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Post by ѕρσσкуѕку on Sept 8, 2016 18:14:55 GMT -5
♀ - - { Splintertail} -- { Warrior } - - Splintertail may seem like your normal, run-of-the-mill cat to any cat but she isn't. 'She' technically isn't really a 'she'. They're non-binary. Splintertail has light tan fur with darker streaks and solid russet tail. Splintertail's eyes are a bright green. It's fur is sleek and it has a nimbly build and long legs. Splintertail is shy, quiet, but cheerful. It's glad it's who it is. No cats know except Silverstar, Blackriver, and Birchfoot. Splintertail loves to hunt and is a bit afraid to fight. Little do they know, they're a pretty good fighter. - - { Roleplayed by Salt} - - ♂ - - { Kestrel} -- { Loner } - - Kestrel, being a Himalayan tom, has long, thick, fluffy cream fur with darker paws, tail, and face. His muzzle is stout, he is lanky, and he is missing fur on his muzzle. Kestrel has sleek fur and legs that look like twigs with fur. Kestrel is bubbly and spirited, however very uncautious. He doesn't realise that he's scaring away prey, alerting badgers, foxes, or other dangers when he's obnoxious. He also doesn't realise he's obnoxious. Kestrel has never been in a relationship due to being gay. Kestrel was born to Hercules and Feather, two kittypets, both purebred Himalayan cats. When he wasn't deemed " purebred", his twolegs threw him out. He met Yew and Salt while traveling around searching for a group. - - { Roleplayed by Salt } - - I'm sorry I probably shouldn't be commenting on all this since I'm not a mod, but I can't help it lol. In Splintertail's form it still says "it" instead of "they" at some points. So instead of "It's fur is sleek and it has a nimbly build and long legs" and "It's glad it's who it is" it should say something like "Their fur is sleek and they have a nimble build and long legs" and "They're glad they are who they are" Also I'm confused as to how Kestrel isn't a purebred if his parents both are?? |
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Post by 🎃❅❖.Şp໐໐kฯຟiຖ໓.❖❅🎃 on Sept 8, 2016 18:42:56 GMT -5
No that's fine Spotted! Infact I noticed that too but I wasn't sure if it was exactly correct? In my opinion it'd be entirely up to Bracken if they'd like Splinter to rather be called 'it' then 'they/their'
I also think Bracken meant that he wasn't like
deemed a good purebred cat
like he's purebred but he's not good enough? idk
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Post by 🎃❅❖.Şp໐໐kฯຟiຖ໓.❖❅🎃 on Sept 9, 2016 15:53:23 GMT -5
I said they look fine now since you explained the general stuffs to us. I do think that you should take out the gender symbol as well from Splinter as they are nonbinary  you already mentioned on their form that biologically they were female but they don't identify with that. |
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Post by 🎃❅❖.Şp໐໐kฯຟiຖ໓.❖❅🎃 on Sept 9, 2016 15:54:14 GMT -5
Oh I hope you checked with Rush as well. Forgot to mention that.
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Post by Salt on Sept 9, 2016 16:30:22 GMT -5
"I'm John Laurens in the place to be!" OOC~ 🎃❅❖.Şp໐໐kฯຟiຖ໓.❖❅🎃[ ✣ ] { Male Form } ♂ - - { Burrclaw} -- { Warrior } - - Burrclaw is a muscled, yet small dark grey tom. Black spots dot his coat, white front paws and muzzle standing out against the dark, dull pelt of him. He has two large, unblinking yellow eyes, he's blind in his right one. Burrclaw has a small scar covering his nose, almost ripping it off. He has a slight limp in his back paw from falling down the mountain a bit as an apprentice. Burrclaw's fur is long and gets tangled, but he keeps it groomed. Burrclaw is clingy, boastful, and flirtatious. He is often found talking to she-cats or taking them on walks. If you make a wrong choice around him, Burrclaw will grow envious and angry, wanting to rip the cats head off. He loves to fight and hunt, however is better at talking than any other Warrior skill. - - { Roleplayed by Salt} - - [ ✣ ] { Female Form } - - { Splintertail} -- { Warrior } - - Splintertail may seem like your normal, run-of-the-mill cat to any cat but she isn't. 'She' technically isn't really a 'she'. They're non-binary. Splintertail has light tan fur with darker streaks and solid russet tail. Splintertail's eyes are a bright green. It's fur is sleek and it has a nimbly build and long legs. Splintertail is shy, quiet, but cheerful. It's glad it's who it is. No cats know except Silverstar, Blackriver, and Birchfoot. Splintertail loves to hunt and is a bit afraid to fight. Little do they know, they're a pretty good fighter. - - { Roleplayed by Salt} - - [ ✣ ] { Male Form } ♂ - - { Kestrel} -- { Loner } - - Kestrel, being a Himalayan tom, has long, thick, fluffy cream fur with darker paws, tail, and face. His muzzle is stout, he is lanky, and he is missing fur on his muzzle. Kestrel has sleek fur and legs that look like twigs with fur. Kestrel is bubbly and spirited, however very uncautious. He doesn't realise that he's scaring away prey, alerting badgers, foxes, or other dangers when he's obnoxious. He also doesn't realise he's obnoxious. Kestrel has never been in a relationship due to being gay. Kestrel was born to Hercules and Feather, two kittypets, both purebred Himalayan cats. When he wasn't deemed "purebred", his twolegs threw him out. He met Yew and Salt while traveling around searching for a group. - - { Roleplayed by Salt } - - Roleplay- "Lafayette!" ~Hamilton |
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Post by 🎃❅❖.Şp໐໐kฯຟiຖ໓.❖❅🎃 on Sept 9, 2016 16:44:42 GMT -5
Alright. yay for Blackriver having friends.
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Post by ѕρσσкуѕку on Sept 9, 2016 23:15:56 GMT -5
♀ - - { Jadepaw } -- { Apprentice } - - Jadepaw is a fiery-spirited and stubborn young she-cat with a beautiful dappled marble Bengal pelt. However, instead of the typical brown undercoat and black dapples, her colors are reversed. Her pelt is mainly raven black save for the cocoa brown color that marbles across her shiny fur. Her eyes are a bright emerald green and her nose is a dark, almost magenta-like pink. Words to describe this she-cat at first glance would be alluring, fearless, sassy, flirtatious, defiant, and cunning. If you get to know her, you'll see that she's also verbally powerful, moral, kind, loving, selfless, righteous, charitable, protective, and unswerving. Not much of her history is known, and she's actually quite a mystery to most cats. What is known is that she lived with a group of ex-kittypet Bengal cats for a while before leaving them because they couldn't support their group and were going hungry. However, this is known to very few cats. For the most part she likes to keep her past a secret. One thing she has never told anyone is that the group she was with had been trained by twolegs as performers. It's not that she's ashamed of this part of her past, but she is very protective and secretive about her old "family" and doesn't want to give away where they can be found or what they are capable of. Having been taken in by AetherClan just as she neared apprentice age, she considers it her true home and loves her life there. She is a skilled and smart fighter and has no trouble completing the menial tasks of Clan life such as cleaning out bedding and tending to the elders, but hunting is not exactly her area of expertise. She tries her best, however, and always strives to provide for her Clan. - - { Roleplayed by sρσттε∂sкү } - -
I hope her flaws are clear. It's basically that she's not a great hunter and she's a little overly stubborn/defiant.
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Post by 🎃❅❖.Şp໐໐kฯຟiຖ໓.❖❅🎃 on Sept 9, 2016 23:37:08 GMT -5
I think she looks rather nice, although I do think it might be a bit unrealistic to teach cats younger than 6 moons tricks? I mean, the tricks thing being taught to cats is already unrealistic but haha. I just thought to mention this since it's stated she was in that sort of thing when she was younger than that age.
I'm glad you cleared up her flaws a bit, as she's got quite the lot of good characteristics going for her and i wasn't exactly sure how well it balanced out
Then again, being fearless itself is already a big flaw
she could just be like "let's go fight a fox!!" and then die xD
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Post by ѕρσσкуѕку on Sept 10, 2016 1:19:25 GMT -5
Lol I can honestly see that happening  yeah I wasn't really thinking that she was necessarily taught tricks, but that the other cats were. Kind of like "circus cats" in a way. I was trying to tie in the Romani theme and stereotypes of the late 1400s. |
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Post by 🎃❅❖.Şp໐໐kฯຟiຖ໓.❖❅🎃 on Sept 10, 2016 1:48:05 GMT -5
Yeah I get that I just thought to mention. Although she's pretty good and clear with me? So ^^ |
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Post by Joker on Sept 10, 2016 22:20:56 GMT -5
Hey Fireh, I know that it says the page is closed, but you're the first person I recognized on here so far. I was on the old rp for a while, but it slowed down a lot, and I thought everyone left. I just wanted to say hi and hope that I can join in the near future c: (Old username: ~Jokerpaw~)
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Post by 🎃❅❖.Şp໐໐kฯຟiຖ໓.❖❅🎃 on Sept 10, 2016 23:40:34 GMT -5
OH WOW HEY OLD BUDDY WHAT UP
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Post by Deleted on Sept 11, 2016 0:15:05 GMT -5
♀ - - { Saorise } -- { Loner } - -
Every cat has a different build, and Saorise's is graceful and lithe. The she-cat does hate this though, as she believes that it makes her weak. Her pelt is a pure snow white, with patches of an ebony black colour. Her orbs are of a light blue shade, and they are often clouded with disgust. Saorise is an extremely dry and sarcastic cat. She does not care about your precious little feelings, and will not stop just because a cat is sensitive. In fact, she will just be more blunt and cynical if this is the case. Saorise lives a solitary life, no companions, no mate, no children. She claims that this is just because every other cat is incredibly idiotic and she would rather die than be in the company of others, but there is more than this. You see, Saorise is broken. She wasn't born this way, but life has turned her into the cat she is. She has been betrayed multiple times, and has just decided not to care anymore. She finally found a cat that she thought would fix her, and she was happy, but then she found him nuzzling and flirting with a pretty young pregnant she-cat. Disgusted, she swore never to care for another cat again, and she hasn't. She just lives her easy life. But don't expect her to suddenly like you or show you her sensitive and depressed side, because she will always hide under her facade of blunt sarcasm, while feeling completely angry and sad inside.
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♂ - - { Shiningclaw } -- { Warrior } - -
Shiningclaw is your basic model warrior. He is rather handsome, with a golden pelt and dark hazel orbs. His build is muscular and large, and he is slightly taller than the average tom. He is brave and strong, always trying to fight in battles. He is very kind to she-cats, who he is rather fond of saving. You may be thinking that he is perfect, when in reality he definitely isn't. Not only is he incredibly stupid, he's also vain, selfish and shallow. The she-cats he dates, he doesn't care about how they feel and he doesn't even really want to be in a serious committed relationship, he just likes to look good. He doesn't really care about any cats feelings, as a matter of fact. As long as he heroically carries them from the fox and looks good, he doesn't really care. It would take a lot to get him to snap out of his crazy dream, and become a respectable, good cat, and whoever does would have to be either be absolutely amazing and talented or magic. Despite him seeming perfect, he definitely isn't the type of tom you want to get involved with, as you'll be amazed at how shallow and thick-headed he is.
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♂ - - { Hollowheart } -- { Warrior } - -
This tom used to be handsome and young, although that has faded away. He is a dark brown tabby tom with amber orbs which have sadly lost their spark. Hollowheart, ironically, feels hollow inside. He used to be admired, swooned over, and in the spotlight. However, he is now forgotten and depressed. He is trying to get back into the spotlight, but his efforts are fruitless. Since none of his family is still around, and he hasn't fathered any kits yet, he is alone. He tries to fill the hole in his heart with love, going from she-cat to she-cat, but not one has managed to make him feel whole again. Hollowheart has done a lot of bad things, both in the past and in the present, and chances are that he won't change in the future. He yearns for affection and the adoring gazes of the other cats in AetherClan. It is almost an addiction to him, and if he doesn't get it he will go back into his same old loop of being depressed and anxious. He constantly wants self validation, and he just wants to know that he's still loved. He dislikes young cats, as feels that he is a bad role model for them.
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Post by Deleted on Sept 11, 2016 1:33:28 GMT -5
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Post by ѕρσσкуѕку on Sept 11, 2016 2:30:18 GMT -5
LYNX I HAVE ROMANCE IDEAS ALREADY I MEAN LIKE I DON'T WANNA STEAL ALL YOUR TOMS BUT THEY'RE PERF UGH
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Post by ѕρσσкуѕку on Sept 11, 2016 2:35:16 GMT -5
should I tell you them
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Post by ѕρσσкуѕку on Sept 11, 2016 3:41:33 GMT -5
I'm going to add a bit to my Sparrowmoon form bc I never did that when we decided Willowkit was hers ♀ - - { Sparrowmoon } -- { Warrior } - - Sparrowmoon is a slender light brown tabby she-cat with reddish undertones. Her fur is snowy white on her paws and halfway up the outside her legs but the color goes all the way up on the inside and connects with her soft white belly and chest. Her tail-tip is also white, and she has a small white spot just above her small, pink nose. Her eyes are a soft, clear amber. She is gentle and loving, extremely compassionate and generous. Her main flaw is that she's frightened of any animal other than a cat, except for prey of course. She is a nervous and shy cat, but once you get to know her she is extremely kind. She is very intuitive, meaning she understands most cats better than others. She is also very protective and defensive, and if someone makes a comment that she takes as an insult, she snaps back and her temper flares up. When this happens, her normally sleek pelt gets all fluffy, and were she not strangely intimidating for her slim stature, most cats would probably be inclined to laugh at the sight. She had a mate and a litter of kits not long ago, but sadly two kits were stillborn and another one died soon after as she had been sick when they were born. Her only surviving kit is Willowkit. Her mate died in the battle with the mountain lions, and she found herself compeltely alone. Having no real reason to return to the warriors' nests, she remained in the nursery and takes care of the kits that have lost their mothers. - - { Roleplayed by sρσттε∂sкү } - -
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Post by ѕρσσкуѕку on Sept 11, 2016 4:20:27 GMT -5
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Post by ѕρσσкуѕку on Sept 11, 2016 4:55:18 GMT -5
I KNOW I HAVE WAY TOO MANY CHARACTERS BUT THIS ONE WAS BEGGING ME TO MAKE HER AND I COULDN'T RESIST also wip cause I can't pick a name rip me any help/advice/ideas would be greatly appreciated EDIT: BrightLarkSwallowThrushSedgeTanglepaw became BrightLarkSwallowThrushSedgeTangleHummingpaw when Lynx suggested the name Hummingpaw bc this little kitty's like a tiny hummingbird. I picked that one. ♀ - - { Hummingpaw } -- { Apprentice } - -
Hummingpaw is a small-statured calico she-cat with unusual coloring. Instead of having the expected orange and black patches dappling her mainly white pelt, her spots are blue-gray and a soft, milk chocolaty brown. Her large, expressive eyes are a startling clear bright blue. She has little paws and a thin tail, along with her naturally small body. One word to describe this she-cat would be naive. She's probably the most innocent cat you'll ever meet, seeing the good in everyone and everything without hesitation. This may seem like a good thing, but it can get her into some really bad trouble. She would trust anyone, even if she didn't know them, and isn't afraid of dangerous animals such as foxes or mountain lions. She is kind and cheerful and always wants to put a smile on other cats' faces. Despite her innocent nature, she is surprisingly motherly and protective, and would make an amazing parent one day (that is, if she survives her apprenticeship with how naive and trusting she is). Another thing about this little one is that she's incredibly clumsy, which of course makes warrior training as difficult as it possibly can be. She tries not to let it get her down, but she can't deny that sometimes it frustrates her. In fact, she can't deny anything that she knows to be true, as this she-cat is also honest to a fault. She'll never tell a lie and will always recite the whole truth when asked a question. She doesn't quite understand tact, either, so this has caused her to accidentally hurt others' feelings in the past. While she may seem like a bit of a trainwreck, this young cat always strives to serve her Clan and be the best warrior she can be.
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Post by Deleted on Sept 11, 2016 5:22:48 GMT -5
LYNX I HAVE ROMANCE IDEAS ALREADY I MEAN LIKE I DON'T WANNA STEAL ALL YOUR TOMS BUT THEY'RE PERF UGH PLEASE STEAL THEM ALL I LOVE ROLEPLAYING WITH YOU
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Post by Deleted on Sept 11, 2016 5:23:44 GMT -5
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Post by Deleted on Sept 11, 2016 5:26:03 GMT -5
sparrowmoon looks great spotted !! |
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Post by Deleted on Sept 11, 2016 5:28:02 GMT -5
I KNOW I HAVE WAY TOO MANY CHARACTERS BUT THIS ONE WAS BEGGING ME TO MAKE HER AND I COULDN'T RESIST also wip cause I can't pick a name rip me any help/advice/ideas would be greatly appreciated ♀ - - { BrightLarkSwallowThrushSedgeTanglepaw } -- { Apprentice } - -
BrightLarkSwallowThrushSedgeTanglepaw is a small-statured calico she-cat with unusual coloring. Instead of having the expected orange and black patches dappling her mainly white pelt, her spots are blue-gray and a soft, milk chocolaty brown. Her large, expressive eyes are a startling clear bright blue. She has little paws and a thin tail, along with her naturally small body. One word to describe this she-cat would be naive. She's probably the most innocent cat you'll ever meet, seeing the good in everyone and everything without hesitation. This may seem like a good thing, but it can get her into some really bad trouble. She would trust anyone, even if she didn't know them, and isn't afraid of dangerous animals such as foxes or mountain lions. She is kind and cheerful and always wants to put a smile on other cats' faces. Despite her innocent nature, she is surprisingly motherly and protective, and would make an amazing parent one day (that is, if she survives her apprenticeship with how naive and trusting she is). Another thing about this little one is that she's incredibly clumsy, which of course makes warrior training as difficult as it possibly can be. She tries not to let it get her down, but she can't deny that sometimes it frustrates her. In fact, she can't deny anything that she knows to be true, as this she-cat is also honest to a fault. She'll never tell a lie and will always recite the whole truth when asked a question. She doesn't quite understand tact, either, so this has caused her to accidentally hurt others' feelings in the past. While she may seem like a bit of a trainwreck, this young cat always strives to serve her Clan and be the best warrior she can be.
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Post by Joker on Sept 11, 2016 9:08:01 GMT -5
OH WOW HEY OLD BUDDY WHAT UP Not much friend, just found the revived forums and I feel really happy right now. c: |
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Post by 🎃❅❖.Şp໐໐kฯຟiຖ໓.❖❅🎃 on Sept 11, 2016 13:18:01 GMT -5
@winterlynx ; I know you PMed me Lynx and I was going to say yes, and still am that you can have more characters seeing as you kept glossing over the want to and such ^^ And they're done, ect. ѕρσσкуѕку ; Although Spotted i'd be grateful if you would have asked as well beforehand because I'm still pretty intent on leaving this closed at the moment ^^; I was thinking today would be when I start fixing the coding and adding to the prefix list and stuff. And right now, I would honestly prefer to put your character on hold right now if that's not a huge problem..?? Joker , i'm glad you found your way here. It was honestly mayhem after the announcement of the closure. I got banned for no reason xD Although the second account I came back on... well... i was banned with good reason. |
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Post by Joker on Sept 11, 2016 16:38:08 GMT -5
I'm glad I did too, I didn't post anything after the forums closed because I thought they would be gone forever. Then I found the new forums, what did you get banned for? lol
Edit: when do you think that you'll be ready to open the joining post again c:
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you already mentioned on their form that biologically they were female but they don't identify with that.
yeah I wasn't really thinking that she was necessarily taught tricks, but that the other cats were. Kind of like "circus cats" in a way. I was trying to tie in the Romani theme and stereotypes of the late 1400s.
