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Post by ѕρσттεdѕнιммεя on Oct 12, 2017 16:54:27 GMT -5
[ in your post, i believe the honorific of "-kun" would be more appropriate for satoshi. ]
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Post by caesar on Oct 12, 2017 17:06:09 GMT -5
Ah. The thing I read implied that -chan/-kun were used the same way, just differtiating between male and female. The way I read it it also appeared to be younger than the speaker? So I just went with -san to be safe, since they were all the same age))
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Post by gingercut on Oct 12, 2017 17:07:25 GMT -5
Yeah, I hated him for the longest time. There was another time where I took out these vats of oil to dump them into a special waste bucket we have next to the dumpster outside, but it was once again my first time doing so. I had no idea that we could place the giant heavy buckets onto a freaking cart to wheel them out, and that there was protective gear as well, because the same manager didn't tell me!!! So I took these like 70-something-pound buckets of oil across the back parking lot in the summer heat by myself, forced to hold the weight up to my chest, with oil spilling literally down my entire uniform and soaking it. When I went back inside for the second one, he SAW ME and said NOTHING, just laughed and pointed to a special rubber-type apron and gloves that we can put over our uniforms!!! But mine was already ruined!!! And then he WATCHED me take the second one, and this time my hands were so fricking slippery that it was worse than before. And the oil disposal is fricking high, so I have to lift that crap above my shoulders to dump it in - and I'm 5'8". The second time my arms literally could not go higher than my chest so I was left standing there for like ten minutes completely winded. Not to mention I had to go through the drive through line with each trip, so customers SAW this happening. And then when I went back inside, my coworkers LAUGHED at me. That's when I was told the proper way to do it.
I then had to call my mother to bring me a new outfit because I didn't want to clean oil out of my car, meaning the customers in the lobby saw me like this, and it turned out the color was bleeding out of my clothes when I saw black all down my legs from the pigment in my slacks, and my EXPENSIVE work shoes were completely soaked, too. So I had to buy new EVERYTHING with my money, skip dinner, and even go to work the FREAKING NEXT DAY. And this ENTIRE ordeal at work happened after they gave me an 8 hour shift, meaning I had stayed extra.
I'm still bitter about that, and absolutely can't stand being around that manager.)
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Post by caesar on Oct 12, 2017 17:07:36 GMT -5
Changed it))
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Post by ѕρσттεdѕнιммεя on Oct 12, 2017 17:16:49 GMT -5
[ i don't mind either way, i just read and seemed to gather that -kun is typically for males you are familiar with. i've heard -chan used with both male and female.
also, i wish to explain something before i post my reply with satoshi. you know how each space has it's own time and such that works? and you can hear things from other spaces if they're loud and pain-filled/fear-filled enough? such as being able to hear naomi cry out in grief for seiko or yuka call out for her brother. that is the same thing that is happening and i can't use anyone else's character so i used katashi's voice to be echoed across the dimensions, the the exception of his own dimension. so everyone but shuu and katashi will hear that at their own times, the first and second dimension will hear it at different times. however, shuu and katashi haven't gotten that far yet and will hear it themselves when the time comes when katashi calls out like that.
that make sense? ]
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Post by 𝚌𝚊𝚛'𝚊'𝚌𝚊𝚛𝚗 on Oct 12, 2017 17:17:45 GMT -5
-chan is used typically by females, but males & females alike will sometimes refer to (usually cute/feminine) boys w/ chan, ex. 'yuki-chan'! -tan is a 'cutesy'/babyish way of saying chan... its usually used for nicknames? like 'nanatan', or 'yuutan' stuff like that
-kun is primarily for males, or tomboyish females (though it can be seen as rude, for obvious reasons)
-san is a sign of respect, /usually/ people older then you or around your age, and not family. like a stranger you meet on the street, or someone in your class who's student council president. some people will use it for people younger then them/basically everyone (ex. yuki) it's seen as pretty formal and a bit odd, but very respectful. its basically like mr/miss
-senpai is for an upperclassman.. sometimes its used for older friends, but -san is used more in this area.. ive only ever seen -senpai used in a school setting o_o 先輩 lit means senior/older graduate, basically.. it can be used in business scenarios too!
-sensei is for teachers/instructors, sometimes chuunibyous will call people 'sensei' but like. its an odd thing!
-sama is like -san but taking it further, it's highly honorable. like the head of a family honor, you'd use -sama. its used for higher ranks, sometimes for customers/guests too. when used for oneself, it's perceived as arrogant and narcissistic lolol its also used for gods/spirits
so basically what miji said. hope this helped e_e
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Post by ѕρσттεdѕнιммεя on Oct 12, 2017 17:18:38 GMT -5
The Younger Twin ❝Can you tell which one I am? Kidding, I'm Satoshi.❞ ★ ━ ♦ ╸☠╺ ♦ ━ ★ Satoshi's expression changed slightly as Daiyu came closer, making sure to back off to give himself enough space for his own personal space. He had this thing where he didn't like people getting too close to him, much like his brother Katashi. Brushing off his uniform, his blue eyes once again scanned around the room, barely hearing the words from the girl whom was the Shadow Leader. A small huff came through his nose as she checked the girl's pulse and felt the urge to roll his eyes.
"I don't think she'd be breathing or at least it'd be abnormal if she were hurt or in bad shape. I already checked that, what do you take me for?" the sixteen year old stated with a hint of aggression. He wasn't entirely trying to be rude and glanced back down at the two females as the second came to. "Gomen. That was harsh of me. Nakamura-san, welcome." Satoshi opened his arms and motioned to the classroom around him. "Welcome to the after-life, how may I help you? Your personal guide, Kishimura-" He stopped mid-sentence, looking around him with his joking manner seeming to disappear.
A bone-chilling horrified, pain-filled scream seemed to echo around the room of 2-A from the hallway. "Satoshi!"
All color draining from his face, the younger Kishimura twin seemed to freeze up for a second. That was the voice of his brother. That was Katashi. That was his twin. He sounded horrified and like nothing he'd ever heard his twin like before, which twisted his stomach into a knot. Something was not right here. His breathing went a little uneven for a second before he quickly darted out to the hallway, scanning around.
"Katashi? Katashi!" he called out, the worry dripping in his tone. He had no idea where he was, what this was, if it was some sort of nightmare or whatever it was. Satoshi had no idea what was going on, but it was starting to terrify him completely. "Kata-" There was a girl. A girl in a red dress. A little girl. Standing right there by the staircase to his left. She was...
A bit of a frightened sound came from the sixteen year old as he realized that the little girl was a ghost. Was he seeing things? Was he hearing things. She gave a giggle and then went down the stairs. Despite the cold atmosphere, he could fell the nervous beads of sweat forming on his face. Breathe, Satoshi. Breathe. You're getting nothing accomplished by panicking. Breathe and view the situation clearly. Maybe you hit your head too hard.
"Did... Did you guys... hear him?"
★ ━ ♦ ╸☠╺ ♦ ━ ★
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Post by 𝚌𝚊𝚛'𝚊'𝚌𝚊𝚛𝚗 on Oct 12, 2017 17:21:11 GMT -5
also that manager sounds like a freak imma fight, tell him hes gonna meet some hands
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Post by ѕρσттεdѕнιммεя on Oct 12, 2017 17:47:45 GMT -5
[ ah, thank you for making it more clear and explaining it a bit better than i did! ]
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Post by 𝚌𝚊𝚛'𝚊'𝚌𝚊𝚛𝚗 on Oct 12, 2017 17:54:09 GMT -5
ye ye, honorifics tend to be something ppl have a hard time with which is understandable cuz theres no equivalent rly in the english language
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Post by 𝚌𝚊𝚛'𝚊'𝚌𝚊𝚛𝚗 on Oct 12, 2017 17:54:39 GMT -5
i have to take my brother to swimming lessons and im gonna be bored as hell. rip me
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Post by gingercut on Oct 12, 2017 17:58:16 GMT -5
Ghhhhh sorry about my sudden poof; I drove to my parents' house. That means I'm currently on my laptop for once. Now I can listen to the CP ost for inspiration! Yaaaayyy ///and also keep two tabs open so that I can look at y'alls posts for better replies)
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Post by 𝚌𝚊𝚛'𝚊'𝚌𝚊𝚛𝚗 on Oct 12, 2017 18:09:39 GMT -5
ill be at swimming lessons for my bro for half an hour, then ill get chipotle and go home woot
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Post by 𝚌𝚊𝚛'𝚊'𝚌𝚊𝚛𝚗 on Oct 12, 2017 18:09:56 GMT -5
imma watch sooo many league games im hypee
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Post by gingercut on Oct 12, 2017 19:35:57 GMT -5
Niceee. Also, I cant remember if we decided these two precious boys relationship? Will it develop into a hopeless beautiful love? Or will they just be besties :oo I ship them, but its up to you ![:D](//storage.proboards.com/6575102/images/Zk1a5XUEHw6Q8FG1L5Qy.gif) ) Hiro watched Yuki with vague amusement in the back of his mind, although it wasn't enough to replace the slimy fear that crawled across his skin. "It's alright." He nodded, though the motion was somewhat sluggish. "And I think I'm fine. Doumo." he said softly, then followed suit in getting to his feet. But when he stood, his body felt oddly heavy. While he hadn't had any trouble sitting up, the actual act of pushing against gravity slowly weighed down upon his tiny figure. The odd pressure stemmed from his brain and traveled to the very tips of his limbs. and he stumbled forward a few steps. However, it didn't take long for him to regain his balance as he shook his head to clear it. His rapidly blinked his eyes with an airy chuckle. "I guess I hit the ground a bit harder than I thought." he joked, placing a hand upon a nearby desk to settle himself. Once he was certain he was fine, he moved back over to his friend while wiping his now-sweaty hands on his pants. Once they were within arms-length of each other, Hiro turned really take in their surroundings. "Where are we ..?" he trailed off, eyes roaming over the clutter of small desks and chairs. They then glanced over the cracked walls before landing on a blackboard. "A classroom?" ------- The hope in Daiyu's eyes quickly vanished at Satoshi's tone of voice, and although she'd normally brush it off, she couldn't help but flinch at his tone in her own stressed state. Her eyes hit the floor while a frown tugged at her lips; she hadn't really considered whether or not the boy had checked Keiko. She honestly wanted to feel if the girl was okay with her own hands for her own personal peace of mind, not because she thought he was incompetent. However, his apology reminded her of the fact that they were ALL tense, and that he probably hadn't meant what he said. With a sigh, she gave him a curt nod. "Meishi - ah, I mean ..." she trailed off, having said 'It's okay.' in Chinese, although she didn't really care to correct herself. It was partially because a niggling darkness seemed to tell her that, 'No, it's not okay.', but mostly due to the fact that Keiko was finally stirring. Daiyu opened her mouth to answer the girl's question, when Satoshi beat her to it. At his negative words, however, she moved to level a glare at his insensitive words. The last thing he needed to do was scare Keiko more than she already may be. The girl took a deep breath, then went to scold him. However, before she had the chance, a bloodcurdling scream sent her heart into overdrive. She could hear the pain in the voice as the name, "Satoshi!" rang clearly throughout her ears. She didn't even have to wonder who had made such a horrifying exclamation, because Satoshi's cries for Katashi followed immediately after the scream had ended. She had been shocked still, worry immediately clouding her mind as terror raked its long claws down her back. But the sudden realization that Satoshi was no longer nearby pushed her back into motion, her eyes widening. "Kishimura-san!" the name left her lips before she could stop herself, chest tightening in worry. "Wait, this place could be dangerous!" she continued, getting to her feet and tugging Keiko along with her. Of course, once her friend was upright she let go, and followed after the twin with a much more cautious approach. Once she entered the hallway, her eyes darted around until they locked onto Satoshi. His back was facing her, and she slowly approached him with a concerned expression. "Kishi-" she began to address him, but her voice died in her throat when a flash of red caught her eye. Her entire body froze, at the sight of what appeared to be a little girl. She had long black hair and wore a dress that was as red as blood. It wasn't until she realized that the child was transparent that the trembling from her hands extended to her entire frame. That's when a chilling giggle rang throughout the stale air, and the girl darted out of view. It wasn't until Satoshi voiced his question that she managed to force herself to move again. "Y-Yeah." she choked out quietly, then hesitantly moved closer until she was a few feet next to the twin. "Yeah, I did ..." her eyes were dull as she fell into a silence similar to that of when she was thinking on an analytical level. However, something about her seemed to darken as she stared emptily into the space where the girl had been, the questions in her brain taking a turn for the worse. Why had Kishimura-san screamed? Was he hurt? He could be dying! Where was he? Where were THEY? Would they ever find him? Would they ever find anyone!? They could be in the same state! THey could all be hurt and dying and Daiyu wouldn't be able to save them! And then it would be too late ...
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Post by ѕρσттεdѕнιммεя on Oct 12, 2017 19:56:24 GMT -5
The Younger Twin ❝Can you tell which one I am? Kidding, I'm Satoshi.❞ ★ ━ ♦ ╸☠╺ ♦ ━ ★ A hardened gaze came over his blue eyes as he recalled the words of warning given to him. He gave a snort through his nose his lips curving down in a frown, near a scowl. He wasn't going to say anything and bite his tongue, but he wasn't going to exactly let that slide. How would she know? They were in a school, and despite the state of disrepair, before the child's spirit, he hadn't seen anything that required caution.
"We have no idea where we are. But it's easy to say we're in a school. An older one, somehow. It looks very old fashioned," Satoshi observed. Focusing on not letting her mind get the better of him, he focused on the current situation. Katashi was obviously here and it terrified to hear him call out like that. But there had been no response. His eyes went to the windows and then to the door and took in a deep breath, trembling quite a bit, even with his hands folded into fists.
He couldn't tell where that had come from, so he'd check everywhere. There was a slight hesitation as he noticed that Nakamura-san had been dragged with and this, once again, caused a frown that turned into a scowl. Have some respect for her, she only just awoke, Satoshi snapped in his own mind, turning with a small sigh to avoid letting the words reach his tongue. The staircase to their right was merely a few paces away so he really hadn't gone that far, literally just to the closest doorway to him. How Gui-san got over to their side of the classroom was a bewilderment to him, but he wouldn't say anything.
There was a slight urge to look for Katashi on his own, but something told him that it might be a bad idea. And yet... it felt better and he would probably be more at peace. After all, it was just a school, what was the worst that could happen? It wasn't like the thing was trying to take his life. It was literally just a school. But... how did they even get here? A school under a school didn't make sense, especially when there was rain pouring outside. Strange, indeed.
"I would appreciate it if you joined me in looking for my brother. I don't think splitting up would be a good idea in an unfamiliar place like this. While I disagree to assume that this is a dangerous area, this looks like it has been left to rot for a long time, so it's best to stick together and be on our guard." Look at him, taking charge. Katashi would be proud of him. Keeping a level head was one thing, but expressing his ideas like this, it was another. The younger of the twin boys looked down the hallway and then down at the staircase. It didn't sound like the scream was muffled, so a classroom wasn't a likely option. They could go up the stairs down the hallway or take the stairs that he had seen the ghost girl go down.
Maybe she was showing him a way?
Satoshi rolled his eyes at himself. What was he now, a psychic? Wasn't he mentally complaining just earlier that charms and curses weren't his thing? What made him think that spirits were? Ha, they... definitely were not. Even so, the idea of following the girl seemed like a good idea for a start, so the sixteen year old decided to try and summon the courage to follow down the stairs.
"I'm going to go downstairs. Watch your step, please. I don't want anyone to sprain an ankle," he murmured in a more gentle tone than he had used just a minute or two ago. With that, he cautiously moved to the staircase, his legs trembling as much as his body. Katashi... please... be safe.
★ ━ ♦ ╸☠╺ ♦ ━ ★
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Post by ѕρσттεdѕнιммεя on Oct 12, 2017 20:02:32 GMT -5
[ notice that none of the characters besides naomi got hurt in the beginning from the game, so try to not over dramatize the waking up part. and they don't know where they are and the worries shouldn't be that bad, as they don't know where they are and if they're in the first dimension, they'll feel the darkness of the school, but if not... then there isn't really a reason due to the curse of the school not fully activating on the poor unsuspecting souls that were brought here quite yet.
the only reason that satoshi's arm is a bit sore if from katashi grabbing him so roughly before they fell, but beyond that, there should only really be one character that i would allow to be hurt right off the bat. satoshi isn't really injured, just a little sore and that's it. i also might recommend to pick a classroom for your characters to wake up in that fits your dimension, if you haven't already.
besides classroom 2-a, classroom 1-c is the only available non-dangerous classroom in the main building for the second dimension, which is why i chose it. the first dimension is alright to be anywhere that isn't highlighted in gray, black or red for the reasons i stated. the map of the layout is on the front page so try to remember where everything is. ]
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Post by gingercut on Oct 12, 2017 20:11:01 GMT -5
I know, and don't worry. Hiro is injured, but I don't plan on it being critical or to last the course of our roleplay. I was just taking physics into consideration; they "fell". And depending on how one may land, you can end up either being fine, or hurt. Daiyu landed face-down, hence her nose, although it isn't really a big deal. I imagine Hiro would have hit his head somehow, so he's currently concussed. It's just to add a bit to the story; not everybody goes relatively unscathed. However, I will do my best to respect your wishes! It's just that I'm not sure whether we're following the general storyline from the games, or if we're kind of doing our own thing.)
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Post by ѕρσттεdѕнιммεя on Oct 12, 2017 20:21:12 GMT -5
[ well, the general story-line is the only way for them to survive. they have to appease the four spirits and reverse the charm to get home alive in this small window of time.
as for the falling part, i don't think it was really too much of a fall. they entered a space and were split up between three spaces. naomi in the game was the only one that i saw was hurt. yuka had a full bladder and didn't have anything to happen her when she landed, so a concussion might be pushing the limits a little too much. one out of the nine people who had "fallen" or rather, as yuki explained it, were transported from one realm of reality to another, had gotten hurt. a concussion will last through-out the thing and if given those types of symptoms, will be a huge problem for hiro.
you can do as you wish, but please do not over dramatize anyone as nothing is happening quite yet. thank you very much. ]
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Post by gingercut on Oct 12, 2017 20:26:08 GMT -5
Alright! I'd argue that it's actually rather easy to get a concussion (You can actually give yourself one just by whipping your own head around, like headbanging to music for laughs) but I'm beginning to feel very uncomfortable with this, so I'll just edit my post, aha. I don't like confrontation much, so I won't fight it.)
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Post by ѕρσттεdѕнιммεя on Oct 12, 2017 20:29:44 GMT -5
[ ah, my apologies. i just would rather not anything drastic happen too much yet. i want everyone to adjust and then i will start to allow things to happen. but as for the fall, i'd rather not have such an event happen yet. not quite yet. let them get scared, let them find out things first. let them realize that they're all extremely far away from one another. after that realization happens between them all. after they encounter sachiko all at least once. that's when i will allow injuries and dramatic events to happen. but reminder that there is a one in eight chance of your character dying if you come across a ghost. this decreased to one in six if it's ryou and their name is shuu and katashi. ]
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Post by gingercut on Oct 12, 2017 20:49:53 GMT -5
Yes, I understand. I just get really tense and I just want to leave the thread when I feel an argument is happening, but I know that it's ridiculous. And I'm not blaming this on you! It's just that if I ever come across as suddenly cold or curt or defensive in my posts, that's probably why. I could be reading a situation entirely wrong, so if that ever happens then please forgive me. It's part of my autism eheh ;.;;; I also edited the post ![:D](//storage.proboards.com/6575102/images/Zk1a5XUEHw6Q8FG1L5Qy.gif) )
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Post by 𝚌𝚊𝚛'𝚊'𝚌𝚊𝚛𝚗 on Oct 12, 2017 20:54:01 GMT -5
i was having a tough time with that burrito and it kicked my butt.. 55 minutes to eat one chipotle burrito and i didnt even finish it ¯\_(ツ)_/¯
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Post by gingercut on Oct 12, 2017 20:56:46 GMT -5
I feel you fam, lol
Also before you reply, I just realized Hiro already asked Yuki if he was alright so I'mma fix that again)
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Post by 𝚌𝚊𝚛'𝚊'𝚌𝚊𝚛𝚗 on Oct 12, 2017 21:01:10 GMT -5
also i donno yet?? i need some time, see how relationships mesh out! and like miji said before, people (might) get thrown into different dimensions, so who knoows. im gonna see how things play out! ;0
& maybe yuki will be the first to die LUL. watch him trip and fall down an endless hole
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Post by 𝚌𝚊𝚛'𝚊'𝚌𝚊𝚛𝚗 on Oct 12, 2017 21:02:04 GMT -5
also when things start going with the dramatiques and stuff ill probs make a side chara hhhhhh > : )))
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Post by gingercut on Oct 12, 2017 21:08:47 GMT -5
Kk, I'll play it by post then. Also, I fixed it, I guess? Although apparently my roleplaying here just doesn't fit ![:(](//storage.proboards.com/6575102/images/RCFqazfvhbMAeE5hIhD3.gif) I always seem to do something wrong.)
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Post by ѕρσттεdѕнιммεя on Oct 12, 2017 21:11:19 GMT -5
[ nono, don't worry about that. your role-playing is perfectly fine, i just should have specified. my apologies, once again.
it is my job to make things clear and it slipped my mind. once again, you have my sincerest apologies. ]
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Post by 𝚌𝚊𝚛'𝚊'𝚌𝚊𝚛𝚗 on Oct 12, 2017 21:14:28 GMT -5
dont say that! your roleplaying is fine! ファイト!!!!
also, i assumed yuuちゃん and hiro woke up in 1-A! o; and tachibanaさん is in there too, i assume..? or somewhere close
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Post by 𝚌𝚊𝚛'𝚊'𝚌𝚊𝚛𝚗 on Oct 12, 2017 21:15:21 GMT -5
i have this random urge to play overwatch? am i living in 3017
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