That's Ravenpaw's mentor, right? Trying to remember without looking.)
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Post by 🍁Searipple101🍁 on Feb 14, 2018 15:41:14 GMT -5
Chapter 11 up!
Sorry the delay, but a lot is going on right now with so many exams lately and some other things. But here's the next chapter. Warning: it is a little more intense and sad. But enjoy!
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Post by phantomstar57 on Feb 14, 2018 16:03:49 GMT -5
OH my! Good chapter!
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Post by 🍁Searipple101🍁 on Feb 14, 2018 16:36:47 GMT -5
Thanks! May I ask what your favorite part was?
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Post by phantomstar57 on Feb 14, 2018 17:57:43 GMT -5
Thanks! May I ask what your favorite part was? The part when Thornstar kills poor Blackice, and Ravenpaw claws Lizardpaw for his apparent callousness. So sad. But in her I see a string she-cat beginning to emerge. I was shocked that they euthanize their elders, and poor Ravenpaw has her work cut out for her, doesn't she?
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Post by 🍁Searipple101🍁 on Feb 14, 2018 18:31:19 GMT -5
phantomstar57 Yeah, Ravenpaw really does, but it's only going to get harder from here. The next chapter is sad, too, but in a different way. Thornstar is truly a cruel ruler...
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Post by phantomstar57 on Feb 14, 2018 19:02:30 GMT -5
phantomstar57 Yeah, Ravenpaw really does, but it's only going to get harder from here. The next chapter is sad, too, but in a different way. Thornstar is truly a cruel ruler... Oh no!! If he tries to kill kits I will have to send Kyestorm after him. . .
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Post by 🍁Searipple101🍁 on Feb 14, 2018 21:41:14 GMT -5
That is indeed very cruel and sad...but I can reveal nothing!
Kyestorm would kick Thornstar's furry butt XD
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Post by phantomstar57 on Feb 15, 2018 0:36:39 GMT -5
Yep she sure would, esp if a kit is in danger.
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Post by mintedstar/fur on Feb 15, 2018 16:43:20 GMT -5
Fan art of Snakeheart: (Done on my phone, so sorry about the floating eye. >.< )
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Post by 🍁Searipple101🍁 on Feb 16, 2018 13:45:52 GMT -5
Wow! Thanks, Mint! I'll post it to the main page when I can.
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