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Post by Deleted on Jun 12, 2017 9:58:00 GMT -5
I've been thinking of making a clan called Jeweledclan. It's a clan where when kits are three moons, they are sent to the Stonepool to find a jewel and bring it back. What color and kind that jewel is depends on what they'll be in the future. For example, if a kit gets a faint, light blue stone that means that they'll have a special connection to water and become a water spirit when they die. You guys get it?
I need a banner! I'll pay whoever does it for me (It needs to be good.) 150 coins/money. I would like it to say Jeweledclan~Your Destiny Lies In The Jewels.
I also need a layout! I'll pay whoever does it for me 150 coins/money. I don't really care what color it is, just not something to bright.
I need someone to help me think of the story/characters/territory. I know there's the Stonepool, but I don't know much else.
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Post by Deleted on Jun 12, 2017 18:15:28 GMT -5
I don't really need the layout. Just the banner.
I'm working on making a list of all jewels. It might be a while till I get it posted.
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Post by Deleted on Jun 13, 2017 7:22:36 GMT -5
Bump
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Post by featherdapple on Jun 14, 2017 8:19:26 GMT -5
I can help with the story/clans/territory, but not so much on the art stuff.
Sounds like a great idea over all.
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Post by Deleted on Jun 14, 2017 8:22:28 GMT -5
(Ok! Thanks! So, let's work on the leader of the clan...I''m thinking a male with a black pelt with a white underbelly, paws, and tip of tail. He'll have amber eyes. I'm stuck on the name though. Do you have any ideas?)
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Post by featherdapple on Jun 14, 2017 10:22:50 GMT -5
Maybe:
Stormstar,
Cloudstar,
Blackstar,
Shunkstar,
Shadowstar,
or Shadestar
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Post by Deleted on Jun 14, 2017 11:57:32 GMT -5
Shadowstar it is!
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Post by Deleted on Jun 14, 2017 12:06:46 GMT -5
Now, his history. This is what I think so far:
He doesn't have a mate. He does have one daughter, who is a warrior. Her name is Dreamshadow. He had her with a rogue named Jingle. Once he was called to be clan leader by the previous clan leader he abandoned her for his clan. He was clan born. His parents died from unknown causes.
Anything else you think should be added?
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Post by featherdapple on Jun 14, 2017 14:31:21 GMT -5
Nope, I think it sounds great.
Also, does the jewel the kit brings back determine whether the kit will be a warriors or a medicine cat?
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Post by Deleted on Jun 14, 2017 16:12:36 GMT -5
Oh, yes! That's a great idea! I'll try to get the list of jewels out sometime tomorrow.
Ok. Do you have any ideas for the jewels?
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Post by featherdapple on Jun 14, 2017 16:59:53 GMT -5
Well here are some jewels we could use. I haven't come up with what they mean yet.
Emeralds,
Diamonds,
Sapphires,
Rubies,
Amethyst,
Gold (it's not really a jewel though),
Pearls,
Opal,
and Garnet
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Post by Deleted on Jun 14, 2017 17:01:41 GMT -5
Good idea! Emeralds are green so maybe they could mean that the kit will be able to grow plants on it's own?)
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Post by featherdapple on Jun 14, 2017 17:05:52 GMT -5
That would be great.
Rubies could maybe have something to do with blood.
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Post by Deleted on Jun 14, 2017 17:16:36 GMT -5
Hm...maybe Ruby can have something to do with death instead of blood? Like the kit who gets the ruby will be able to make plants and prey die at first, but when they get older they might be able to make whole cats die depending on how good at it they are.
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Post by featherdapple on Jun 15, 2017 7:53:22 GMT -5
Good Idea,
Maybe lighter colored stones could deal with the sun/light, and darker colored stones could deal with the moon/darkness.
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Post by Deleted on Jun 15, 2017 8:12:21 GMT -5
Good idea!
I have an idea for the deputy. Her name can be Crystalblade. She is a fluffy white she-cat with pale blue eyes. She has the Crystal stone. She used to be a loner name Haze. When she searched for her first stone, she got Crystal. Which means that whoever gets it becomes the deputy. They also have Ice powers. This good?
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Post by featherdapple on Jun 15, 2017 9:39:52 GMT -5
It's great,
Maybe since there are so many blue jewels, kits that would be warriors get blue stones.
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Post by Deleted on Jun 15, 2017 11:57:32 GMT -5
Great idea! I have an idea for the medicine cat.
Her name is Opalsong. She is a light gray shorthair. She had pure blue eyes. She is very calm and collected. If any kit gets Opal, that means that they will grow up to be a medicine cat. If they get Opal they obvivously have healing powers.
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Post by Deleted on Jun 15, 2017 12:02:18 GMT -5
Maybe Garnet could have something to do with fire...
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Post by featherdapple on Jun 15, 2017 12:34:33 GMT -5
Great ideas!
Should we get started on the territory?
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Post by Deleted on Jun 15, 2017 13:10:12 GMT -5
Sure! We also need a list of jewels.
I'm thinking the camp will in a small forest with lots of ivy hanging on trees. In the middle of the camp is a small pond. The kits den is a small bramble thicket with ivy hung over the roof. Do you have any ideas for the warriors den?
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Post by Deleted on Jun 15, 2017 13:29:00 GMT -5
Emerald-Kits will be able to grow plants at first, but when they get older they will be able to grow things like trees and bramble thickets. Means that kit will be a good tactian.
Ruby-Kits will be able to make prey and plants die at first, but when they get older they might even be able to make whole cats die. Means that kit will have a harder life than most.
Crystal-Means that kit will become deputy next. The kit can make small ice blocks at first, but when they get older they could trap a whole cat in an ice block. Means that kits will be a warrior.
Opal-Means that the kit has healing powers and will grow up to become a medicine cat. They will be able to heal small cuts at first, but then they might even be able to revive cats after they have died.
Diamond-Means that kits will be able to make small orbs of water. When they get older they will be able to make big waves. Means that kit will be a warrior.
Sapphire-Means that kits will be able to make small orbs of darkness at first. When they get older they will be able to make the sun go out of a small amount of time. Means that kit will betray the clan one day.
Amethyst-Means that kits will be able to make a small ilusion in someone’s mind at first. When they get older they will be able to change memories. A very rare power. Means that the kit will be very smart.
Gold-Means that kit will be able to make time go faster by a few second at first. When they get older they will be able to make time go back by days, even months. But only for a small amount of time. Means that kit will be a valuable cat to have.
Pearl-Means that kit will have no powers at all. A very unlucky stone to get.
Garnet-Means that kit will be able to make small wisps of fire at first. When they get older they will be able to make small, controled fires. Means that kit will become a warrior.
Quartz-Means that kit will be able to make small cracks in the earth at first. When they get older they will be able to make small earthhquakes.
Topaz-Means that kit will be able to nothing at first. When they get older they will be able to appear dead but have their spirit floating around. The rarest power of all.
Agate-Means that kit will be able to change colors at first. When they get older they will be able to change the shape of almost everything around them.
Jade-Means that kit will be able to change the flow of the wind at first. When they get older they will be able to make whole tornadoes.
Jasper-Will be able to not feel too much pain at first. When they get older they will never be able to feel any pain.
You think this list of jewels is good?
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Post by featherdapple on Jun 15, 2017 17:14:36 GMT -5
The list is good (I feel sorry for a kit who gets pearls  ). The warrior's den could be inside of a bunch of large rocks, and the entrance could be covered with ivy. The apprentice's den could be a hollowed out log. The leader's den could be a hollowed out tree, and when the leader holds a clan meeting, he/she could jump onto one of the lower branches. Do you have any ideas for the elder's and the leader's dens? |
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Post by Deleted on Jun 15, 2017 17:31:29 GMT -5
Great idea for the leader's den! It could be called the Hightree.
I'm thinking maybe a dip in the ground for the elder's den. The cats made little 'stairs' going down and up from the ditch. It is very large.
We have to make a list of prey and predators...
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Non-binary
Novice Creeps
Most active at night and can usually be summoned around noon or later in the day.
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Post by Novice Creeps on Jun 15, 2017 19:37:55 GMT -5
I'd like to help a bit, Miss!
I don't mean to sound rude or imposing, but I'd like to make some minor changes to the list that you have. Mostly to fix some spelling errors and I'd like to discuss some more logical points with you, concerning the powers and the stones. I love your ideas, they make sense for the most part, but some of them lack logical reasoning. A cat being able to make the sun go out? That doesn't make any amount of sense and in a realistic setting, that would literally cause complete destruction, even if it was for a few seconds. However, making it appear like the sun has gone out, that makes sense.
Actually causing the sun to go out is not only logistically impossible, but sounds like it's making a cat way over-powered. I love the idea of cats with powers, but there should be a line somewhere.
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Post by Deleted on Jun 16, 2017 7:52:41 GMT -5
Ok. Thanks for the suggestions Novice! The list that I made wasn't actually the real thing. It was just a little summary of what the powers were going to be like. That's why it doesn't sound super realistic. I would never actually have that on the real thing. It was just a little summary.
Anyway, can you help me out with the territory?
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Post by featherdapple on Jun 16, 2017 8:06:06 GMT -5
I can do the prey/predators list. I assume it will be mostly the same as other clans that live in the forest. Are there any specific prey/predators that you want to have?
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Post by Deleted on Jun 16, 2017 8:08:55 GMT -5
Um...Not really. It can pretty much be the the as the other clans.
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Post by featherdapple on Jun 16, 2017 8:32:06 GMT -5
Okay here's a draft:
Prey:
Mice-Common
Voles-Common
Squirrels-Common
Small birds-Common
Rabbits-Uncommon
Lizards-Rare
Frogs-Very Rare
Predators:
Badgers-Common
Foxes-Common
Owls-Uncommon, only attack kits
Snakes-Rare
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Post by Deleted on Jun 16, 2017 8:39:15 GMT -5
Great! Love it!
We should work on the territory outside the camp now.
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