Razz
I WANT TO BE A VET DAMNIT
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Post by Razz on Aug 6, 2016 19:36:21 GMT -5
 Welcome everyone, to my story, called Skewed. It's a story about something similar to a zombie apocalypse, and is known to my friends as The Zombie AU. Now, I will admit, that it is a big work in progress, and I can't guarantee that it'll be up on time, but I would love some constructive criticism and other suggestions! So read on, guys, and tell me what you think!  Alrighty, here we go for an explanation!
My name is Razz on the forums, if you haven't already gathered that from my SN. This page is where I am going to be hopefully posting some of my writing for a story that I have nicknamed Skewed, though that may or may not be the final name. For now, that's what it's sticking as.
The basic premise of the story is pretty typical post apocalyptic style, sort of the between time for apocalypse and dystopian future. I will temper down the writing for the forums, so that it isn't nearly as gruesome as I write it in the first place. However, everyone coming into this must know that there will be death, blood, and something quite zombie-esque, though they aren't technically zombies.
It will be mostly told from the point of view of 16 year old Ally, a girl with a mind for strategy. It will travel along with her and the group of people she banded together with in an attempt to survive in a world where something caused a bunch of people to snap all at once. Unbeknownst to them, there is a disease that is transmitted originally through the water in some areas, but later through vegetables and meats that had been imbued with the water that leaked from a chemical plant that people were experimenting at. From there, it is transferable by exchange of bodily fluids, most commonly blood to blood contact. The people infected with the disease have a dormancy period of almost a year, in the time of which the water from the chemical plant was cleaned up after discovering the link, and everything should have gone back to normal. Save the people who had been infected. The disease took effect after that year, effecting the brain and it's neurological sensors, stopping people from having rational thought, or pain. They became sort of super humans with very primitive thoughts, eat, drink, and survive. But because they couldn't feel pain, you have to kill them or they'll keep going, even with eventually mortal wounds.
Some people have a sort of immunity to the disease, but because they don't know that it is a disease, they aren't aware of the possibility of immunity. The only thing that anyone can see is that if you get scratched or bit by the creatures, you're dead.
There is a small group of teens and younger kids that banded together to try and survive in the world that had been created by the disease. Ally is a part of it. There are others as well. They all have their jobs, and they all have their struggles. It's up to them, however, to try and survive. Very few adults survived the first waves, no one knows why. Probably because they didn't have the immunity, or they didn't get up and react as fast as the younger generations. This story will follow that group as they learn how to work amongst their new environment. It's completely their world, every teen's wish.
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Post by Razz on Aug 6, 2016 19:36:37 GMT -5
 Main Characters;
Ally Smith - 5' 6", 16 years old
Blond girl with dark blue eyes and darker natural highlights in her hair. Hair is shoulder length, tucked behind ears, bangs grown out. Slightly tanned skin, subtle freckles across nose and cheeks, very long eyelashes.
Alissa Smith - 5' 9", 16 years old
Blond girl with dark brown eyes and more ruddy natural highlights in her hair. Hair is mid back length, tucked behind ears, bangs grown out. Slightly tanned skin, obvious freckles across nose and cheeks, plus arms.
Supportive Characters;
Mason Jones - 6' 5", 15 years old
Brunette boy with hazel eyes and medium brown hair. Hair is shorter, with closer cut sides than on top. Slightly tanned skin, minimal freckles.
Shane Stone - 5' 10", 16 years old
Black haired boy with dark hazel eyes. Hair is longer in the front and shorter on the sides and back, swept slightly to the left. Very freckly, very white.
Nicholas Stone - 5' 10", 15 years old
Black haired boy with dark brown eyes. Hair is longer in the front with shorter sides and back, swept to the right. On the pale side, but light tan, some freckles.
Milton Locke - 5' 11", 16 years old
Brunette boy with pale green-blue eyes. Hair is shorter on the sides with a longer top that is swept slightly to the left. Slightly tanned skin, a few freckles.
Lauren Parker - 5' 11", 17 years old
Brunette girl with cropped hair that is longer on the left than the right and dark amber gold eyes. Skin is pale tan with a few freckles.
Shauna Black - 5' 3", 16 years old
Brunette girl with green eyes and very, very, very curly hair that bunches up around her head neatly. She is very white and very freckly.
True Conner - 5' 9", 16 years old
Brunette person with hair that is short on the sides and just slightly longer on the top, swept to the left, eyes are blueish green. Skin is medium tan, few freckles.
Sidney Quinn - 5' 7", 16 years old
Blond girl with frizzy hair that is long enough to hang to her hips when wet, normally just below her shoulders. Golden eyes and pale tan skin with freckles.
Cane Grayson - 6' 3", 15 years old
Brunette boy with golden brown eyes and tanned skin. Hair is longer on top with shorter sides, swept to the right. Pale tan skin with no freckles.
Brodie Grayson - 5' 10", 16 years old
Light brunette boy with dark chocolate brown eyes and pale tan skin. Hair is long in the front and medium length in the back and sides. He has a few freckles here and there.
Daphne James - 5' 1", 13 years old
Blond girl with darker brownish red natural highlights and dark blue eyes. Hair is medium length, falling to inbetween her shoulder blades. Skin is pale tan with a few freckles.
Skylar James - 5' 2", 13 years old
Brunette girl with dark brown hair and dark hazel eyes. Hair is long, hanging to the middle of her back braided, small of her back loose. Skin is tan and freckled.
Lizzie Cooper - 5' 3", 16 years old
Brunette girl with dark greenish gold eyes. Hair is long, hangs to hips loose. Skin is medium tan and freckled, with darker tans on her lower legs and arms.
Rainy Piper - 5' 7", 16 years old
Brunette girl with dark blue eyes and very dark chocolate brown hair. Hair is medium length, falling to mid back. Skin is pale with no freckles.
Maddy Anderson - 5' 10", 16 years old
Raven haired girl with dark, striking blue eyes. Hair is long, hanging to her hips loose. Braided with a golden ribbon. Skin is pale tan.
Katlin Flat - 5' 5", 16 years old
Platinum blong girl with medium length hair that falls to mid back loose. Golden yellow eyes, and darker blond streaks in hair. Pale tan skin.
Katy Raymond - 5' 6", 16 years old
Dark blond girl with darker brown roots and greenish gold eyes. Hair is short and cropped up around head, never hanging below ears. Medium tan skin.
Amber Vanbon - 5' 9", 16 years old
Dark brunette girl with very long dark brown hair that falls to her hips. Pale green eyes, skin is pale tan with a few freckles.
Elinor Todd - 5' 4", 16 years old
Dirty blond girl with short, cropped hair that is longer in the front than the sides and back. Ruddy brown roots. Skin is pale with a small bit of tan.
Jill Dawson - 5' 7", 17 years old
Dark brunette girl with dark, chocolate almost black hair and deep blue green eyes. Hair falls to shoulders, and skin is a rich tan color.
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Post by Razz on Aug 6, 2016 19:37:29 GMT -5
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Post by Razz on Aug 6, 2016 19:38:02 GMT -5
post 4 Chapter # / Title - - Lorem ipsum dolor sit amet, consectetur adipiscing elit. Sed nec diam non metus vulputate auctor vel at risus. Donec porttitor ante rhoncus consequat pellentesque. Pellentesque sapien ligula, maximus eu felis gravida, rutrum sollicitudin tellus. Vestibulum vel sem ac lectus ornare egestas et sit amet nisi. Maecenas congue bibendum leo, et luctus enim tempor eget. Nulla facilisi. Quisque gravida auctor justo, id varius urna dictum elementum. Ut gravida diam eu urna ultricies placerat nec eu massa. Nunc nisl urna, ullamcorper quis enim ac, commodo sodales purus. Nam odio tortor, commodo sit amet diam in, lacinia imperdiet enim. Lorem ipsum dolor sit amet, consectetur adipiscing elit. Sed nec diam non metus vulputate auctor vel at risus. Donec porttitor ante rhoncus consequat pellentesque. Pellentesque sapien ligula, maximus eu felis gravida, rutrum sollicitudin tellus. Vestibulum vel sem ac lectus ornare egestas et sit amet nisi. 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Post by Razz on Aug 6, 2016 19:38:15 GMT -5
Random Facts should go here soon, I just have to develop some.
There will be a section here that tracks the food, weapons, and ammo of the group, as well as weapon deployment, who is found and who isn't, discoveries, if anyone gets turned, and overall knowledge of the group.
There will be a section here that tells you every person's weapon affinity and aptitude, as well as their rank among the group, and any unique skills, along with how they were gained.
There will be a section here that is about theme songs for each person, as well as an overall playlist for the story. Listen to it while reading or anytime! They're some good songs.
There will be a section here that tells a bit of the backstory and reason for the choices made throughout the story, for example, the backstory behind some of the pseudonyms that will be chosen, along with the reason for their overall appearance and the singular reason on a case by case basis.
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Post by Razz on Aug 6, 2016 19:38:35 GMT -5
to ~Sandclaw~ - - at Iмpυlѕe ► α ɢrαpнιc ѕнop for the graphics, coding, and layout on this thread. Please do not steal or use any of this layout unless you were given permission by ~Sandclaw~ herself. This layout is only for Razz's use as Razz was the one to request it.
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Post by Razz on Nov 16, 2016 23:24:27 GMT -5
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