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Post by ⌭ ᑕᖇᑌIᑎᑎ ᔕᗩOᒪ ⌭ on Jun 15, 2017 16:24:20 GMT -5
Oh boy here we go...I'm actually doing this. Welcome all to my terrible OC from when I was 8! Or 9...I don't know. I've decided to release all my terrible stories from when I was a young lad, and here's the first one. The only one I actually completed... Please note I made it a little bit worse than it originally was just so you guys wouldn't get too bored. And without further adue, here is, Silverdoves Suffering! Some buddies that probably want to see this : Basement Cat @victorious 𝕡𝕖𝕡𝕡𝕖𝕣𝕞𝕚𝕟𝕥 @aquathepiplup ᴄᴀʟᴀᴍɪᴛʏ @winterlynx @thistlereed finland kinkajou Moonblazer nem @risingwingbriarjay86 @leopardbreath7ate9 Leafshine @boredcat11 Dancing_Totodile iiilauren Fans: 𝕡𝕖𝕡𝕡𝕖𝕣𝕞𝕚𝕟𝕥 ᴄᴀʟᴀᴍɪᴛʏ tinybreeze @victorious kinkajou @thistlereed Basement Cat Wyver @boredcat11 @rainbowclaw Dingoleap shortstop EthanTheAnnus ripplestorm 🍁Searipple101🍁 ☾ Cʀᴇsᴄᴇɴᴛ ☽ Ivyfang [~Ghost Writer~] @redheartofriverclan (I'll likely move the fans to a new post this is temporary)
Silverdoves SufferingAllegiances
Leafclan:
Leader: Roaringstar - very fierce, scary, and big brown tom yellow eyes
Deputy: Roughfur - cream tom with black stripes, green eyes
Medicine Cat: Starrynight - black she cat with a white belly, paws, and white specks, and a star on her forehead, a green gem on her leg, and green eyes (Apprentice - Frostpaw - white she cat blue eyes)
Warriors:
Dead-eye - gray male wolf, very large, one missing eye, green eyes
Rosefall - brown she cat blue eyes, wears a rose
Wolfbark - gray tom, blue eyes (looks like a wolf)
Whitefur - white she cat blue eyes
Shadowheart - black she, red heart design on chest, Amber eyes
Braveheart - ginger tabby tom, white belly, one yellow and one green eye (very handsome)
Leafpelt - brown tabby she cat green eyes
Moonstream - beautiful blue/gray and white tabby she blue eyes, bang over one eye
Watersplash - white she cat blue splotches, blue eyes
Splashwater - white she cat blue splotches, blue eyes
Ratfang - brown tabby tom red eyes
Grayclaw - gray tom, white paws, green eyes
Liontail - gold tabby tom, amber eyes (looks like a lion)
Skycloud - pale white and gray tom amber eyes
Queens:
Snowwhistle - white she cat with black paws, swirly striped on her cheeks, freckles, black ears, black specks, a gray chest, a black bang over one eye, and green eyes (mother to Bravehearts kits - Silverkit - pretty pale silver she kit with aqua blue eyes and a purple bang over one eye, Shimmerkit - white Siamese she cat with dark blue eyes, Ciderkit - ginger tom with white and darker spots, one green and one yellow eyes, Deadlykit - black tom, white tabby stripes, green eyes)
Bluewish - navy blue she cat yellow eyes, white tail tip and paws (mate to a rogue named Bear - scary brown tabby tom amber eyes, mother to Boltkit - navy blue tom with a single white paw, amber eyes)
Apprentices:
Rockpaw - pale brown tom amber eyes (mentor - Ratfang)
Flowerpaw - calico she cat green eyes (mentor - Shadowheart)
Elders:
Birdwing - brown she cat amber eyes
Eldernose - deaf gray tom amber eyes
Fireclan
Leader: Meteorstar - large ginger tabby tom amber eyes
Deputy: Slashclaw - brown tom gold eyes
Warriors:
Peacefur - pretty white she cat blue eyes
Waterclan
Leader: Riverstar - gray she cat blue eyes
Deputy: Greenfang - brown tabby tom yellow eyes
Warriors:
Redmoon - red tom, white chest, amber eyes
Hateheart - fuzzy black tom, red eyes
Lightclan:
Leader: Heavenstar - gold and white tabby she cat with bright blue eyes
Deputy: Devilfang - ugly dark gray and black tabby tom, yellow eyes (the stripes being gray)
Warriors:
Brighthalo - pretty gold tabby she cat with blue eyes and white paws
Spirits:
Sun - gold she cat blue eyes, star on chest, gem on forehead
Fire - ginger tom yellow eyes
Electricity - yellow tom green eyes
Nature - brown she cat green eyes
Water - Russian blue she cat blue eyes
Light - gold she cat, blue eyes (Suns twin sister)
Fun fact: Snowwhistle and Braveheart are how I imagined my parents to look like as cats. |
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Post by ⌭ ᑕᖇᑌIᑎᑎ ᔕᗩOᒪ ⌭ on Jun 15, 2017 16:24:50 GMT -5
Prologue:
Some cats gathered around a pool full of stars, staring down into the water. They each seemed very serious. One of them was a brown tabby tom, who spoke with big green eyes,
"This is a problem." He said seriously.
"We know Leaf." A blue she cat said.
"We have to think of something Water." Leaf said.
"We know what to do." Fire, a ginger tom said.
"But, does she need to suffer for it?" Light said, her blue orbs glowing and her gold pelt ruffling.
"Yeah." Fire said.
"I guess we know what we're doing now..." Leaf said with a heavy sigh, knowing what's to come.
"Alright, I'll tell Starrynight." Water said and she walked away.
Chapter 1: Destined for Destiny
A very beautiful white and black she cat was in the nursery, she had very luminous green eyes that looked at four small figures at her belly.
"What should we name them?" A ginger tom said from behind her.
"I think Shimmerkit for the Siamese." The white and black she cat said.
"How about Ciderkit for the ginger tom?" Braveheart said. "I love cider."
The she cat nodded, "What about the black tom?" She asked.
"Deadlykit! That's a perfect name for him!" Braveheart said. “I bet he’ll be a great warrior!”
"The silver she cat is hard to name..." Snowwhistle said.
"I dunno either. It needs to be a perfect name." Braveheart said.
"Mabye Silverkit?" Snowwhistle said.
"Oh my god that's the best name ever Snowwhistle!" Bravehearts eyes shined purring at he kissed his mate.
They looked at their kids happily.
-2 weeks later-
Silverkit had not opened her eyes yet, and her siblings ran outside.
"We got permission to go outside!" Shimmerkit shouted happily.
"Yey yey yeah yeah!" Ciderkit yelled.
Deadlykit flipped his hair and followed his siblings.
Snowwhistle was left to tend to Silverkit, "I wish you'd open your eyes." She said, "All your siblings are out playing without you." Suddenly Snowwhistle heard a large crash like something was being knocked over, Rockpaw yelled, "Darn kits knocked over my fortress!" Snowwhistle got up and walked out, and another kit who has been born a moon prior waked over to Silverkit. He prodded her with his snow white paw. He looked at her with bright amber circles.
The she cat sprung to life and opened her aqua colored eyes, instantly she noticed the kit.
"Boltkit?" She exclaimed.
"Hi." Boltkit said.
"Why'd you wake me up?" Silverkit asked.
"Wake you up?" Boltkit repeated.
"I was sleeping. I opened my eyes one week ago." Silverkit said, the two sat silently for a moment.
"Oh." Boltkit said.
Silverkit flipped her hair so it wasn't in the way, "I think we're gonna be friends."
"No." Boltkit said.
Chapter 2: Sibling Bonding Time!
Silverkit was sad that Boltkit didn't want to be her friend. She had gone out to her siblings, who were stomping on the remains of Rockpaws fortress. Rockpaw was grumbling in the corner. But inside he was crying.
"Oh my gosh your finally awake!" Ciderkit said.
"Hi sis!" Shimmerkit said.
"Hi." Deadlykit said as he stomped on the fortress, which was now dust. He kept stomping.
"Hi guys!" Silverkit said.
"We were just gonna play a game!" Shimmerkit said.
"What game is that?" Silverkit asked.
"The 'let's go outside' game!" She responded.
"What's that?" Silverkit asks.
"We go outside and do whatever we want." Deadlykit says.
"OK let's go!" Ciderkit says running towards the camp entrance.
They were stopped when a shiny black she cat stood in front of them, she had a star on her forehead and a sparkling emerald on her leg. She brushed her hair out of the way and looked at the small kits.
"Are you trying to go outside?" She asked.
"Yeah." Shimmerkit said.
"Go to the medicine cat den." She said, shoving the kits inside the medicine cat den.
The kits looked in awe at all the herbs. Ciderkit ate one and spit it onto Shimmerkit.
"Ew no gross!" She said. Shimmerkit screamed and ran away.
Deadlykit started stomping on the herbs.
"No no don't do that!" The she cat said.
Deadlykit jumped off the herbs, and instead stomped on Silverkits tail.
"So why are we here?" Silverkit asked.
"Well, by now you should know that I am Starrynight." Starrynight said.
"But why are we here?" Deadlykit asked. He was laying down now.
"Because I didn't want you to go outside." Starrynight said.
"Oh." Silverkit responded.
Suddenly, two cats called Starrynight. She rushed out of the den.
"Huh? Who's that?" Silverkit said, she and her siblings poked their heads outside the den. They saw a cream tom with black stripes and a big scary brown tom talking to Starrynight.
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Post by ⌭ ᑕᖇᑌIᑎᑎ ᔕᗩOᒪ ⌭ on Jun 15, 2017 16:25:10 GMT -5
it took me way too long to release this Chapter 3: A Prophecy!: "I wonder who those cats are?" Shimmerkit said.
"I dunno." Silverkit responded.
The three cats talked quietly, whispering to each other. The four kits listened. Each of them but Deadlykit gasped in horror when they heard the brown tom speak.
"Did Starclan tell you anything else?" The brown tom said.
"No. just that propechy." Starrynight responded with a very sad disappointed sigh. She brushed her hair in embarrassment.
"That's too bad." Roaringstar said.
"They'll tell us more soon Roaringstar." The cream tom said.
"That's our leader?" Silverkit gasped in shock.
"I guess so." Deadlykit said.
"I hope so Roughfur." Roaringstar said.
"And our deputy?!" Silverkit exclaimed.
"I bet this is important if they're both here." Shimmerkit said.
"I'll ask them more about the propechy tonight." Starrynight said.
The four kits jaws dropped. They were all shocked, except Deadlykit.
"A propechy?!" Ciderkit gasped.
"I bet it's about us!" Shimmerkit said.
"As if." Deadlykit said.
"It must be." Shimmerkit meowed.
"Let's ease drop!" Ciderkit said, "Then we'll know!"
Starrynight followed Roaringstar and Roughfur as they went into the leaders den, which was a tall rock with a cave and ledge. They sat down and faced each other. The four kits snuck over carefully, careful not to be heard. They jumped in a bush by the entrance and peeked out listening in.
"Tell is again Starrynight." Roughfur said, looking at her with green slits.
"It goes like this." Starrynight responded, with a deep breathe she said, "The silver dove shall come down and shine sunlight on the clans, helped by the blue lightning, the generous tree, and calm fire. They will defeat the rough leader and dead eyes."
"What does that mean?" Roaringstar asked. He was clearly confused by the meaning of the propechy.
"I'm still trying to tell." Starrynight said.
"It doesn't make any sense." Roaringstar added.
"Does this mean we're in a propechy?!" Shimmerkit's eyes shined.
"Still doubt it." Deadlykit said.
"This clearly means we are!" Ciderkit said.
Suddenly Roaringstar said, "Thank you Starrynight, you can go now."
Starrynight nodded and walked outside, the kits ducked farther into the bush as she strolled by.
"This changed everything." Silverkit said.
"This changes nothing." Deadlykit said, "We aren't who they're talking about."
"I'm gonna tell Boltkit!" Silverkit said.
Deadlykit flipped his hair, clearly giving up.
"We're gonna think of our team name!" Shimmerkit said.
Ciderkit nodded, "Yeah!"
"How about 'the prophecy isn't about us'?" Deadlykit said.
"That's a stupid name." Shimmerkit said.
"Ok!" Silverkit dashed away. Boltkit will love to hear this! She thought.
Chapter 4: A New Friend?"Boltkit!" Silverkit yelled. She was searching for the blue tom, she wanted to tell him about the prophecy. "Boltkit!" She yelled again.
Boltkit was sheltered in the shade besides the nursery, he was trying to hide from and ignore. Obviously he was failing.
"Boltkit!" Silverkit said she was now beside Boltkit.
"Boltkit I want to tell you something cool!" Silverkit said.
"What?" Boltkit asked.
"It's a prophecy!" Silverkit said.
"You probably made it up." Boltkit said.
"No!" Silverkit said, "Starrynight got a prophecy saying my littermates and I will save the clans!"
"Oh really?" Boltkit was now suddenly interested.
"Yeah!" Silverkit said.
"Cool." Boltkit said.
"Want to come listen with me?" Silverkit said.
"No." Boltkit said.
"Why not?" Silverkit was sad again.
"Because Roughfur hates me." Boltkit said.
"Why?" Silverkit was sadder now.
"I'm the son of a rogue." Boltkit said.
"That's no reason to hate somebody." Silverkit said.
"You mean...you don't hate me because of my backstory?" Boltkit asked.
"Why would I?" Silverkit said.
"You are the first one other than my mom that's liked me." Boltkit said.
"That's sad." Silverkit said, feeling bad for the tom kit.
"Boltkit and Silverkit sitting in a tree, K.I.S.S.I.N.G!" Shimmerkit suddenly pounced on the two as she sang the song.
"NO!" Boltkit screeched running off as he blushed a lot.
"Yeah no." Silverkit said. She was blushing too.
Shimmerkit was laughing, Ciderkit was nearby trying to watch as Deadlykit shielded his eyes.
"Why did you do that Shimmerkit?" Silverkit asked, unable to be mad at her littermate.
"Because I can." Shimmerkit responded.
"Can you apologize to Boltkit?" Silverkit was getting sassy.
"He'll be fine." Shimmerkit said.
"Ciderkit won't be." Deadlykit said, still shielding Ciderkit eyes. He gave a sassy hair flip.
"What did I just hear?" Ciderkit asked very confused.
"Nothing!" Shimmerkit said.
Chapter 5: Dead-Eye!
"Seriously what happened a week ago?" Ciderkit asked.
"Nothing." Shimmerkit said, very embarrassed.
The three siblings had been constantly asked by Ciderkit what happened a week ago. They didn't tell him so he wouldn't get traumatized by the idea of Boltkit and Silverkit kissing! The idea was too much to bear...
"We need to try and do the outside game again." Shimmerkit said.
"How about we play something that won't get us killed?" Deadlykit said.
"We'll be fine!" Shimmerkit said.
"What happened last week?" Ciderkit asked.
"We could play with Flowerpaw and Rockpaw." Silverkit said.
"OK." Shimmerkit said, very disappointed.
The four kits charged over to the two apprentice, who were enjoying a mouse. Flowerpaw and Rockpaw, even though they looked and behaved nothing alike, were twins. The four kits jumped over to them.
"Play with us!" Shimmerkit said.
"Ok sure." Flowerpaw responded.
"Let's play badger!" Ciderkit said.
"There's no way I'M being the badger, Flowerpaw is!" Rockpaw said.
"What?!" Flowerpaw screeched.
"Get her!" Silverkit said playfully.
The four kits and Rockpaw jumped onto Flowerpaw. Despite knowing she couldn't beat all the kits and Rockpaw, Flowerpaw laughed and tried to swat them off.
"Ha ha! I'm a scary badger!" Flowerpaw said.
"We'll defeat you!" Silverkit said.
"Yeah we will!" Ciderkit said.
Suddenly Wolfbark and Whitefur came over and batted Rockpaw gently.
"Rawr we're the badgers friends!" Whitefur said.
"We're gonna help our friend!" Wolfbark said.
Whitefur and Wolfbark were siblings who just became warriors a moon ago. Their sister was the medicine cat apprentice Frostpaw! They loved kits and behaved just like kits.
"Hey no fair your bigger than us!" Ciderkit said.
"We can still beat them!" Shimmerkit said. She leaped on Wolfbark and knocked him over after fighting him a bit.
"Ow!" Wolfbark said.
"Hah! I got him!" Shimmerkit said.
Deadlykit backed up since he didn't want to get involved with this, "This is gonna end badly." He said.
"Yah!" Silverkit said as she jumped onto Whitefur. She knocked the she cat over with a single blow.
"Impressive." Whitefur said. Starrynight was looking at the group.
Suddenly Ciderkit and Shimmerkit started running away from Flowerpaw. They were running over to the other side of camp towards Dead-eye!
"Wait guys stop! Your gonna die!" Rockpaw said.
No one listened to Rockpaw as Ciderkit and Shimmerkit bumped into a sleeping Dead-eye. The kits stopped out of sheer terror as Dead-eye begun to rise. Flowerpaw skidded to a halt and looked up at the wolf.
"Did you just dare wake me up?" Dead-eye growled as he looked at the kits.
"No no we didn't!" Shimmerkit said.
"We didn't we swear!" Ciderkit said.
Flowerpaw was too scared to say anything.
"You'll regret waking me up." Dead-eye growled as he approached the kits with a raised claw.
"LEAVE THEM ALONE!!" Silverkit said as she jumped in front of her siblings.
"Wah?!" Dead-eye exclaimed.
"Leave them alone!" Silverkit repeated, flipping her hair.
"I'd advise doing that." A beautiful blue/gray tabby she cat said. She flipped her hair as she glared at Dead-eye.
Dead-eye seemed defeated. He let out a growl. "You should be glad Roughfur is your mate." Dead-eye growled as he looked at the kits one more time before stalking off.
"Are you ok?!" Whitefur exclaimed as she dashed over.
"I'm sure they're fine." Deadlykit said as he flipped his hair and walked over.
"We're fine, thanks to Silverkit and Moonstream!" Ciderkit said.
Rockpaw helped Flowerpaw up. "Yeah, Dead-eye has a huge temper." Flowerpaw said.
"No kidding." Shimmerkit said.
"I'll be going now. It seems like someone wants to talk to you." Moonstream said.
"Who?" Silverkit asked. Silverkit looked over her shoulder to see Starrynight looking at her. "Oh." Silverkit walked over towards Starrynight, "What do you need me for?"
"Come with me." Starrynight said. The two walked into the medicine cat den.
Chapter 6: The Sad Story
Silverkit aimlessly followed Starrynight into the medicine cat den. Why do I need to come here? She wondered as she looked at Starrynight. Starrynight was organizing some juniper berries and herbs on the other side of the den. The den was a cave with very soft moss for beds and vines hanging from the entrance and ceiling. Silverkit moved her bang because she was growing more impatient for Starrynight to say something. But she didn't get mad, how could she be mad at her medicine cat?
Suddenly Frostpaw walked in, and Starrynight looked up. "You're finally here." Starrynight said.
"I'm sorry I took so long." Frostpaw said, "I had to take care of Eldernose and Birdwing."
"That's OK. I brought Silverkit so we can tell her about her destiny." Starrynight said.
"My destiny?!" Silverkit exclaimed.
"Yeah, your really special." Frostpaw said.
"I knew that the propechy was about my littermates and me!" Silverkit said.
"There more to it." Starrynight said. "There's a story."
"This will be the first time I'm hearing it too." Frostpaw said.
"A story? I'd love to hear it!" Silverkit said.
"OK." Starrynight said. Silverkit and Frostpaw sat down and looked up at Starrynight as she started.
"Long ago, Leafclan lived in peace with Waterclan, Fireclan, and Lightclan. The clans and cats were happy. But things were different, Lightclan was called Darkclan and was ruled by an evil cat called Darkstar. Darkstar made all the clans unhappy and took them over." Starrynight said.
"That's not good." Silverkit said. Starrynight continued.
"Starclan saw that Darkstar was very evil and would destroy the clans. So they chose four cats from each clan to be born with special powers. A cat called Nature had the powers of Nature, she was from Leafclan. A cat called Fire had the powers of fire, he was from Fireclan. A cat called Electricity had the powers of lightning. The final cat was Darkstars daughter Sun, who had the powers of the sun."
"That sounds so cool." Silverkit said.
"I know." Frostpaw said.
"The cats were helped by Water, Waterclans leader, and Light, Suns sister. But because of the cost of Suns powers she lost all her loved ones except Light."
"That's so sad!" Silverkit said.
Frostpaw had a depressed look on her face.
"The four powered cats attacked Darkstar to end his reign of terror! Each cat went after the most powerful warriors and Sun faced Darkstar. Sun killed him, but the powers also meant the other three cats died killing his best warriors. Water was killed during the battle and all Sun had left was her sister Light. The two worked for moons to bring the clan to peace, but Sun was killed protecting Light from a fox, her last words were her renaming Darkclan into Lightclan and telling Light to lead the clan to a better future."
"That's the saddest thing I ever heard!" Silverkit said.
"Yes it's the tale of how the clans formed, and each generation after got cats with the powers to protect the clan from evil." Starrynight said.
"So why are you telling me this?" Silverkit said.
"Because your in a prophecy!" Starrynight said.
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Post by ⌭ ᑕᖇᑌIᑎᑎ ᔕᗩOᒪ ⌭ on Jun 15, 2017 16:25:29 GMT -5
Chapter 7: Destiny!"What?!" Silverkit said.
"Yeah. You have powers." Starrynight said. "It's why you're so strong and kind."
"Year Silverkit your super nice." Frostpaw said.
"So I have powers?" Silverkit moved her hair as she looked at Starrynight.
"Yeah." Starrynight said.
"Do my brothers and sisters?" Silverkit said.
"I don't know." Starrynig said.
"Oh." Silverkit said sadly.
"But you need to start your training." Starrynight said.
"Training?" Silverkit repeated.
"Yeah we'll help you!" Frostpaw said.
"What kind of training?" Silverkit asked.
"We're gonna teach you how to use your powers." Starrynight said.
"Really?!" Silverkit said.
"Yeah we need to figure out which powers you have." Starrynight said.
"When do I start?" Silverkit asked.
"Now." Starrynight said.
Starrynight stuck a stick in the ground and looked at Starrynight. Silverkit flipped her bang and looked at the stick, "Should I attack it?"
"First let me see your combat skills. Attack the stick." Starrynight said.
"OK." Silverkit said as she leaped at the stick and knocked it over in a single blow.
"Great job!" Starrynight said.
"That's awesome!" Frostpaw said.
This is great! Silverkit thought. I am in a prophecy! I'm going to save the clans!
"Try knocking Frostpaw over." Starrynight said and she gestured towards her apprentice. Frostpaw was standing read for battle.
"OK!" Silverkit said as she ran over to Frostpaw. She swiped her paw in Frostpaw face, but she didn't use her claws. Then she jumped on her and pinned her to the ground all before Frostpaw could say "great Starclan".
"Oh my gosh." Frostpaw gasped, "Your amazing!"
"Thank you." Silverkit said, she was very embarrassed.
"Starrynight." A voice said. Frostpaw and Silverkit looked up to see Roughfur standing at the entrance, "Roaringstar wants to see you again."
"Ok." Starrynight said. She walked out of the den. "Come back tommorow Silverkit." Starrynight said. Frostpaw left the den to go gather herbs.
Silverkit looked at Roughfur. He glared at Silverkit before leaving. I wonder what that was about? Silverkit thought. I'm going to find Boltkit. Chapter 8 : Boltkit is Lonely
(I can't get the proper font to work, can't undo Bold, so I'm changing it)
Silverkit looked for Boltkit everywhere but couldn't find him. She was getting worried. Suddenly she saw Watersplash and Splashwater, they were twins who were sunbathing in the middle of camp. She walked over to them.
"Hi." Silverkit said.
"Hi Silverkit." Splashwater said.
"Hi Silverkit." Watersplash said.
Which one is which? Silverkit thought. They both look the same!
"Do you need something Silverkit?" Both of them said.
Starclan help me. Silverkit thought.
"Have you seen Boltkit?" Silverkit asked.
"He's gone off." Both of them said.
"Where?" Silverkit asked.
"I don't know." Splashwater said.
"Not a clue." Watersplash said.
"OK thanks anyway." Silverkit walked off.
Sikverkit started looking around camp again. She was beginning to wonder if he was even there. Then she tripped on something. She looked down to see she had tripped on Boltkit who was walking towards the nursery.
"Ow..." Boltkit said.
"There you are!" Silverkit said.
"What do you want?" Boltkit said.
"I wanted to ask you something." Silverkit said.
"What's that?" Boltkit asked.
"Why does Roughfur hate you so much?" Silverkit said.
"Because I'm a rogues son." Boltkit said. "I already told you."
"That's very mean." Silverkit said.
"Yeah it is." Boltkit said.
"Want to see what I learned to do?" Silverkit said.
"Sure." Boltkit said.
Silverkit propped a stick and stuck it in the ground. She crouched down and pounced on it.
"You learned to jump. Amazing." Boltkit said.
"It's a warriors pounce!" Silverkit said.
"Yeah that pounce was awesome! Quit being a jerk Boltkit!" Rockpaw said walking over.
Boltkits ears flattened sadly and he walked away. Silverkit felt very bad, but she couldn't be mad at Rockpaw. She flipped her hair and followed Boltkit into the nursery. She saw Bluewish lying down and Boltkit was talking to her. She walked up to Boltkit.
"Hey Boltkit are you OK?" Silverkit asked.
"No." Boltkit said.
"Rockpaw didn't mean to be mean." Silverkit said.
"Yeah he did." Boltkit said.
Silverkit didn't even get to comfort Boltkit before Shimmerkit came rushing in.
"SIlverkit hurry something happened!" Shimmerkit said.
"What happened?" Silverkit asked.
"Roughfur going outside alone!" Shimmerkit said,
"Why should we care?" Boltkit said.
"We're going to follow him!" Shimmerkit said.
"Ok." Silverkit said following Shimmerkit.
I'm going to use the next save spot to add the next chapters.
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Post by ⌭ ᑕᖇᑌIᑎᑎ ᔕᗩOᒪ ⌭ on Jun 15, 2017 16:25:40 GMT -5
Chapter 9: Suspicion
Silverkit ran up to her other siblings. Deadlykit and Ciderkit were waiting by the camps entrance.
"Is Boltkit coming to?" Ciderkit asked.
"Yeah." Boltkit said.
"Alright." Deadlykit said. "Don't blame us when Shimmerkit gets us killed."
"We're not going to die!" Shimmerkit said.
"Let's go!" Silverkit said.
"OK." Shimmerkit said.
The five kits rushed outside into the forest.
"This place is awesome!" Silverkit said.
"Look at the flowers!" Shimmerkit said.
"I've never been out here before!" Ciderkit said.
"Where did Roughfur go?" Deadlykit said.
"This way!" Boltkit said running into the forest.
Silverkit followed him first. Boltkit stopped in front of a small clearing. Silverkit bumped into him and didn't see why he stopped. She looked into the clearing and saw Roughfur talking to a black tom, brown tom, and black and gray tabby tom.
"We are ready Roughfur." The black tom said.
"Good Hateheart." Roughfur said.
"No one suspects anything." The black and gray tom said.
"Yeah we are ready! When are we going to attack?" The brown tom said.
"It'll be soon Slashclaw. We need to find the last powered cats!" Roughfur said.
"Even the last ones can't protect the clans from us!" Devilfang said.
Everyone but Boltkit gasped.
"They're going to attack us?!" Shimmerkit said. Deadlykit covered her mouth.
"We need to tell Roaringstar!" Ciderkit said.
"Listen!" Boltkit said.
Starclan help us. Silverkit thought. She chewed on her hair from stress.
"We need to wait to attack." Roughfur said.
"Why?" Hateheart said.
"We need to find the last super powered cats." Roughfur said.
"Fine we'll wait." Devilfang said.
"Ok." Roughfur said turning and walking away.
"Run!" Shimmerkit said as Roughfur walked over. Shimmerkit turned and ran. Deadlykit pushed Ciderkit up and followed. Ciderkit ran behind. Boltkit got up and ran away. Silverkit tried to run but she tripped on Boltkits tail.
"What are you doing here?" Roughfur growled.
Chapter 10: Getting Framed
Silverkit was scared. Roughfur was standing and glaring at her. Silverkit flipped her hair and looked at Roughfur.
"What are you doing here?" Roughfur said.
"J-J-J-Just exploring." Silverkit said.
"Your not supposed to be our here." Roughfur said.
"Dont tell my parents!" Silverkit said.
"Oh they are gonna know you been out here." Roughfur said picking up Silverkit.
I'm in so much trouble. Silverkit thought.
Roughfur walked back to camp with Silverkit and dropped her at camps entrance. Everyone was frantically searching for her except for Dead-Eye. It seemed like camp was turned inside out. Snowwhistle and Braveheart looked over and saw Roughfur with Silverkit and ran over to her quickly.
"Oh my gosh where did you find her?" Braveheart said.
"Are you OK sweetie?" Snowwhistle said hugging Silverkit and kissing her.
"I'm O-" Silverkit said but Roughfur interrupted.
"She was outside camp." Roughfur said.
"Why were you out there?!" Snowwhistle said.
"Yeah your not supposed to be out there!" Braveheart said.
"I was-" Silverkit said but she was cut off again.
"She was trying to leave Leafclan." Roughfur said.
"What?!" Snowwhistle said.
"Silverkit your in big trouble." Braveheart said.
"NO!" Silverkit said, she flipped her hair in shock, but she couldn't object to her parents. I hate being in trouble. She thought.
"You are grounded for a moon!" Snowwhistle said.
"Aw..." Silverkit said.
Silverkit walked to the nursery. Her bang and tail dropped sadly. Silverkit was so embarrassed and she looked really sadly at her littermates and Boltkit.
"Sorry we left you." Shimmerkit said.
"Yeah we feel really bad." Ciderkit said.
"It's Boltkits fault." Deadlykit said.
Boltkit looked sad.
"You shouldn't get in trouble by yourself." Shimmerkit said.
"Yeah they don't know about Roughfur!" Ciderkit said.
"They're too stupid to listen." Deadlykit said.
"It's OK guys...." Silverkit said. She walked into the nursery. ".......Bye......"
"Be Silverkit." The kits said. Boltkit looked guilty.
Silverkit walked in the nursery and layed down. She shielded her eyes with her bangs. "Why doesn't anyone believe me........?" She said. Silverkit started crying. She cried herself to sleep.
Chapter 11 : Secret Training
"Hey Silverkit wake up!" Someone said. Silverkit woke up sad, "Huh?" She said. She had been stuck in the nursery for 3 days now, and was very upset because of it.
"I'm gonna take you to train!" Starrynight said.
"You are?!" Silverkit said.
"Yeah." Starrynight said.
"Will I get in trouble?" Silverkit asked, suddenly very worried.
"No. I'll tell them your out by my request." Starrynight winked.
"OK!" Silverkit said.
They walked out of the nursery and Silverkit got some funny looks. Shadow Heart walked over, "Why are you out of the nursery?" She said.
"Starrynight said I could leave." Silverkit said.
"Yeah well I say you can't." Shadowheart picked up Silverkit and attempted to throw Silverkit back into the nursery, but Silverkit was caught by Leafpelt.
"Shadowheart you shouldn't do that!" Leafpelt said. "Leave the kids alone!"
"But she's still punished." Shadowheart said.
"Starrynight said she could leave." Leafpelt said.
"Alright fine." Shadowheart stomped off.
"Are you OK Silverkit?" Leafpelt said.
"Yeah." Silverkit said.
"Ok good." Leafpelt said and she walked off.
"Hey Silverkit are you feeling happy now?" Boltkit walked over. Her siblings were behind and Deadlykit flipped his hair and tilted his head sideways as he walked over to his sister.
"Yeah." Silverkit said. "Leafpelt just saved me!" She said.
"Ok." Boltkit said.
"That's cool!" Shimmerkit said.
"Yeah Leafpelts nice." Ciderkit said.
"Whatever, most of the people here are jerks." Deadlykit said.
"Ok well I need to go train now." Silverkit said.
"Bye." All her siblings said.
"Bye." Boltkit said.
Silverkit walked off to Starrynight. "Let's train." Starrynight said. They went into the Medicine Cat Den. Starrynight had placed a bunch of rocks and bark up so Silverkit could attack them. "Ok Silverkit attack the bark. Try to use your powers." Silverkit jumped at the bark, and snapped it in half. "Good but use your powers." Starrynight said.
"But how do I use my powers?" Silverkit said.
"You have to figure that out." Starrynight said.
That's gonna be hard. Silverkit thought. She concentrated hard and glared at the rock, suddenly a beam of light bursted into the medicine cat den and shone on Silverkit and she shot the rock with a bright laser. The rock bursted into a million pieces! Starrynight gasped. The entire clan swarmed around the medicine cat den.
"What happened?" Roaringstar said.
"Is Silverkit Ok?" Snowwhistle said.
"Where's Silverkit?" Braveheart said.
Roughfur glared into the den. Dead-eye stood beside him.
"That was weird." Skycloud said.
Silverkit looked in embarrassment at her clanmates. Starrynight looked up at them, "What do you mean?"
"The light!" Roaringstar said.
"I was just showing Silverkit herbs." Starrynight said.
"Oh..." Roaringstar said.
"So she's Ok?" Snowhistle said.
"Yeah." Starrynight said.
"Ok." Snowwhistle said. She walked away.
Everyone else walked away.
Starrynight turned to Silverkit. "Trainings over for today." She said.
"But why? I was doing good!" Silverkit asked.
"Go back to the nursery." Starrynight said pushing Silverkit urgently into the nursery. She turned and ran out of camp.
What was that about? Silverkit thought.
Chapter 12 : The Attack |
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Post by ⌭ ᑕᖇᑌIᑎᑎ ᔕᗩOᒪ ⌭ on Jun 15, 2017 16:25:53 GMT -5
Save spot
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Post by ⌭ ᑕᖇᑌIᑎᑎ ᔕᗩOᒪ ⌭ on Jun 15, 2017 16:26:07 GMT -5
Save spot
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Post by ⌭ ᑕᖇᑌIᑎᑎ ᔕᗩOᒪ ⌭ on Jun 15, 2017 16:26:20 GMT -5
Save spot
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Post by ⌭ ᑕᖇᑌIᑎᑎ ᔕᗩOᒪ ⌭ on Jun 15, 2017 16:26:32 GMT -5
Save spot
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Post by ⌭ ᑕᖇᑌIᑎᑎ ᔕᗩOᒪ ⌭ on Jun 15, 2017 16:26:42 GMT -5
OK
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Post by kinkajou on Jun 15, 2017 16:35:05 GMT -5
ok but those are some bad names and descriptions
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Post by 𝕡𝕖𝕡𝕡𝕖𝕣𝕞𝕚𝕟𝕥 on Jun 15, 2017 16:39:47 GMT -5
I can't wait to see this.
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Asexual
Raging Storm
ᴄᴀʟᴀᴍɪᴛʏ
this rock IS my fist
Pronouns: she/her or they/them
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Post by ᴄᴀʟᴀᴍɪᴛʏ on Jun 15, 2017 16:58:33 GMT -5
Watersplash and Splashwater are my two most favorite characters.
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Post by ⌭ ᑕᖇᑌIᑎᑎ ᔕᗩOᒪ ⌭ on Jun 15, 2017 18:07:51 GMT -5
ok but those are some bad names and descriptions Welcome to my eight year old mind |
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Post by ⌭ ᑕᖇᑌIᑎᑎ ᔕᗩOᒪ ⌭ on Jun 15, 2017 18:08:08 GMT -5
Watersplash and Splashwater are my two most favorite characters. They are the best characters |
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Post by ⌭ ᑕᖇᑌIᑎᑎ ᔕᗩOᒪ ⌭ on Jun 15, 2017 18:09:22 GMT -5
I can't wait to see this. Same |
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Post by Deleted on Jun 15, 2017 18:32:45 GMT -5
I can't wait
no seriously this is gonna be fun
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Post by tinybreeze on Jun 15, 2017 18:34:06 GMT -5
Lemme guess: Hateheart will be a major antagonist/from an evil clan/someone who is really mean to Silverdove?
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Post by ⌭ ᑕᖇᑌIᑎᑎ ᔕᗩOᒪ ⌭ on Jun 15, 2017 18:40:09 GMT -5
Lemme guess: Hateheart will be a major antagonist/from an evil clan/someone who is really mean to Silverdove? How'd you know? |
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Post by ⌭ ᑕᖇᑌIᑎᑎ ᔕᗩOᒪ ⌭ on Jun 15, 2017 18:41:41 GMT -5
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Post by tinybreeze on Jun 15, 2017 18:42:25 GMT -5
Lemme guess: Hateheart will be a major antagonist/from an evil clan/someone who is really mean to Silverdove? How'd you know? Oh, just a lucky guess. And Devilfang will probably take over Lightclan or something |
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Post by ⌭ ᑕᖇᑌIᑎᑎ ᔕᗩOᒪ ⌭ on Jun 15, 2017 18:43:28 GMT -5
Oh, just a lucky guess. And Devilfang will probably take over Lightclan or something You'll see..... *evil laughter* |
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Post by tinybreeze on Jun 15, 2017 18:44:09 GMT -5
"blue orbs glowing" Yep. Definitely an old shame.
Also why does the prologue remind me of the prologue from Starkit's Prophcy?
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Asexual
Raging Storm
ᴄᴀʟᴀᴍɪᴛʏ
this rock IS my fist
Pronouns: she/her or they/them
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Post by ᴄᴀʟᴀᴍɪᴛʏ on Jun 15, 2017 18:44:10 GMT -5
I like how FireClan consists of only one warrior, a deputy, and a leader.
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Post by ⌭ ᑕᖇᑌIᑎᑎ ᔕᗩOᒪ ⌭ on Jun 15, 2017 18:45:50 GMT -5
I like how FireClan consists of only one warrior, a deputy, and a leader. I was too lazy to make more characters, so my young mind would just say there's more than three |
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Post by 𝕡𝕖𝕡𝕡𝕖𝕣𝕞𝕚𝕟𝕥 on Jun 15, 2017 18:54:11 GMT -5
10/10 prologue.
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Post by kinkajou on Jun 15, 2017 18:55:44 GMT -5
"Does she have to suffer?" "Yeah."
A+ dialogue
Also, orbs
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Post by Deleted on Jun 15, 2017 19:04:16 GMT -5
I W O N D E R W H O T H E V I L L I A N I S
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Post by 𝕡𝕖𝕡𝕡𝕖𝕣𝕞𝕚𝕟𝕥 on Jun 15, 2017 19:10:23 GMT -5
"Oh my god that's the best name ever Snowwhistle" —Braveheart.
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