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Post by ѕρσσкуѕку on Aug 21, 2016 18:41:47 GMT -5
Hey Storm, what happened to Flailfang?
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Post by ѕρσσкуѕку on Aug 21, 2016 18:42:25 GMT -5
That totally makes sense and yeah that's what I meant but I guess it didn't translate well from my head to the computer lol
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Post by ѕρσσкуѕку on Aug 21, 2016 18:44:49 GMT -5
There, I added two sentences. Is that better?
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Post by *Spottedpelt* on Aug 21, 2016 19:17:49 GMT -5
♀ - - { Petalshine } -- { Warrior } - -
Petalshine is a ginger and black splotched calico she-cat with light green eyes. She has a white chest and muzzle and white paws. She has slightly long fur and a fluffy tail. She's a very careful and graceful cat and her strength is in hunting and not so much in fighting, she is swift and agile and light on her paws. She tends to stay away from fights and arguments, being a calm and peaceful cat, but will fight as fiercely as any warrior to protect and defend her clanmates. Petalshine is usually a soft spoken and quiet cat but enjoys the company of others and liking to join in on patrols. She is loyal to her clan and is kind and friendly to her clanmates, though, she can be rude or short-tempered if someone keeps annoying her or makes her feel uncomfortable. She will almost always feel guilty for snapping at someone afterwards, as she doesn't like to be rude or make someone feel bad. She has no ambitions of becoming leader, only wanting to serve her clan as a loyal warrior until the end of her days. Petalshine has a fascination and love of trees and plant life and likes to spend time in the forest in the territory. She has a fear of thunderstorms and freezes up with fright from them, which can be a problem during an important event happening in the clan or even when a battle is happening.
- - { Roleplayed by *Spottedpelt* } - - ♀ - - { Acornpaw } -- { Apprentice } - -
Acornpaw is a dark snowshoe siamese she-cat with light blue eyes. She has mostly brown fur and has a white chest and paws, with a little speck of white on her dark muzzle. He legs and tail are black as well as her face and ears. Acornpaw is a feisty and stubborn cat and can sometimes be a handful. She is often very bouncy and excited and is always wanting to explore the territory. She loves training with her mentor and is always wanting to learn new things, she tries to listen well but can be distracted easily by small things such as insects and plants, though she does what she is told, even if it's something she doesn't want to do. To practice with her hunting she likes to pounce and stalk bugs and insects. She is kind and friendly towards her clanmates, though she can be snappy and short-tempered when teased or provoked. She is sometimes a trickster and likes to mess around with her mentor and clanmates. It's all in good nature but it can become annoying to some and can sometimes get her into trouble. Acornpaw is a very talkative cat and loves to chat with others, especially her fellow denmates, always wanting to know more and get in on secrets. She is determined to make her mentor and clan proud, wanting to become the greatest warrior of the clan.
- - { Roleplayed by *Spottedpelt* } - - ♂ - - { Sharpfang } -- { Warrior } - -
Sharpfang is a large dark brown tabby tom with black stripes and yellow eyes. He has black rings around his tail and a black tail tip. He has broad shoulders and unusually long fangs that protrude out. He is powerfully built and is a fierce opponent in battle and would give his life to protect his clan. Sharpfang, who may seem intimidating to some, is a calm and patient cat and is kind to his clanmates, he is however, hostile and aggressive to outsiders and intruders. He is protective of his clanmates, especially to his apprentice and mate. He is mostly a quiet cat, being more of a listener than a talker. He is especially patient with his apprentice and younger cats, enjoying to play with the kits in the clan. Due to his larger size he prefers the warmer weather as he is clumsy in deep snow. He sometimes seeks the quietness of being alone and can sometimes be seen going out on a border patrol by himself or a walk through the territory, sometimes to collect his thoughts. Sharpfang is mostly a careful cat but can become reckless during a fight or if outsiders are involved. His dislike and anger towards outsiders began long ago when he was an apprentice. One day, while out practicing with his mentor, Sharppaw strayed a bit far after stalking a squirrel that kept evading him. He was then caught off guard as a fox attacked him, he thought he would die at that moment until another young cat came to his rescue and the two fought off the fox. The cat was a young tom named Aspen who wandered the territory. The two cats became friends and Sharppaw would sneak out to meet Aspen, even until Sharppaw became a warrior. Little did he know the rogue was part of a bigger group of cats that were out to cause trouble. While out on a border patrol with his mother, former mentor, and another warrior, the group was attacked by a group of rogues led by Aspen. Sharpfang was shocked that his long time friend had betrayed him and in the battle his mother was killed and his mentor badly wounded. Pained and fuming with anger and rage, Sharpfang fought and killed Aspen and drove off the rest of the attackers. A scar on his right eye serves as a reminder of the incident. Though he always remembered the time he and Aspen were friends he never forgot the rogue's betrayal, since then he has disliked outsiders and is ready to drive them out. Though his past haunts him, Sharpfang is willing to give his life to his clan and dreams of one day leading the clan.
- - { Roleplayed by *Spottedpelt* } - - ♂ - - { Cedarstripes } -- { Warrior } - -
Cedarstripes is a large, semi-fluffy, orange, tabby tom with a white muzzle and chest and has light green eyes. He has large paws and has a deep, gruff voice, with a deep purr too. Despite having a gruff and deep voice, Cedarstripes is kind and friendly and is always willing to help out his clanmates. He is a quiet and patient cat and keeps his thoughts to himself most of the time. Due to his large size, he is quite the terrible hunter and is loud when he tries to stalk. He is usually welcoming and kind towards outsiders or newcomers wanting to join the clan, he does however, keep to the warrior code and will question the outsiders and take them to the leader and deputy. He is aggressive to those who provoke or are rude to him or to his clanmates. His goal is to protect the clan even at the cost of his life.
- - { Roleplayed by *Spottedpelt* } - - ♂ - - { Flinttail } -- { Warrior } - -
Flinttail is a lithe, jet black tom with yellow eyes. He is a bit smaller in size compared to the others in the clan and isn't that powerful when in battle. He is however, swift and quick-witted, helping him in battle and making him a good hunter. Due to his smaller size some cats comment on his size or tease him, it annoys him but he doesn't show it, not wanting to cause any trouble. He is a very secretive and mysterious cat, keeping to himself and keeping to the shadows most of the time. Some cats are wary of him and may have a hard time trusting him, but he just shrugs it off. He doesn't talk much and when he does it's short, quick responses. He prefers going out alone, due to being quiet and a bit awkward around others, not knowing how to keep a conversation going, but will go out with others on border and hunting patrols whenever asked or needed to. Flinttail is skilled in stalking and tracking as well as sneaking around without being seen or heard. He can be a gruff cat, sometimes snapping out and being short-tempered, though most of the time he stays quiet and out of the business of others, because of how socially awkward he is. He was not clanborn and lived his life as rogue until he joined the clan. Not much is known about his past and is evasive when someone tries to ask, not wanting to talk about it. Flinttail is however, a loyal cat to the clan and is willing to give his life to protect and help his clanmates.
- - { Roleplayed by *Spottedpelt* } - -
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Post by ѕρσσкуѕку on Aug 21, 2016 19:22:03 GMT -5
@ Spotted: Okay, I've just looked through your new characters! Here are my thoughts... - So from what I read, Bluepaw's fatal flaw is that she is tactless, right? - You forgot Frecklepaw's eye color, though I don't think that's necessary. I just wanted to let you know in case you wanted to fix that. ^^ - It looks like Raintree's only flaw is that he's a workaholic, is that right? - I don't think cats hum, I've certainly never seen it in the books, but I'll leave it up to Fireh if it's okay for you to keep that in Cherry's bio. Yeah, plus she's overly loyal and could get in trouble for it. She's got other flaws I'm sure, but I just made her today so I'd have to rp her a bit to figure out what they are. Omg oops I'll add that now. Yeah, I mean his main flaw is that he's a workaholic but it translates as he doesn't take good care of himself and that's not good (he'll probs get sick during the outbreak) And yeah I know cats don't hum in the books, but I figured it might have been okay because, one, she was a rogue so she was exposed to things outside of Clan life, and two, the suffix -song exists so they have to have some kind of something, right?
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Post by ѕρσσкуѕку on Aug 21, 2016 20:00:04 GMT -5
I kind of forgot to save my characters… But don't worry! I kinda memorized their forms, so don't worry I have them saved. Would you like me to post them for you?
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Post by 🎃❅❖.Şp໐໐kฯຟiຖ໓.❖❅🎃 on Aug 21, 2016 20:36:31 GMT -5
Hey guys. I think I might have to stop all of your character making for now. I have plans to make a thread to organize the forms and having to add on and on doesn't sound good for me right now?? So if you all could hold on making characters then that would be great.
Bracken your 2 characters are the last I will accept for now until I get characters in order.
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Post by Deleted on Aug 22, 2016 3:13:48 GMT -5
{ 🎃❅❖.Şp໐໐kฯຟiຖ໓.❖❅🎃 - i have edited my new characters c: could you please check them ? the oakpaw thing isn't supposed to be about flickerpaw, just about what he'll do in that general situation ^^' }
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Post by 🎃❅❖.Şp໐໐kฯຟiຖ໓.❖❅🎃 on Aug 22, 2016 3:14:08 GMT -5
They look good now! Although I kind of still have the issue with you having only 1 warrior. ^^; I won't force you to make 1, but I would appreciate if you would consider it if you make more characters Lynx. You've got 2 apprentices and 2 kits so I'm mostly thinking of this as a 'in the future' thing. Even if Ivypaw is dying.
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Post by 🎃❅❖.Şp໐໐kฯຟiຖ໓.❖❅🎃 on Aug 22, 2016 3:14:55 GMT -5
Yes! Thanks for making it more vague.
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Post by Deleted on Aug 22, 2016 3:22:02 GMT -5
aa thanks !! and of course c: i can make a few older cats later
i'm pretty sure 98 % percent of the kit and apprentice population will be roleplayed by me :')
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Post by 🎃❅❖.Şp໐໐kฯຟiຖ໓.❖❅🎃 on Aug 22, 2016 3:27:18 GMT -5
Yeah Wasn't there still the plan for IvyCrow kits to die too because you wanted a lot? So the population of younger cats will even out a bit.. If that still was the plan anymore. And thanks. I'm making a few more warriors too just to figure out how the apprentice-mentor stuff is going to be sorted out once I get everyone added. I dont want apprentices without mentors again so naturally I will assign them upon creation.
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Post by ѕρσσкуѕку on Aug 22, 2016 3:46:21 GMT -5
It wasn't CrowIvy, but there was a pairing whose kits were supposed to die. I believe it was CoalCloud, and Cloud was supposed to see it as StarClan punishing him for breaking the code.
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Post by Deleted on Aug 22, 2016 3:50:42 GMT -5
oh no, there weren't any plans made just yet for them to die ^^' and that sounds great !!
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Post by 🎃❅❖.Şp໐໐kฯຟiຖ໓.❖❅🎃 on Aug 22, 2016 4:16:10 GMT -5
No I know the kits of Coal will die but you guys talked about Ivypaws kits dying too? I Remember this so unless you guys talked it out and changed plans then There were plans for her to die and a few kits because you guys wanted a lot. Or Lynx did anyway?
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Post by Deleted on Aug 22, 2016 4:18:09 GMT -5
well, ivypaw is going to die, and spotted suggested to have a kitten be stillborn but we decided against it c;
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Post by 🎃❅❖.Şp໐໐kฯຟiຖ໓.❖❅🎃 on Aug 22, 2016 4:22:18 GMT -5
So wait. Is she having 6 kits then?
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Post by 🎃❅❖.Şp໐໐kฯຟiຖ໓.❖❅🎃 on Aug 22, 2016 4:34:20 GMT -5
I'm mostly asking because i'm starting to feel that anything over 4-5 kits is too much. I'll probably give up my kit in August/Silas to balance the number out better. It isn't good to have so many siblings in the clan, especially if we're trying to think of this in a 'future generations' kind of thing.
I know this is bad to bring up now but I was mostly okay with Ivypaw having a lot because you guys mentioned some could die at birth/getting sick/ on the trip to fix the Opal.
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Post by Deleted on Aug 22, 2016 4:47:42 GMT -5
i really want that kit now *silently makes 2345787654323456787654433222 warriors to balance it out* who will you give her to ?
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Post by 🎃❅❖.Şp໐໐kฯຟiຖ໓.❖❅🎃 on Aug 22, 2016 4:52:51 GMT -5
No Lynx ^^; That's not the point. I mean I'm thinking of just having her not exist. Leaving only 4 kits.
If it wasn't an issue for me I would definitely keep her. But i don't want the kits to be clogged by one family, if you get what i'm saying? I understand there are other couples up and coming but they haven't yet, and we can't confirm when they're have kits and such.
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Post by Deleted on Aug 22, 2016 4:55:33 GMT -5
ah, of course ^^ the nursery is about to be clogged up with crow x ivy
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Post by 🎃❅❖.Şp໐໐kฯຟiຖ໓.❖❅🎃 on Aug 22, 2016 4:58:23 GMT -5
Yes, which is why i would appreciate if you two could figure something out about their kits number. ^^; There's too many.
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Post by 🎃❅❖.Şp໐໐kฯຟiຖ໓.❖❅🎃 on Aug 22, 2016 5:07:55 GMT -5
I'm not saying this to be mean or rude but I was thinking about how in other clans there's a rule on the amount of kits a character can have and I realize I should have put thought into that. I also feel the need to point out that i'm not saying this to be mean, once more. But.. it just.. as the person who runs the clan, it isn't good to have that many kits coming from one couple if there's no plans to have deaths occur. And I really don't want to kill your happy ideas you had for your couple but if it's my (i guess rule?) I'm also going to enforce it on myself too. Hence me thinking of cutting off a kit from the couple i'm in.
I still can't decide if 4 is a better number than 5 though. Kits in warriors tend to be born in about 2-4's. Probably for the Erin's to do a population check too.
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Post by Deleted on Aug 22, 2016 5:28:50 GMT -5
i'm sorry. ѕρσσкуѕку, what do you think ?
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Post by 🎃❅❖.Şp໐໐kฯຟiຖ໓.❖❅🎃 on Aug 22, 2016 5:38:53 GMT -5
I'm thinking it might be best to go with 5 just so you don't have to cut down much. it's nothing to be sorry for, in fact i'm the one who's sorry to have to spring his but I didn't know you had cancelled your plans on a portion of her kits dying.
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Post by Deleted on Aug 22, 2016 5:46:46 GMT -5
i'm honestly not sure on what to do, that's why i need to ask spotted ^^'
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Post by 🎃❅❖.Şp໐໐kฯຟiຖ໓.❖❅🎃 on Aug 22, 2016 5:49:01 GMT -5
I know you guys have to talk it over. I can't just say "NONE FOR YOU" out of nowhere to one of your kit-claimers, right? lol. That would be absolutely horrible of me. You guys will have to work it out, and i've said it before but i'm sorry for having to bring this up so late. It has to be said though, and something has to be done. ^^;
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