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Post by 𝕊’𝕞𝕠𝕣𝕖 on Sept 1, 2017 18:50:42 GMT -5
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Yeah. Poor Sandheart.
So what do you think of Splashpaw and ReefClan in comparison to Bugpaw and SwampClan?
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Post by Fire on Cloud Nine on Sept 1, 2017 20:09:46 GMT -5
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I quite like it actually, very different to each other! It'll add some interesting character interactions with each other.
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Post by 𝕊’𝕞𝕠𝕣𝕖 on Sept 1, 2017 21:10:03 GMT -5
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Oh definitely. Especially when we throw Ryepaw into the mix as well.
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Post by Fire on Cloud Nine on Sept 1, 2017 22:33:03 GMT -5
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Ooh yeah! I'm actually willing to bet that Ryepaw's a med cat apprentice, seeing as that'll probably be all different types to personalities and roles then.XD
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Post by 𝕊’𝕞𝕠𝕣𝕖 on Sept 1, 2017 22:56:32 GMT -5
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Hey, it's possible. Tbh I hadn't actually thought about that, but it would be super cool and I'm finally getting inspiration for Ryepaw. May have to go with that.
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Post by Fire on Cloud Nine on Sept 2, 2017 8:19:06 GMT -5
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Haha you're welcome then!XD I can imagine Ryepaw being the voice of reason for the trio. You'd have the hotheaded probably brave warrior in training, who would be the bravery, the sheltered young daughter of the Leader, who would be the heart, and the med cat apprentice who would be the voice of reason. Though that's just my interpretation and guess.XD
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Post by 𝕊’𝕞𝕠𝕣𝕖 on Sept 2, 2017 9:04:47 GMT -5
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Ryepaw's certainly going to be interesting, I can promise you that. His situation is a lot different than the other two's.
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Post by Fire on Cloud Nine on Sept 2, 2017 16:15:40 GMT -5
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Ooh interesting!
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Post by 𝕊’𝕞𝕠𝕣𝕖 on Sept 2, 2017 16:44:43 GMT -5
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Yeah. Tbh I had like, no ideas for him until you mentioned him being the medicine cat apprentice. Now I've got tons. So thanks!
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Post by Fire on Cloud Nine on Sept 2, 2017 16:47:56 GMT -5
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Haha then I guess I can say your welcome! I'm so excited for this book honestly.
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Post by 𝕊’𝕞𝕠𝕣𝕖 on Sept 2, 2017 16:48:45 GMT -5
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Same. I tried writing it a long time ago, but everything was wrong and in this version it's overdone major changes which makes me even more excited for it.
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Post by 𝕊’𝕞𝕠𝕣𝕖 on Sept 18, 2017 23:48:48 GMT -5
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Well, after long wait, we finally have chapter three out! Time to introduce Ryepaw.
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Post by Fire on Cloud Nine on Sept 19, 2017 1:04:36 GMT -5
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Ah I loved it, the first chapter so far with no death! The opposite in fact.XD Also I noticed you say that the clan was the closest thing to family... You kept that ominously overlooked.
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Post by 𝕊’𝕞𝕠𝕣𝕖 on Sept 19, 2017 1:11:31 GMT -5
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Thanks! Yeah, I thought I'd go with a different approach with this chapter, and as for that little mention, I'll explain more later. Ryepaw is probably actually the most thought out of all the main three, and I feel so bad for him already.
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Post by Fire on Cloud Nine on Sept 19, 2017 1:21:59 GMT -5
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Ah I see, I'm really excited to find out more about him, he sounds really interesting so far. I do love how you mention that comment so subtly. I already have a guess about him.XD
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Post by 𝕊’𝕞𝕠𝕣𝕖 on Sept 19, 2017 1:28:29 GMT -5
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XD, really? Can I ask what it is?
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Post by Fire on Cloud Nine on Sept 19, 2017 1:34:10 GMT -5
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I think that he's not actually born into the clan. I have a feeling he was a kit that was found by the clan and brought in. It would explain his lack of family and how Waspsting didn't really trust him so much for no apparent reason. It's flimsy at best, but it's an idea of mine I'm willing to bet on.XD
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Post by 𝕊’𝕞𝕠𝕣𝕖 on Sept 19, 2017 1:39:51 GMT -5
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That's a good guess, but I can't confirm or deny that.
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Post by 𝕊’𝕞𝕠𝕣𝕖 on Sept 19, 2017 2:08:11 GMT -5
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Alright, I gotta crash. But I'd love to know what you thought about the three different introduction chapters. Which one is your favorite, and who is your favorite character, where you think the story is going, stuff like that.
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Post by Fire on Cloud Nine on Sept 19, 2017 15:52:40 GMT -5
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I'm going to stick with my idea, I'm pretty certain.XD Though I have no idea where the plot is going. Not a clue actually. I have to say my favourite character is the splashpaw, she's just so innocent! I'm not sure what my favourite chapter is though, they're all so good!
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Post by 𝕊’𝕞𝕠𝕣𝕖 on Sept 19, 2017 16:03:30 GMT -5
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XD alright.
Splashpaw is definitely innocent.
Thanks, they were mostly just setting stuff up chapters. The real story begins in the next chapter with the gathering. Where our protagonists meet, we learn some lore, stuff go down, and we get to dive into the plot. I actually had a lot of inspiration for it, so I'm already working on it now. Bugpaw's so salty. (The next chapter will be told from his perspective again)
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Post by Fire on Cloud Nine on Sept 19, 2017 16:16:19 GMT -5
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Ah I see! Ooh I'm so excited to read it! I do wish I could write so much. I think I will actually make my own book thread eventually, though it may or may not be warriors, not too sure.
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Post by 𝕊’𝕞𝕠𝕣𝕖 on Sept 19, 2017 16:18:14 GMT -5
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You should! Whatever it is, I'd read it!
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Post by 𝕊’𝕞𝕠𝕣𝕖 on Sept 19, 2017 23:52:19 GMT -5
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Chapter four is also up. But don't expect every update to be this fast. I just had lots of inspiration for this one.
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Post by Fire on Cloud Nine on Sept 20, 2017 15:31:06 GMT -5
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Ooh, the tale of Moonlit! I like this chapter, though it was of course sad.
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Post by 𝕊’𝕞𝕠𝕣𝕖 on Sept 20, 2017 15:52:59 GMT -5
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Yeah, that tale actually has a lot of symbolism in it about future stuff. I had a lot of inspiration for it. Besides, Archwhisker and Copperspots are like, my favorite cats. I had to include them somehow.
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Post by Fire on Cloud Nine on Sept 20, 2017 16:29:50 GMT -5
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Ooh okay! I didn't know that, hmm. lol really? Hehe, they seem like interesting cats.
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Post by 𝕊’𝕞𝕠𝕣𝕖 on Sept 20, 2017 16:31:10 GMT -5
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Yep. I love them so much. They'll probably come in even more later.
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Post by 𝕊’𝕞𝕠𝕣𝕖 on Oct 14, 2017 14:08:07 GMT -5
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Chapter five is finally out! It's shorter compared to the others, but I wanted to get it out, now I'll start on the next chapter.
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Post by 𝕊’𝕞𝕠𝕣𝕖 on Nov 20, 2017 0:14:41 GMT -5
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So, I haven’t updated in awhile...sorry.
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