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Post by ღℳ𝓲𝓷𝓽𝓼𝓽𝓻𝒆𝓪𝓶ღ on Jul 31, 2017 22:09:06 GMT -5
I have Shadowflight and Flowingbreeze in LC, Adderpaw in MC, and Rosesight in UC.)
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Demisexual
Summer
Jk. Not coming back. Am on Discord now.
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Post by Summer on Aug 1, 2017 16:04:29 GMT -5
"You know, right after I became an apprentice there was an apprentice who had gotten attacked by a badger. It was gruesome and awful and Thistlefoot had me helping to heal him. I know a battle is much harder to go through but I wanted you to know that you aren't alone. This job isn't easy and honestly, it's awful sometimes. But you're not alone," Aspenpaw nodded and sent Cloverrain a small smile. " Thanks, Cloverrain. That helps a little bit. I just still didn't enjoy feeling helpless since I don't really have a grasp on my powers yet." Riverpaw shrugged, "we could go hunt around the tide pools, or maybe in the forest as long as we stay away from middle camp. It will be a nice chance to explore the territory." She meowed. Eclipsepaw hummed. " Maybe we could go to the Tide Pools first and see what we catch before going to the forest."
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Post by *MorningGlory* on Aug 1, 2017 17:44:23 GMT -5
"I know," Cloverrain murmured, "it's terrifying when you start out." She smiled at the apprentice. "But it truly.is an amazing job."
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Post by leopardfire on Aug 2, 2017 17:07:17 GMT -5
I'll rp with you. Although, I do want to give you a reminder that it is still leafbare so finding 'countless' pieces of prey isn't very likely to happen. And I also wanted to let you know that voles aren't found in UpperClan territory. They're usually more 'edge' creatures. There is a list on the front page that describe the territories, prey, and predators of all three camps if you need to take another look at it. Thank you!) (The front page says it's leaffall...)
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Post by *MorningGlory* on Aug 2, 2017 17:28:36 GMT -5
I was told it was leafbare and that prey is harder to come by. I just wanted to let you know that. My main reason for posting to you though was to make sure you remember to keep the territory in mind when mentioning the kinds of prey your character catches)
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Post by *MorningGlory* on Aug 2, 2017 18:57:53 GMT -5
me)
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Post by leopardfire on Aug 2, 2017 19:05:56 GMT -5
I was told it was leafbare and that prey is harder to come by. I just wanted to let you know that. My main reason for posting to you though was to make sure you remember to keep the territory in mind when mentioning the kinds of prey your character catches) (Harestripe was returning from a hunt and was hunting for a few hours. The actual amount of prey is enough to feed about 10 cats.)
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Post by *MorningGlory* on Aug 2, 2017 19:12:01 GMT -5
And that's still not realistic for the season Leopard)
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Post by *MorningGlory* on Aug 2, 2017 19:57:23 GMT -5
probably lol but I don't remmeber)
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Demisexual
Summer
Jk. Not coming back. Am on Discord now.
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Post by Summer on Aug 2, 2017 20:48:49 GMT -5
"I know," Cloverrain murmured, "it's terrifying when you start out." She smiled at the apprentice. "But it truly.is an amazing job." "I don't like it thus far. I didn't even want to be a Medicine Cat. I wanted to be a Warrior." Aspenpaw sighed and sat down, shuffling her paws slightly.
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Post by *MorningGlory* on Aug 2, 2017 21:06:36 GMT -5
"I know. It happens sometimes," Clvoerrain murmured, 'But I promise, you'll learn to love it,"
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Post by ღℳ𝓲𝓷𝓽𝓼𝓽𝓻𝒆𝓪𝓶ღ on Aug 2, 2017 21:41:32 GMT -5
Aw, I'm sorry Nov.)
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Post by leopardfire on Aug 2, 2017 23:44:32 GMT -5
(It honestly seems mary sue-ish to me for a character to go out and catch enough prey to feed 10 cats. Also, they don't have voles in upper camp. And because it's mid leaffall, prey is going to be getting pretty scarce right about now as well. Catching that much prey in one go isn't very practical. (He went back and forth, so he hunted multiple times. Right now he's just returning from a hunt.)
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Post by leopardfire on Aug 3, 2017 7:52:12 GMT -5
(Did you actually say this, or did you expect people to assume that he hunted multiple times? Because if that is the case, that is still a little sue-ish it sounds better. When you are writing, you need to make things very clear. It will make it easier for people to understand what you are saying and prevent issues like this from popping up, but it will also make you a stronger writer in the long run. But you still have to keep in mind what season it is. Even with your character going hunting, bringing prey back then going back out hunting several times in a row. You aren't going to catch a "countless amount of prey" or even enough prey to feed 10 cats. In mid leaffall, there the prey is out looking for food to store for winter, so it isn't impossible to find prey yet. BUT the prey is going to start being harder to find. All the prey is starting to hide out for the winter. You remember in Warriors series how difficult it was to find prey mid leaffall and leafbare. Just keep that in mind okay?) (Well I haven't read the books in a while but I will remember this in the future.)
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Post by Turtleshell on Aug 3, 2017 11:45:02 GMT -5
(Everything's all chill, mistakes happen! Just make sure to correct them in the future ^.^
For a better understanding, the MAX any cat would usually ever catch is enough food for 5-6 cats, maybe. The AVERAGE on most days would be enough to feed 2-3 cats. This is mid/late Leaffall at this point- autumn. Probably pretty close to winter, but not quite. Prey is starting to hibernate and migrate, so is much less common. I would say the max a cat could catch during this period without their paws falling off- lol!- would be enough prey for 3 or 4 cats.
The most important thing to remember would be the prey for each territory. Voles do not occur in the Upper Camp territory. While it used to be that some Upper Camp cats would travel down to their Middle Camp territory to hunt- since there would be more prey, as there was less hunting there- and a cat with Super Speed would surely be able to travel there and back and hunt in less than half a day. But the Middle Camp territory is currently occupied by some of Darkstar's cats, so he wouldn't be allowed to hunt there.)
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Post by *MorningGlory* on Aug 3, 2017 12:01:39 GMT -5
I'm so glad I have the day off! Ineed tihs break so bad!)
Cloverrain smiled softly and turned her gaze to her daughters as they played. "They're perfect," she mewed with a gentle purr. She loved how close her daughters were and hoped they stayed that way for the rest of their lives, even after they find out about their brother.
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Post by *MorningGlory* on Aug 3, 2017 16:46:13 GMT -5
"you're more than welcome to play with them whenever you like," Cloverrain said with a smile
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Post by Turtleshell on Aug 3, 2017 17:10:25 GMT -5
(ahahahahahaha until they find out about Pumakit )
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Post by *MorningGlory* on Aug 3, 2017 18:27:35 GMT -5
-sheilds the girls from evil-)
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Post by Stormheart on Aug 3, 2017 18:41:59 GMT -5
(Ok I'm here. Sure Silv! Turtle, do you and Silv want to start that plot )
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Post by Turtleshell on Aug 3, 2017 18:49:51 GMT -5
(Hey Storm! We should go ahead and do the spy plot. I'll go find my post)
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