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Post by ❅Maplefrost❅ on Jul 9, 2017 21:01:48 GMT -5
-raises hand- Can some pairings that are one-sided still be there? Like Fire x Cinder? I never really saw the harm in Cinderpelt having feelings for Firestar, cause she never acted on them. And she became a close friend of his later on even if she might still harbor feelings for him. However she doesn't regret her decision in becoming a medicine cat, and moved past a lot of bumps in the road. I think it's nice to show that some people have feelings for others, but sometimes they're not meant to be and are better off as friends. I like FireCinder, but I knew in the long run it couldn't happen because of reasons, the only thing I don't like is the reincarnation mess...
Also pairings like Gray x Millie....what do you plan to do with those? I feel like they'd be better off as friends? I mean, there's a lot of possibilities in the rewrite just based on pairings alone, so I hope you don't mind my two cents?
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Post by 𝓣𝓲𝓷𝓾𝓿𝓲𝓮𝓵 on Jul 9, 2017 21:02:13 GMT -5
I was actually thinking of making Sunstar a father, I just wasn't sure to whose kits, though Swiftbreeze was a possibility anyway, so I'll definitely consider it. Again, thank you. Do you have any more suggestions? Not just for the first book, but in general? I was spitballing with Leonard the other day, so I have a bunch, actually. I'll share them when I get off mobile. (I'm also going to write a topic about the idea I had for a major overhaul to the story of Rock, the Three, and the Dark Forest. It's basically the latest permutation of the lore I've been posting since the beginning of the Featherfall theory.) Ah, alright then. In that case, can't wait to read it.
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Post by 𝓣𝓲𝓷𝓾𝓿𝓲𝓮𝓵 on Jul 9, 2017 21:16:07 GMT -5
-raises hand- Can some pairings that are one-sided still be there? Like Fire x Cinder? I never really saw the harm in Cinderpelt having feelings for Firestar, cause she never acted on them. And she became a close friend of his later on even if she might still harbor feelings for him. However she doesn't regret her decision in becoming a medicine cat, and moved past a lot of bumps in the road. I think it's nice to show that some people have feelings for others, but sometimes they're not meant to be and are better off as friends. I like FireCinder, but I knew in the long run it couldn't happen because of reasons, the only thing I don't like is the reincarnation mess... Also pairings like Gray x Millie....what do you plan to do with those? I feel like they'd be better off as friends? I mean, there's a lot of possibilities in the rewrite just based on pairings alone, so I hope you don't mind my two cents? I don't know, I never really felt FirexCinder as anything more than a completely brother-sister relationship, even on Cinderpelt's part. I also don't want to include too many one-sided pairings, but we'll see whenever I get to it. As for GrayxMillie, I'll either have them just be a) best friends or still mates, kill Briarpaw off from the start or just not have her be injured at all, and either get rid of the Millie-Blossomfall drama completely or have them make amends within the story if Blossomfall still feels jealous. It's very likely I'll just do the former though. I do see them more as friends than as mates, even if I do prefer it over GrayxSilver in terms of development. Whether Millie will get a mate of her own or not, I'm not sure, but I do see Graystripe being like a second father to her kits if she gets a different mate and has a family with him instead of Graystripe. And don't mind at all. I highly encourage suggestions (so long as they don't come off as demands), so please keep doing so whenever you feel like it.
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Post by Redclaw on Jul 9, 2017 21:21:26 GMT -5
LightflameThanks, for both the compliment and suggestions. I actually was thinking of adding some of those things in anyway, but I really appreciate it nonetheless. But why have Sunstar specifically be the father of Willowpelt, Spottedleaf, and Redtail? Half the characters in ThunderClan seem to be descended from Adderfang and Swiftbreeze. Sunstar is completely disconnected from the other bloodlines in ThunderClan, so making him the father cuts down on incest and makes it so his bloodline didn't die out. Was it ever stated anywhere that Sunstar had a mate? I doubt it.
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Post by ❅Maplefrost❅ on Jul 9, 2017 21:25:25 GMT -5
-raises hand- Can some pairings that are one-sided still be there? Like Fire x Cinder? I never really saw the harm in Cinderpelt having feelings for Firestar, cause she never acted on them. And she became a close friend of his later on even if she might still harbor feelings for him. However she doesn't regret her decision in becoming a medicine cat, and moved past a lot of bumps in the road. I think it's nice to show that some people have feelings for others, but sometimes they're not meant to be and are better off as friends. I like FireCinder, but I knew in the long run it couldn't happen because of reasons, the only thing I don't like is the reincarnation mess... Also pairings like Gray x Millie....what do you plan to do with those? I feel like they'd be better off as friends? I mean, there's a lot of possibilities in the rewrite just based on pairings alone, so I hope you don't mind my two cents? I don't know, I never really felt FirexCinder as anything more than a completely brother-sister relationship, even on Cinderpelt's part. I also don't want to include too many one-sided pairings, but we'll see whenever I get to it. As for GrayxMillie, I'll either have them just be a) best friends or still mates, kill Briarpaw off from the start or just not have her be injured at all, and either get rid of the Millie-Blossomfall drama completely or have them make amends within the story if Blossomfall still feels jealous. It's very likely I'll just do the former though. I do see them more as friends than as mates, even if I do prefer it over GrayxSilver in terms of development. Whether Millie will get a mate of her own or not, I'm not sure, but I do see Graystripe being like a second father to her kits if she gets a different mate and has a family with him instead of Graystripe. And don't mind at all. I highly encourage suggestions (so long as they don't come off as demands), so please keep doing so whenever you feel like it. I never really got the brother/sister vibe from Cinder and Fire even before they confirmed she had feelings for him. It felt more like she was his equal, if not more, especially when they spoke to one another and when she tells him she doesn't regret her decisions. She's much more mature, and even more when she had Leafpool as an apprentice. I don't really see that, young charismatic apprentice anymore, because her struggles made her what she is now. However I think her relationship with Firestar is a prime example about unrequited love, and message to readers. And means a lot to some, like myself, who's also been in similar situations. As for Millie and Gray, I agree, the former sounds much more appealing, I like the idea of Graystripe being a godfather to Millie's kits perhaps? Or maybe their surrogate uncle? When it comes to the pairings in the series, I'd love to discuss them with you, and give suggestions. Will you be making certain pairings canon, since you're changing others to just friend statuses? And what about implied pairings? Also I made a headcanon, about Harespring and Kestrelflight being Nightcloud's first litter with Mudclaw, what do you think about that?
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Post by 𝓣𝓲𝓷𝓾𝓿𝓲𝓮𝓵 on Jul 9, 2017 21:26:50 GMT -5
Half the characters in ThunderClan seem to be descended from Adderfang and Swiftbreeze. Sunstar is completely disconnected from the other bloodlines in ThunderClan, so making him the father cuts down on incest and makes it so his bloodline didn't die out. Was it ever stated anywhere that Sunstar had a mate? I doubt it. No, Sunstar never had a mate. That's why Light suggested him.
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Post by Redclaw on Jul 9, 2017 21:33:17 GMT -5
Was it ever stated anywhere that Sunstar had a mate? I doubt it. No, Sunstar never had a mate. That's why Light suggested him. I see. If you would like some help, I'm open to it. I could at least keep some notes for you.
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Post by 𝓣𝓲𝓷𝓾𝓿𝓲𝓮𝓵 on Jul 9, 2017 21:37:17 GMT -5
I don't know, I never really felt FirexCinder as anything more than a completely brother-sister relationship, even on Cinderpelt's part. I also don't want to include too many one-sided pairings, but we'll see whenever I get to it. As for GrayxMillie, I'll either have them just be a) best friends or still mates, kill Briarpaw off from the start or just not have her be injured at all, and either get rid of the Millie-Blossomfall drama completely or have them make amends within the story if Blossomfall still feels jealous. It's very likely I'll just do the former though. I do see them more as friends than as mates, even if I do prefer it over GrayxSilver in terms of development. Whether Millie will get a mate of her own or not, I'm not sure, but I do see Graystripe being like a second father to her kits if she gets a different mate and has a family with him instead of Graystripe. And don't mind at all. I highly encourage suggestions (so long as they don't come off as demands), so please keep doing so whenever you feel like it. I never really got the brother/sister vibe from Cinder and Fire even before they confirmed she had feelings for him. It felt more like she was his equal, if not more, especially when they spoke to one another and when she tells him she doesn't regret her decisions. She's much more mature, and even more when she had Leafpool as an apprentice. I don't really see that, young charismatic apprentice anymore, because her struggles made her what she is now. However I think her relationship with Firestar is a prime example about unrequited love, and message to readers. And means a lot to some, like myself, who's also been in similar situations. As for Millie and Gray, I agree, the former sounds much more appealing, I like the idea of Graystripe being a godfather to Millie's kits perhaps? Or maybe their surrogate uncle? When it comes to the pairings in the series, I'd love to discuss them with you, and give suggestions. Will you be making certain pairings canon, since you're changing others to just friend statuses? And what about implied pairings? Also I made a headcanon, about Harespring and Kestrelflight being Nightcloud's first litter with Mudclaw, what do you think about that? True. Honestly, it really could just go either way, so I might include it, I might not. Exactly. In fact, I'm already getting an image of the kits playing with their Uncle Graystripe. XD Sure thing! And yeah, I'll be making certain pairings canon, even some implied ones. While I don't want to include too many forbidden relationships, I do want RainxSwallow to become canon in mine. Maybe I'll even include that fanfic idea I had about them once but never got around to writing into this one. I never knew how to feel about MudxNight, though I have considered it since I actually do want Kestrelflight and Harespring to be Mudclaw's kits, I'm just not 100% sure yet on who the mother will be, though Nightcloud is indeed a possibility.
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Post by 𝓣𝓲𝓷𝓾𝓿𝓲𝓮𝓵 on Jul 9, 2017 21:39:29 GMT -5
Are you planning to rewrite every single book or do you plan to shorten it all to your liking? My suggestion is to make it more fast-paced. I'd really like to check out your writing skill, so I can't wait! It says in the first post as well as the title itself that I plan to rewrite every single book, and I meant it. And yeah, I'll try to make it more fast paced if I can, but not too much so it won't be rushed of course.
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Post by 𝓣𝓲𝓷𝓾𝓿𝓲𝓮𝓵 on Jul 9, 2017 21:39:56 GMT -5
No, Sunstar never had a mate. That's why Light suggested him. I see. If you would like some help, I'm open to it. I could at least keep some notes for you. Thanks, but I got that covered already.
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Post by Lightflame on Jul 9, 2017 23:30:42 GMT -5
Okay, so let me list off a few more suggestions. I'm mostly spitballing, so my ideas aren't as thought out as they are for Into the Wild. - In the second half of The New Prophecy, Tigerstar summons Brambleclaw and Hawkfrost, offering to train them to be great warriors. Instead of Brambleclaw suddenly believing that Tigerstar is trustworthy now, he knows that Tigerstar is up to no good, but sticks around hoping that he can save Hawkfrost from their father's evil influence. Instead of the end of Sunset being Brambleclaw's choice between loyalty and power, the choice is between saving his leader and saving his brother. He stalls for time, but in the end he reasons that he can only save one, and the only one he's sure he can save is his leader. This changes the ending to a tragedy, as Brambleclaw is forced to give up on Hawkfrost and put him down. Firestar's speech at the end could be changed from, "Never a doubt, Brambleclaw" to a more reassuring, "We do what we can, but we can't save everyone. You did your best, Brambleclaw." - Cut the last bit of Goosefeather's Curse, where Goosefeather sees Pinestar's future. It completely ruins the tone of the ending, and only exists for the sequel hook. Goosefeather saying his goodbyes to Cloudberry is enough. (I imagine you'd do this one anyway.) - Way more of the series backstory has been established now, so I figure you'll incorporate more of it in as old legends. I would recommend keeping those legends muddled and more simplified. That makes it more interesting and exciting when you get the real story. - Bluestar tells Fireheart about Sunstar's lives, to foreshadow Nightstar's lives. - Legitimately just remove the Cinderpelt reincarnation plot. It didn't really add anything to the story, and it kind of undermines Cinderpelt's story. You could still keep Cinderheart in as a cat named in Cinderpelt's honour, but the superior Lionblaze pairing is LionXBriar. - If you're going to show the offscreen greencough deaths as deaths in the battle, Toadstep's last words should be, "Don't worry! Lionblaze will save us!" - The Dark Forest's plan shouldn't be to attack the Clans. It should be to make the Clans destroy each other by provoking the ultimate war. Then they come in to pick off the stragglers. - Ivypool shouldn't switch sides when she sees that the Dark Forest is plotting destruction. That's lame. Instead, have the Dark Forest themselves tell Ivypool about Dovewing's power, putting poison in her head about Dovewing being chosen as the special one, and leaving Ivypool behind. Ivypool's redemption should come about thanks to Dovewing's unwavering faith in her. (I was wondering if maybe Dovewing herself would try to join the Dark Forest to keep Ivypool safe.) In the end, Ivypool should acknowledge Dovewing as special, but say that it's her heart, not her powers, that make her special. - Tigerheart being a secret good guy was the most boring way possible to end his arc. Anything else would have been better. Like an actual redemption, or Dovewing or Ivypool killing him in book five and then having to live with it. - I have no idea where to even begin fixing Leafpool in The New Prophecy, but please fix Leafpool in The New Prophecy. - If Silverstream accompanied Fireheart and Graystripe on the mission to find WindClan and they stopped by the RiverClan border to return her, that would give SilverXGray more time for development, and give more weight to it being forbidden. - Please leave Sol without a backstory. - Ashfur should be in the Dark Forest, but not be involved in their plans, because he already got his revenge when Brambleclaw lost his faith in Squirrelflight. - Lionblaze, Jayfeather, and Hollyleaf worrying that they were just the kits of a passing rogue that Squirrelflight took in always seemed hollow, and not just because they were obviously Leafpool's kits. Maybe you could include some kits of a passing rogue taken in by someone to plant the idea in their head? (Not like Hawk and Moth, who turn out to be Tigerstar's kits. My go to would be Heathertail and Kestrelflight being found and adopted by Onestar.) - This is a suggestion Leo made. Quiet Rain should arrive at the forest around the time of The Blazing Star, so that she can see Clear Sky actually trying to make amends, rather than just forgiving him because it was his destiny to do all the awful stuff he did. That also gives Sun Shadow more time to get some development. - Include more rogue, loner, and kittypet characters around the lake. I believe in these awesome, trained cats way more when there are characters who aren't awesome and trained. - Slash is the worst villain, but if you're still including him for some bizarre reason, he needs to get hit by a car. Okay, now on to writing that post about an alternate OOTS ending.
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Post by 𝓣𝓲𝓷𝓾𝓿𝓲𝓮𝓵 on Jul 10, 2017 0:23:51 GMT -5
LightflameSo, after reading that long post—and I mean it in the best way possible—I will say that the idea you have for Brambleclaw and Hawkfrost seems interesting, and something I'll take into consideration since I'm still not even sure if I'll have Hawkfrost and Mothwing in this, or Sasha for that matter. If I do include them though, I might change the identity of their mother as well as definitely have more interaction between him and Mothwing. I'll definitely incorporate the series' backstory as legends. Regarding the Cinderheart thing, I was going to remove the reincarnation plotline anyway. It wasn't needed. Although now I'm curious, why LionxBriar? There will definitely be less off-screen greencough, so there's that. As for the Dark Forest thing, it's kind of freaky that you mention it because that is exactly what I plan to do with this one series I'm working on. I was planning on adding it into the rewrite, anyway. I'm not even sure what I'm going to do with Dovewing and Ivypool, or if Dove is going to be the Third at all, but I'll consider it. I agree that Tigerheart's plot was just really lame and also really obvious (to me, at least), so that'll definitely change. I will most certainly fix Leafpool in The New Prophecy. I'll take the GrayxSilver thing into consideration and I actually had something like that in mind, but why would Silverstream accompany them? To get away from her father? Getting WindClan to return for the sake of it? Both? As for Sol, I will definitely keep his backstory a mystery. I agree with the Ashfur thing. He already got his revenge, so I don't see why he would be fighting in the Great Battle, unless it's to kill Hollyleaf for killing him. Even then though, it's likely he won't appear in the Great Battle. Come to think of it, I'm not even sure if there's going to be a Great Battle at all considering I might leave the existence of either afterlife entirely ambiguous, but we'll see. Oh, good. So I'm not the only one who thought it seemed hollow when the Three thought they had rogue blood in them. I'll take that into consideration. I was actually going to have Quiet Rain and Sun Shadow arrive in the forest much sooner anyway for pretty much the same reasons Leo said, so I'll definitely add that in. Besides, in canon, it always seemed like she omly forgave Clear Sky because Shaded Moss told her that "it had to happen that way" rather than on her own terms. And as for Slash, I'll either make him more intimidating, or just get rid of him completely. He was just a really weak villain, especially compared to his predecessor.
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Post by Ligerfrost on Jul 10, 2017 1:06:02 GMT -5
If you do multi-mates...Will you do more than one father kits if it's a molly with two mates? Also will it be an uncommon or common enough that it will be a minor thing?
For the same sex pairings will their be surrogate parents if they want kits? I read this story where Firestar and Longtail were mates and they had Cinderpelt be a surrogate mother for their kits. (Because Firestar wanted kits) So will you do the same or will same sex just strictly not have kits just mates.
It wouldn't hurt to give one or two cats a littermate that didn't have one previously. Like for instance Longtail or Sandstorm. Not necessary just a suggestion.
Also bringing up Pinestar might be a good thing as well since I feel like bring it up might give Fireheart more insight on Tigerstar.
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Post by 𝓣𝓲𝓷𝓾𝓿𝓲𝓮𝓵 on Jul 10, 2017 1:33:17 GMT -5
If you do multi-mates...Will you do more than one father kits if it's a molly with two mates? Also will it be an uncommon or common enough that it will be a minor thing? For the same sex pairings will their be surrogate parents if they want kits? I read this story where Firestar and Longtail were mates and they had Cinderpelt be a surrogate mother for their kits. (Because Firestar wanted kits) So will you do the same or will same sex just strictly not have kits just mates. It wouldn't hurt to give one or two cats a littermate that didn't have one previously. Like for instance Longtail or Sandstorm. Not necessary just a suggestion. Also bringing up Pinestar might be a good thing as well since I feel like bring it up might give Fireheart more insight on Tigerstar. I actually mention in the update that will happen (though I guess the wording is a bit off ^^"). I'm still trying to figure that out, but I think it'll be common enough depending on the Clan. I know the story you're talking about, and yes, there will be surrogates. I was planning on giving a few cats some littermates anyway, so that'll definitely happen, and I will definitely bring up Pinestar as well.
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Post by 𝓣𝓲𝓷𝓾𝓿𝓲𝓮𝓵 on Jul 10, 2017 18:40:45 GMT -5
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Post by Tas on Jul 10, 2017 20:11:53 GMT -5
It's still kind of hard to believe. Like, I know I said this already but, like, that's a lot of books..
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Post by 𝓣𝓲𝓷𝓾𝓿𝓲𝓮𝓵 on Jul 10, 2017 20:52:03 GMT -5
It's still kind of hard to believe. Like, I know I said this already but, like, that's a lot of books.. Well, of course it's a lot of books. The series was made in 2003 after all, and I am very much aware it'll take me a while to complete it.
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Post by 𝕊𝕙𝕒𝕕𝕠𝕨 on Jul 10, 2017 20:59:57 GMT -5
I say if you want to do it, you should, I think it sounds interesting!
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Post by 𝓣𝓲𝓷𝓾𝓿𝓲𝓮𝓵 on Jul 10, 2017 21:01:12 GMT -5
I say if you want to do it, you should, I think it sounds interesting! Thanks!
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Post by 𝓣𝓲𝓷𝓾𝓿𝓲𝓮𝓵 on Jul 10, 2017 21:42:58 GMT -5
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Post by ❅Maplefrost❅ on Jul 10, 2017 21:49:28 GMT -5
What do you think of Mudstar? And Darktail being Blackstar's son instead? Or Sol's. Also what do you think about Beetlewhisker not dying and being RC deputy instead? Maybe he survives Brokenstar's attack but wakes up with a nasty scar? During Darktail's attack on RC, Reedwhisker dies protecting his clan, and Mistystar chooses Beetlewhisker as new deputy. I think it's the only way to explain his presence despite the fact he's supposed to be dead, lol. And what do you think of Background forbidden romances, like Mouse x Minnow. Will you keep certain cats alive still like Foxleap, Hazeltail, Toadstep, and Icecloud, in favor of kill off long over due older cats?
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Post by 𝓣𝓲𝓷𝓾𝓿𝓲𝓮𝓵 on Jul 10, 2017 22:26:42 GMT -5
What do you think of Mudstar? And Darktail being Blackstar's son instead? Or Sol's. Also what do you think about Beetlewhisker not dying and being RC deputy instead? Maybe he survives Brokenstar's attack but wakes up with a nasty scar? During Darktail's attack on RC, Reedwhisker dies protecting his clan, and Mistystar chooses Beetlewhisker as new deputy. I think it's the only way to explain his presence despite the fact he's supposed to be dead, lol. And what do you think of Background forbidden romances, like Mouse x Minnow. Will you keep certain cats alive still like Foxleap, Hazeltail, Toadstep, and Icecloud, in favor of kill off long over due older cats? I think you might've overdid it with the questions, Maple. XD Let's see... I'm not even sure about Mudstar, honestly, but we'll see. I actually liked Darktail being Onestar's son, although Blackstar would make sense at least fur color wise. I definitely don't want Sol to have any children, though. Beetlewhisker, maybe. And yes, I will be adding background forbidden romances. I already mentioned in an earlier post that I want to include RainxSwallow as one. I'll be writing stories on those as well if people want them. And since I want this to be realistic enough, both older and younger cats will be killed off like it was in the first arc, with danger at every turn, but I'll probably let Foxleap, Hazeltail, Icecloud, and Toadstep live. Especially Foxleap since I plan to have him get together with Rosepetal. ^^
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Post by ❅Maplefrost❅ on Jul 10, 2017 22:49:50 GMT -5
What do you think of Mudstar? And Darktail being Blackstar's son instead? Or Sol's. Also what do you think about Beetlewhisker not dying and being RC deputy instead? Maybe he survives Brokenstar's attack but wakes up with a nasty scar? During Darktail's attack on RC, Reedwhisker dies protecting his clan, and Mistystar chooses Beetlewhisker as new deputy. I think it's the only way to explain his presence despite the fact he's supposed to be dead, lol. And what do you think of Background forbidden romances, like Mouse x Minnow. Will you keep certain cats alive still like Foxleap, Hazeltail, Toadstep, and Icecloud, in favor of kill off long over due older cats? I think you might've overdid it with the questions, Maple. XD Let's see... I'm not even sure about Mudstar, honestly, but we'll see. I actually liked Darktail being Onestar's son, although Blackstar would make sense at least fur color wise. I definitely don't want Sol to have any children, though. Beetlewhisker, maybe. And yes, I will be adding background forbidden romances. I already mentioned in an earlier post that I want to include RainxSwallow as one. I'll be writing stories on those as well if people want them. And since I want this to be realistic enough, both older and younger cats will be killed off like it was in the first arc, with danger at every turn, but I'll probably let Foxleap, Hazeltail, Icecloud, and Toadstep live. Especially Foxleap since I plan to have him get together with Rosepetal. ^^ Fox and Rosepetal, interesting. Who will you pair Bumble with then? I actually like Fox x Rose, but I've noticed a lot of people ship Rose with Bumble.
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Post by 𝓣𝓲𝓷𝓾𝓿𝓲𝓮𝓵 on Jul 10, 2017 22:54:22 GMT -5
I think you might've overdid it with the questions, Maple. XD Let's see... I'm not even sure about Mudstar, honestly, but we'll see. I actually liked Darktail being Onestar's son, although Blackstar would make sense at least fur color wise. I definitely don't want Sol to have any children, though. Beetlewhisker, maybe. And yes, I will be adding background forbidden romances. I already mentioned in an earlier post that I want to include RainxSwallow as one. I'll be writing stories on those as well if people want them. And since I want this to be realistic enough, both older and younger cats will be killed off like it was in the first arc, with danger at every turn, but I'll probably let Foxleap, Hazeltail, Icecloud, and Toadstep live. Especially Foxleap since I plan to have him get together with Rosepetal. ^^ Fox and Rosepetal, interesting. Who will you pair Bumble with then? I actually like Fox x Rose, but I've noticed a lot of people ship Rose with Bumble. I'm not even sure. I might just make it Dovewing since I'm not planning on adding DovexTiger (SedgexTiger on the other hand... XD) This is also assuming Millie's kits will even be the same cats in canon, since I might change that too. Or he could just be single.
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Post by kinkajou on Jul 10, 2017 23:45:40 GMT -5
Idk...if it was one book it'd either be really long or really rushed :/
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Post by Alpha on Jul 11, 2017 0:03:55 GMT -5
Idk...if it was one book it'd either be really long or really rushed :/ Yeah, a lot would have to be scrapped. Plus, it might seem kinda messy if you mess up. I could definitely understand shortening the books or shortening the amount of books. It would be easier.
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All hail me, the flower-flushing queen of Prague
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Post by 𝓣𝓲𝓷𝓾𝓿𝓲𝓮𝓵 on Jul 11, 2017 18:17:39 GMT -5
Guys, it's a rewrite. It's not like I'm going to be including every single plot point from the books. Like I said in the OP, I'll be treating this as though this were completely my own. Some plot points will be the same, of course, while others will be original.
Because it's either doing a combo, doing a rewrite for each book at a time, or just not doing it at all.
And in all honesty, it's comments like these or pointing out that there's a lot of books or that it'll take a long time kind of makes me feel like some of you don't have any faith in me. I get that might not be the intention, but it still feels like it. I know there's a lot of books, and I know that it's going to take awhile for me to get done. I'm sorry if I sound blunt here, but I don't need such an obvious thing to be pointed out to me. It's annoying. I'm perfectly aware of this myself, thank you very much.
I understand where the concern comes from, but it's not like I'm going to write this thing in a week. I'm a writer, which is something I take very seriously, especially since I want to become an author myself someday. I know what I'm doing, and I'm going to take my time with this.
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Post by kinkajou on Jul 11, 2017 18:51:37 GMT -5
you're awesome and I have complete faith that you can do it well, i was just sayin
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Post by Tas on Jul 12, 2017 7:00:46 GMT -5
you're awesome and I have complete faith that you can do it well, i was just sayin
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