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Post by Thornheart on Jul 5, 2017 15:38:56 GMT -5
Oh. My. Goodness! I cannot wait for this!
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Post by Deleted on Jul 5, 2017 15:39:16 GMT -5
I'm so sad it's almost over...
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Post by Thornheart on Jul 5, 2017 15:52:42 GMT -5
I know! There are so many passionate scenes in the story. The beginning lured you in, and the end made you feel for the cats and all that had just happened. There are so many questions now: How will the story end? Who will become leader? Why didn't this story go on longer??! (I look forward to seeing how many more fics you write, Sea. Seeing this one was so enticing and exciting and made you connect to everyone on so many different levels.)
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Post by 🍁Searipple101🍁 on Jul 6, 2017 14:37:07 GMT -5
Thanks for reading, guys! I'm so glad you're enjoying it so much! You really have no idea how awesome it is to know how much you enjoy my writing Thornheart I'm going to continue writing Empty after this one is finished, but I have a really good idea for another new fic, I think. I'm excited to start working on that one, but three fics at once is too many XD But I've already got some stuff written down for it and a banner drawn. Hopefully, it's half as good as this one. but honestly, I don't think any fic I write is going to be as good as WITSOP. This one is special.
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Post by 🍁Searipple101🍁 on Jul 7, 2017 19:17:17 GMT -5
bump
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Post by 🍁Searipple101🍁 on Jul 8, 2017 15:07:08 GMT -5
little bump
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Post by 🍁Searipple101🍁 on Jul 12, 2017 0:13:32 GMT -5
bump
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Post by mintedstar/fur🦇 on Jul 12, 2017 19:31:48 GMT -5
WOOOOOH! Good job Sea!
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Post by 🍁Searipple101🍁 on Jul 12, 2017 19:53:33 GMT -5
WOOOOOH! Good job Sea! Thank you, and thanks for sticking with me so long and being so encouraging! <3
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Post by mintedstar/fur🦇 on Jul 12, 2017 19:56:08 GMT -5
No problem. It's great to see such good writing from you. ;3 Thank you for being so patent with me. You are an awesome writer and a great forum friend.
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Post by Scartail48 on Jul 12, 2017 20:55:53 GMT -5
AWWWW! The end was co cute! This was such a good story, and I'm going to miss it!
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Post by 🍁Searipple101🍁 on Jul 12, 2017 21:00:37 GMT -5
mintedstar/fur🦇 Dude, you're like the nicest person on these forums, though. You're the best forum friend! Scartail48 Thank you! I'm so glad you liked it <3 Might I ask what your favorite part of the story was? Like, any specific scenes you liked the best?
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Post by mintedstar/fur🦇 on Jul 12, 2017 21:14:05 GMT -5
0///0 <3 Thanks for the kind words. I treat people as I want to be treated and you've shown me many times over that you are one of those people that can be kind. So thank you,
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Post by 🍁Searipple101🍁 on Jul 12, 2017 21:21:51 GMT -5
0///0 <3 Thanks for the kind words. I treat people as I want to be treated and you've shown me many times over that you are one of those people that can be kind. So thank you, Maybe, but I'm still definitely no angel. I still think you're way kinder than me anyway, tbh. So thank you for being who you are <3 And before this turns into endless cycles of us thanking each other, lol, I gotta know what you think of the story. I also gotta know if you've actually read the whole thing XD Cause I know you've got a whole life outside the forums and this story.
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Post by phantomstar57 on Jul 12, 2017 21:25:38 GMT -5
I love happy endings even if somewhat bittersweet. Great job!!!
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Post by Scartail48 on Jul 12, 2017 21:37:09 GMT -5
I think it was actually the parts where they were training together. It was so strong and descriptive, and it really strengthened the bond between Ice and Holly story-wise. All of it was awesome though, and the battle scene was epic.
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Post by Owlmoon on Jul 12, 2017 21:51:33 GMT -5
Oh...my...StarClan...that was beautiful.
- Owlmoon
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Post by mintedstar/fur🦇 on Jul 12, 2017 22:04:37 GMT -5
0///0 <3 Thanks for the kind words. I treat people as I want to be treated and you've shown me many times over that you are one of those people that can be kind. So thank you, Maybe, but I'm still definitely no angel. I still think you're way kinder than me anyway, tbh. So thank you for being who you are <3 And before this turns into endless cycles of us thanking each other, lol, I gotta know what you think of the story. I also gotta know if you've actually read the whole thing XD Cause I know you've got a whole life outside the forums and this story. Lol. xD I really like the story! You've got good suspense and reveal the different parts at good stages. No. Sadly I had to go on vacation as well as other things. I'm not quiet at the ending yet, but I've read further. I actually have time now... So I should be around chapter 35 when I'm done. :3
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Post by 🍁Searipple101🍁 on Jul 12, 2017 22:12:24 GMT -5
I love happy endings even if somewhat bittersweet. Great job!!! Happy endings are the best endings :3 I always like leaving off a story or movie with a good feeling, so I'm glad that others enjoy a happy ending, too.
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Post by 🍁Searipple101🍁 on Jul 12, 2017 22:13:51 GMT -5
I think it was actually the parts where they were training together. It was so strong and descriptive, and it really strengthened the bond between Ice and Holly story-wise. All of it was awesome though, and the battle scene was epic. I always try to be as descriptive as needed, so i'm glad you enjoy that! But I gotta say, I didn't think the training scenes would be your favorite XD Though, they really do help with the bond. Battle scenes almost always seem to be the fave
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Post by 🍁Searipple101🍁 on Jul 12, 2017 22:15:14 GMT -5
Oh...my...StarClan...that was beautiful.
- Owlmoon Hey! Haven't heard from you in a little while, so I'm really glad to know you were still reading! Glad you liked it, too! Got any favorite scenes you mind sharing? :3
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Post by 🍁Searipple101🍁 on Jul 12, 2017 22:16:30 GMT -5
mintedstar/fur🦇 Vacation sounds fun! Please, tell me what you think after reading! And tell me about your vacation sometime, too, if you don't mind
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Post by Scartail48 on Jul 12, 2017 22:25:53 GMT -5
They usually aren't, but something about them was just really cool. XD
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Post by 🍁Searipple101🍁 on Jul 12, 2017 22:31:23 GMT -5
Well I'm happy you liked them! When doing scenes like that I'm always afraid they won't be interesting enough even though they are essential for some bond/world building. So it really is nice to know they aren't super boring, lol.
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Post by Scartail48 on Jul 12, 2017 22:32:57 GMT -5
Nah, they were great.
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Post by 🍁Searipple101🍁 on Jul 12, 2017 22:34:31 GMT -5
Thanks! Do you have any questions, by the way? Maybe there was something on your mind or something I didn't explain well enough in the story? I'm here to satisfy all your WITSOP story needs, lol!
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Post by Scartail48 on Jul 12, 2017 22:37:32 GMT -5
Mmmmm I don't think so. The epilogue wrapped up everything pretty nicely. I hope you write more stories, cause this was great!
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Post by 🍁Searipple101🍁 on Jul 12, 2017 22:42:20 GMT -5
I have another one up right now called Empty that I'm working on, but I honestly don't think that it, or any other story I do, will ever be as good as this one. This one was kind of my passion. The others I do/have done are fun no doubt, but this one is special, you know?
Still, I have another one that I'm working on as well that has yet to be be put up here. I think it's gonna be pretty good, too. Hopefully, anyway. We will see.
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Post by Scartail48 on Jul 12, 2017 22:55:35 GMT -5
I'll definitely be reading it. Let me know when you put it up!
(Btw I get that feel when you finish a story and it's like: Can I just write this story again? All over? (That's when you draw a boatload of fanart for your own story. XD))
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