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Post by Aphelyon on Jul 2, 2017 9:26:20 GMT -5
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Post by Aphelyon on Jul 2, 2017 9:30:37 GMT -5
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Post by Aphelyon on Jul 2, 2017 9:36:34 GMT -5
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Post by Aphelyon on Jul 2, 2017 12:22:40 GMT -5
My first cats are gonna be: (wip)
Name: Stormfire Gender: She-cat Age: 26 moons Rank: Warrior Relations: Ashcloud (mother; deceased); Snowfoot (father); Blaze (mate); Burr, Rabbit, Mink, Smoke (kits) Appearance: Stout light gray she-cat with a very unusual swirling tabby pattern. Her paws, muzzle, belly, neck, and chest are all white. Her eyes are light blue, and she has very long claws. Personality: Stormfire is a very forward she-cat, not afraid to speak her mind and challenge others when she believes their wrong- or even just that they need to be challenged, regardless of truth. She will fight for what she cares about, to the point of giving her life if necessary, and she will always do what she thinks is right. At the same time, however, she can be a bit selfish; not so much towards herself, but towards those she loves, now including her mate and kits. That is, she will do what is right for them regardless of what is right as a whole. She can be blinded by emotion at times, which lends to her fiery personality. Skills & Weaknesses: She is very stealthy and thus a fantastic hunter; however, she lacks strength and delicate coordination, making her a lousy tree-climber, and not an especially effective fighter depending on who she's up against. History: Stormfire was born as a SpringClan cat to Ashcloud and Snowflight, with several littermates. She grew up fairly normal, neither prodigy nor failure, and at thirteen moons old she earned her warrior name through no particularly spectacular means. Less than a moon later, the earthquake hit, and Stormfire ran in panic. She was injured by a falling rock, and thought she would die alone in the mountains. However, as fate would have it, a tom by the name of Blaze happened upon her a day later, dragging her from the rubble and helping to nurse her back to help. The two quickly became mates, and a couple moons later, their litter of kits arrived. The family lived in Blaze's den for many moons, before Stormfire's longing for home, and desire for her kits to know their heritage, became too much. Other:
Name: Blaze Gender: Tom Age: 28 moons Rank: Loner Relations: Stormfire (mate); Burr, Rabbit, Mink, Smoke (kits) Appearance: Blaze is a large, heavy-set ginger tabby tom with long fur and dull green eyes. His lower jaw, paws, belly, and tail-tip are all white, and he has exceptionally long whiskers. Personality: He is a laid-back cat, taking life as it comes and remaining, if not optimistic, then not pessimistic. He is a bit of a realist, and a cool temper to his mate's enthusiasm and passion. That's not to say that he is not passionate about things, but he chooses his battles carefully, and is more willing to compromise and let things go than his mate. However, he is extremely defensive of his kits, and would never let anything bad happen to them if it were within his power to prevent. Though he cares for Stormfire deeply, he is not quite as protective of her, mostly because he is well aware that she can take care of herself and would likely claw his ears off if he thought otherwise. Skills & Weaknesses: Blaze is a very strong and durable cat, able to out-wrestle most others both due to his brute strength and his ability to simply keep on going. He is, however, not particularly agile, and is terrible at climbing, jumping, or really doing anything that involves his paws leaving the ground. History: Other:
Name: Burr Gender: Tom Age: 8 moons Rank: Loner Relations: Blaze (father), Stormfire (mother), Rabbit, Mink, Smoke (littermates) Appearance: Burr is a fairly large light ginger tom with unusually long whiskers and bright golden-orange eyes. He is big for his age, and it is obvious that he will be a large and sturdy cat, but for the time being he hasn't yet filled out and is still a bit gangly. His lower jaw, as well as part of his lower belly, are white. Personality: Burr is much like his father in personality as well as appearance. He is laid-back, preferring to let things happen rather than make them happen. He is loving towards and protective of his family, and is one of the more mature of his littermates. He tries to help them where he can, but he knows that sometimes they need to make mistakes and learn for themselves. Despite his old spirit, he is still young, and it shows. He overestimates his skills at times, and underestimates them at others. He hasn't quite grown into himself, and can be extremely awkward around strangers. Though wise for his age, he still can be impulsive or make bad decisions, and sometimes the advice he gives is not the best. Skills & Weaknesses: For the time being, it seems as though Burr has more weaknesses than skills. He is clumsy and a bit slow, and because his muscles haven't filled out he also lacks strength. However, he has impeccable vision- a skill he undervalues- and can notice small details, and far away details, that others might miss. History: Burr was born in the mountains to Stormfire and Blaze. That is where he grew up, as a loner, but he heard stories of SpringClan from his mother. The stories always intrigued him, and he often wondered what it would be like to live as a Clan cat. When his mother announced that they were going to try to find the Clan, he was both nervous and excited- he was eager to see what the Clan was all about, but frightened of being in such close quarters with strangers. Other:
Name: Rabbit Gender: She-cat Age: 8 moons Rank: Loner Relations: Blaze (father), Stormfire (mother), Burr, Mink, Smoke (littermates) Appearance: Rabbit is a very small, slender gray she-cat with faint tabby markings on her forehead. Her muzzle, nose, neck, chest, belly, and paws are all white. Her eyes are a dull amber, and her fur is very long and soft. Personality: Rabbit is a quiet, sweet she-cat- for the most part. She is laid-back, easy to get along with, and quite innocent, though at times she can also be quite mischievous. She is a prankster, and enjoys "getting" her littermates and her parents, especially if they don't realize it's her, though the secret never stays secret for long... she loves to brag about her pranks, as well as her other skills. Still, she is not especially arrogant, though she is a bit prideful. Thus, her ego can be hurt easily if she fails at something, especially something she thought she was good at. She can be a bit petty, and sometimes becomes moody and mopey if things go her way. She is almost never angry, however, and her only two moods seem to be either painfully cheerful or annoyingly melodramatic. Born as the only she-kit in a litter of four, plus being the smallest, has always made her the "little sister" of the group, something which annoys her. The others are quite protective of her, though she insists she's able to take care of herself, and will go to great lengths to prove it. She also makes a point to be the loudest, boldest, and bravest of the bunch. Skills & Weaknesses: Rabbit is relatively stealthy, and quite clever... she is a fantastic sneak, and is very agile. However, she is not very quick on her paws when it comes to running, nor is she strong- both due to her petite size. She is also not especially adapted to the cold, as her pelt may be long, but it's not especially thick. History: Born in a litter of four in the mountains, Rabbit grew up learning how to survive as a loner from a young age. Bold but not careless, cautious but not cowardly. Still, she always wanted something more than just survival... she wanted a purpose, though she didn't know what. Hearing stories of SpringClan, she thought she might have finally figured out what, and throughout their kithood she always wanted to play "Clan" games (with her being Rabbitstar, of course), and for a time even insisted that the others called her Rabbitkit instead of "just plain Rabbit." She was overjoyed when Stormfire announced that they would be returning to the Clan territory. More than anything, Rabbit- or Rabbitpaw as she has begun to call herself "in preparation,"- hopes that there will be another young she-cat in the Clan that she can befriend, since she grew up with only brothers. Other:
Name: Mink Gender: Tom Age: 8 moons Rank: Loner Relations: Blaze (father), Stormfire (mother), Burr, Rabbit, Smoke (littermates) Appearance: Mink is a sleek black tom with a tiny white patch on his chest, a very long tail, and round yellow eyes. He is a bit on the small side for his age, but thick fur hides strong and agile muscles. Personality: Mink is a bit of an arrogant cat, something not entirely undeserved due to his exceptional skills even at his young age. He has always been well aware and in full control of his body, something that has given him an advantage over his littermates when it comes to hunting or fighting. His arrogance, as well, has given him a bit of a mean streak- he is coy, teasing, and loves to play the devil's advocate, often inciting small conflicts between his littermates. Still, he would never intentionally hurt them, though his teasing can at times go too far, and he generally feels bad afterwards. Still, he would never apologize. Skills & Weaknesses: Mink has fantastic kinesthetic (bodily awareness), and that plus his strong muscles, lean frame, and long tail (which helps him to balance) makes him a brilliant climber and a decent fighter for his age. However, he is deaf in his left ear, something he is quite sensitive about and which is actually not known to his family. His parents suspected when he was a kit that he might be deaf, or partially so, but could never confirm it. This makes hunting hard for him, as he can only track prey with one ear, which makes it extremely difficult to pinpoint their location. He can also have difficulty hearing what others are saying. History: Mink is actually the firstborn of the litter, and never lets his littermates forget it. As a young kit, he was the ringleader of the group... however, as they grew older, Rabbit took over that position with her loud personality, particularly when it came to their Clan games. Mink thought that her dreams of SpringClan were silly, and thus refused to partake in them. After this, he grew a bit more distant from his littermates, and began spending more time by himself. Eventually, when Stormfire told them that they would return to the valley, Mink was extremely unhappy. He didn't want to be a part of the Clan... he didn't need anyone to depend on him, or to depend on anyone else for that matter! At first he refused to go, staying behind in their home territory. However, it took only a few days for him to start to become lonely, and so he tracked their scents to catch up. Of course he told them that it wasn't because he was lonely, it was because he was worried that they would need his help. Other:
Name: Smoke Gender: Tom Age: 8 moons Rank: Loner Relations: Blaze (father), Stormfire (mother), Burr, Rabbit, Mink (littermates) Appearance: Thick-furred smoky gray tom with green eyes, long whiskers, and very long claws. He has several scars on the top of his lower back from where an eagle tried to carry him off as a kit. Personality: Smoke is a quiet and reserved cat, for the most part. It's not that he's shy- he isn't at all- he just finds that he doesn't have much to say. He sees no reason to waste words on things that aren't important, after all. He would prefer to see and experience, to do, rather than to speak. And, when not doing, he would prefer to sit in silence and contemplation, simply looking and living. Because of this, he is not especially good with words, and often finds it difficult to convey his thoughts and feelings through them. Still, he is not boring. He can be quite fun and playful, and is more than happy to go along with Rabbit's adventures and games. He will just do so quietly. Skills & Weaknesses: Smoke is a very intelligent tom, and can often find solutions to complex problems. It's not so much out of any kind of particular insight or wisdom, simply through logic. He is a grounded, realistic, and quite logical sort of cat. Physically, he is quite strong, though not to any unusual degree. He is also durable, and can withstand hunger, cold, pain, and really any other hardship without complaint for a long period of time. He is a decent hunter, as the easiest ways to catch prey in a situation seem obvious to him. However, he is no good in a fight, as he is easily overwhelmed when he doesn't have time to think. History: Smoke was born in the mountains along with his littermates, and grew up with them and his parents. As a cat interested in knowledge, his mother's stories always interested him, though not to the degree of his sister, though he was happy to play her games. When it was said that they would attempt to find the valley again, Smoke went so willingly, more out of curiosity than anything else. However, he did have regrets about leaving his brother behind- he had always been the closest to Mink- and was relieved when Mink showed up a few days after their journey had begun. Other:
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Post by 𝓅𝑒𝒶𝒸𝒽 on Jul 2, 2017 12:39:34 GMT -5
» (is this open to join? ill delete this post if u need me to!)
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Genderqueer
Ivyfang
Queer in every sense of the word
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Post by Ivyfang on Jul 2, 2017 13:45:18 GMT -5
I want a love triangle. Someone else needs to make the lonner though))
Name: Pebbledust Gender: She-cat Age: 42 moons Rank: warrior Relations: former mate of Raccoontail Appearance: she is a slender gray she-cat with dark gray spots and a pale brown underside, with green eyes Personality: Pebblespot is loving and will care for anyone no matter what. She is easily flustered, and often stresses till the last heartbeat to make decisions. Skills & Weaknesses: she has a fair amount of knowledge about medicine and is an excellent Hunter. But she is cowardly in battle, refuses to fight and she has poor decision making skills History: she was a warrior and Raccoontail's mate before the earthquake. She ran and hid ib the mountains and befriended a lonner they traveled back to the spring together and are growing close. Other:
Name: Raccoontail Gender: tom Age: 51 Rank: lonner Relations: open Appearance: small yet muscular white tom with deep brown eyes and a thick gray tail with black stripes. Personality: he is protective and is always worrying about the ones he cares about, especially if they are separated. He intentions are pure, but his actions often drive loved his ones away. Skills & Weaknesses: Raccoontail is fast and, muscular, making him great at fighting, but he is a clumsy hunter and can never sit still long enough to catch anything. He is soft and cowardly, often clingy, and he fears abandonment. History: he was Pebbledust's mate, but they were separated during the earthquake. He stayed in the valley and searched for her or any one to stay by his side. Other:
How do I post the image?))
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Post by Aphelyon on Jul 2, 2017 19:40:01 GMT -5
(Yep this is open! And good luck finding someone to play the loner ^^ I don't think I need any more characters atm though lol)
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Post by 𝓅𝑒𝒶𝒸𝒽 on Jul 2, 2017 20:19:46 GMT -5
» Foxtrot | 3 years | Warrior A small, medium-furred she-cat with a flame-colored pelt. A marble-like pattern on her pelt is made up of a darker, russet color, with her underbelly being a creamy white. Although she is rather petite, her bushy tail seems to make up for it and makes her appear more like a fox. Her eyes are a bright green color, and scars run along her left side and cheek. Foxtrot appears small and weak, but her big personality makes up for it. She's quite cocky, sassy, stubborn, and has a short temper, which makes her bad with younger cats. Despite so, the feline is graceful, adventurous, somewhat gentle, and highly values loyalty to her clan. She's often nicknamed "Foxheart" for how rude and sassy she can be at times. Her history isn't all that grand. She had a happy life with her parents, of which came from somewhere unheard of by the cats in the valley. The earthquake, however, broke them apart, and now Foxtrot is alone without her parents. [n/a. open to relationship to anycat willing to deal with her.]
Deerstep | 2 years | Warrior A pretty, small she-cat with long fur and a short tail. Her fur is a light caramel color with a darker streak running along her spine and small white spots scattered about. Her eyes are a bright vivid green. Personality: Gentle and caring, Deerstep is almost like a mother to the clan. She cares deeply of every cat, no matter what their background is or what they've done wrong, believing that all cats deserve a chance regardless of what they have done. Deerstep also proves herself highly intelligent, able to recognize certain herbs and what they do, as well as recall some past stories. Besides that, she also possesses an extremely high amount of loyalty to her clan. However, she's gullible to many things other let her know of and has difficulty differentiating the truth from lies. Her lineage consists of mainly loners and rouges, until one day her mother was forced to join her. She was seen as a savage, villainous figure, but both Deerstep and her mother proved the clan wrong. Her knowledge of herbs was passed down from mother to daughter, and she aspires to one day help just as her mother did. [n/a. open to relationship, mainly siblings.]
Ashengaze | 2 years | Med cat? An average-sized tom with a gray-bluish pelt. His eyes are a frosty, foggy color, and his body has scars littered about. Personality: Grumpy and seemingly angry, Ashengaze is axtually highly intelligent. Despite being half blind, he can fight effectively and in a manner that almost makes him seem like he isn't blind at all. When it comes to herbs, he, like his sister Deerstep, knows how to use them - his medicinal herb library is much larger than hers. He's never been fond of younger cats, especially apprentices and kits, which is why he's always been reluctant to train another, and often wishes he didn't appear so brittle, making him a preferred and easy target. He's always been the frail one in the family, and Deerstep and his mother would always have to defend him from others due to being seen as weak. His mother was the one who influenced him to have a passion for healing, even though he is part blind. [n/a. open to relationship, mainly siblings.]
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Post by Brindleface on Jul 3, 2017 8:25:55 GMT -5
Finchpaw | 25 moons | Apprentice Finchpaw, or Finch as she goes by now, is a lithe, light brown she-cat with orange eyes. She has a few stripes on her tail and face, as well as a few scars she got while she was away from her clan. | Finch is kind and very compassionate. She cares about everyone and doesn't find it hard to see from someone else's point of view. Because of this she usually dislikes fighting, but is quite strong when someone attacks her or her clan. She is also quite idealistic and is often trying to improve things that others would be okay with. | Finch is very good at fighting offense but lacks defense. She is also quite poor in terms of strength and is quite slow. She has very good endurance, though, and can keep moving for days at a time with little rest. She is also fair with strategies and execution. | During the earthquake, Finch, then Finchpaw, quickly got separated from her clanmates. She was injured and knew she wouldn't be able to make it on her own, she headed in the direction of the nearest two-leg place. It took her over a moon the reach it, but once she was in the outskirts she quickly met and befriended a kittypet. Inviting her to live under his two-leg's den, the kittypet helped Finch hunt and learn the ways of the two-leg place. After a couple of months they became mates, and soon Finch was expecting kits. However, just before she gave birth she became ill, and two of her kits were stillborn. The last one, clearly the largest of the litter, managed to survive, and Finch and her mate named her Lark after her mother. When Lark was old enough her mother decided to make their way back to the clan in hopes of finding some of her old clanmates. Her mate decided to stay with his two-legs, though may try to visit the clan sometime. Her daughter is Lark. Lark | 7 moons | Rogue Lark is a thick-furred ginger tabby she-cat with silver-green eyes. Her fur is softer than Finch's from growing up in the two-leg place, but she is also fairly strong. She appears a bit large for her age but it's mostly her fur. | Lark is energetic and restless, always looking for new things to try or places to explore. She is usually very independent and hardly relies on others for anything. Though she is smart and is also fairly daring, enjoying to push her luck and try to go beyond her previous best. | Lark is fairly strong and has good endurance from her mother, but also inherited her lack of speed. She is terrible at attacking but was taught good defensive skills from her father, making her very good at holding her ground. She isn't very good at thinking ahead and usually doesn't do very good in fights unless someone tells her what to do during it. | Lark was born and raised in the two-leg place, living almost as good as a kittypet. She spent her days in the yard of her father's two-leg den, but has always been restless and longing for a life like the one her mother had. Her mother is Finchpaw.
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Post by Deleted on Jul 3, 2017 9:03:22 GMT -5
Bramble | Almost 6 moons | Kit [ Bramble is a small, frail kit that doesn't look like much at all. She can practically be blown over by the smallest breeze, with her short stature and tiny build. Her brown tabby fur with mixed shades isn't interesting, but her dull blue eyes stand out mostly. They shine very well in the light. | Bramble is quite a withdrawn kit, keeping her feelings to herself. She is interested and curious of practically everything, but always stays where she's supposed to be and has fears of exploring or eventually becoming an apprentice. She gets scared easily and is very jumpy, but can warm up to cats easily. | Bramble has somewhat of an excellent memory, and remembers a lot of things that most cats can't. She is very weak and will always choose the flight rather than fight response at any given time, and she is slightly cowardly.| [ Bramble was born after the earthquake and has no idea what happened, still wandering aimlessly until she can find somewhere to stay. Her hunting is barely up to par and she is nearly starving trying to find prey. ] [ None ] Snowfoot | 50 moons | Former Warrior [ Snowfoot is a tom of average stature and a not particularly muscled build. His rather dull gray fur that is often matted or messy is marked with white right on the paw area, hence his name. He looks rather sturdy with his flat muzzle, broad shoulders, and stocky limbs, but his green eyes betray softness and kindness.] | [ Snowfoot can appear as a gruff and easily annoyed warrior, but is actually very easygoing and just keeps up his mock stern personality to scare off little kits or apprentices. He is actually very funny and loves to talk, bragging often of his achievements in hunting. He loves to show his skills when on patrols. ] | [ Snowfoot is quite good at hunting, often trying to make the most catches in a day. He is half decent at fighting and can never strategize, also getting angry easily when things go wrong. He can act like a kit sometimes. ] | [ Snowfoot was lost for the past year, having to fend for himself in a territory he barely knew. It was hard, being all alone like that with no one. He doesn't know where to go and is currently searching for members of the clan to reunite with. He still has hope to find them, but is slowly giving up. ] [ None ] Autumn | 18 moons | Former Warrior [ Autumn is a she-cat with very feminine and attractive features, including her soft, short gray tabby fur and large amber eyes that look even larger when you meet her in person. Her face is slightly narrow and lithe, along with the rest of her body. She has no particularly distinguishing features other than her slightly good looks. ] | [ Autumn can be described in one word, flirty. She loves to flirt and make conversation with toms, having great fun with that. She has never thought of actually getting a real mate, her being too adventurous and immature for that. Hunting and fighting are not her forte, but she can easily lash a cat with just her sassy tongue alone. Yes, she talks back! She will sass anyone she particularly doesn't like, and never thinks of consequences. ] | [ Autumn is not very good at hunting or fighting. She is very immature and stubborn when she doesn't get what she wants but is very good at it so her bad side rarely shows. Her powers of persuasion are surprisingly good, along with her good looks. ] | [ Autumn doesn't talk much about her history and hates to think about when she was separated during the earthquake, nearly starving to death alone for some time until she got back to full strength and began traveling about and giving herself a loner name. ] [ None ]
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Post by Aphelyon on Jul 3, 2017 9:58:30 GMT -5
Okay wow a lot happened while I was gone. Gimme a sec, I'll add everyone.... also just a note on the allegiances... cats should be listed as what they ARE, not what they will become when they rejoin the Clan. You can note what they'll become, but put their rank as what they are. For example, Finchpaw will still technically be considered an apprentice, as she never received her warrior name. My kits will of course become apprentices, and Blaze a warrior, but for the time being they're listed as loners. Also, about Ashengaze... I think, due both to his age and my original plan, that he should not be full medicine cat for the time being, but was the medicine cat apprentice when the earthquake happened. Of course, he could still have the name, as medicine cats earn their full name before their full title. Thus, he would effectively become full medicine cat upon his return. Unless you want to add more drama and assume that his training wasn't complete.)
Edit: Also, Snowfoot is like the perfect age to be Stormfire's father, and also shares his prefix... wanna make this canon? Lol. I can just change the suffix of Stormfire's father from -flight to -foot.)
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Post by 𝓅𝑒𝒶𝒸𝒽 on Jul 3, 2017 10:03:13 GMT -5
» Ahh ok! Also, my characters will start by being only their prefixes, so i have Fox, Ashen, and Deer :3 soo would anyone want to rp?
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Post by Aphelyon on Jul 3, 2017 10:22:01 GMT -5
(That's fine! Only one more thing, actually, milky! Their skills & weaknesses aren't listed. You can go ahead and rp but please also provide at least one definite skill and one definite weakness for each of them ^^ I still gotta finish up my characters too.)
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Post by Rose possum on Jul 3, 2017 10:24:19 GMT -5
Name:hawk Gender:female Age:15 moons Rank:loner Relations:idk she lives alone Appearance:pale cat with dark brown face,back,legs,front paws and tail tip and pale blue eyes Personality:shes quiet but rebellious when nobody's around but is open to be a loyal clan member Skills & Weaknesses: she's a good offence but only when she feels like its necessary for survival or that cat has bad morals and it would be a better world if they were dead. History:shes a loner. that's it. Other: has a small scar on her left cheek.
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Post by Brindleface on Jul 3, 2017 10:42:44 GMT -5
(Ok, changed my form ^^)
(Edit: I also took out Finch's strengths/weakness blurb I accidentally left in there X3)
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Post by 𝓅𝑒𝒶𝒸𝒽 on Jul 3, 2017 11:02:41 GMT -5
» i fixed deerstep's a bit, but i feel that the other two's weaknesses are there.. ;w; since fox and ashen are snarky and sassy and whatever but they have a good quality to make up for it)
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Post by Deleted on Jul 3, 2017 11:40:20 GMT -5
Okay wow a lot happened while I was gone. Gimme a sec, I'll add everyone.... also just a note on the allegiances... cats should be listed as what they ARE, not what they will become when they rejoin the Clan. You can note what they'll become, but put their rank as what they are. For example, Finchpaw will still technically be considered an apprentice, as she never received her warrior name. My kits will of course become apprentices, and Blaze a warrior, but for the time being they're listed as loners. Also, about Ashengaze... I think, due both to his age and my original plan, that he should not be full medicine cat for the time being, but was the medicine cat apprentice when the earthquake happened. Of course, he could still have the name, as medicine cats earn their full name before their full title. Thus, he would effectively become full medicine cat upon his return. Unless you want to add more drama and assume that his training wasn't complete.)
Edit: Also, Snowfoot is like the perfect age to be Stormfire's father, and also shares his prefix... wanna make this canon? Lol. I can just change the suffix of Stormfire's father from -flight to -foot.) ( Sure! )
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Post by SWIŦCħBLAÐE on Jul 3, 2017 11:46:06 GMT -5
Is there anyone trying out leader and is that position opened still? If I can't get the position, then how about deputy?
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Post by Deleted on Jul 3, 2017 11:46:57 GMT -5
( Not sure, it will be chosen in RP most likely )
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Post by SWIŦCħBLAÐE on Jul 3, 2017 11:54:19 GMT -5
( I see, Then I'll make myself a character. )
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Post by Aphelyon on Jul 3, 2017 11:55:18 GMT -5
(That's the plan yeah. The idea is that the former leader & deputy are both dead/MIA so the Clan has to struggle to figure out who the new leader will be. You're welcome to claim the old leader and have them in StarClan though XD
Rose possum - sorry but I'm not sure you're quite literate for this Clan. Your joining form is very short and looking over your previous posts [I'm a stalker sorry lol] I don't think your grammar and post length is quite up to par. Sorry.
@foxtrost - true but with I'm looking to fill the specific skills/weaknesses category, which is geared more towards physical pros/cons than mental, since those would be listed with personality. Ashengaze, obviously, his blindness as a weakness, but no skills really. The other two don't really have physical skills or weaknesses listed. Sorry for the confusion.)
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Post by Rose possum on Jul 3, 2017 12:04:14 GMT -5
oh its ok i really don't spend much time writing characters on this website so idc if i don't get accepted
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Post by 𝓅𝑒𝒶𝒸𝒽 on Jul 3, 2017 12:08:15 GMT -5
» Aphelyon ill edit in a bit then! also, you listed ashen as med cat app - im not sure if thats a mistake or not lol )
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Post by Aphelyon on Jul 3, 2017 12:12:48 GMT -5
(That was intentional. Had you not seen my post from before? The idea was to not have any high ranks from the get-go... plus with his young age [about 11 moons at the time of the earthquake] it would make more sense for him to have been the apprentice. All cats are starting with the ranks that they had before the earthquake, but of course if his training is complete then he can quickly move up to full medicine cat.)
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Post by SWIŦCħBLAÐE on Jul 3, 2017 12:27:25 GMT -5
Screechclaw | 34 moons | Warrior [Large, brown, almost black tabby tom. He has a dark shade of gray as tabby stripes, faded white flecks and has blazing amber eyes. He has large, white paws and a large flash of white on chest. His muzzle is graying.] | [He has a temper when it comes to younger cats. He wants to help and be the best mentor figure he can be. He understanding. He wants to get on cats good sides and become their friend, even if he hates their guts.] | [He is a mentor figure. His weakness is his temper. Patience is one thing that is limited to him.] | [Screechclaw was born to a clan cat and a loner long before he and his parents moved to the territory again. Of course, Screechclaw already loved his home and didn't understand why they had to leave. So when he came to his mothers old home, he soon came to realize why she had come back. But as they settled into the camp once more, slowly learning their way around the territory, Screechclaw's mother grew ill. At the time, his temper wasn't yet established as his mother was still alive. But when she died, his father didn't seem to care and that angered Screechclaw. Now it's present day and Screechclaw is still angry with his father. However his father is gone, out of the clan, so his temper is not as bad.] [Mother- Quicknose. Father- Harley.]There really is no picture that looks like Screech, so I choose the one that looks the most like him.
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Post by 𝓅𝑒𝒶𝒸𝒽 on Jul 3, 2017 12:37:16 GMT -5
» it was just a question, and yes, i did read the post from the beginning before i decided to join, but i was just double checking to make sure i didnt miss anything important, such as what i had asked. it does make sense now that its clarified. ill update my form later, thank you anyways )
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Post by Aphelyon on Jul 3, 2017 12:39:04 GMT -5
(Looks good, though two things. One, it doesn't mention physical skills and weaknesses. Two, I'm a bit confused by his backstory. Was he born as a result of a forbidden relationship long before the earthquake, and then brought to the Clan later? Because he's far to old to have been born after the earthquake.)
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Post by Aphelyon on Jul 3, 2017 12:42:28 GMT -5
» it was just a question, and yes, i did read the post from the beginning before i decided to join, but i was just double checking to make sure i didnt miss anything important, such as what i had asked. it does make sense now that its clarified. ill update my form later, thank you anyways ) (okay just wanted to make sure you had seen my prior explanation ^^ with so much going on atm I'm sure it would be easy to miss.)
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Post by SWIŦCħBLAÐE on Jul 3, 2017 12:42:43 GMT -5
I'm sorry if I confused you. I literally have millions of ideas running though my brain, and I guess I ended up mixing everything up. Should I change it?
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