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Jul 19, 2017 10:42:31 GMT -5
Post by darkfeather88 on Jul 19, 2017 10:42:31 GMT -5
(Accepted. Since she has no clan, her age is going to be 3 moons or younger. Also, for now, her name will just be Espira, as the clan name is given by the leader of the clan she joins.
Is that okay?)
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Post by darkfeather88 on Jul 19, 2017 13:01:38 GMT -5
(I have added your character to the main page... So yes. Really when you are.)
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Jul 21, 2017 12:46:57 GMT -5
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Post by Tawnyfire on Jul 21, 2017 12:46:57 GMT -5
I have a question, if a cats a loner who is joining the clans, do you still put their primary & secondary element?
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Jul 21, 2017 17:33:29 GMT -5
Post by darkfeather88 on Jul 21, 2017 17:33:29 GMT -5
(Yes. For some clans, it determines who mentors whom.)
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Jul 22, 2017 19:38:43 GMT -5
Post by Sparrow on Jul 22, 2017 19:38:43 GMT -5
Cat’s Name: Hawk, Hemlockpaw
Gender: tom
Eye color: yellow
Pelt Color: short white fur with grey tabby point markings on his face, tail, ears and paws
Birth Clan: Hydraclan
Chosen Clan: Hydraclan
Rank: Crafter apprentice
Primary Element: fire
Secondary Element: metal
Power: none
Mark: none
What was lost: none
How they got to the clan: clanborn
Feelings towards the other clans: indifferent and sometimes puzzled by their traditions
Personality: Social, hardworking, and empathetic, but blunt, stubborn, and jaded. He's a bit of a workaholic and fiercely loyal to his clan. Distrustful of loners and rogues.
Crushes: Goldenpaw
Other: He had two siblings that died of green cough not long after birth as they were born in the middle of leafbare. His father, Hawkleap, abandoned Hydraclan to be a rogue and this has made Hemlockpaw feel like he needs to prove his loyalty despite being clanborn. Snowbranch is his mother.
Code: blue lightning
Cat’s Name: Marian, Snowbranch
Gender: she-cat
Eye color: pale cerulean
Pelt Color: long white fur with pale grey point markings on her face and paws
Birth Clan: Pegasusclan
Chosen Clan: Hydraclan
Rank: currently an expecting Queen (normally a Nurse)
Primary Element: Sky
Secondary Element: none
Power: none
Mark: none
What was lost: none
How they got to the clan: clanborn
Feelings towards the other clans: anxious and distrustful
Personality: Kind, patient, and assertive, but is a worry-wort, has low self-esteem, and is very distrustful of everyone, even her own clanmates. Personal relationships are important to her, and she's very overprotective of those she loves.
Crushes: n/a
Other: Her mate, Hawkleap, a born loner, left both her and Hydraclan. This crippled her confidence in her self worth. Hemlockpaw's mother. She's expecting a second litter of Hawkleap's kits.
Code: blue lightning
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Jul 22, 2017 20:40:43 GMT -5
Post by darkfeather88 on Jul 22, 2017 20:40:43 GMT -5
(Accepted sparrow- What was Hawkleap's birth name?)
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Jul 23, 2017 0:17:22 GMT -5
Post by Sparrow on Jul 23, 2017 0:17:22 GMT -5
(Accepted sparrow- What was Hawkleap's birth name?) [Thanks. Oh right, his name was Birch. They gave him the prefix Hawk because he proved himself a good hunter and a sharp tongued tom when he first joined the clan.] |
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Aug 1, 2017 22:13:59 GMT -5
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Post by Tawnyfire on Aug 1, 2017 22:13:59 GMT -5
(Yes. For some clans, it determines who mentors whom.) ok, thank you. |
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Post by darkfeather88 on Aug 1, 2017 22:51:27 GMT -5
(No problem.)
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Aug 1, 2017 22:53:55 GMT -5
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Post by Tawnyfire on Aug 1, 2017 22:53:55 GMT -5
Cat’s Name: Lizzy
Gender: Female
Eye color: Greenish-gray, her right eye is slightly darker then her left.
Pelt Color: Soft, short-furred Brown she-cat with classic tabby markings and lighter brown fur around her eyes. She has a lean build and long legs, but due to an accident when she was younger, she can no longer run like she used too and has three scars on both her back legs.
Birth Clan: None
Chosen Clan: Hasn't chosen yet
Rank: Loner
Primary Element: Earth
Secondary Element: Life
Power: Empathy; She can feel the emotions of other cats. her emotions are affected by the emotions of the cats around her
Mark: a white heart outline on all her pads.
What was lost: Ability is feel her own emotions Consciously, but can feel them sub-consciously.
How they got to the clan: By scout (?)
Feelings towards the other clans: None
Personality: Lizzy is a shy, kind and weird she-cat who can't find it in her to hate anything. She is able to see the good in eVenice the most difficult cat and wants to friends with everyone. She is very quiet and polite around strangers, but once she gets to know some cat, she's quick to chat with them over anything. She tends to have trouble explaining herself to others and has trouble being in leader positions.
Crushes: none yet
Other: She is 8 moon's
Code: Blue/Orange Fire
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Post by darkfeather88 on Aug 2, 2017 11:09:55 GMT -5
(Okay, it looks good, but I do have a question about her lost.
Can she feel any emotions or are they just hidden? Based on her personality, maybe she can't hate?
I'm just wondering how it would work in the roleplay.)
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Aug 2, 2017 18:30:12 GMT -5
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Post by Tawnyfire on Aug 2, 2017 18:30:12 GMT -5
Her own emotions are hidden to herself, but other cats can still see her emotions.
I'm not sure if that makes sense, but yeah. ^-^")
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Post by darkfeather88 on Aug 2, 2017 18:56:05 GMT -5
(So basically... she still has emotions but has little control over them?
I would add that maybe her emotions are affected by the emotions of the cats around her... I'm not sure that the lost is something that could be a lost... After all, many cats can hide their emotions, or do not understand their emotions..)
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Aug 2, 2017 22:02:16 GMT -5
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Post by Tawnyfire on Aug 2, 2017 22:02:16 GMT -5
Yeah and alright.
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Aug 2, 2017 22:47:36 GMT -5
Post by darkfeather88 on Aug 2, 2017 22:47:36 GMT -5
(Accepted. Sorry for the wait.
I will add your character sometime tomorrow, but fill free to go to the main roleplay page.)
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Aug 3, 2017 12:30:37 GMT -5
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Post by Tawnyfire on Aug 3, 2017 12:30:37 GMT -5
It's fine, dark. And ok. :3
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Aug 17, 2017 15:30:24 GMT -5
Post by .:*Leaf Sama*:.™ on Aug 17, 2017 15:30:24 GMT -5
SN: Leaffeather Cat’s Name: Cloud/Cloudkit Gender: She-cat Eye color: Green Pelt Color: PeltBirth Clan: Griffinclan Chosen Clan: (Hasn't chosen yet) Rank: Kit Primary Element: Sky Secondary Element: Water Power: Flight and cloud/air control Mark: Cloud shape on shoulder What was lost: Can't hide wings and Can't die of natural causes. How they got to the clan: (Hasn't chosen clan) Feelings towards the other clans: Thinks all clans are special and are unique in their own way. Personality: Is very sweet and lovable. Loves the sky and is usually seen flying around. She wishes everyone can be friends. Hates when cats fight, but will go to battle if the leader wishes it. When she is bored, she will try to make others laugh with aerial stunts. Is great at aerial attacks and hunting. Often eats rabbit and fish. Can't and won't eat or kill birds. The only way to swim is to surround herself with an air bubble. Altogether though, she is very kind and helps out a lot. Crushes: Brightpaw of Pegasusclan Other: Is an aerial attacker and is great at most things. Will be a Pegasusclan cat. Maybe the she-cat deputy.
Code: Orange sky SN: Leaffeather Cat’s Name: Zoltan/Zoltclaw Gender: Tom Eye color: Amber Pelt Color: PeltBirth Clan: Dragonclan Chosen Clan: Guardian Rank: Leader Primary Element: Life Secondary Element: Light Power: To Heal All Wounds Mark: A Plant Mark on Forehead What was lost: Can't die and has to suffer knowing how all cats die. How they got to the clan: Had brought back a pearl at his ceremony. Feelings towards the other clans: Thinks other clans are different and doesn't understand them. Personality: Is very kind and loves taking care of cats. Crushes: Rachel/Rainbreeze Other: Power has a side effect that makes the mark glow brightly Code: Orange sky
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Aug 18, 2017 0:11:57 GMT -5
Post by darkfeather88 on Aug 18, 2017 0:11:57 GMT -5
(Okay...
That is the first time that I have ever gotten a picture of the cats... I will do my best to describe them...
On Cloud/Cloudkit, since she was born into the clans, her age would be around 3 moons, as that is the first age they go through the Clan Choosing Ceremony.
Cannot die of natural causes...? Can you clear that up? Does she get sick? Can she get killed in battle?
Otherwise, she looks okay. Will accept when you can clear the above up.
As for Zoltan/Zoltclaw, there are a few more issues here.
First off, Zoltclaw isn't an acceptable warrior name. While these cats do know about the history of the twolegs, the warriors names has mostly the same pattern as warriors do, (like Fireclaw, Mudpatch, Quailfeather... ect.) . Within these clans, the knowledge adds foreign plants and animals, (Crocodilefang, Magnolialeaf, Scarabpelt, ect.), mythological creatures (Kitsunefire, Unicornpelt, and Chimerabreeze), some twolegs things (Hammerclaw, Metalsight, Butterfur), twolegs seasons (not giving examples), some twolegs terms (Voltstripe, Amperetail), and some space terms (Solarfang, Shootingsky).
Most cats would run up and ask 'What is a Zolt?' A name like Rachelclaw, Davidpelt, and Walterstripe would not be accepted.
Also, you wanting him to be leader as an ageless cat... First off, when was he born? I ask this because Raiden/Lightningeyes and Rachel/Rainbreeze were the only that have lived since the beginning of these clans. There were cats that had long lives but those two were the only that made it to this age.
Also, there is the within-the-roleplay problems... No one would put an ageless cat in charge after what Raiden did. There would be too much pressure on a cat that like that and, after Raiden killed his self temperately on an evil cat, becoming corrupted and doing bad things, no one wants one as a leader. Even the founder, Raiden, agrees, regretting what he did as he stepped out of the leadership.
So sorry, your cat cannot be the leader. Your cat wouldn't be trusted because he can't die.
Also, there isn't much to go on for personalty. Can you add more to his personalty? And for how they got to the clans... if they have a BirthClan, then they were born at Starlight fields and are considered 'clanborn'.
Oh joy... someone with a crush on Rachel/Rainbreeze? This isn't going to end well...
So Zoltan/Zoltclaw is not accepted at this time.)
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Aug 18, 2017 0:45:01 GMT -5
Post by .:*Leaf Sama*:.™ on Aug 18, 2017 0:45:01 GMT -5
What I mean by "Can't die" is they can't die from like falling or natural disasters. If they were to be killed in battle they would die. And Cloud can't get sick.
Sickness can kill.... Urmm... Would Grassclaw work? And I guess he doesn't have a crush on anyone. He is 47 moons right now. Sorry for the personality! I had typed several sentences... Must of been a glitch!
Personality change: Is very kind and loves taking care of cats. He often is looking out for others and helping with the duties. He loves to watch kits go into their clans. Though he sometimes gets sad. He always thinks of how they will hardly ever see each other after that ceremony. But he never shows this and is often thought to be expressionless. Even if he can't do anything for his "clan", he will always stand beside them.
Sorry for the trouble! I haven't...EVER done a roleplay like this. And I'm sorry for my laptop glitching out! It does that a lot for some reason....
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Aug 18, 2017 8:21:49 GMT -5
Post by darkfeather88 on Aug 18, 2017 8:21:49 GMT -5
(Still have questions.
I think that your character would be more interesting if she could die from falling. It would add some depth to your character...
For Zoltan, yes Grassclaw is okay... But he still can't be leader... Cats want a cat that doesn't seem ageless. And, if he went crazy, how would they stop him. Throw a sick cat at him?
Oh, you can have a crush on Rachel/Rainbreeze, but, as the owner of that character, I know that Rachel/Rainbreeze will not return it. She has only ever loved one cat.. And they refused to return it.
As it stands, Cloud/Cloudkit, accepted. Zoltan/Grassclaw, not accepted.)
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Aug 18, 2017 11:49:10 GMT -5
Post by .:*Leaf Sama*:.™ on Aug 18, 2017 11:49:10 GMT -5
(Mk... I didn't want Cloud to die of falling cause she flies... But like if she fell on like a spike-thing then she will probably die. But like just falling on grass shouldn't kill her.) (  If he went crazy they could just kill him. He just can't die from like drowning or like a tree fallen on him. Stuff like that. (Me trying so hard to get this to make sense) (So like... Grassclaw goes crazy, the others could just kill him.) |
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Aug 18, 2017 20:21:53 GMT -5
Post by darkfeather88 on Aug 18, 2017 20:21:53 GMT -5
(That is something that all flyers have to deal with, as do birds. You hit something too hard and your dead. Besides, she wouldn't be flying at her age anyways... Most likely, she would still be developing her flight feathers.
Okay... I should of ask this first... Is Grassclaw immortal? Can he die of old age?)
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Aug 18, 2017 22:59:42 GMT -5
Post by .:*Leaf Sama*:.™ on Aug 18, 2017 22:59:42 GMT -5
(yeah both those things! She wont be flying yet and Grassclaw can die at approx 133 moons like Mistystar is now. And yes, Cloud isnt flying yet and she can die if she runs into like a mountain or falls from like 35 feet. Something like that. (Cata always land on their feet! ) Has anyone ever thought how old Mistystar is? She was alive before Firestar was and is still alive even though Firestar died!) |
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Aug 19, 2017 22:22:49 GMT -5
Post by darkfeather88 on Aug 19, 2017 22:22:49 GMT -5
(Sorry, I had misunderstood your characters.
Zoltan/Grassclaw accepted.)
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Aug 19, 2017 23:16:12 GMT -5
Post by .:*Leaf Sama*:.™ on Aug 19, 2017 23:16:12 GMT -5
(It's ok! I probably made it hard to understand! I do that a lot.... #firsttimedilemmas )
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Post by darkfeather88 on Aug 21, 2017 15:48:14 GMT -5
(Okay, the characters have been added. You can roleplay on the main page.)
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Aug 21, 2017 18:41:02 GMT -5
Post by .:*Leaf Sama*:.™ on Aug 21, 2017 18:41:02 GMT -5
(Thx!)
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Aug 21, 2017 23:01:15 GMT -5
Post by mintedstar/fur on Aug 21, 2017 23:01:15 GMT -5
SN: mintedstar/fur
Cat’s Name: Salt/Saltfeather
Gender: Transgender Tom
Eye color: Golden amber
Pelt Color: a slender gray-blue tom with white streaks along his legs and back. He has long legs, as well as a tail that has rather thicker fur than on the rest of his body, making it resemble a feather.
Birth Clan: PegasusClan
Chosen Clan: PegasusClan
Rank: Warrior
Primary Element: Water
Secondary Element: Water
Power: Can breathe under water
Mark: If you look closely at his eyes, you can see that there is the shape of a fish in his left one.
What was lost: They have a harder time speaking than most cats, since he is more suited to breathing in water. Because of this, he sometimes has chest problems as well.
How they got to the clan: Born into it.
Feelings towards the other clans: Honestly depends on the cats within them. He honestly judges by cat over clan.
Personality: Caring, if a little bouncy or pushy. He can often be a little weak to verbal and emotional abuse, not liking to get into fights with those he cares about and would really rather not interact at all if he thinks things are going in a direction that will cause upheaval.
Crushes: Steve/Stoneheart
Other: I wanted to put him in a clan with water, but that was GriffinClan and I don't think that would go over well with his personality. So that was PegasusClan or PhoenixClan, and I already have someone in PhoenixClan, sooo? Either works, of course. Rather up to you.
Code: Green Sky
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SN: mintedstar/fur
Cat’s Name: Storm/Icemask
Gender: Female
Eye color: Green
Pelt Color: a pale gray she-cat with white legs and light dusting of white fur on her muzzle and around her eyes
Birth Clan: HydraClan
Chosen Clan: PegasusClan
Rank: Deputy
Primary Element: Spirit
Secondary Element: Sky
Power: N/A
Mark: N/A
What was lost: N/A
How they got to the clan: Born into it as a second generation cat. Her parents were killed by a fox.
Feelings towards the other clans: Doesn't care for them very much.
Personality: On the surface, she appears to be very caring, but has an undercurrent of ice. Perhaps she was named for that instead of her markings. Try to get on her good side if you can, it is harder than it first appears. Though she might act friendly, you can never truly know what she thinks of you.
Crushes: Gull/Gullfeather
Other: I'm just tossing in some of my OCs from a fan fic. XP Figured I'd use your RP to develop them.
Code: Green Sky
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If he went crazy they could just kill him. He just can't die from like drowning or like a tree fallen on him. Stuff like that. (Me trying so hard to get this to make sense)
