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Post by Novi on Oct 6, 2017 18:54:11 GMT -5
(this is it ^-^ blizzardsfang whatcha think?)
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Post by blizzardsfang on Oct 6, 2017 19:19:32 GMT -5
(making my characters now my friend)
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Post by Novi on Oct 6, 2017 19:22:01 GMT -5
(huzzah happy to read it)
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Post by blizzardsfang on Oct 6, 2017 20:01:34 GMT -5
Ravenstorm || 73 moons || male || blizzardsfang Ravenstorm is an all black tom with pale ember eyes, he is well known among the clan and well respected. Ravenstorm is an averaged sized cat who has worked hard. As an apprentice he refused to give up and always over did himself but the older he grew the more he became a worthy cat in the clan. He is frustrated with himself because he still has not had any kits and he wants plenty of kits yet he can't seem to find a she-cat that catches his eye. The tom is overall friendly but very calm in situations where others would panic. He is a fast thinker and very patient.
Ivypaw || 9 moons || female || blizzardsfang Ivypaw is a small tabby she-cat with light brown across her muzzle and gentle green eyes. She has white paws and she is a very kind she-cat who is often times much too kind for her own good. She is extremely gentle and she likes being everyones friend as well as always being there for every cat. She has a gentle heart and many cats fear she will never be rough enough to become a warrior but she works her hardest and she refuses to lose, which is also her downfall. She tries to impress the higher figures in the clan like medicine cat, deputy, and leader but often times she feels annoying and is upset although she would never express that to her clanmates. She was the only kit in her litter and her mother was already nearing the end of being a queen and Ivypaw was the only kit she ever had so a lot of pressure weighs on the she-cats mind and her mother passed away from unknown causes and she strives to prove to her mother that she is a great cat.
Snowblossom || 45 moons || female || blizzardsfang Snowblossom is a beautiful white she-cat with one blue eye and one green eye. She was teased a lot when she was an apprentice for having white fur among the clan and eventually she snapped and she became much more grumpy and built up a mental wall in her mind, not allowing other cats in. She is often lonely but she refuses to allow cats in because she doesn't trust them. She will snap at anyone no matter who and she is often avoided because of it although she is a very good warrior and her white coat has never been a problem for her she still refuses to allow cats into her personal bubble even though it is rare for them to criticize her on the color of her fur. She is very loyal to her clan though and she would fight to the death for them.
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Post by Novi on Oct 6, 2017 20:28:56 GMT -5
(Looks good I'll add)
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Post by blizzardsfang on Oct 6, 2017 20:59:55 GMT -5
(I can rp whenever you're ready!)
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Post by Novi on Oct 6, 2017 21:16:04 GMT -5
okiedoke. hm... o-o) Cinderstorm blinked her eyes open and yawned, her jaws stretching wide until they hurt. Was the sun up yet? Squinting through the trees, she could spot a sliver of light. It was either early or late, difficult to tell. Although she hoped she had slept long enough for it to be late. Heading out of the den, she noticed a few cats moving around.
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Post by blizzardsfang on Oct 6, 2017 21:54:24 GMT -5
Ravenstorm stretched out and snapped his jaws, he flicked his tail back and forth as the older tom looked around to see which cats had stirred awake. He shook himself deciding if it would be good to bring Rainpaw out to train, his eyes moved to Snowblossom as she jumped down, it wasn't hard to know which cat it was because of her white pelt but he looked away, hoping the apprentices would come down.
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Post by Novi on Oct 6, 2017 22:41:41 GMT -5
Rainpaw shook off the soreness from his awkward sleeping position. It wouldnt do well to be out of commission for a while. Hopefully exercising it off would work. He headed out and glanced aroud for his mentor.
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Post by EthanTheAnnus on Oct 6, 2017 23:52:32 GMT -5
Timberfur || 60||tom|| thunderfire Timberfur is a light brown tabby with white paws, underbelly, chest and muzzle. He has leaf green eyes and his left ear is torn in three places. He is the Clan deputy (if that's ok? Also, in about nine weeks i'm going on a holiday for a week, so I'll give you a heads-up closer to the time)
Thunderpaw ||8||she-cat|| thunderfire Thunderpaw is a gray she-cat with black tabby markings and tufted ears. She has white paws except her left forepaw, which is brown. Her ear-tips are also brown and she has sharp sky-blue eyes.
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Post by blizzardsfang on Oct 7, 2017 1:00:21 GMT -5
Ivypaw yawned as she stretched out, jumping down into the clearing. She gave herself a quick shake and looked around for her mentor, wondering if they were going to be doing anything today.
Ravenstorm noticed his apprentice and he padded over "hello Rainpaw, are you up for a training session today?" he asked, his ears giving a small twitch as he looked down at his apprentice, he noticed Ivypaw looking for her mentor and he wondered if all of the mentors would be able to take the apprentices out it would be good practice for Rainpaw.
Snowblossom glared at any cat that looked in her direction and she padded off to an empty section of the camp and she began to clean her fur so it returned to its spotless white, she knew it would be dirty by the end of the day but either way she cleaned her fur three times a day.
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Post by Novi on Oct 7, 2017 11:19:08 GMT -5
(Thunder: can you add more description to your cats? especially with personality. and deputy will be chosen in-roleplay, but i'll keep him in mind if you want Lol. Redfang and his constant cleaning xP)
Rainpaw's ears perked up. Really, was it even necessary to ask? Not that he ever would, but what kind of cat would he be if he'd said no? "Of course."
Cinderstorm made her way towards where Ravenstorm and Rainpaw were, waving her apprentice over to join them.
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Post by blizzardsfang on Oct 7, 2017 14:56:19 GMT -5
(wouldn't be blizz if I didn't have a cat constantly cleaning themselves lol)
Ivypaw bounded over and looked at the group, she sat down and wrapped her tail around her paws as she waited for whatever the warriors were going to say. She respected all cats older than her and she would show her respect.
Ravenstorm flicked his tail and nodded "I want to see how your hunting is coming along, and it wouldn't hurt to bring some fresh kill home to the tribe." The tom glanced at Cinderstorm and Ivypaw "I'd be happy to have the two of you join us if you'd like."
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Post by Novi on Oct 7, 2017 17:26:46 GMT -5
this is true XD)
Cinderstorm nodded. "Fine by me." She glanced towards her apprentice and then Rainpaw. It didn't look like the tom was terribly happy. Too bad for him.
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Post by blizzardsfang on Oct 7, 2017 19:18:41 GMT -5
Ravenstorm gave a nod and he looked at Rainpaw "let's go then, if the others wish to join us then they can catch up." He turned and padded out of camp.
Ivypaw bounded after him, she accidentally stepped onto Snowblossoms tail and the she-cat whirled on the apprentice and gave a ferocious hiss to send a mountain lion running away whining for it's mother. Ivypaw winced and backed up, her ears down and her tail between her legs.
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Post by Novi on Oct 7, 2017 19:30:47 GMT -5
Rainpaw gave a curt nod and hurried after his mentor.
Cinderstorm waved a tail in Snowblossom's face and gave Ivypaw a nudge from behind to keep going and ignore the prickly she-cat.
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Post by blizzardsfang on Oct 7, 2017 20:07:09 GMT -5
Ravenstorm glanced back and shook his head, he knew Snowblossom was defensive but Ivypaw was still young and too kind to be getting on the bad side of the she-cat.
Ivypaw hurried on, keeping her eyes away from the white she-cat, she knew to stay away from Snowblossom, she had watched the warrior snap on plenty of people as a kit so she avoided them.
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Post by Novi on Oct 7, 2017 20:52:18 GMT -5
"Did you have any place in mind to start?" Cinderstorm inquired as she caught up to Ravenstorm. The sunlight filtered through the trees and the mist and she could clearly see around them. It did appear to be morning.
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Post by EthanTheAnnus on Oct 7, 2017 22:56:04 GMT -5
Timberfur || 60||tom|| thunderfire Timberfur is a light brown tabby with white paws, underbelly, chest and muzzle. He has leaf green eyes and his left ear is torn in three places. He is the Clan deputy (if that's ok? Also, in about nine weeks i'm going on a holiday for a week, so I'll give you a heads-up closer to the time)
Thunderpaw ||8||she-cat|| thunderfire Thunderpaw is a gray she-cat with black tabby markings and tufted ears. She has white paws except her left forepaw, which is brown. Her ear-tips are also brown and she has sharp sky-blue eyes.
adding more desc, then. and sure! he can just be a warrior for now.))
Timberfur|| 60|| tom||thunderfire Timberfur is a light brown tabby tom with white paws, chest, underbelly, chest and muzzle. He has leaf green eyes and his left ear is torn in three places. He is generally patient and kind, but does have a temper than can flare up from time to time. He tends to overthink things sometimes because he tries too hard to plan things out.
Thunderpaw|| 8|| she-cat|| thunderfire Thunderpaw is a gray she-cat with black tabby markings and tufted ears. She has white paws except for her left forepaw which is brown. Her ear tips are also brown and she has sharp sky-blue eyes. Her temper is easily set off and she is snarky and quite sarcastic. She is, however, fiercely loyal.
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Post by blizzardsfang on Oct 8, 2017 10:52:43 GMT -5
(that looks good but I would still wait for novie to give the okay)
Ravenstorm lifted his head and he jumped into a tree, easily climbing up "we can head towards the northern part of the territory, I don't think anyone has hunted there recently it should be striving with prey and these two can work on hunting in the trees, even if they're used to it it wouldn't hurt them to hone their skills."
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Post by Novi on Oct 8, 2017 18:36:16 GMT -5
(looks fine to me. feel free to jump in)
Cinderstorm climbed higher as well. "Sounds good to me."
Rainpaw's whiskers twitched. Cinderstorm was so quick to agree to whatever Ravenstorm said. Did she like him? Hm..no. Didn't seem like it. More than likely she just hadn't thought of a training plan herself and was piggy backing off his mentor.
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Post by EthanTheAnnus on Oct 9, 2017 1:13:44 GMT -5
ok, yay! i'll let you guys approach my cats, since i'm not sure what's happening at the moment.)) Timberfur stretched and padded out from the warriors den. As one of the older warriors, his nest was closer to the middle of the den so it took a bit to pick his way past the other nests. Reaching the exit, he walked out into the morning light and blinked rapidly. The light was blinding. He glanced around to see if any cats were awake yet.
Thunderpaw sat to the side of the camp, cleaning prey off her whiskers. She sniffed disdainfully ever time a cat did something stupid or idiotic. They're just not perfect like me, she thought to herself, standing up. She padded forward a few paces and tripped over her own paws, embarrassing herself. ok, maybe not that perfect.
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Post by blizzardsfang on Oct 9, 2017 11:10:45 GMT -5
(Novie who is Thunderpaw's mentor?)
Ravenstorm jumped through the trees with years of practice showing through. He finally made it to the spot he wanted and he sat down, wrapping his tail around his paws, he waited for the others to arrive before he would tell Rainpaw his advice and what he wanted his apprentice to do.
Snowblossom turned her gaze to Thunderpaw as the apprentice fell over her own paws and she stared.
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Post by Novi on Oct 9, 2017 20:32:20 GMT -5
(Thunderpaw's mentor will be Snowblossom :3 havent updated yet cuz my computer (or proboards, who knows) is being laggy and stupid >-<)
Rainpaw sat down as well, scooting over a bit to let the others sit too. He wondered what the specifics of their training would be. Especially since Ivypaw was 2 moons older than him. If anything, this should be review for her and Cinderstorm should be teaching her something that actually mattered. But what did Rainpaw know? He was just an apprentice...
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Post by blizzardsfang on Oct 9, 2017 23:19:29 GMT -5
(it's all good I'm in need of a new laptop lol also Spiderstar is so cute I don't know why my mind is like "yes" )
Ivypaw's ears lifted as she listened to Ravenstorm speak, she was a fairly good hunter but she hadn't spent much time with Rainpaw much or with other apprentices in general so she was curious to see what it was like. She looked at her mentor then back to Ravenstorm.
Ravenstorm nodded "both of you head out, Ivypaw I am aware you haven't had much opportunity to work with other apprentices due to being older, Rainpaw here does not work well with others so this task will test your ability to work well with cats you rarely do patrols with. Imagine the tribe is starving and they send you all out, you will need teamwork and communication to get in prey if the forest is scarce, which happens once in a while. Or what if they need strong warriors to fight and you have never once fought alongside the cat next to you, you'll need skills from working with other cats." The tom stared at the two with hard eyes. He decided this was perfect to work on both of the apprentices. Both of them were fairly good hunters, of course Rainpaw had much to learn but he picked up quickly, on the other hand neither of them had much chance to work in teams and this would be good practice.
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Post by EthanTheAnnus on Oct 10, 2017 2:13:44 GMT -5
(Novie who is Thunderpaw's mentor?) Ravenstorm jumped through the trees with years of practice showing through. He finally made it to the spot he wanted and he sat down, wrapping his tail around his paws, he waited for the others to arrive before he would tell Rainpaw his advice and what he wanted his apprentice to do. Snowblossom turned her gaze to Thunderpaw as the apprentice fell over her own paws and she stared. "What're you glaring at?" Thunderpaw mewed to her mentor in a teasing way. she flicked her tail as she walked and held her nose up in the air pompously, then reached Snowblossom and dropped the act. "Are we doing something today?"
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Post by Novi on Oct 10, 2017 11:00:19 GMT -5
(I'll have to bring him in. Lol Course you can join. Feel free to fill out the form on the front page) Spiderstar stretched and yawned. His clan was pretty independent when it came to organizing themselves so he kept putting off naming a deputy. It wasnt that big of a deal after all. He hopped down from his ledge and headed out of the den. Standing on the platform, he looked around the camp.
Rainpaw's tail tip twitched irritably, but he held his tongue. "Alright."
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Post by blizzardsfang on Oct 10, 2017 18:19:19 GMT -5
( ohmygosh look at him)
Snowblossom turned her gaze to Spiderstar and she stared at the leader for a moment before returning her gaze to her apprentice, she had a softer spot for Thunderpaw because it was her own apprentice but even she couldn't escape the grumpy she-cats harsh tongue "I saw the other apprentices heading out for training, we could join them but we could also help out in the camp, you can decide."
Ivypaw shifted on her paws, watching with intent eyes "I can do that."
Ravenstorm licked his forepaw and ran it over his face "then the both of you get going, don't return unless you have two pieces of prey with you."
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