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Post by Featherwing on May 25, 2017 14:17:05 GMT -5
[ ★ ] Post Ⅰ || Table of Contents, Welcome [ ★ ] Post Ⅱ || Rules [ ★ ] Post Ⅲ || Joining Form [ ★ ] Post Ⅳ || Names Taken [ ★ ] Post Ⅴ || Credit [ ★ ] Post Ⅵ || Save [ ★ ] Post Ⅶ || Save [ ★ ] Post Ⅷ || Save Shad: There's plenty of amazing clans on these forums, but I'm willing to bet that none of them come close to the amount of dedication and time Fae and I have put into this place. There has been many a day where we did nothing but plan, code, and write. There were even a few breaks, but we always came back to it.
Fae: It all began something like 2-ish years ago. I was invited to lead the ShadowClan of an original 4-Clan rp, and that is where I met one of my favorite people, Shadowstalker. We clicked immediately and started planning for our apprentices to go on wild and crazy adventures together. Only some of this came to fruition, because eventually the clans died, and we were left without a rope. Didn't stop us though, we kept on planning for when the clans were redone and we could finally roleplay what we'd been longing to play out for a while. Cut to a while ago--Shad and I get back to business because no way are we letting our dreams die. Of course, we'd realized our plans couldn't happen in the original way. We had to improvise. Thats's when we got the idea– why not two Clans?
Shad: For me, the seed was planted about three years ago; my youth group drove through New Orleans on the way home from summer camp, and we traveled along Louisiana's iconic highway 10, straight through the swamp. I remember thinking to myself, "What if there was a clan set in a bayou?" From there, the idea only grew. I even presented it at some point to the other leaders of the 4-clan roleplay. Fae's interest was piqued. Soon we were plotting the grounds for a new roleplay, an idea that only grew as our 4-clans died out. We had too much time on our hands, methinks.
Fae: I've always had a weird morbid thing for volcanoes– probably why I identify so much with the Fire Nation, even though I'm supposedly an Airbender *shrugs* moving on. I went on a binge learning spree when Shad and I decided to do this because if we're gonna do this I'm gonna become the local expert on volcanoes for the purpose of this rp. And I did. I've got a plan to roll some dice every month ish to see if we're gonna get, as Shad would say, "boom, medium boom, big boom, or death." I've always wanted to actually live on a volcano but my sense of self preservation tells me that it isn't exactly the best idea. So I'll have an rp on a volcano instead.
Shad: The theme of water versus fire is a classic tale, and we decided to put a unique twist on it. Neither the setting of a bayou nor a volcano are common amongst clans, and we've employed an almost yin-yang link between the two. A great amount of time was spent making sure the territories were realistic in their adjacency. And since we molded our clans from our cats of the four clan roleplay, I'd certainly say some similarities carried over: BayouClan is probably a mix of Shadow and River, while CalderaClan is more Thunder and Wind. Distinctly different cultures, and yet, still clans.
Fae: Thanks for looking at this, buds. Hope you join!
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Post by Featherwing on May 25, 2017 14:18:54 GMT -5
Post Limit We are a semi-advanced clan, and so we expect posts that reflect this. Please post a minimum of three lines while roleplaying (not including OOC comments). We want to discourage too little substance for a proper reply, while at the same time, we do not want to force filler where none is needed. Three lines is the minimum Inactivity For members less than a month: Absence without prior explanation will result in removal after a week of inactivity. They will be tagged in a post here as a warning 24 hours prior: if it goes unanswered, they will be deleted. For members proven reliable in the past, more leniency is granted. Absence without prior explanation will result in a removal after two weeks of inactivity. They will be receive two tagged warnings: one at the end of the first week, and again at the end of the second. Should 24 hours pass after the second with no answer, they will be deleted. Deleted members can rejoin if they choose to. Remember Yourself It's important to take the time and evaluate how your post might affect others in the roleplay. Are you spotlighting (hogging plot attention)? Are you controlling a character that does not belong to you? How realistic are your cats' actions, thoughts, or abilities? Characters Like most clans, we have limitations in what we allow in character. Unrealistic pelt/eye colors or detailed shapes (such as a star) on their fur are not allowed. Take into account what is common in the clan: for instance, black cats are uncommon amongst ashcats but prevalent in swampcats. No special powers. Just keep it realistic, y'all. Try to keep an even ratio of genders if possible. Reach Out Don't sit in your own bubble inside the roleplay. Few things are more boring then members who create their own little world between their own characters, but ignore others. Reach out to other RPers and see if they'd be interested in creating a connection between your cats: siblings, mates, friendships, rivalries. It creates a more complex and compelling story. Seek Permission If you have an idea for a plot point, ask the administrator first before enabling it. It might contradict our intended outline, or we may love it and restructure our story around it! Keep it Appropriate It's alright if it strays a little into the PG-13 territory every now and then, but remain mindful that not every roleplayer enjoys graphic scenes. As such, in fight scenes, describe an appropriate amount of information to be clear without unnecessarily gory details. Sexual scenes are not allowed. Take care with sensitive subjects. Side Note No kit-stealing/styling or herb stealing please. If you want to have a battle, please private message the admins in a group message so we may talk about the possibility.
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Post by Featherwing on May 25, 2017 14:23:16 GMT -5
CHARACTER NAME | Gender | Rank | Age | Clan Lines of physical description ~ Lines of physical description ~ Lines of physical description ~ Lines of physical description ~ Lines of physical description ~ Lines of physical description ~ Description of personality ~ Description of personality ~ Description of personality ~ Description of personality ~ Description of personality ~ Description of personality ~ < Crush / Mate > Family of:
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Post by Featherwing on May 25, 2017 14:24:09 GMT -5
Red Thunder Berry Echo Marble Patched Tumble Ice Squirrel Light Raven Sly Aspen Ewe Dacite Matted Cinder Down Sorrel Seed Lion Pheasant Dove Tiger Proud Little Russet Sand Thrush Furled Rose Fawn Hawk Lightning Flicker Briar Thorn Honey Stag Breeze
Prefixes to never use: Caldera / Moon Mire Shadow Nettle Storm Tawny Moss Fog Lily Jagged Cold Web Frost Cackle Crow Caiman Sumatra Weasel Shade Misty Ant Stealth Rattle Bog Clay Olive Dark Alligator Leech Slate Sedge
Prefixes to never use: Bayou / Moon
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Post by Featherwing on May 25, 2017 14:24:52 GMT -5
To the illustrious ʀᴀɪɴʟᴇᴀғ 🍁 for this layout. Your a treasure and a saint for helping. Much love, my dear. To Saint Ambrosef for being amazing and awesome and partnering up with Faw to make this years in the making rp. To Featherwing , for making the banners and siders and dividers. To illustrators Wayne McLoughlin and Owen Richardson for making the art used in the banners.
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Post by Featherwing on Jun 2, 2017 13:18:45 GMT -5
Open for Joining
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Post by Dragoness on Jun 2, 2017 16:57:33 GMT -5
Shadecreek | Female | Warrior | 3 years | BayouClan She is a sleek, smoky grey tabby with misty blue eyes. Her paws and the tips of her ears and tail are slightly darker, fading to black. Her right ear is nicked, but her keen hearing is actually her main strength. ~ Her personality has been shaped by her experiences as a youth in a harsh rouge group. When she and her brother were given the chance to join the clan, they grabbed it without thought. However, Shadecreek is still a bit of a loner in clan, although she is very grateful of what it has done for her and is an effective and resourceful warrior. She is secretive and closed in personality, making some of the oldest clanmembers a bit wary of her. Regardless of this, she is always polite and very dedicated, kind despite her silence. N/A (yet ooo) Family of: Littermate of Mistytooth and older sister of Antpaw. Daughter of two rogues.
Mistytooth | Male | Warrior | 3 years | BayouClan He is a smoky grey dappled tom with misty blue eyes and a long scar across his flank, gained in a fight with an elder tom in the rogue group he was in as a youth. He is missing the tip of his tail, as well, and is slightly off-balance as a result. ~ He struggled a lot with learning how to hunt and fight when he first joined the clan, but has slowly worked out how to do it with his disability. He is a compassionate, diplomatic tom with a lot of energy. Like his sister, he is very dedicated and resourceful, having found the need to do everything twice as good as everyone else to even be acknowledged. N/A Family of: Littermate of Shadecreek and older brother of Antpaw. Son of two rogues.
Antpaw | Female | Apprentice | 9 moons | BayouClan She is a tall black she-cat with ghost stripes and misty blue eyes. She is lanky in build, and despite her height she weighs less than what is normal. ~ Because of this disadvantage, she has been forced to rely on stealth and unpredictability. She has made sure her fighting skills are above average so no one can ever pick on her for her scrawny look. Her claws are razor-sharp, and her strange, erratic movements make her both a capable hunter and fighter. She has a sharp mind, and even sharper tongue, but doesn't use it when not directly challenged. She sees through rank and background with ease, and doesn't mind befriending outsiders. Her comments tend to be dripping in sarcasm, but she doesn't intend to be mean. N/A Family of: Younger sister of Shadecreek and Mistytooth. Daughter of two rogues.
Aah, this rp looks absolutely stunning! I don't know if I've ever seen someone put so much effort into one rp, but it obviously pays off. I'll be joining CalderaClan, as well, but I need to get some sleep first. See ya!)
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Post by Ƈσяαℓ Mєямαι∂ ღ on Jun 2, 2017 17:07:01 GMT -5
Stealthcreek | She-cat | Warrior | 25 moons | BayouClan Stealthcreek is a small, fluffy blue-grey she-cat. She has stunning blue eyes and a very sweet personality. The she-cat absolutely adores helping and working with kits and young cats. More often than not she is very outgoing and friendly towards most other cats. At first she may be overlooked, but other cats quickly realize their mistake when it comes to a fight. While most of the time Stealthcreek tries to be more polite and kind, she can also be rather clingy. She will do what she can no matter the odds, no matter what challenge is thrown at her. She tends to get jealous of others and it can be her downfall. If someone threatens her or anyone she loves... well, things get ugly. Stealthcreek is very loyal to her Clan and will even risk her life to save it. < N/A > Family of: N/A
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Post by Sand on Jun 2, 2017 17:21:37 GMT -5
BAYOUCLAN CATS ARE DONE - Alligatorsnap, Leechpaw, Sedgpaw & Slatefern. CALDERACLAN CATS ARE DONE - finished Fawnpaw & Thrushwhistle & Furledbriar & Rosepaw
Alligatorsnap | Tom | Warrior | 3.5 years | BayouClan Alligatorsnap is a large, stocky tom. It's no surprise that his dark brooding amber eyes stand out against his coat. He is a paler shade of brown with dark brown, almost jet black mackerel tabby stripes adorning his fur. His fur is unkempt even though it is supposed to be sleek, some darker tufts stick out. This tom is firm and swift when it comes to his own being and that of others. Alligatorsnap is not one to give up nor go easy on his clanmates as he believes that tough love is the best kind and that discipline must be enforced. Though this tough love can lean towards neglect at times and knowing the relationships he has with family or close clanmates, it may be a bit hard to tell as he's quick to judge. < has a(n) ex-mate/current mate depending on if anyone wants the spot > Family of: Leechpaw & Sedgepaw are his daughters | other siblings (to him or his kits), his mate/ex-mate open
Leechpaw | She-cat | Apprentice | 11 moons | BayouClan The only color to succumb to Leechpaw's pelt is ebony black. She has tall, pointed ears along with a thick, long tail. She's medium-furred with silky fur and white whiskers. Leechpaw has vivid amber eyes similar to dark honey. Leechpaw is her sister, Sedgepaw's, partner in crime. She's definitely mischevious and a total trouble-maker. She enjoys teasing and pranking others, though this can lead to a downslide of her being apathetic towards their feelings. It's a topic she'd rather not grasp or bother with as it's tedious and complex. < none > Family of: Alligatorsnap (father), Sedgepaw (littermate, sister) | family spots open
Slatefern | Tom | Warrior | 2.5 years | BayouClan Slatefern was named after his slate-colored fur that may appear in different shades across his coat. Overall, the hues are dark shades of grey and only continuously grow darker. As for his build, he's known to have a slender build along with a very sleek, medium-furred pelt. His eyes are a golden shade of yellow. A nice guy is the best way to describe Slatefern. He's likable and pleasant, meaning he's a good-hearted tom. Unfortunately, he is passive and unassertive; he doesn't like to confront his own demons, but will confront others that are not his. < n/a > Family of: Family members open
Sedgepaw | She-cat | Rank | 11 moons | BayouClan Sedgepaw is a little, lithe feline. She's a darker chestnut brown she-cat with pitch black mackerel tabby markings decorating her pelt. She has longer tufts of fur sticking out in random places, those mostly being around her chest and flank. Sedgepaw has a white chin and throat. Her face is a paler shade of brown with lighter black tabby stripes. She has large, round green eyes with yellow rimming. Though she may seem innocent and naive, Sedgepaw is, unfortunately, the opposite. She's obnoxious, petty, and not to mention bitter. Jealousy causes her to become an instigator, no matter the situation. Messing with Sedgepaw is like asking for a death note. It's hard to get on her good side unless you've somehow charmed her. < nope > Family of: Alligatorsnap (father), Leechpaw/bite (sister, littermate) | family spots open
Thrushwhistle | Tom | Warrior | 2 years | CalderaClan An average sized tom, Thrushwhistle is still lean yet his stature doesn't make him appear any larger than he is. He's a golden brown classic tabby with white patches. A large patch of white covers his chest and all of his legs along with his maw. Thrushwhistle has dull amber eyes. A more assertive feline, Thrushwhistle will stand up for what he thinks is right- no doubt about it. According to his mother, he was a "born leader." He is also decisive and empathetic when it comes to those around him; that's a hint to having him more extroverted traits. < n/a > Family of: family open
Furledbriar | She-cat | Warrior | 2.5 years | CalderaClan Appearing more like heaps of fur, Furledbriar has long fur that is awfully silky. Her pelt isn't all the same color, but three different shades of it. Her chin, chest and belly are pure white. The main part of her body and legs are fade from pale grey to grey. As for her tail and paws, they are slightly darker in shade. She has gleaming green eyes. A loud, intelligent feline, Furledbriar enjoys spouting words like a fountain. She's also quite clingy with her clanmates and not to mention somewhat passive. She can be seen as admirable, though that all rides on your opinion of Furledbriar. < n/a > Family of: family open
Rosepaw | Tom | Rank | 11 months | CalderaClan An unusually small tom, Rosepaw was the runt of his litter and will always be. The colors found on his pelt consist of a light grey-brown, fitting more to his short body and part of his legs. His face has dark grey points which match his tail. He's got white socks on his back paws and only white paws on the front. He has green eyes. Angry and full of angst, Rosepaw doesn't have the best view on life. If anything, it's cynical. It's said that he is very intelligent, but he doesn't show that side of him often. His humor is known to be dry and dark. < N/A > Family of: Family open
Fawnpaw | She-cat | Apprentice | 6 months | CalderaClan A short-furred, average-sized feline, Fawnpaw's stature will be toned to match those of her clan. She has a soft, fawn-colored coat with darker spotted tabby dapples and a pale chest. This feline has almond-shaped eyes, glowing hazel in shade. Fawnpaw is similar to an old soul. She's withdrawn from her fellow apprentices and feels as if she can't connect with them on the same level as they all do together. She's also quite introspective and thoughtful for she usually spends a large amount of her time thinking about anything and everything. Fawnpaw sees herself on a "higher" level than them and wishes to not associate with her denmates. < Crush / Mate > Family of:
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Post by mimikyutie on Jun 2, 2017 17:23:59 GMT -5
Olivepool | She-cat | Warrior | 39 Moons | BayouClan An average sized cat, if leaning a bit to the larger side. She's muscled, even a little bit bulky. She's a dark brown tabby with sleek fur and large patches of black, as well as black mittens and a black underbelly. Her eyes are a bit on the smaller side, and have a faint almond shape to them. Unlike her dull fur color, her eyes are a bright yellow. Olivepool is best described as overly serious. She isn't a particularly playful or sweet cat, but she shows passion when working to better herself or others while training. Unfortunately, patience isn't a strong suit, and she has little time for cats that she thinks doesn't take duties seriously enough. n/a Family of: n/a
Darkpaw | Tom | Apprentice | 7 Moons | BayouClan A small tom whose posture and appearance gives him the look of a slightly younger cat. He still has a bit of a "kitten face". His tail, while not unnaturally so, is shorter than average. He has short black fur, the only other mark being a few small white strands of fur on his chest. He has large, wide eyes, light green in color. Darkpaw hates his cutesy looks, and does whatever he can to put up a tough cat act. However, his true personality couldn't be any less different. He loves playing and interacting with kits, no matter how much he may deny it. n/a Family of: n/a
Downfall | Tom | Warrior | 46 Moons | CalderaClan An extremely large looking white cat with a long and plumy tail. However, his big stature is merely an illusion, as he is mostly fur. If wet, he looks almost half the size he was before. His paws are a little larger than average and his eyes are a bright blue in color. A cheerful and rather exuberant cat, mixing this with his large size makes him a little to much for other cats to handle sometimes. Regardless, he has a heart bigger than his fur and even if he may be slow on the uptake sometimes, he's happy to spread his joy. n/a Family of: n/a
Sorrelpaw | She-cat | Apprentice | 8 Moons | CalderaClan A long limbed yet thin calico she-cat. Her ears are wide set, and have a characteristic look of being loosely folded. While not completely flat faced, she does have a shorter muzzle. While short, her fur is fluffy. A small scar sits under her amber eyes. Sorrelpaw's genuine personality can be rather hard to decipher. She's fond of putting up masks, acting around each cat however she sees fit. She isn't insecure, but is instead very ambitious, and simply isn't afraid to be charismatic for her own gain. n/a Family of: n/a
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Post by Saint Ambrosef on Jun 2, 2017 18:16:21 GMT -5
Dragoness Ƈσяαℓ Mєямαι∂ ღ Both of your cats have been accepted! However, both Antpaw's and Stealthcreek's descriptions are a little bit long. I'd really appreciate it if y'all could cut back just a line or two of them. I know it's probably annoying, but we try to limit description sizes so that they don't get too big.
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Post by Ƈσяαℓ Mєямαι∂ ღ on Jun 2, 2017 19:05:04 GMT -5
Dragoness Ƈσяαℓ Mєямαι∂ ღ Both of your cats have been accepted! However, both Antpaw's and Stealthcreek's descriptions are a little bit long. I'd really appreciate it if y'all could cut back just a line or two of them. I know it's probably annoying, but we try to limit description sizes so that they don't get too big. Will do tomorrow when I get on my laptop. Sorry about that
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Post by Deleted on Jun 2, 2017 19:30:44 GMT -5
me: I could work on my comic that I actually need to work on because I need to get it in on Sunday me: or I could go join more clans me: you know what
Seedspeck | Female | Warrior | 1 1/2 years | CalderaClan Seedspeck is a lithe, cream-colored spotted tabby with clear teal eyes and long, white whiskers. The only indication this cat has been in battle is a small nick on her right ear. Seedspeck is almost desperate to perform the rougher aspects of Clan life, such as war. So far, Clan life has not exactly lived up to her expectations. Instead, she has been stuck doing much more boring, dull chores in the camp. She often complains, only to get annoyed that nobody hears her. No crushes or mates Cousins with Lionpaw and Tigerpaw and brothers with Doveheart
Lionpaw | Male | Apprentice | 7 moons | CalderaClan Lionpaw has a golden spotted tabby coat, with fur that bunches up at his feet and forms a ruff of fur at his cheeks. He has a slight underbite. He looks older than he really is- something which he personally enjoys. Lionpaw is stubborn and irrational, similar to the lion itself. Lionpaw wants to be taken more seriously, as he believes he is intellectually superior than the other apprentices. He is very devoted to those he loves, such as his brother Tigerpaw, and has a noble heart despite his flaws. No crushes or mates Family of: Brother of Tigerpaw, cousin of Doveheart and Seedspeck
Doveheart | Male | Warrior | 1 1/2 years | CalderaClan Doveheart is a pale gray tom with piebald white markings, covering his underbelly, rump, and a few splotches on his back in white. His eyes are a pale lime-green. Doveheart lives up to his name. Unlike his sister, who often complains about small chores, Doveheart loves doing them. He is at his happiest in camp helping others. On the inside, however, he is very insecure about himself and rather low on self-esteem. Has no crush or mate, but would love having one. Family of: Brother of Seedspeck, cousin of Tigerpaw and Lionpaw
Pheasanttail | Female | Warrior | 2 years | CalderaClan Pheasanttail is a pleasant-looking tortoiseshell, mostly black but spangled in orange flecks and amber eyes. Her tail is long and slightly bushy, resembling the tail of a pheasant. Pheasanttail is known for being a show-off. Flamboyant and overly-egotistical, she often draws the ire from her Clanmates for this. But almost every cat wears a mask- and this is Pheasanttail's. To hide her guilts, she shows off an immeasurable ego instead- something far from the truth. No crush or mate Family of: N/A
Tigerpaw | Male | Apprentice | 7 months | CalderaClan Tigerpaw is a dark marbled-tabby ginger tom with ambitious dull green eyes. Tigerpaw has a cleft lip, making his lip connected to his nose, and making his speech unclear at times- but he doesn't let this get in his way- usually. Tigerpaw is not one for the social scene- he gets easily flustered and shy around others, which might be caused by his cleft lip. Tigerpaw is very brave when confronted with most things, but he gets irrational quickly. No crush or mate Family of: Brother to Lionpaw, cousin to Doveheart and Seedspeck
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Post by Saint Ambrosef on Jun 2, 2017 20:02:32 GMT -5
mimikyutie I've accepted you BayouClan cats so you can begin rping, but Fae has to accept your CalderaClan characters.
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Post by Featherwing on Jun 2, 2017 21:46:51 GMT -5
Sup guys!
mimikyutie you are accepted! I'll add you shortly and you can rp Any preferences for mentors?
@redheartofriverclan, I hate to be a pain but if you could keep any history out of your forms– that'd be awesome. We just want basic personality and descriptions, otherwise the forms become too long and it's hard to keep the aesthetic going ^_^'
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Post by Deleted on Jun 2, 2017 21:56:25 GMT -5
Featherwing Edited the forms to not be as long and not be full of backstory.
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Post by Featherwing on Jun 2, 2017 22:04:06 GMT -5
Unfortunately I maaaay have to ask you to cut it down further. Like very basic personality and description.
Something like: Tigerpaw is a dark ginger marble tabby tom with wide, broad shoulders and a somewhat stubby tail. His dull green eyes display ambition, and not even his cleft lip gets in the way of him and his decisions. A tendancy to the irrational, Tigerpaw is not the one you should send into social situations, not only because he can be shy but because his cleft lip is a hot vent subject and he is liable to get very defensive. Rightly so, sometimes, but again, he'll see a problem in anything. He spends a lot of time with his brother Lionpaw, ensuring that his brother always has his support.
You can lengthen it a bit. Two-three lines maximum for description and personality each, please. Like in the form.
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Post by mimikyutie on Jun 2, 2017 23:01:21 GMT -5
(Yeee! Sorry for not responding right away, spent the last hours playing ME3
And nah, whoever you think would be good ^^ I might make a few more characters at some point)
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Post by xfogpathx on Jun 3, 2017 0:08:04 GMT -5
((This is a very well done clan. Good job! I have a question though. Do we pick our warrior names for our apprentices or does the leader chose them?)) Rattlesong | Tom | Warrior | 28 moons | BayouClan Rattlesong is an unusual tom with a long body and bright ginger tabby fur. His body has a lot of white patches so he consistently covers himself in mud to hide his pelt. His muzzle is narrow and pointed with short whiskers and a pink nose. His tail has a kink near the base from not healing right. His amber eyes are kind, if a bit closed off, and stand out on his mostly white face. Rattlesong is a soft-spoken tom who can be a little awkward but he has a very tactical mind. He acts well under pressure and can be a little overbearing, especially towards Stormcrest. He is easily discouraged and works best when he feels he is being useful. He isn’t very ambitious and is content to be an adviser over being a leader. No mate or crush but open Family of: Stormcrest (foster siblings), Brightflare (mother/deceased), Sparrowdive (father/deceased) Stormcrest | She-Cat | Warrior | 28 moons | BayouClan Stormcrest is a big, dark gray she-cat with long, wispy fur. Her underside and legs are white but she keeps them caked in mud. Her eyes are blue and she has a short muzzle. Her head is topped with tall ears. She has a nubby tail because it was bitten off by a turtle as an apprentice. er eyes are pale blue. Her tail is bobbed because it was bitten off by a fox in her early apprentice days. Stormcrest is an agile and quick-footed she-cat who is very competitive. She is easily flustered and is quick to panic when things go wrong. She is loyal to a fault and follows the warrior code strictly. She wants to prove she is a true BayouClan cat to those who doubt her for her loner heritage. No mate or crush but open Family of: Rattlesong (foster siblings), Brightflare ( foster mother/deceased), Sparrowdive (foster father/deceased) -- Bogpaw | She-Cat | Apprentice | 9 moons | BayouClan Bogpaw is a small, long-haired she-cat with an entirely black pelt and a long, feathery tail. She has stilt-like legs with small, slick paws. She has a round face with a short muzzle and big green eyes. Her left ear has a nick. Bogpaw is an indecisive cat who hates making decisions. She has a hard time making friends so when she does, she becomes a little clingy and will do whatever it takes to keep their friendship. She is a gentle soul that wants to be included but she has few social graces. While she can come off as a bit meek, she hates to be criticized and can become aggressive if she thinks she is being unfairly insulted. No mate or crush but open Family of: Claypaw (brother) Claypaw | Tom | Apprentice | 9 moons | BayouClan Claypaw is a rusty, brownish-ginger tom with very faint tabby stripes and even lighter markings on his legs. He has a very thick, medium-length pelt. He has a long, stripey tail. He has one dark stripe from his nose to his tail tip. He is broad and stout but his strength also makes him slower. His best feature is his sharp golden eyes. Claypaw is flirtatious and prone to teasing but he can also be a bit nosey. He tries to be helpful but more often than not just gets in the way by not following orders. He never breaks a promise and is careful making them. He doesn't trust many but those who have his trust will never doubt his. He may seem vain and unreliable but deep inside, he longs for adventure and a way to prove his worth. No mate or crush but open Family of: Bogpaw (sister)
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Post by Deleted on Jun 3, 2017 3:12:13 GMT -5
Unfortunately I maaaay have to ask you to cut it down further. Like very basic personality and description.
Something like: Tigerpaw is a dark ginger marble tabby tom with wide, broad shoulders and a somewhat stubby tail. His dull green eyes display ambition, and not even his cleft lip gets in the way of him and his decisions. A tendancy to the irrational, Tigerpaw is not the one you should send into social situations, not only because he can be shy but because his cleft lip is a hot vent subject and he is liable to get very defensive. Rightly so, sometimes, but again, he'll see a problem in anything. He spends a lot of time with his brother Lionpaw, ensuring that his brother always has his support.
You can lengthen it a bit. Two-three lines maximum for description and personality each, please. Like in the form. Made them shorter.
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Post by Dragoness on Jun 3, 2017 4:05:27 GMT -5
Dragoness Ƈσяαℓ Mєямαι∂ ღ Both of your cats have been accepted! However, both Antpaw's and Stealthcreek's descriptions are a little bit long. I'd really appreciate it if y'all could cut back just a line or two of them. I know it's probably annoying, but we try to limit description sizes so that they don't get too big. Done! Not annyoing at all, totally understandable.
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Post by Ƈσяαℓ Mєямαι∂ ღ on Jun 3, 2017 9:16:57 GMT -5
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Post by Saint Ambrosef on Jun 3, 2017 10:40:31 GMT -5
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Post by xfogpathx on Jun 3, 2017 12:12:49 GMT -5
Oh geez, I just realized that Storm was already used in BayouClan. Is that alright or do you want me to change it?
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Post by Blaze ♡ on Jun 3, 2017 12:48:16 GMT -5
I have been waiting for a volcanic-based clan since roughly 2014~ I am so excited! - - I will finish my forms tonight hopefully, once I get home from a wedding ^^'
Proudfalcon | Male | Warrior | 3 and 1/2 years | CalderaClan This tom can come off as intimidating with his broad shoulders and large frame. He has coyote brown fur with darker brown tabby markings and amber eyes. He is a crude tom, not the friendliest yet not the meanest you will meet. He can be friendly to an extent; although, he prefers not to interact with most of his clanmates. He is a reserved and passive tom. He never goes out of his way to state his opinions, nor does he go out of his way to follow orders that he believes to be idiotic. One of the traits that make him a leader in his own right. < No crush or mate, although open to one. Family of: His full brother is Russetgrowl and Littlespark is his half sister.
Littlespark | Female | Warrior | 3 years | CalderaClan An short-furred she-cat with white fur that is mottled with golden ginger. She has white paws and underbelly, along with honey amber eyes. Has a slender built with long legs that give an illusion of elegance. This she-cat is bold, confident, daring, and has the attitude that she can do whatever if she is strong. She is empathic feline and tries to be conscious of other cats' feeling; however, sometimes she cannot filter what she is thinking, causing her to be sarcastic and blunt. < No crush or mate, although open to one. Family of: She is the half-sister of Russetgrowl and Proudfalcon. They share the same father (Pikesplash), who cheated on his mate at the time with Littlespark's mother (Littlefinch).
Russetgrowl | Male | Warrior | 3 and 1/2 years | CalderaClan He is lean tom with mottled black, gray, and brown tabby fur. He has a white tuft on his chest and splash of white on his nose. He has olive green eyes. He is amiable tom, eager to please yet not extremely sociable. He finds comfort in talking with just one or two cats opposed to a crowd. He has a good sense of humor and likes to find enjoyment in the little things. Sometimes he can be witty and sarcastic when he is annoyed. < No crush or mate, although open to one. Family of: His full brother is Proudfalcon and Littlespark is his half sister.
Sandpaw | Female | Apprentice | 10 moons | CalderaClan She has light, creamy brown fur with mackerel tabby markings. She has freckles of white on her face, legs, and underbelly along with honey amber eyes. She is a small feline with huge ears. She is a kindhearted, stubborn, and impulsive. She acts confident to cover up her insecurities, which leads her into making impulsive actions. She is afraid of failing. She has a bad habit of not thinking things through and it's best to give her a stern set of instructions before she takes off and gets hurt. < < No crush or mate, although open to one. Family of: open to anyone
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Post by Featherwing on Jun 3, 2017 13:12:56 GMT -5
@redheartofriverclan adding you, and I'm gonna have to shorten them a tiiiiny bit. Mostly by combining sentences/adjectives etc. Other than that, you're golden! Feel free to rp.
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Post by Featherwing on Jun 3, 2017 13:42:21 GMT -5
Hey Blaze ♡ ! Heads up my dear, if you could shorten your forms a tiiiny bit, maybe a line or two. That'd be awesome. I'm gonna accept your first two cats
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