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Post by ❴ ғα∂ιηg ✦ яεαℓιтү ❵ on Aug 6, 2016 22:33:27 GMT -5
I like the name, lol. I'm Razzmatazz1. I'll follow u, one sec. I honestly don't care if you follow me back or not, I'm just kind of there to talk with my friends. thank you C: okay cool! and thats literally me with the ideas |
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Post by sand dollar on Aug 6, 2016 22:35:14 GMT -5
so if we make it to the next round we can just add our second entry to the same thread we used for round 1, right?
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Post by ❴ ғα∂ιηg ✦ яεαℓιтү ❵ on Aug 6, 2016 22:36:50 GMT -5
so if we make it to the next round we can just add our second entry to the same thread we used for round 1, right? yes! just no editing between the first round due date and the second round announcement |
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Post by Brownie on Aug 6, 2016 22:37:06 GMT -5
So no edits after deadline and before the prompt?
Hopefully it's not too long a span. xD
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Post by ❴ ғα∂ιηg ✦ яεαℓιтү ❵ on Aug 6, 2016 23:00:31 GMT -5
So no edits after deadline and before the prompt? Hopefully it's not too long a span. xD itll be however long it takes me to read it all lol |
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Post by ❴ ғα∂ιηg ✦ яεαℓιтү ❵ on Aug 6, 2016 23:00:47 GMT -5
Ok, before I anger myself thinking about it. Are the people aware that they are seeing in only black and white? Or do they think that they perceive color, and it only really comes about when they meet their soulmate? thats for you to decide |
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Post by ❴ ғα∂ιηg ✦ яεαℓιтү ❵ on Aug 6, 2016 23:09:27 GMT -5
Dam it, lol. Now I gotta figure it out. X3 lol flip a coin if you cant decide |
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Post by ❴ ғα∂ιηg ✦ яεαℓιтү ❵ on Aug 6, 2016 23:18:13 GMT -5
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Post by Splintercat on Aug 7, 2016 2:08:28 GMT -5
Dang that's a cool prompt. Can't write right now (heh, I said write and right right next to each other. Then I said right and right right next- forget it), but I'll be working on it
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Post by kiwi cheesecake on Aug 8, 2016 14:54:24 GMT -5
I remember when a girl in my English lass wrote a story like this. It was really good. But now I'm worried that I'll just write their story. Will there ever be a new prompt, or will everything branch off of this? I'll probably enter either way though.
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Post by ❴ ғα∂ιηg ✦ яεαℓιтү ❵ on Aug 8, 2016 15:14:18 GMT -5
I remember when a girl in my English lass wrote a story like this. It was really good. But now I'm worried that I'll just write their story. Will there ever be a new prompt, or will everything branch off of this? I'll probably enter either way though. for this contest that's the theme, and the prompt for each chapter will center around it |
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Post by kiwi cheesecake on Aug 8, 2016 15:23:03 GMT -5
I remember when a girl in my English lass wrote a story like this. It was really good. But now I'm worried that I'll just write their story. Will there ever be a new prompt, or will everything branch off of this? I'll probably enter either way though. for this contest that's the theme, and the prompt for each chapter will center around it |
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Post by ❴ ғα∂ιηg ✦ яεαℓιтү ❵ on Aug 9, 2016 14:56:54 GMT -5
kiwi cheesecakeAre you entering? If so I'll add you to the chat
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Post by ❴ ғα∂ιηg ✦ яεαℓιтү ❵ on Aug 14, 2016 19:00:21 GMT -5
Polychrome by BrownieErrors Found: 28 Words: 1605 Review: Brownie did it again, captivating as always, their writing pulls in the reader with their vivid descriptions and relatable characters. Despite some grammar and spelling errors, as well as a few choppy sentences it was magnificent. Overall Score: 7.0/10.0 Placement: fifth Everything Was Perfect by 𝕊’𝕞𝕠𝕣𝕖Errors Found: 6 Words: 1170 Review: As always Smore’s gives us an interesting read with characters that have a slight quirk to them that is unique to the writing style. Besides from the change from 1st to 3rd person in the writing it was wonderful. Overall Score: 7.2/10.0 Placement: third You Can’t Change Fate by ๖ۣۜCrossroadsErrors Found: 4 Words: 1381 Review: The characters seem interesting and like as if there is plenty of room for development later on, which is a very good job on Final’s part. The only issue being the swapping of time periods is generally confusing and could be written in a better formation. Overall Score: 6.9/10.0 Placement: last Achromatic by @ivorysprinkles Errors Found: 9 Words: 1964 Review: Ivory delivers an interesting introverted character who many are able to relate to with anxiety. There is the error of changing tenses from 1st to 3rd as well as some slight grammar and spelling errors, other than those it is very well written. Overall Score: 7.1/10.0 Placement: fourth Hues of Love by sand dollarErrors Found: 2 Words: 1212 Review: An interesting take on the prompt for sure, Sand will definitely have readers looking for more. There were few errors, and those I found were minor. Overall Score: 7.5/10.0 Placement: first Bloom by RazzErrors Found: 7 Words: 2891 Review: Razz gives us a very analytical version of what most would make into an emotional story giving it a fresh approach. Other than one major grammar error and a few small ones it was done very well. Overall Score: 7.3 Placement: second |
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Post by 𝕊’𝕞𝕠𝕣𝕖 on Aug 14, 2016 19:04:20 GMT -5
Alright, third place, not bad.
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Post by ๖ۣۜCrossroads on Aug 14, 2016 19:09:26 GMT -5
okay what
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Post by ❴ ғα∂ιηg ✦ яεαℓιтү ❵ on Aug 14, 2016 19:12:33 GMT -5
i had a really hard time following along and was highly confused |
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Post by ๖ۣۜCrossroads on Aug 14, 2016 19:14:22 GMT -5
i had a really hard time following along and was highly confused alright. well i'll just continue to use that as i follow along since i'm eliminated |
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Post by ❴ ғα∂ιηg ✦ яεαℓιтү ❵ on Aug 14, 2016 19:16:31 GMT -5
i had a really hard time following along and was highly confused alright. well i'll just continue to use that as i follow along since i'm eliminated yea sorry, but someone had to go |
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Post by ๖ۣۜCrossroads on Aug 14, 2016 19:19:35 GMT -5
alright. well i'll just continue to use that as i follow along since i'm eliminated yea sorry, but someone had to go yeah, but hey, now that i'm out i get to go crazy with the ideas |
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Post by ❴ ғα∂ιηg ✦ яεαℓιтү ❵ on Aug 14, 2016 19:22:55 GMT -5
yea sorry, but someone had to go yeah, but hey, now that i'm out i get to go crazy with the ideas lol true that |
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Post by Brownie on Aug 19, 2016 21:26:51 GMT -5
nice bump
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Post by ❴ ғα∂ιηg ✦ яεαℓιтү ❵ on Aug 20, 2016 10:26:00 GMT -5
Updated the due date, please check it out if you don't know already
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