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Post by 🍁Searipple101🍁 on May 12, 2017 13:52:14 GMT -5
Thank you so much! I hope you enjoy the story!
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Post by 🍁Searipple101🍁 on May 12, 2017 19:01:49 GMT -5
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Post by Thornheart on May 12, 2017 19:08:10 GMT -5
Just read it! (Oml the suspense!) Star is so manipulative! I know Hollyheart saw something was wrong, but then decides ''I'll let them into my world anyways!" Like ahhh
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Post by 🍁Searipple101🍁 on May 12, 2017 19:35:05 GMT -5
It was the heat if the moment, and she made a mistake. A big mistake X3
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Post by Deleted on May 13, 2017 10:54:51 GMT -5
Gahhhhhhh Hollyheart noooo look what happened!!
This chapter was awesome. Star is definitely very evil at this point, and she is our villain! Yay! Loved it.
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Post by 🍁Searipple101🍁 on May 13, 2017 11:08:26 GMT -5
I'm glad you really enjoyed it We finally see Star's true colors. Gotta love a manipulative villain!
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Post by Deleted on May 13, 2017 11:09:06 GMT -5
Yep! True.
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Post by 🍁Searipple101🍁 on May 13, 2017 11:20:23 GMT -5
Nice new profile pic, but why would I want to pet you exactly? XD
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Post by Deleted on May 13, 2017 11:49:54 GMT -5
Nooooot sure. I just made a pet me page and wanted to see how many people would visit it.
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Post by Deleted on May 13, 2017 11:50:30 GMT -5
Oh, and thanks!
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Post by 🍁Searipple101🍁 on May 13, 2017 22:41:22 GMT -5
Lol you're welcome!
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Post by 🍁Searipple101🍁 on May 14, 2017 14:17:09 GMT -5
Bump
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Post by Ƈσяαℓ Mєямαι∂ ღ on May 14, 2017 18:54:36 GMT -5
Chapters 1-7 have been read. It is VERY good so far!
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Post by 🍁Searipple101🍁 on May 14, 2017 19:29:56 GMT -5
Thank you very much! May I ask who your favorite character so far is?
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Post by Thornheart on May 14, 2017 19:33:20 GMT -5
(I know this question wasn't directed at me but I just wanted to lol...)
My favorite has probably Icespire. I love how great he is <3
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Post by 🍁Searipple101🍁 on May 14, 2017 19:38:05 GMT -5
You're always to give your opinions, Thorn! I wanna know what all my readers think.
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Post by Ƈσяαℓ Mєямαι∂ ღ on May 14, 2017 20:29:29 GMT -5
Thank you very much! May I ask who your favorite character so far is?
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Post by 🍁Searipple101🍁 on May 14, 2017 20:33:15 GMT -5
Gorseclaw is pretty cool ^.^
For me, it has to be Raintail. I love writing about him so much.
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Post by Ƈσяαℓ Mєямαι∂ ღ on May 15, 2017 0:13:39 GMT -5
Gorseclaw is pretty cool ^.^ For me, it has to be Raintail. I love writing about him so much. He's still Rainpaw where I am, so I haven't gotten to know him very well yet. I'll hopefully read more chapters tomorrow (gonna read some real quick now until my phone dies)
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Post by 🍁Searipple101🍁 on May 15, 2017 2:41:11 GMT -5
Oh shoot, I spoiled something... Sorry!
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Post by Ƈσяαℓ Mєямαι∂ ღ on May 15, 2017 11:38:02 GMT -5
I've read everything so far. I love the back story section!!
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Post by phantomstar57 on May 15, 2017 15:07:18 GMT -5
Finally had a chance to catch up! Good story! I eagerly await how they are going to handle the Evil that has come amongst them.
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Post by 🍁Searipple101🍁 on May 15, 2017 21:05:19 GMT -5
Thanks, guys! I appreciate that you read this and enjoy it so much ^.^
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Post by Thornheart on May 16, 2017 8:50:34 GMT -5
The suspense for Hollyheart and her Clan is really prominent!
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Post by 🍁Searipple101🍁 on May 16, 2017 14:46:27 GMT -5
Suspense is my friend :3
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Post by 🍁Searipple101🍁 on May 17, 2017 15:10:58 GMT -5
Chapter 33 is up!
Also, apparently posts have a character limit, so the story is over two posts now.
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Post by Deleted on May 17, 2017 15:15:26 GMT -5
Okay! Will read now.
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Post by Thornheart on May 17, 2017 15:15:30 GMT -5
YES! Can't wait to read it!
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Post by Ƈσяαℓ Mєямαι∂ ღ on May 17, 2017 15:15:39 GMT -5
It's good. Barely any mistakes (I think I saw like 2 maybe). Can't wait for chapter 34
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Post by Deleted on May 17, 2017 15:25:37 GMT -5
Ooh, nice chapter! Love the battle scene already.
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