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Post by ~Sapphire~ on Jul 30, 2017 7:47:11 GMT -5
Hmm... I'm intrigued. Can't wait for the prologue!
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Post by ☾ Cʀᴇsᴄᴇɴᴛ ☽ on Jul 30, 2017 13:51:37 GMT -5
mint- haha the pun tho! And sure, I'll add you!
Saph- Thanks! Now if only I can get some motivation to write... but I'll try my best to get it up soon!
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Post by mintedstar/fur on Jul 30, 2017 14:18:45 GMT -5
<3
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Post by ~Sapphire~ on Jul 31, 2017 15:47:59 GMT -5
All I can say as motivation is that it looks like a lot of people will want to read the chapter when you do write it. But no pressure c'x Good luck with the writing!
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Post by ☾ Cʀᴇsᴄᴇɴᴛ ☽ on Jul 31, 2017 15:55:05 GMT -5
Haha, thanks! I've already got a rough draft started and so hopefully the prologue will be coming out very soon.
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Post by ~Sapphire~ on Jul 31, 2017 15:59:51 GMT -5
Awesome!! I'll look forward to it... Starting is always the hardest part of writing something, am I right?
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Post by Owlmoon on Aug 2, 2017 8:22:22 GMT -5
Hey, Cres! Glad to see you finally writing your own story. I'm looking forward to seeing chapter one!
- Owlmoon
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Post by ☾ Cʀᴇsᴄᴇɴᴛ ☽ on Aug 2, 2017 12:00:25 GMT -5
Thanks Owl! I really appreciate it.
ᴛᴜᴇsᴅᴀʏ mintedstar/fur
Okay guys, so the prologue is now posted! The updates for this may be slow since I'm still working out the kinks of formatting, povs, and plot, but I'm really excited to get this rolling! I'd really appreciate any feedback.
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Post by Owlmoon on Aug 2, 2017 13:51:38 GMT -5
No problem! After you reading my fic, I think you deserve that I read yours, though everyone doesn't work that way.
- Owlmoon
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Post by Owlmoon on Aug 2, 2017 13:58:01 GMT -5
Just read the prologue! it was intense.
Here are some mistakes that I thought you might want to correct.
The fact that the kitten looked so (much) alike Rowan was a cruel taunt, reminding Delilah that she should have waited, should have just waited a little bit longer.
The second was horrifi(ying)ed.
Hope that helps. Also, I would like to be a fan, as well as one of those on the notifications list please.
- Owlmoon
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Post by ☾ Cʀᴇsᴄᴇɴᴛ ☽ on Aug 2, 2017 14:08:34 GMT -5
Thanks so much! I'll be sure to go fix them; I really appreciate it. And I'll definitely add you.
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Post by ☾ Cʀᴇsᴄᴇɴᴛ ☽ on Aug 2, 2017 17:43:14 GMT -5
Hey Tues! Thanks for the feedback. I was just thinking about that actually, and I've been waffling a little. But your input really helped me decide. When I get to a computer I'll probably take it out and then have it be chapter one or start it, maybe, since I'd like my chapters to be a tad longer.
Honestly, those are the kinds of things that's i still need to figure out with this fic. Formatting and all that, you know?
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Post by ~Sapphire~ on Aug 4, 2017 16:55:28 GMT -5
Nice prologue! I like how you're already setting up the duality between your main characters. Fan me?
As a side note, that banner and layout wow me every time I see them
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Post by Dingoleap on Aug 5, 2017 3:19:37 GMT -5
hmmm, I really enjoyed the prologue, Cres! especially the way you've set up the setting and the lore. I'm really interested to see how the rest of the story shapes up!
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Post by luckgandor on Aug 27, 2017 20:51:35 GMT -5
Wow, this sounds really interesting so far! I like the way you write. Can I be fanned?
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Post by ☾ Cʀᴇsᴄᴇɴᴛ ☽ on Aug 28, 2017 15:48:15 GMT -5
ᴛᴜᴇsᴅᴀʏ - ahhh thanks so much! It looks amazing! And yeah, I'm still working on getting the rest of this up, haha. It's coming together, but slowly... @luckgandow - sure, I'll definitely fan you! I'm glad you've enjoyed it so far.
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