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Post by Littleflower on Nov 24, 2017 19:31:31 GMT -5
With a growl of frustration, the young leader took off racing after his son. His long paws making him able to catch up with the young tom with ease. Ears flat to his head as he ran, no intent of stopping his son, only protecting the apprentice from getting himself killed. He lunged into the battle without a thought, dragging the nearest fox from Gorsepaw and pulling him to the ground with an angry battle cry like yowl.
Brokenfrost snarled in pain as the fox he fought dragged its claws down his back, he shook himself. Desperate to shake off the fox, he let out a yowl of pain as he fought on with everything he had.
(Hey Dagegen, I wondered if you're going to get the chance to reply at What Remains?)[/b][/sub]
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ᴄʟσsᴇᴅ
Nov 24, 2017 19:39:18 GMT -5
Post by Littleflower on Nov 24, 2017 19:39:18 GMT -5
(XD)
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Post by Dagegen5 on Nov 24, 2017 19:41:26 GMT -5
((I was going to reply as soon as Air-Koi did! It has been awhile though, so I can write a quick response to yours! Sorry to keep you waiting on that ))
Emberpaw charged after his mentor with his father close behind, feeling his veins flush with adrenaline as they raced into the fray. His heart stopped when he saw the great orange beasts and his clanmates tossed into the fray; it was fear that almost paralyzed his body in place. "No; be brave!" he exclaimed in his head as he watched his father wrench one of the filthy foxes away from an apprentice. That's how he wanted to be! The apprentice yowled at the top of his lungs, feeling a deep growl build in his chest. He launched himself at the fox closing in on Brokenfrost, digging his claws into the hind leg of the fox and locking his jaws in the delicate skin.
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Post by Littleflower on Nov 24, 2017 19:46:11 GMT -5
(Oh ok, sorry about that )
Spinning on his paws, slipping a little on the icy ground he lunged again, this time intersecting the fox and the apprentice before the fox could attack his son. The result of which was the fox got an advantage and dragged the leader to the ground with a yowl, it tore out his throat and left the leader bleeding on the ground, twitching as his blood pooled on the ground.
Brokenfrost let out a cry when he saw the leader go down, but continued struggling with the apprentice to fight off his fox. Battering it about the head, he was bleeding heavily already but he fought on despite the wounds he'd received.
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ᴄʟσsᴇᴅ
Nov 24, 2017 19:51:49 GMT -5
Post by Littleflower on Nov 24, 2017 19:51:49 GMT -5
(I was wanting to ask, what do you guys think of the clan? Do you like the setting and layout? Do you think the plot/prophecy is ok?)
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ᴄʟσsᴇᴅ
Nov 24, 2017 19:55:36 GMT -5
Post by Littleflower on Nov 24, 2017 19:55:36 GMT -5
(Awesome, its really good to hear that, thanks)
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Post by Dagegen5 on Nov 24, 2017 20:06:57 GMT -5
((I think it's super interesting!))
Emberpaw wanted to lift his head to retort at his mentor, as his mouth was clamped around on the ankle of the fox, but instead bitterly thought to himself, "Yeah, I'm already on it!" The fox shook its hind leg viciously and he lost his grip. He snarled at that and tried to launch himself at the leg again. A swift kick from the fox's foot nailed him straight in the face and he felt blood bubble across his muzzle and nose. "Ah! Mousedung!" he cried, feeling rage bubble under his pelt. At another attempt, the tom latched his teeth again into the fox's leg, avoiding the kicks and biting harder than previously.
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ᴄʟσsᴇᴅ
Nov 24, 2017 20:09:07 GMT -5
Post by Littleflower on Nov 24, 2017 20:09:07 GMT -5
Singedstar lay still on his side, losing his first life he shivered in the sand, blood continuing to pool around his large frame. It confused the tom as he met with his anscestors for the first time, watching his first life fade away into nothingness. It was worth it if it had meant he'd been capable of saving his son from something which would have almost definitely killed him.
Brokenfrost tore through the fox's fur, biting and slashing at everything he could get his claws and teeth on, intent on driving the horrible creatures away if it killed him.
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Post by abyssal on Nov 24, 2017 20:12:42 GMT -5
OOOH seems interesting! May I join??)) Cat Name; Fallenpaw Description; Fallenpaw is a slender, agile tom. He has long limbs which compliment to his height and a long tail. Even though he is skinny, he has more of a rounded face, with shorter ears. The apprentice's pelt is of a golden, sunny color, which is comparable to the color of dried wheat with white toe-tips, white underbelly and a white dot in his forehead. His eyes are of an unusually light green with some hints of amber. Personality; He is very determined and competitive and won't let anything or anyone getting in his way of success, mostly because he is very insecure and thinks of failure as some sort of humiliation. He will never complain about any task and is very obedient. Because of his excessive dedication to duties, Fallenpaw hardly ever engages in conversation with cats from his age and may appear a little unapproachable. All he really waants is a true friend who he can trust. History; Fallenpaw is a regular clan born cat. He grew up with parents that would always tell stories of cats who weren't able to complete their duties correctly and were doomed to become elders way earlier than other cats, thus the origin of his overachieving thoughts. Family; None atm but open to try some family bonds Rank: Apprentice Screen Name; Abyssal Other: Volcano Cat Name; Mothspeck Description; With a dark russet-blood pelt and piercing, icy blue eyes, Mothspeck is the type of she-cat who imposes her presence everywhere she goes. Her sharp claws and serious natural expression compliment to the warrior's strong look. A marbled dark pattern spreads over her fur and the only lighter spot visible is the white spot on the tip of her long, silky, feathery tail. Personality; Even though she may look intimidating and like she might claw your face off at the smallest movement, Mothspeck is actually one of the sweetest she-cats you'll ever meet. She is overly-protective and is the "mom friend" of the Clan. She doesn't like fighting without a really good reason and will only do so under the leader's or deputy's command. Mothspeck longs to have kits of her own someday, as much as she enjoys playing with the other kits at the nursery. History; Regular clan born cat/doesn't have an interesting backstory Family; None atm but open to family bonds Rank: Warrior Screen Name; Abyssal Other; Volcano
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ᴄʟσsᴇᴅ
Nov 24, 2017 20:15:54 GMT -5
Post by Littleflower on Nov 24, 2017 20:15:54 GMT -5
(Welcome to the clan Abyssal! I shall add now)
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ᴄʟσsᴇᴅ
Nov 24, 2017 20:18:20 GMT -5
Post by Honcho on Nov 24, 2017 20:18:20 GMT -5
Stoneeye finished the fox b himself biting it's neck and clawing it's throat out.
Raggedclaw was getting pounded by the fox. He tried getting up, but the fox just smashed him to the ground. Frustration and pain entered his body and with all the strength he had left, he leaped, his mouth wide open and aiming for the fox's neck. His teeth and the fox's neck connected and Raggedclaw bit as hard as he could down, but right before he snapped it, the fox threw him off. Raggedclaw landed right on his head. Dazed and blinded Raggedclaw saw the fox running away towards the side of the mountain. Raggedclaw ran after him and once he caught up, leaped at him and pushed the fox down the mountain side.
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ᴄʟσsᴇᴅ
Nov 24, 2017 20:23:47 GMT -5
Post by Littleflower on Nov 24, 2017 20:23:47 GMT -5
Brokenfrost staggered to a halt, bleeding but nothing which would turn out to be fatal. He paused, watching the foxes pelt away through across the mountainside, but he made no movement to follow them, turning his attention to the leader who was beginning to awaken from his ordeal. "Let's get back to camp," he called to the rest of the clan.
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Post by Littleflower on Nov 24, 2017 20:31:20 GMT -5
Singedstar had managed to pull himself to his paws, and though he was limping he appeared otherwise to be ok. Panting from the effort, he looked back at his clanmates with a twitch of his ears as they returned to camp. "I'm sure its nothing that (Currently Unnamed) and Springpaw can handle," he said as calmly as he could manage returning to camp.
(Stormflight)[/b][/sub]
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ᴄʟσsᴇᴅ
Nov 24, 2017 20:35:43 GMT -5
Post by Honcho on Nov 24, 2017 20:35:43 GMT -5
Raggedclaw stood on the side of the cliff. Trying to walk over to his clan mates, but he couldnt evenstand for a second, he fell over so many times, the he just gave up. He just laid there, bleeding pretty badly. He was dizzy, he couldnt feel his most of his body. He groaned something and closed his eyes.
Stoneeye was inspecting his cuts, nothing to bad, but it hurt, that was for sure.
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Post by Littleflower on Nov 24, 2017 20:38:18 GMT -5
Brokenfrost spotted his deputy strugging, and leant himself down to the ground, offering the tom a shoulder on which to lean himself. Helping the tom back to his paws, he called out to the rest of the patrol, concern apparent in his tone. "I think Raggedclaw might be in need of help," he called out to the others, knowing he might struggle to carry the larger tom back to camp by himself.
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ᴄʟσsᴇᴅ
Nov 24, 2017 20:42:50 GMT -5
Post by Honcho on Nov 24, 2017 20:42:50 GMT -5
"I dont think it's the bleeding, or the cuts thats making me not being able to walk." Raggedclaw said weakly, "I'm dizzy, I can't see straight. I hit my head hard on the mountain." He got up as best as he could and leaned against Brokenfrost. "Thank you" he murmured to him.
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Post by Littleflower on Nov 24, 2017 20:46:35 GMT -5
Shaking his head firmly, trying to push away any thoughts that the tom might be severely injured he spoke with a surprising level of confidence even for the arrogant young tom. "You're going to be fine, the medicine cats will fix you up perfectly." He said firmly, careful to help Raggedclaw along at a slow pace as not to worsen his injuries any further.
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ᴄʟσsᴇᴅ
Nov 24, 2017 20:53:27 GMT -5
Post by Honcho on Nov 24, 2017 20:53:27 GMT -5
"Yes, knowing our amazing Medicine Cats I will be perfect." He smiled and laughed a little. "You see, I was helping Stoneeye with the fox that was attacking him, and out of of no where another fox came and rams into me. I was to confused to realize what just hit me so while I was thinking I was just getting pounded, eventually the fox made me hit my head on the mountain, and the it ran. Being the stupid cat I am, I followed it, and killed it. Of course that probably didn't help my injuries." He explained to the tom.
Stoneeye was already at camp, he didn't go to the medicine cat Den yet, just because he wanted to make sure everybody else was treated first.
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ᴄʟσsᴇᴅ
Nov 24, 2017 20:53:42 GMT -5
Post by Dagegen5 on Nov 24, 2017 20:53:42 GMT -5
Emberpaw flicked his tail as he let go of the fox's leg. He readjusted and grabbed the bushy tail between his jaws, standing on his two hind legs and pulled back. He couldn't drag the fox anywhere, but he heard a yelp come out of the fox. He felt pride flush his chest as the fox pulled away from them and he released his grip.
He spat at the foxes leaving, his fur standing on end and blood dripping from his face. "We won!" he yowled, his ears perked up. "We taught those things a lesson!" He looked back for Singedstar, wondering if he had watched his battle with the fox or at least seen a small part of it. His ears flattened as he saw him laying on the ground and he yelled out for him like a terrified kit. He recovered, however, and Emberpaw couldn't stop himself from quickly retreating to his side. He pressed to his side as he approached him, feeling his pelt warm up. "You okay?" he hesitantly asked.
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Post by Littleflower on Nov 24, 2017 20:57:29 GMT -5
Walking along side his clanmates, twitching his ears as he searched for any sign that any further foxes might be waiting, watching from the shadows for the opportunity to finish them off in this weakened state, they finally made the long journey back to the camp. "Not the smartest thing you've ever done," the tom admitted with a roll of his dark eyes.
Singedstar looked back at his son as the young tom pressed against him, the leader leant down and rasped his tongue between the apprentice's ears. "I'm fine, I have eight lives left yet little one," he said with a clear level of affection in his tone. "You got your wish I suppose, a fight." He said with a little laughter to his voice as they padded onwards. "You fought well, Emberpaw."
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