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Post by [~Ghost Writer~] on Aug 22, 2016 15:19:51 GMT -5
Bump
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Post by 🍁Searipple101🍁 on Aug 22, 2016 15:30:31 GMT -5
Thank you for the bump!
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Post by [~Ghost Writer~] on Aug 22, 2016 15:56:12 GMT -5
Yep! When's the next chapter going up?
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Post by 🍁Searipple101🍁 on Aug 22, 2016 16:16:20 GMT -5
Maybe today. Idk, i'm kind of in the writing mood right now, but I'm eating dinner, and I don't like writing while eating. Might be today or tomorrow, but definitely soon.
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Post by [~Ghost Writer~] on Aug 22, 2016 16:19:55 GMT -5
Alright
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Post by 🍁Searipple101🍁 on Aug 22, 2016 18:00:59 GMT -5
Chapter 4 is now up!
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Post by phantomstar57 on Aug 23, 2016 20:33:36 GMT -5
Fan me! Liking what I read so far! Saw on booboo.
The tom, reaching (should be reeking?) of herbs, took a deep breath to calm himself then spoke with a dead serious tone, blue eyes transfixed on the messy-furred tom before him.
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Post by 🍁Searipple101🍁 on Aug 23, 2016 20:34:48 GMT -5
Yep ^^ you're right. Thanks for catching that! And thank you for reading this, too
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Post by Redfleck on Aug 23, 2016 20:41:35 GMT -5
I'm hooked. The prophecy foreshadows a lot of stuff.... I can't wait to read more of this. Fan me?
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Post by phantomstar57 on Aug 23, 2016 20:58:32 GMT -5
Love the story so far. Caught up now. Found one place with a possible booboo... I did look it up just to make sure my proofreader instincts were correct.
I huffed and looked over towards her as she lie (should be lay) just outside the nursery, the thick ivy wall covering the wooden wall and forming a roof which stretched over to the soft thing and covered that as well. She lie (lay)with her silvery white pelt half under the vines which stretched to the ground but only just couldn't make it and dangled there instead
Lay is past tense of lie.
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Post by 🍁Searipple101🍁 on Aug 23, 2016 21:04:29 GMT -5
Oh yeah, thanks, Phantom! I'll add you both as fans right now! And, Redfleck, you'd be surprised what tricks I have up my sleeve for this prophecy
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Post by phantomstar57 on Aug 23, 2016 21:41:24 GMT -5
Welcome and now I await Chapter five. . .
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Post by 🍁Searipple101🍁 on Aug 23, 2016 21:56:09 GMT -5
Don't worry, it'll come very soon :3 I'm so glad you like it
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Post by 🍁Searipple101🍁 on Aug 24, 2016 10:52:33 GMT -5
Chapter 5 is now up!
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Post by [~Ghost Writer~] on Aug 24, 2016 17:49:15 GMT -5
So if Gorgeleap is a calico and so is Hollypaw.... Are they related?
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Post by 🍁Searipple101🍁 on Aug 24, 2016 17:57:38 GMT -5
Actually, no. They just happen to be the only calicoes in the clan, so they got paired up, even though Hollypaw has more black and Gorgeleap is mostly white with only a few colored patches.
This reminds me, I was thinking of putting up a 'did you know?' section on the front page, basically telling random, cool facts about the story and its characters. Like this would be one, for example. there's be other stuff, too, and it would be updated. Think I should do it?
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Post by [~Ghost Writer~] on Aug 24, 2016 18:02:11 GMT -5
Of course! I was thinking of doing it but I'm not sure too many people read my stuff enough to do that
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Post by 🍁Searipple101🍁 on Aug 24, 2016 18:05:29 GMT -5
I'm surprised I have as many readers for this story, to be honest. I wish I had more for Born ob Blood because I love that little series a lot, but I do understand it's A LOT to read. Maybe I should make my chapters smaller for BoB. I'm gonna put that section in here now, though. It'll be updated whenever, so you'll just have to check it from time to time
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Post by [~Ghost Writer~] on Aug 24, 2016 18:06:45 GMT -5
Alright. Yeah. Make the chapters smaller. I honestly have a horrible attention span.
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Post by 🍁Searipple101🍁 on Aug 24, 2016 18:31:04 GMT -5
I added it :3
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Post by [~Ghost Writer~] on Aug 24, 2016 18:54:47 GMT -5
Cool :3
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Post by 🍁Searipple101🍁 on Aug 24, 2016 19:00:05 GMT -5
I hope those are actually some interesting little insights there. I wasn't sure what all to put yet since a lot of the god stuff is coming from later chapters.
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Post by phantomstar57 on Aug 24, 2016 19:10:48 GMT -5
Actually, no. They just happen to be the only calicoes in the clan, so they got paired up, even though Hollypaw has more black and Gorgeleap is mostly white with only a few colored patches. This reminds me, I was thinking of putting up a 'did you know?' section on the front page, basically telling random, cool facts about the story and its characters. Like this would be one, for example. there's be other stuff, too, and it would be updated. Think I should do it? Sure! I've been thinking of that myself! Or a question and answer type thing for people to ask questions but never got to it.
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Post by 🍁Searipple101🍁 on Aug 24, 2016 19:28:37 GMT -5
I did it, Phantom ^^ I just need more chapters up to add more interesting content to the 'Did you know?' section.
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Post by phantomstar57 on Aug 24, 2016 19:46:25 GMT -5
I did it, Phantom ^^ I just need more chapters up to add more interesting content to the 'Did you know?' section. Cool!! My Mandee-a blue-cream tortoiseshell was part Russian Blue! She had that same silvery sheen on her coat.
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Post by 🍁Searipple101🍁 on Aug 24, 2016 19:52:10 GMT -5
Aw, she sounds so pretty! Please tell me you have a picture.
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Post by phantomstar57 on Aug 24, 2016 19:57:54 GMT -5
Here is Mandee (May 1987-March 1999) .
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Post by 🍁Searipple101🍁 on Aug 24, 2016 20:37:25 GMT -5
Oh my gosh, she is so beautiful! <3
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Post by phantomstar57 on Aug 25, 2016 8:47:51 GMT -5
Thank you. She was a pretty girl! I can't believe it is over 15 years since she passed away.
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Post by 🍁Searipple101🍁 on Aug 25, 2016 12:22:20 GMT -5
Very pretty. I'm sorry she had to go
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