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Post by ღ ιcєƒιяє ღ on Aug 16, 2018 22:46:48 GMT -5
{ Sorry guys- I’m hoping to make my character tomorrow night! I’m house sitting for a coworker with my boyfriend so it’s been nice to have a house to ourselves without parents screaming and stomping all the time xD }
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<-•Ryse•->
She needed a hero, so that's what she became.
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Post by <-•Ryse•-> on Aug 16, 2018 22:53:32 GMT -5
(Gosh I love this analysis of their separate sides of the story! And to be clear I wasn’t trying to say you didn’t understand his side or anything, I just got excited to explain all my thinking behind it :3 yeah I have no idea either if they are gonna make it in the end game, only time and more rps will tell! Oh yeah, this betrayal and her reaction to it were certainly about more than just the clan, and that’s what made it so fun and also all the more sad to write and watch, these poor babes deserve a win xD it does feel really good though to have something really go wrong for a character, and to feel for them but also as their creator, have no idea how it is all going to end
If you write some more Coalpaw I could jump in with Ivorypaw, I’m playing a game rn but could maybe fit it in tonight 😊)
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Non-binary
<-•Ryse•->
She needed a hero, so that's what she became.
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Post by <-•Ryse•-> on Aug 16, 2018 22:54:03 GMT -5
(Don’t worry about it ღ ιcєƒιяє ღ, I hope u have fun! )
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Bisexual
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Post by 🎃❅❖.Şp໐໐kฯຟiຖ໓.❖❅🎃 on Aug 16, 2018 22:55:49 GMT -5
ღ ιcєƒιяє ღ Yeah that's fine! I won't be active much tomorrow because I'll be driving home. 😓 9hr drive.... Nothing prepares me for them. Have fun being able to spend sometime alone though! It's nice to get away from your parents!]
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Post by 🎃❅❖.Şp໐໐kฯຟiຖ໓.❖❅🎃 on Aug 16, 2018 23:13:35 GMT -5
<-•Ryse•-> I did feel a little like you implied that I didn't understand but I didn't take offense to it. I understand getting excited about this kind of stuff. I do like making this kind of analysis stuff too. Part of the reason why I made her focus on sweetstory and Mayra was to gently show where her mind was going, and how transfixed she was more on the relationship side of things. You could say she is low-key jealous. 🤣 I might try there still a long ways ahead...!]
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Bisexual
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Post by 🎃❅❖.Şp໐໐kฯຟiຖ໓.❖❅🎃 on Aug 16, 2018 23:28:12 GMT -5
I have written.. But I am, not proud. 🤣] Coalpaw stared at her leader with confused golden eyes. Her expression reflecting the shock that shook her body. Cinderspark had broken the code? For a nobody? The apprentice's ears drew back as she contemplated Silverstar's words carefully. Now looking to the ground once the leader exited her sight. A disapproving glint making itself known on her features. The deputy of the clan? Not following simple things such as the code? Feelings of regret began bubbling in her chest. The young she-cat believed in the choice of Cinderspark for Deputy when the fallen Dappledsky joined StarClan. Coalpaw believed.. In him. And truth be told she felt this was deserved. Many cats wished for deputy, Coalpaw included, excited already for the time after she'd mentored her first apprentice. But for him to recklessly engage a she-cat outside the clan. To her, it was an absolute disrespect to all the deputies of AetherClan before him. She felt her claws subconsciously unsheath as she now looked towards the once deputy, contempt clear in her eyes. But the apprentice wouldn't say anything. Not yet.
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Post by 🎃❅❖.Şp໐໐kฯຟiຖ໓.❖❅🎃 on Aug 16, 2018 23:47:32 GMT -5
<-•Ryse•-> yeah it's fine, don't worry about it 😘 Right lol, she's just sitting there thinking "am I #3?" lmaooooo jk nah I'm going to enjoy this.. Hurt Silverstar.]
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Post by 🎃❅❖.Şp໐໐kฯຟiຖ໓.❖❅🎃 on Aug 17, 2018 0:07:42 GMT -5
I'm off to bed if I wake up early I will talk to you all tomorrow!]
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Ðᴏʟᴄᴇ
there will always be those who dare to brave the lightning's glow.
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Post by Ðᴏʟᴄᴇ on Aug 17, 2018 0:27:03 GMT -5
[ sorry for the delay!! I got a little distracted but here we go 8D Angry Lionpaw lol. From the other replies, I got the feeling that the clan meeting was starting to end already so I went off that tbh ]Lionpaw As Lionpaw listened to Silverstar's announcement, his curiosity soon turned into apprehension as she denounced a traitor in their midst. Perhaps it was naivety, chalked up to his young age, that led to his confusion - he had no clue what in StarClan's name she was talking about, let alone who she was talking about. The words that followed soon after, however, made his stomach flip flop. His green eyes shifted between leader and deputy - former deputy? - rapidly, and he was sure he had an incredibly silly, stupefied expression on his face at that moment, completely unable to process what was happening. It was just like the battle with the mountain lions, a part of his world turned upside down in only moments. But there was no way Lionpaw was going to sit back on his laurels and watch hopelessly as Silverstar tried to slander his mentor, leader or not! Hopping to his paws, Lionpaw's fur bristled. He knew what he would do next was mouse-brained, and certainly others would look down on him for it, but someone had to defend Cinderspark's honor! "Fox-dung! It's a lie!" he shouted, looking at the cats sitting around him and desperately seeking their agreement. When he got none of it, he tried again, "he wouldn't betray the clan like that! No way!" The little tom's tail swung wildly from side to side as he vainly attempted to persuade his clanmates that Silverstar's announcement was a lie. Still, a part of his mind couldn't help but wonder if it was the truth... and if so, why hadn't Cinderspark told anyone? Where was this alleged mate and kits now, anyway!? As the other cats began to disperse, Lionpaw's glare switched between them and Silverstar. How could they all just turn their back on their former deputy so easily? "What about all the times he's been a loyal warrior? Are we just going to conveniently dismiss every time he's supported and helped us!?" His appeals seemed to win no favor from the others and his voice began to waver. At this point, who was he trying to convince anymore - Silverstar? The warriors? Or himself, above all the others? Still, with the lack of response in Cinderspark's defense, it seemed that Lionpaw had sorely misjudged his clanmates, leaving him with an incredibly bitter feeling as his jaw set into a hard scowl.
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Non-binary
<-•Ryse•->
She needed a hero, so that's what she became.
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Post by <-•Ryse•-> on Aug 17, 2018 1:21:05 GMT -5
( 🎃❅❖.Şp໐໐kฯຟiຖ໓.❖❅🎃 hehe I am for sure enjoying the position we have put these two in, it’s certainly a bad one but I know that the outcome, whatever it may be, will be super fun to play out Goodnight! I work for part of the day tomorrow so I won’t be able to respond until then Ðᴏʟᴄᴇ oml I love Lionpaw so much, what a babe ❤️ I wanna reply to him with Cinder in the morning, the two of them can go on a walk and chat about some things... )
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Post by Joker on Aug 17, 2018 5:46:27 GMT -5
(I’m on a small vacation right now, but I’ll try to get a response in later today.)
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Post by 🎃❅❖.Şp໐໐kฯຟiຖ໓.❖❅🎃 on Aug 17, 2018 9:27:15 GMT -5
Lionpaw lucky she already dismissed the meeting and left or she probably would have... Engaged in an argument with him. XD Morning.]
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Non-binary
<-•Ryse•->
She needed a hero, so that's what she became.
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Post by <-•Ryse•-> on Aug 17, 2018 10:39:38 GMT -5
(@joker sounds good! 🎃❅❖.Şp໐໐kฯຟiຖ໓.❖❅🎃 Uh oh, that woulda spelled big trouble for Lionpaw 😬 Morning! I’m headed to work right now, I’m off at 4pm PST so I’ll be able to reply and chat more later in the day :3)
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Post by 🎃❅❖.Şp໐໐kฯຟiຖ໓.❖❅🎃 on Aug 17, 2018 10:41:22 GMT -5
<-•Ryse•-> Silverstar had sunk deep into her thoughts, the eager yelling of Lionpaw was the only thing she heard, but the leader dismissed it. Of course the young tom would think otherwise. Lionpaw was biased because he was Cinderspark's apprentice, nothing more and nothing less. Every apprentice wanted to be the deputy's apprentice. Or the leader's. The very honor he had for keeping the title was ripped from his paws. Still though, the she-cat had been unprepared. Unprepared for any of the disapproval of her decision, and unprepared for the mere fact that she ever had to do such a thing. Had any AetherClan leaders in the past done so? She paused to think as she stared at her nest, now sitting with her head low. The answer... was very unlikely. Of course StarClan would leave this task to someone as inexperienced as her. The thoughts of Cinderspark saying his deputyship was a mistake whirled back around. Only to be stopped at the voice of.. someone familiar. Slowly Silverstar raised her head to look behind her, face similar to the one she held during the clan meeting. Her lavender eyes now meeting that of Softpaw's lilac ones. Softpaw was here because she wanted to defend her father, wasn't she? The leader wouldn't listen to it but something about her eyes, they kept her composure from breaking. It was hard for her to comprehend, but it felt as though the she-cat was genuinely worried for her. The leader inwardly shook her head to try and clear away any of her thinking before she looked away from the apprentice. "What is it that you want, Softpaw?"
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Post by 🎃❅❖.Şp໐໐kฯຟiຖ໓.❖❅🎃 on Aug 17, 2018 10:42:37 GMT -5
<-•Ryse•-> have fun at work. depending on if anyone is online to rp within the next say 3 hours, i can probably rp until then. otherwise, i'll probably rp tomorrow. ]
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Post by 🎃❅❖.Şp໐໐kฯຟiຖ໓.❖❅🎃 on Aug 17, 2018 10:50:02 GMT -5
<-•Ryse•-> yeah im trying to write her off as just overthinking rn, brooding, all of that. Because she is sad and stuff, I just can't show it right now. Depending on how this goes, she might show her sadness with Softpaw, or with ღ ιcєƒιяє ღ 's character. I just want her to cry already xD but thank you~ ]
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Post by 🎃❅❖.Şp໐໐kฯຟiຖ໓.❖❅🎃 on Aug 17, 2018 11:12:35 GMT -5
Yeah hopefully~ She has to deal with Silas's kits soon too which will be. fun. It's kind of sad that she won't be open to the idea of non-clanborn cats joining aetherclan anytime soon. ]
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Post by ღ ιcєƒιяє ღ on Aug 17, 2018 11:15:31 GMT -5
{ okay y’all, instead of replying to RP’s I’m gonna get to work on my characters. I’m excited for you to see my mean kitty :3 }
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Post by 🎃❅❖.Şp໐໐kฯຟiຖ໓.❖❅🎃 on Aug 17, 2018 11:18:38 GMT -5
wwooo ღ ιcєƒιяє ღ hype~~~~~! ]
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Post by 🎃❅❖.Şp໐໐kฯຟiຖ໓.❖❅🎃 on Aug 17, 2018 11:32:00 GMT -5
the search function was working last night and it's working today too. I'll probably sleep on my way home so if im awake when I get back, I'll try my best to update stuff. I might get the motivation to update it soon but we shall see~ ]
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Post by ღ ιcєƒιяє ღ on Aug 17, 2018 11:41:29 GMT -5
{ Okay! Let me know what your think or if you’d like anything changed ^.^ I kinda love him. However, my character creating is still rusty xD }
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Post by 🎃❅❖.Şp໐໐kฯຟiຖ໓.❖❅🎃 on Aug 17, 2018 11:46:21 GMT -5
He looks absolutely fine! I personally think you don't need much to a personality and it can show in rp if you want to explore a character more and whatnot :3 i think they're amazing tho~ If you want, after Softpaw and Silverstar talk a little, I wouldn't mind if he interrupted them. I'm sure he's just DISTRAUGHT with worry xD ]
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Post by ღ ιcєƒιяє ღ on Aug 17, 2018 11:49:26 GMT -5
{ Oh good!! I’m so glad! Okay, I can have him interrupt after they talk a little! I can see him now, his trembling with concern 😂😅 }
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Post by 🎃❅❖.Şp໐໐kฯຟiຖ໓.❖❅🎃 on Aug 17, 2018 11:53:00 GMT -5
ah yes, the worry! the horror! xD ]
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Post by Joker on Aug 17, 2018 13:49:28 GMT -5
(I hecking sprained my thumb earlier today so I’ll try my best. 🎃❅❖.Şp໐໐kฯຟiຖ໓.❖❅🎃 since you’re revising Icepaw, can we just do a mini time skip on them?) Thornpaw stared at his leader as she gave her harsh speech. Shock went through him and he turned to stare at Cinderspark. The tom’s body language showed him defeated, but his eyes blazed intensely. Thornpaw was still trying to wrap his mind around the rapid pace of events when Lionpaw started speaking. Her words only reinforced the growing seeds that were in his mind. It wasn’t fair to punish Cinderspark just for one mistake that anyone could tell he regretted. He had been an upstanding leader and example for everyone. Thornpaw stood on his paws and turned to Lionpaw, “I agree with you, I think the punishment is too harsh for one mistake.” He said firmly so his voice was heard. He wasn’t sure if this opinion was very popular, but he felt that it had to be said. Small feelings of doubt nagged at the back of his mind, but he felt confident enough in his words to stand by them.
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Post by 🎃❅❖.Şp໐໐kฯຟiຖ໓.❖❅🎃 on Aug 17, 2018 13:59:49 GMT -5
Yeah that's fine whenever you want to try them again I'm up for it!]
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Post by 🎃❅❖.Şp໐໐kฯຟiຖ໓.❖❅🎃 on Aug 17, 2018 14:38:30 GMT -5
Alright I'm off. I'll only be able to chat from here on out.]
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