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Post by *MorningGlory* on Jun 23, 2017 19:45:35 GMT -5
Honeysilver was about to decline when she noticed the toms' cocky glances. what's that all about? she wondered before nodding in agreement. "There isn't much out there but sure,"
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Post by *ShatteringStar* on Jun 23, 2017 19:54:44 GMT -5
Mint, if you want your character to hunt around the rocks then would it be okay if Flowbreeze and Shatteredmoon joined up with Emeraldblaze and Dovelily? If that feels like too much, then I can put Shatteredmoon away.)
Shatteredmoon nodded before continuing. She had her sharp green gaze studying her surroundings as she walked towards the beach. Having the abilities of super senses, her eyesight magnified anything that her eyes lingered on to pick up different trails. "I'm good with that, but I might not have the strength to swim for long."
Tundraclaw took a moment to gaze at Palewhisper. His icy blue gaze reflected a kind smile, but he was carful to keep his expression neutral. "Yes. I need a warrior to accompany me on a border patrol. Feel up to it?"
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Russettooth nodded and began padding out without glancing back to check if Honeysilver was following him. "I know the pine forest might have some prey hiding around. Sound good to you?"
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Post by mimikyutie on Jun 23, 2017 19:59:43 GMT -5
"Of course Tundraclaw, I'm always willing to help our camp" Okay, maybe that was laying it on a little thick, but she just wanted to get going! Really, it had been even more annoying as of late to stay in camp too long.
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Post by *MorningGlory* on Jun 23, 2017 20:07:58 GMT -5
"That's a good idea," Honeysilver said cooly with a nod. She flicked her tail back and forth a moment as she thought about other places they could try before saying, "yea, let's go there." and turning her paws to lead the way.
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Post by *ShatteringStar* on Jun 23, 2017 20:21:43 GMT -5
Tundraclaw nodded and began leading himself and Palewhisper out of camp. He maintained his vague exression even as they headed down the mountain. "I'm glad you came along with me. We only have to check the border near the middle camp, so I doubt we'll run into anyone." The large brown tabby glanced over his shoulder at his mate, taking in every little beautiful detail about her. Of course everyone knew they were mates, but that didn't mean they should show their affection to anyone else.
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Russettooth was a bit annoyed that Honeysilver took his lead, but he let it slid. He didn't want to cause much of a fuss and they need to focus their energy on hunting. "So what do you think of this whole war thing?" He asked with a mono-tone voice as he refrained from bias.
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Post by *ShatteringStar* on Jun 23, 2017 20:22:10 GMT -5
Hey, Summer! That's good.)
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Post by mimikyutie on Jun 23, 2017 20:31:28 GMT -5
As they got farther down the mountain path, Palewhisper's guard seemed to be let down. She sped her pace up a bit so that she could walk next to Tundraclaw. Briefly, she leaned against the larger form of her mate. Sure, the clan knew they were together now, but they didn't know they actually cared for each other! "And by 'no one' do you mean lower camp cats, or ours?"
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Post by Deleted on Jun 23, 2017 20:44:46 GMT -5
Shatteredmoon nodded quietly and began leading the two of them out of camp. "Where should we go? I'm fine with most of the territory, but I know prey is scarce." Her calm forest green eyes glanced over to Flowbreeze as the senior warrior waited kindly for her input.
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Emeraldblaze shrugged with a kind grin plastering his face. "Sure. I might be older, but I can still run a good race." He spoke with a daring gleam in his emerald gaze as he glanced at Dovelily, taunting her almost. "Better watch out!" The senior warrior prepared his muscles for the dash. Russettooth had noticed Honeysilver and padded straight up to her. "Hello, Honeysilver. I'm going out hunting and was wondering if you'd like to go out again? You don't have to, of course." There was a cocky gleam in the tom's yellow gaze.
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Tundraclaw sat on his haunches as he watched all the hunting patrols head out. With so many out hunting, there was room for him to take a lucky warrior out on a border patrol. Dovelily purred with pleasure and scraped the earth with her paws. "It's on!" She meowed. She prepared to dash, and then started to run, the wind pushing back her fur. She kicked up sand with her paws, which flung up onto her white pelt, plastering it. Dovelily grumbled but raced on, pushing harder and harder until the Rocks were almost within her grasp. "Almost there!" She panted, out of breath. |
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Post by *MorningGlory* on Jun 23, 2017 20:46:47 GMT -5
Hey, could you guys pm me some tips or whatever for making good, dynamic characters? I already have a bunch because I've been writing and rping since I was eight but I want other peoples' takes on it because I've noticed some people don't understand when I try to explain to them how to make a good character after they try joining my clan with three word descriptions. I had one person argue with me that there was nothing more to add to their form. I decided to add that to the name guide. I'm getting frustrated and I thought about either making an entire thread about tips for good characters or just making a post for it in the name guide page)
"Well, it's going to be nasty but if that's what it takes for Darkstar to gain control of Crystalclan. I don't agree that war is necessarily the way to go but Aurorastar needs to be stopped somehow," Honeysilver said wwith a shrug and a soft sigh. "How about you?" she asked, swiveling her ears towards the tom
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Post by *MorningGlory* on Jun 23, 2017 20:58:03 GMT -5
I like your characters Flick. Any advice you can give for my guide would be great)
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Post by *ShatteringStar* on Jun 23, 2017 21:11:11 GMT -5
OMG guys. I'm in Mississippi right now visiting my mom and I just found out my bf is on the way here. He's driving all the way from Atlanta Georgia and he thinks I don't know about it yet! He's crazy! I have to go guy and help my mom clean. I'll probably be gone for the weekend too.)
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Post by ღℳ𝓲𝓷𝓽𝓼𝓽𝓻𝒆𝓪𝓶ღ on Jun 23, 2017 21:12:02 GMT -5
Sounds good to me!)
Flowingbreeze nodded. "Well, it'll be better than bringing nothing back."
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Post by ღℳ𝓲𝓷𝓽𝓼𝓽𝓻𝒆𝓪𝓶ღ on Jun 23, 2017 21:12:49 GMT -5
Have fun, Star!)
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Post by *MorningGlory* on Jun 23, 2017 21:13:04 GMT -5
That sounds so cute Star! have fun!)
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Post by *MorningGlory* on Jun 23, 2017 21:14:06 GMT -5
yea pming would be best. that way I can keep it in one place)
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Demisexual
Summer
Jk. Not coming back. Am on Discord now.
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Post by Summer on Jun 23, 2017 21:14:27 GMT -5
OMG guys. I'm in Mississippi right now visiting my mom and I just found out my bf is on the way here. He's driving all the way from Atlanta Georgia and he thinks I don't know about it yet! He's crazy! I have to go guy and help my mom clean. I'll probably be gone for the weekend too.) That's adorable! Have fun! ) |
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Post by mimikyutie on Jun 23, 2017 21:31:25 GMT -5
(Have fun Shatter!)
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Post by mimikyutie on Jun 23, 2017 21:59:04 GMT -5
(Sorry, got distracted by music for a while. I've got everyone but Palewhisper open)
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Post by mimikyutie on Jun 23, 2017 22:34:38 GMT -5
(Arcshatter and Sparkpaw?)
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Post by Turtleshell on Jun 24, 2017 8:54:47 GMT -5
(Here's my boy! I finally had time to finish him. I wanted to create a cat with a more 'sketchy' personality XD) {Cougarstrike} Warrior Tom | 36 Moons | Shifting Cougarstrike is a muscular. large, soft-furred, pale brown tom; his pelt colours and stature closely resembles a Cougar, therefore he has the prefix 'Cougar'. Along his back, his fur is tinted with a darker brown than his torso and his fur fades to a more creamish colour on his underbelly and chest. Alongside the colour of his pelt, this tom has very intimidating, vivid, yellow eyes with strong hints of hazel. His eyes reveal a lot of his emotions, as he doesn't really show facial expressions much. Cougarstrike has quite a complex personality. He can be aggressive, rash and short-tempered on some days, but a little more gentle and slightly impish on others. It's hard to define how he true personality is but it is quite clear that he supports Darkstar. The tom is fiercely loyal and will do anything under Darkstar's orders and his ambitions, possibly even if this means injuring a traitorous clanmate. He is considered a megalomaniac, but it was never explained exactly why he wants power however. Cougarstrike does have a soft side, but he rarely shows it and takes a cat he is close to, to show that side of him. Cougarstrike was born in a litter with his sister, his sister was a really strong cat, excelling in both hunting and fighting which gave her more attention over Cougarstrike, who only excelled well in fighting but did good in hunting too. This slowly drove Cougarstrike craving attention which later turned into the need for power and control. However he still remains a loyal clanmate... [ Lostmoon ] DARKSTAR'S CAMP (UPPER) (Hey guys!!! Working on finally adding ALL the new characters! LOL! Then the members log and I'll update all the other stuff. Should be on later once I finish all this! Hey, Lost, 'strike' is a taken suffix, so unfortunately you'll have to change the suffix of his name. Sorry. Otherwise looks good.) |
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Post by 🌿 Loѕтмoon 🌿 on Jun 24, 2017 8:56:11 GMT -5
(Gosh Darn!! XD I had trouble finding a suffix that worked well, gimme a moment to change X3)
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Post by 🌿 Loѕтмoon 🌿 on Jun 24, 2017 9:01:30 GMT -5
(Is this name okay?)
{Cougarstripe} Warrior
Tom | 36 Moons | Shifting
Cougarstripe is a muscular. large, soft-furred, pale brown tom; his pelt colours and stature closely resembles a Cougar, therefore he has the prefix 'Cougar'. Along his back, his fur is tinted with a darker brown than his torso and his fur fades to a more creamish colour on his underbelly and chest. Alongside the colour of his pelt, this tom has very intimidating, vivid, yellow eyes with strong hints of hazel. His eyes reveal a lot of his emotions, as he doesn't really show facial expressions much.
Cougarstripe has quite a complex personality. He can be aggressive, manipulative, rash and short-tempered on some days, but a little more gentle and slightly impish on others. It's hard to define how he true personality is but it is quite clear that he supports Darkstar. The tom is fiercely loyal and will do anything under Darkstar's orders and his ambitions, possibly even if this means injuring a traitorous clanmate. He is considered a megalomaniac, but it was never explained exactly why he wants power however. Cougarstripe does have a soft side, but he rarely shows it and takes a cat he is close to, to show that side of him.
Cougarstripe was born in a litter with his sister, his sister was a really strong cat, excelling in both hunting and fighting which gave her more attention over Cougarstripe. This slowly drove Cougarstep craving attention which later turned into the need for power and control. However he still remains a loyal clanmate...
[ Lostmoon ]
DARKSTAR'S CAMP (UPPER)
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Post by Turtleshell on Jun 24, 2017 9:19:46 GMT -5
(Lol yeah that's good, adding now ^.^ )
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