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Post by Amber on Jan 1, 2017 16:39:53 GMT -5
Yep! I am almost done them all! ^^
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Post by Amber on Jan 1, 2017 17:50:39 GMT -5
I am done my forms, hopefully they are alright! They are rather short, and I think awkward in wording, but I promise my rping is not as bad as that. ^^
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Post by 🎃❅❖.Şp໐໐kฯຟiຖ໓.❖❅🎃 on Jan 1, 2017 21:09:22 GMT -5
Your characters look good Amber! ^w^ You may rp!
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Post by Viper on Jan 2, 2017 1:32:19 GMT -5
♂ - - { Viperstrike } -- { Warrior } - -
Viperstrike is a very sleek black cat with a very protracted tail.Viperstrike tail tip is a creamy white.He has bigger-sized ears than most cats.Viperstrike is a very distant but can be really sweet and funny but he won't show that to just anyone.He can be really cold and hostile but he eventually chills out.He hates to lose in any type of fight or competition because he is very competitive.He is very cunning when it comes to fighting but isn't much well a great hunter when it comes to patience.Viperstrike had two other siblings but was only raised by their father, he taught them how to fight and hunt but after losing his mate he went crazy.He tried to murder Viperstrike and his 2 siblings with vipers because they reminded him of his mate and they had all got separated,Viperstrike came to terms that they were killed by them and his father has disappeared into the darkness forever.Viperstrike had stumbled upon Aetherclan and decided that this will be his new home for now on.
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Post by rose on Jan 2, 2017 3:15:42 GMT -5
Viper I'm not one of the people who checks forms, however yours had me confused. Was Viperstrike born in a different Clan? Seeing as though you said that he 'stumbled upon Aetherclan and decided that this will be his new home for now on,' but throughout your form, I see no mention of the fact that he wasn't born an AetherClan cat.
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Post by 🎃❅❖.Şp໐໐kฯຟiຖ໓.❖❅🎃 on Jan 2, 2017 3:45:19 GMT -5
I'll wait until you answer Rose before I accept! ^-^
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Post by Viper on Jan 2, 2017 4:11:41 GMT -5
No he was a loner and decided it was best to stay with Aetherclan when he stumbled on their territory
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Post by 🎃❅❖.Şp໐໐kฯຟiຖ໓.❖❅🎃 on Jan 2, 2017 4:22:53 GMT -5
Alright! :3 He looks good then Just a question though, would you be interested in having his father appear again at some point? I feel like it could be interesting action in the clan if you've considered it.
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Post by Viper on Jan 2, 2017 4:44:36 GMT -5
Yea i wanted his father to be dark forest later on and try and persuade him to join but he refuses then him and his father have a fight to the death.
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Post by 🎃❅❖.Şp໐໐kฯຟiຖ໓.❖❅🎃 on Jan 2, 2017 4:46:16 GMT -5
Sounds interesting enough ^-^
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Post by Viper on Jan 2, 2017 4:47:15 GMT -5
sounds very interesting
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Post by ♡ Bun ♡ on Jan 2, 2017 6:30:57 GMT -5
♀ - - { Violetdawn } -- { Medicine cat } - -
Violetdawn is a dark grey she-cat with a white stomach and paws, she is a bit on the smaller side and has a slender form. She has long, silky fur that shines in the sun and a feather like tail, giving her a signature soft, beautiful appearance, which matches her sky-blue eyes. She is one of those cats whose appearance seems to reflect exactly who they really are. With her gentle attitude and calm temperament, she also has a hint of sarcasm. She is a terrible fighter, simply because of her hatred towards hurting others. She can’t stop putting herself in the paws of her enemy, and that hinders her ability greatly, not to mention her size alone puts her at a disadvantage, if it ever came to a fight with the enemy. She is also very patient, and has the patience to toleraate any grumpy old elder. She loves kits, but it brings her sadness that she can't have her own.
- - { Roleplayed by @ ~Spiriteddecay~} - -
♀ - - { Lavenderbreeze } -- { Warrior } - -
Lavendebreeze is a black she cat, spotted with white, her muzzle is black from the bridge of her nose to her forehead. It is also white with little black spots, and a streak of white starts just were her muzzle ends, she has a lions like main which is white with two black spots, her legs are black with two white spots and her long sleek fur is black with patches of white. She has a deep midnight blue eyes which turn to a frosty blue towards her pupil. She is very obedient and spends most of her time alone, she just came to the clan and is lonely, she is insecure but grateful to have a wonderful clan, and will work hard to prove her worth here, Sister to Whiteraven.
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♂ - - { Whiteraven } -- { warrior } - -
Whiteraven is as black as a raven speckled with white spots, he has a very rare skin condition called Vitiligo. At birth he was jet black but as he started to grow older his fur started to turn white, which is how he got his name. He is quite stocky with a very large build and short silky fur, his eyes are blue also speckled with green making them have a blue green hue to them. Whiteraven can seem intimidating at first but behind his large build he is very soft spoken and sweet, always thinking about others before himself. He believe very strongly in showing love and compassion, even if there just one of his friends.
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♀ - - { Midori } -- { Loner } - - Midori is a grey point siamese with the same white fur as her sister, but she has grey focal points on her face, legs, and tail. Her grey focal points also have a pale ginger towards the edges giving her a dusty grey look. She has very pale blue but bright eyes, she has short sleek fur and is quite small but is very lethal. Midori is a more blood thirsty than her sister, she is very blunt and always gets straight to the point. Deep down Midori knows that she is pure evil, but doesn't let anyone know that. Midori is very mysterious and kinda flirty, although she uses her beauty and charm for the wrong reasons.
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♀ - - { Morningrose } -- { Warrior } - -
Morningrose is formally known as a Turkisk Angora, she has a very pale grey almost lilac coat, her fur is medium-long which is longer on her ruff, tail, and thighs. She has high cheek bones with wide, tall and pointed ears; and long ear tufts. Her body is long, sleek and slender; She has long lean legs, her back legs are longer than the front. Her tail is straight, narrow, and well feathered. Morningrose has deep midnight blue eyes, Morningrose is quite but not mute, she is a bit timid, she gets very uncomfortable and shy when it comes to her feelings which she doesn't like to talk about them much.
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♂ - - { Goldenflare } -- { Warrior } - -
Goldenflare despite his name, this tom is pitch black; except for his golden amber eyes. Goldenflare is equipped with short, soft, sleek fur and long toned legs. Along with his jet black fur, his fur also consists of a small patch of only a few white hairs. He has a long lean body, which leaves this tom with a graceful step and great balance. He has wide, short ears and his front legs are actually a little it shorter then his back legs. Goldenflare is very sweet and kindhearted, hes very outgoing and friendly. Goldeneye can also be moody at time. From time to time mostly in the morning, Goldenflare is super grumpy and not a morning person.
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♀ - - { Appleblossom } -- { Warrior } - -
Appleblossom is a dark, russet she-cat. Not quite red, no, instead it's a ruddy redish-dark brown. Rust colored, really. Large paws and a floofy mane are her calling cards. Her face, while angular, has long cheek fur that makes it appear softer unless damp. Pointy ears with tufts of fur atop them and blue eyes are always listening and watching. While visually intimidating, her mothering personality shines a light on her kind temperment and sweet words. She finds herself lonely at times, and wonders, if ever briefly, if she'll find someone to share it with.
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♂ - - { Bluefang } -- { Warrior } - -
Bluefang is a blueish grey and white tabby, althought on his sides and back they turns into a marbled pattern and the color also fades down towards his stomach leaving him with a white chest and underbelly. He has a distinct blue-grey M on his forehead. he is very soft spoken and sweet, always thinking about others before himself. He believe very strongly in showing love and compassion, even if there just one of his friends or the enemy. He is very sarcastic and loves to have a good time, he also carries a very chill vibe.
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♂ - - { Auroramist } -- { warrior } - -
Auroramist is a pale silvery grey tom, with white speckles covering his back; along with white toes is the one built for strength but he does have speed with the help from his long legs and tail, his is very graceful in both physical and body size. His body consists of medium-short, soft, sleek fur. Under his coat lay lean and well muscled limb, he has a more defined pointed face with huge round sky-blue eyes and a feather like tail, his chest fur curve at the tips making them stick out. Auroramist has an adventurous and rebellious spirit, he takes life to the fullest and doesn't take lightly to following rules. Although he is a bright and risk taker he doesn't believe in violence but once to spread compassion. Although he is bright and cheery if anyone was to betray him that could lead him downhill very fast, once this happens he tends to start not believing in himself and beats himself up.
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♀ - - { Sunnydawn } -- { Warrior } - -
Sunnydawn is a pale ginger tabby she cat with slightly darker stripes. Her large eyes are a clear Bright amber, and seem to reflect the sunlight. She is of an average size body considering she is a maine coon, but has a lithle build which is long and lean. Her muzzle is very define with high cheek bones, and she has large rounded ears with lynx like tips and a huge lions like maine; which makes it look like she is always puffing out her chest. She has large fluffy paw pads and a well feathered tail; along with her well feather tail she has long, tamed silky fur. Sunnydawn was ignored by her father when she was a young kit which made her crave the attention of any male she sets eyes on. She flirts more often than most cats, She is aware of the rules, but prefers to do what she feels likes. Due to her father emotional abandonment she doesn't really know right or wrong when it comes to love and when she wants something she makes she we always gets it, She has a nack for hurting others emotionally for fun; She has a wild, and rebellious spirit.
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♀ - - { Peachblossom } -- { Warrior } - -
Peachblossom is equipped by light golden cream fur and dark golden tabby marks, although her tabby markes are more golden ginger and more prominent on her face, ear tips, and tail tip. They are much fainter on her legs and body, and medium length fur with a sleek feather like tail. Under her thick fur are lean, long limbs with well muscled legs. She has clear crystal blue eyes and pointed cheek fur. She has a posture of elegance and sweetness, which isn't too far from her personality. blossom is graceful with a elegant sleek body which is of average size. She has small paws which make her swift of her feet and a sassy look to her face. Peachblossom is elegant in posture and personality, she also has a different kind of sweetness almost a shy-sweet but she is still confident as very and loves a challenge, she is very teasing and sassy. You could say she is flirt in a way, Peachblossom is very mysterious and enchanting in that way. She has an effect of wanting to no more, not letting anyone in too close.
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Apprentices
♂ - - { Ravenpaw } -- { Apprentice } - -
Ravenpaw is a ashy grey tom with a black face speckled with grey, he also has black tabby stripes fading into his grey pelt. He has large ears just like his sister, which are also lynx like, ear tips. His chest and underbelly are mostly a silvery grey, along with the lion's like maine around his chest and neck. He has an unusual large build and paws, with a feather like tail. He has dark golden amber eyes, Ravenpaw is the more polite one, he is very sweet and well mannered. He is also very caring and believes that violence isnt the answer, he will only resort to is as a last resort. His mother was killed by a mountain lion.
- - { Roleplayed by @ ~Spiriteddecay~}
♂ -- { Plumpaw } -- { Apprentice } --
Known as a Maine coon, this she-cat is nowhere near her full size and she is still growing. She has jet back fur with brown undertones. Showing most in her chest, under her large Maine, tail, and underbelly. She has a sleek feather like tail and long toned legs. Her paws aren't large but larger than most, ad well tufted along with her lynx-like ear tips. Plumpaw has a soft toned face with pointed cheek tufts and medium length fur. She has a long lean body which gives her a slinky elegance, she has clear dark blue eyes which have an icy pale blue ring around the pupil. Plumpaw can be quite timid at times, but most of the time has a strong will power and mind. She doesn't let anything touch her, emotional size. She has a strong opinion and belief's.
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♀ - - { Dandelionpaw } -- { Apprentice } - -
Dandelionpaw is a dark brown tabby Maine coon with pale brown stripes, she also has white toes, on both front and back, underbelly, chest and the bottom of her jaw. She has large lynx like ear tips that have black tips, she has a feather like tail and medium sized paws. She has light green eyes that fade into a olive green closer to the pupil. Dandelionpaw is very spunky, she is always cheerful and brave, and always has something to say. She can be rude sometimes but doesn't intend to, she speak without a filter. Dandelionpaw and Ravenpaw's mother was killed by a mountain lion in the battle.
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♀ -- { Ebonypaw } -- { Apprentice } --
Ebonypaw is a dark grey she cat mottled with a silverish grey, she only has tabby marking on her tail face and neck. Her neck, paws and muzzle are all a silverish grey and her tabby stripes are a dark grey almost black. She has short sleek fur, with golden yellow eyes. She has a average size build and a square face, with short pointy ears; which are a soild dark grey. Ebonypaw is energetic and sarcastic, she is friendly and outgoing. She is very open and if she wants something she wont be coy and ask for it. She is sort of blunt and gets straight to the point, unlike her brother Nightpaw.
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Post by xxgrayfeatherxx on Jan 2, 2017 6:33:53 GMT -5
EDITED ♀ - - { Rosethorn } -- { Warrior } Rosethorn is a very small, fluffy calico she cat with bright yellow eyes. She is quite sassy if anyone irritates her. She is very short tempered and will snap at anyone who does anything wrong. (She is basically a younger version of yellowfang.) When she finished her training she fell in love with a cat called Stagleap. he didn't return her affection, leaving her quite clingy. When he died in a fox attack, she didn't mourn with the rest of the clan, claiming he ``Got what he deserved.`` This shocked the clan and ruined her reputation of being a mostly kind cat. Although she still has friends, she isn't liked by many of her clanmates (24 moons old). [ - - { Roleplayed by xxgrayfeatherxx} - - [Ps: Ignore the weird layout, I have no idea what happened. Also I am very new to this site but I have roleplaying experience from other sites. Roleplay example: ``It'll be alright Finchpaw.`` Meowed a dark brown she cat. Her forest-green eyes widened with sorrow. She brushed her flank against the smaller cats body, ``I know you did everything you could do to save him.``The reek of blood still filled the air and Dapplegorse lay in a hole, motionless. The two cats covered the hole and padded away, the smaller one's head held low.
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Post by ♡ Bun ♡ on Jan 2, 2017 6:39:18 GMT -5
Hai i'm not the owner, but just to give you some tips... we generally like to have atleast 4-5 sentences, like using the ive senses when making a reply post.. My response are usually a lot longer lol and take up to almost half an hour to an hour sometimes lol
Also I'm the other medicine cat so if you need help remembering just ask for help, although there isn't much action at the moment. ]
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Post by xxgrayfeatherxx on Jan 2, 2017 6:45:47 GMT -5
Okay thanks. I'll make sure to ask if I need help. Just one question, I clicked reply to post my characters and stuff Is that how you're supposed to do it or is there some other way?
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Post by ashrain on Jan 2, 2017 10:33:50 GMT -5
♀ - - { Larkflight } -- { warrior } - -
Larkflight is a pretty white cat and is slightly taller than your average cat whilst not being ridiculous. She has a graceful almost floating walk whch makes clanmates who dont know her think she is aloof. Larkflght in reality is the opposite with a wicked sense of humour and has a tendancy to be sarcastic and make what she is saying sound far more complicated than it actually is. She is very proud though and whilst she teases everyone she hates being teased by anyone including her close friends and family. Her trust is hard to gain but once gained you will have a steadfast ally who will always be by your side regardlless of what troubles you may be in. Her graceful walk comes in handy in battle as it lends a fluidity to her movements which allows her to defeat all but the trickiest of opponents and she is also a talented hunter and her favourite thing to catch is rabbits as she loves to chase them
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Post by ♡ Bun ♡ on Jan 2, 2017 18:11:58 GMT -5
There really isn't a certain way to post a reply... I usually just use the white box at the bottom of the screen... the reply button is more for like quotes and coding things, it actually doesn't really matter I use both, the white text box is sometimes too small for me so I use the reply button to make it bigger.... it actually really hard to explain... whatever you like to use is up to you.
you can literally just scroll down on a page and just start typing in the white box. ]
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Salt
Asexual/Aromantic||Rainbow Thread||#AetherSquad||#SodiumProtectors||#CAHSquad||Bracken/Salt please!
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Post by Salt on Jan 2, 2017 19:56:40 GMT -5
Tags;; 🎃❅❖.Şp໐໐kฯຟiຖ໓.❖❅🎃♂ - - { Scareye } -- { Warrior } - - Scareye is a handsome, dark, long-furred tom. His coat is mainly grey and has some black spots on it. He a has white tuxedo and face. Scareye's has pretty amber eyes. Now he has one eye and a scar covers his right one. Multiple other scars line the grey toms coat, several on either flank or his face. He has a limp in one back leg where a scar from a bobcat battle is. Finally, Scareye's has large, round ears with lots of fur in them. Scareyes is a lazy, tough, and knowledgeable tom. He knows where the most prey is and where to find the most herbs. He hopes to one day be Scarstar. Formerly Acaciatooth. - - { Roleplayed by Salt } - - ♂ - - { Hornetpaw } -- { StarClan } - - Hornetpaw is a large gold tom. His tail is like his mothers, his coat, spotted. He has small, darker ears, paler paws and belly as well as two green eyes. Hornetpaw is loud and often enough gets in trouble. He is loving and absolutely loves to eat. He loves his kin and wants to have kits one day, but feels like not. Hornetpaw was killed by greencough, leaving Silentpaw to struggle alone.He is wise and watches over his sister, making sure she lives a healthy lifestyle. Jaguarear favors him because he is a mini her. He is protective of Silentkit, defensive, and smart, yet hot-headed. - - { Roleplayed by Salt } - - ♀ - - { Silentpaw } -- { Apprentice } - - Silentpaw is mostly fur. She's little muscle and extremely bony. Her fur is grey tabby, which is wispy and soft. Her tail is long and fluffy. She has large, pointed ears with wispy tips. She has black classical tabby markings and lynx points. Her tailtip is a creamy colour flecked with black. She has large, alert blue eyes. She can't speak. Silentpaw is grouchy, determined, and depressed. She often lies awake, haunted by nightmares ever since Hornetpaw died. She is alone most of the time and knows she will never be Warrior. Silentpaw has a fear of eagles since she was almost carried off by one as a kit. - - { Roleplayed by Salt } - - ♀ - - { Jaguarear } -- { Warrior } - - Jaguarear is a small, well-muscled, sleek tannish-gold she-cat. Her coat has spots of many colours, such as brown, black, and grey. Her tail is short and her ears are rounded. Jaguarear is overprotective of her four kits, loyal, and aggressive. When she wants to be, she'll be nice, otherwise she isn't. Since her mate and Hornetpaw's death, she's become closed off and sad. She often sits alone in her nest, longing to join StarClan. She hangs out with Silentpaw in her downtime, since they both share the same grief and depression. Jaguarear wants to have more kits one day with a new mate. - - { Roleplayed by Salt } - - ♂ - - { Burrclaw } -- { Warrior } - - Burrclaw is a muscled, yet small dark grey tom. Black spots dot his coat, white front paws and muzzle standing out against the dark, dull pelt of him. He has two large, unblinking yellow eyes, he's blind in his right one. Burrclaw has a small scar covering his nose, almost ripping it off. He has a slight limp in his back paw from falling down the mountain a bit as an apprentice. Burrclaw's fur is long and gets tangled, but he keeps it groomed. Burrclaw is clingy, boastful, and flirtatious. He is often found talking to she-cats or taking them on walks. If you make a wrong choice around him, Burrclaw will grow envious and angry, wanting to rip the cats head off. He loves to fight and hunt, however is better at talking than any other Warrior skill. - - { Roleplayed by Salt } - - - - { Splintertail } -- { Warrior } - - Splintertail may seem like your normal, run-of-the-mill cat to any cat but she isn't. 'She' technically isn't really a 'she'. They're non-binary. Splintertail has light tan fur with darker streaks and solid russet tail. Splintertail's eyes are a bright green. It's fur is sleek and it has a nimbly build and long legs. Splintertail is shy, quiet, but cheerful. It's glad it's who it is. No cats know except Silverstar, Blackriver, and Birchfoot. Splintertail loves to hunt and is a bit afraid to fight. Little do they know, they're a pretty good fighter. They were born to transphobic parents who disowned them at the age of 15 moons outside AetherClan. - - { Roleplayed by Salt } - - ♂ - - { Kestrel } -- { Loner } - - Kestrel, being a Himalayan tom, has long, thick, fluffy cream fur with darker paws, tail, and face. His muzzle is stout, he is lanky, and he is missing fur on his muzzle. Kestrel has sleek fur and legs that look like twigs with fur. Kestrel is bubbly and spirited, however very uncautious. He doesn't realise that he's scaring away prey, alerting badgers, foxes, or other dangers when he's obnoxious. He also doesn't realise he's obnoxious. Kestrel has never been in a relationship due to being gay. Kestrel was born to Hercules and Feather, two kittypets, both purebred Himalayan cats. When he wasn't deemed "purebred", his twolegs threw him out. He met Yew and Salt while traveling around searching for a group. - - { Roleplayed by Salt } - - ♀ - - { Auroratail } -- { Warrior } - - Auroratail is a pretty calico. With mainly ginger and black on her pallet of fur, she stands out. Her build is sturdy and muscled, but mainly in her chest area. Auroratail has a long, stiff tail, and two white forepaws. With bright fur and copper eyes, she is horrible at hiding her emotions. Her muzzle is slightly grey. Auroratail is gentle, very strict, and brave. She hates seeing cats in agony and wishes she could've saved her adopted daughter, Dottedkit. Auroratail is haunted by a shadowy past, an abusive mother, father that didn't care, she only had Beetlewhisp. Auroratail is pretty lonely. She'd love to train or two more apprentices before retiring and raise one last litter of kits. Auroratail is a good hunter, great guard, and normal fighter. She is a but depressed because of Dottedkit's death. Sister is Beetlewhisp. - - { Roleplayed by Salt } - - ♂ - - { Beechpaw } -- { Apprentice } - - Beechpaw is a long-legged tan tom with darker streaks and white legs. With a long tail, folded ears, and stiff muscles, he seems like an easy target. Beechpaw has one whisker that is fatter than all the others and one shredded eartip. A gash runs from his left cheek to his stomach, from a rogue encounter as a kitten. He has two amber eyes He is boastful, a jokester, and flirty. He is quiet and quick on his paws and a far leaper. He is weak and indeed an easy target. He can't rear up and he walks funny. Beechpaw is open to a relationship but doesn't want one. He'd prefer to stay alone his whole life. - - { Roleplayed by Salt } - - ♀ - - { Beetlewhisp } -- { Warrior } - - Beetlewhisp has long calico fur with darker patches. Much white limes her flanks and paws, her face is solid black with a spot of ginger on one shoulder. She has green eyes and fluffyish fur and whiskers. Stiff legs and tail, she has vivid eyes like Auroratail. Beetlewhisp has always been close to her sister. She is boisterous, noisy, obnoxious, and in everybody's fur. She seems the complete opposite of her sister. She is open and admits feelings to cats and trees. She is a bit creepy. Sister is Auroratail. - - { Roleplayed by Salt } - - ♂ - - { Crackedpads } -- { Elder } - - Crackedpads is a large grey elder with black shoulders and face. His muscles are somewhat stiff- he can still lift weight though. Crackedpads has cracked-pads that are pink. Crackedpads get impatient easily and is very demanding. - - { Roleplayed by Salt } - -
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there will always be those who dare to brave the lightning's glow.
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Post by Ðᴏʟᴄᴇ on Jan 2, 2017 21:09:29 GMT -5
Welcome back Salt! @ Gray: Welcome to the forums! I'm a mod of this clan and here are a few suggestions I have for you: - First off, what Bumble said is true. We prefer to have more than just one-liners in roleplay, which is what your example is. That said, we are always willing to welcome anyone so long as they try their best and put effort into their replies, so length is not an important issue as long as replies are not always short. - Remove anything in parantheses in your forms. We do not need to know what your character might say in a given circumstance, that will happen in the rp. - Could you expand a bit on Rosethorn's history? Does Stagleap's rejection and her reaction mean that she is a bit clingy? You can incorporate her history into her personality a little, if that makes sense. Furthermore, how did her clanmates react to her cold reaction to his death? Did they think she was fox-hearted or accept it because of her shared history with him? - If you do not want the medicine cat role, you do not have to sign up for it. There is a link on the front page to a list of herbs, I believe. Also, if Ashcloud is the medicine cat, it doesn't make sense for him to refuse to take on an apprentice since there are already two medicine cat apprentices; you can instead replace that sentence with something about how he doesn't get along well with the medicine cat apprentices.
@ Ash: You may want to replace the word 'people' in Larkflight's form with 'clanmates' or 'cats' as that would be more appropriate. Otherwise, Larkflight looks fine to me and ready to be accepted.
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Post by ashrain on Jan 2, 2017 21:18:02 GMT -5
@ Ash: You may want to replace the word 'people' in Larkflight's form with 'clanmates' or 'cats' as that would be more appropriate. Otherwise, Larkflight looks fine to me and ready to be accepted.
so can I now actually role-play in AetherClan
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Post by ashrain on Jan 2, 2017 21:25:25 GMT -5
sorry that was a case of autocorrect and me not checking. I think I've fixed it now
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Post by ѕρσσкуѕку on Jan 3, 2017 14:27:29 GMT -5
♡ Bun ♡ Hey Bun, are you keeping the characters not listed or dropping them? Like Aspenpaw, Nightpaw/Ravenpaw (I don't remember which was in your list), etc.
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Post by rose on Jan 3, 2017 23:13:41 GMT -5
♂ - - { Brackenpaw } -- { Apprentice } - - Brackenpaw is a lean tom, with a light ginger tabby's pelt. His tail is quite long, longer than a cat's generally is, and his eyes are a brilliant green, Brackenpaw is a very innocent cat, making it easy for cats to manipulate him. He has never been the best apprentice, and he doesn't know if he'll make that great of a warrior either. But, that's just when it comes to hunting. On the battle field he is excellently skilled, showing great potential. However, he prefers to stay in the moment, as thinking of the future and what it may hold is frightening to him. He is also very social, and he finds that he does his best when others are around him, Brackenpaw's mother was all he had left, after his father died before he was born. He had strikingly similar features to her, and he loved her very much. One night, he dreamed of a fox killing her. He didn't think much of it, after all, it was just a dream. But later on, a fox got to her. He was terrified, and told no one of what had happened in his mind. He was then fostered by a queen - Sparrowmoon - who had previously lost her kits. - - { Roleplayed by rose } - -
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Post by ѕρσσкуѕку on Jan 5, 2017 15:42:13 GMT -5
rose Are we assuming Sparrowmoon was the one who looked after him? Cause I'd be down for that.
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Post by rose on Jan 6, 2017 14:04:36 GMT -5
Sure! I actually had that in mind but totally forgot. Fish Rose returns.
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Post by xxgrayfeatherxx on Jan 8, 2017 7:37:20 GMT -5
Welcome back Salt! @ Gray: Welcome to the forums! I'm a mod of this clan and here are a few suggestions I have for you: - First off, what Bumble said is true. We prefer to have more than just one-liners in roleplay, which is what your example is. That said, we are always willing to welcome anyone so long as they try their best and put effort into their replies, so length is not an important issue as long as replies are not always short. - Remove anything in parantheses in your forms. We do not need to know what your character might say in a given circumstance, that will happen in the rp. - Could you expand a bit on Rosethorn's history? Does Stagleap's rejection and her reaction mean that she is a bit clingy? You can incorporate her history into her personality a little, if that makes sense. Furthermore, how did her clanmates react to her cold reaction to his death? Did they think she was fox-hearted or accept it because of her shared history with him? - If you do not want the medicine cat role, you do not have to sign up for it. There is a link on the front page to a list of herbs, I believe. Also, if Ashcloud is the medicine cat, it doesn't make sense for him to refuse to take on an apprentice since there are already two medicine cat apprentices; you can instead replace that sentence with something about how he doesn't get along well with the medicine cat apprentices.
@ Ash: You may want to replace the word 'people' in Larkflight's form with 'clanmates' or 'cats' as that would be more appropriate. Otherwise, Larkflight looks fine to me and ready to be accepted.
Okay thank you for the tips. I have edited my post and got rid of the parantheses part. I hope it's good enough Also, I didn't know there were medicine cat apprentices so that explains why It didn't make sense. ~Gray~
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