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May 25, 2017 13:50:26 GMT -5
Post by Mother Dark on May 25, 2017 13:50:26 GMT -5
(Lightbringer yes because he liked his spunk. Im on the site on thre different devices hoping to do three different things lol.)
"Why would I do that if you are right here. You basically brought the prey right to me." The rouge took another step toward Emeraldpaw. Another step and she would be within striking range of the apprentice.
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Post by Mother Dark on May 25, 2017 13:57:03 GMT -5
(im here and schools out for the summer for me, so ill be more active now. :3) Are you on?))))
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Post by Deleted on May 25, 2017 13:58:18 GMT -5
(Tell me if you are not ok with this...It would be perfect though!) Emeraldpaw closed her eyes and then opened them. "I know you are angry, your life is hard. I know you were abandoned as a kit. Your mother died soon after and your father left you. You never had any siblings. I know this because when I was in Starclan, the place where clan cats go when they die, I saw you and the horrible things that had happened. I know you feel like you are alone but you aren't. You aren't alone in life. This is why I'm doing this." Emeraldpaw tossed her shrew to the pretty rogue she-cat. Emeraldpaw dared not look at Darkstar. (Again, I can do something different if you don't like this.)
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Post by LightBringer on May 25, 2017 14:02:14 GMT -5
(got it!)
AshBlaze paused in his grooming, and glanced at the soon to be apprentice. "hmmm..... lets see what you know. have you picked up on anything while watching other cats in the clan?" he asks, flicking his ear a bit.
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May 25, 2017 14:02:59 GMT -5
Post by Mother Dark on May 25, 2017 14:02:59 GMT -5
(It's good as long as you say she has to leave and never come back cause she isn't going to really.)
The rouge took the shrew. "Now the rest of it." She didn't plan on leaving. "You will have to chase me out if you want me to leave."
By this time Darkstar had stepped out of the shadows. She was not going to let the aprentice get attacked.
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Post by Deleted on May 25, 2017 14:04:52 GMT -5
"I gave you prey. That was what I caugh for my final assessment! Now go and never come back! You had your chance and you don't come back." Emeraldpaw meowed.
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May 25, 2017 14:05:05 GMT -5
Post by Mother Dark on May 25, 2017 14:05:05 GMT -5
(It's good as long as you say she has to leave and never come back cause she isn't going to really.) The rouge took the shrew. "Now the rest of it." She didn't plan on leaving. "You will have to chase me out if you want me to leave." By this time Darkstar had stepped out of the shadows. She was not going to let the aprentice get attacked. (I'm going to bump veryone up two moons. Misswarriors I thought about leaving Minkkit at four moons so once Emeraldpaw had been a warrior for a while she could take him as an apprentice.) ( Lili are you going to come back?)
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Post by Deleted on May 25, 2017 14:07:52 GMT -5
(YAS! Emeraldpaw would love to have an apprentice once she had been a warrior for a while.)
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May 25, 2017 14:12:13 GMT -5
Post by Mother Dark on May 25, 2017 14:12:13 GMT -5
"Make me or are you too much of a mouse heart." the rouge snarled. She leaped toward the apprentice.
Darkstar threw herself toward the rouge hoping to stop her fromreaching Emeraldpaw. (what were you think for her warrior name btw)
"I know its best to leap on a badger's back when they attack so they can't snap at you. Then you can reach them to get good attacks too." Elmkit said beaming with pride.
Snowdapple came back with two mice dangling from her jaws. She set them in front of all the kits. "There you go play nice." She then pulled her little ones toward her stomach so they could eat too. It wouldnt be long and they too would be eating prey.
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Post by Deleted on May 25, 2017 14:14:18 GMT -5
(...Thought you were choosing her warrior name...)
"No!" Emeraldpaw yowled at Darkstar. "This is my assessment! I can handle this!"
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Post by LightBringer on May 25, 2017 14:15:42 GMT -5
AshBlaze nodded. "good! can you tell me what you should do if you get pinned on your back?" the tom asks, curling his tail around his paws. he was excited to be a mentor, and would do everything he could to make sure ElmKit turned out to be the great warrior he knew he could be.
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May 25, 2017 14:24:11 GMT -5
Post by Mother Dark on May 25, 2017 14:24:11 GMT -5
I usually let other people pick the names and pretend that Darkstar thought of it. If you need help I can give you ideas and you pick from them.)
Darkstar nodded but was cofused why the apprentice wouldn't let her help. I guess if she is getting hurt I will help her.
Elmkit layed on his back and started raking his baxk legs through the air.
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Post by LightBringer on May 25, 2017 14:29:43 GMT -5
AshBlaze purred softly. "very good! what other moves do you already know?" getting to his paws, he walks around ElmKit as the warrior speaks, correcting minor form issues that he notices as the kit shows the belly rake move.
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Post by Deleted on May 25, 2017 14:30:45 GMT -5
( Her name will be... Emeraldwhisper ) Emeraldpaw's hackles shot up. "Leave!" She hissed at the loner.
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May 25, 2017 14:39:03 GMT -5
Post by Mother Dark on May 25, 2017 14:39:03 GMT -5
Elmkit stood up on his hind legs and started whipping his paws around in a flurry of slashes.
(Nice name) The rouge jumped at Emeraldpaw. "Never" she hissed raking her claws at the apprentice face.
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May 25, 2017 14:54:21 GMT -5
Post by Deleted on May 25, 2017 14:54:21 GMT -5
(Thanks!) Emeraldpaw gave a shriek as blood gushed out of the cut on her face. She lashed at the rogue's flanks and face, a rage overtaking her.
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May 25, 2017 14:58:17 GMT -5
Post by LightBringer on May 25, 2017 14:58:17 GMT -5
Deciding to turn this into an actual training session, AshBlaze starts to point out positions of potential enemies. just to get a feel for what needs work, and what only needs a bit of touching up. as a final test, the warrior says "quick, behind you!" seeing is ElmKit will use the hind leg kick that the apprentices learned. he didnt expect perfect form, but had high hopes. the kit was strong and intuitive, he could figure it out quickly.
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Post by Mother Dark on May 25, 2017 15:00:33 GMT -5
Th rouge lashed out agan howling in pain as Emeraldpaw's claws connected with her flanks.
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Post by Deleted on May 25, 2017 15:02:18 GMT -5
"Go!" Emeraldpaw screeched as she jumped on the rogue's back, sinking her claws in.
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May 25, 2017 15:13:31 GMT -5
Post by Mother Dark on May 25, 2017 15:13:31 GMT -5
The rougue screeched. She threw herself to the ground rolling to get loose from Emeraldpaw before sprinting away. She left the shrew behind and clumps of fur matted with blood.
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May 25, 2017 15:14:55 GMT -5
Post by LightBringer on May 25, 2017 15:14:55 GMT -5
(dont forget to post elmkits reply!)
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May 25, 2017 15:15:13 GMT -5
Post by Deleted on May 25, 2017 15:15:13 GMT -5
Emeraldpaw sat down, scratches bleeding everywhere. She looked at Darkstar. "I'm sorry..."
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May 25, 2017 15:18:29 GMT -5
Post by Mother Dark on May 25, 2017 15:18:29 GMT -5
"What are sorry for? That was the attitude of a warrior and you did what I would hope any cat in the clan would do." Darkstar touched her nose to Emeraldpaw's head. "Go have Robinear check your scratches. I'll carry the prey back."
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Post by Deleted on May 25, 2017 15:22:01 GMT -5
Emeraldpaw's eyes darkened. "I'm not bringing back much prey and...I'm not fit to be a warrior!"
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May 25, 2017 15:26:47 GMT -5
Post by Mother Dark on May 25, 2017 15:26:47 GMT -5
"For the time you've been out here and the bravery you showed when you took on that rouge you do deserve to be a warrior. I think I Will do your cremony tomorrow so when you sit your vigil you wont fall aslep as easily." Darkstar said before picking u the rabbit . She picked u the mic by the tails and then the shrews.
(I think mu kyboard si missing every few lettrsI type)
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May 25, 2017 15:28:53 GMT -5
Post by Deleted on May 25, 2017 15:28:53 GMT -5
"Ok...Thanks Darkstar." Emeraldpaw mewed. As she and Darkstar headed back to camp.
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May 25, 2017 15:32:33 GMT -5
Post by Mother Dark on May 25, 2017 15:32:33 GMT -5
Darkstar dipped her head and started lugging the prey back to camp. When she reached the prey pile she dropped it all in and looked at Duskpelt. She motioned with her tail to Dawnlight and Basilwhisker.
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Post by Deleted on May 25, 2017 15:33:57 GMT -5
Emeraldpaw looked at Basilwhisker. I'll miss training with him... she thought.
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May 25, 2017 15:38:35 GMT -5
Post by Mother Dark on May 25, 2017 15:38:35 GMT -5
(That just means he will be open for one of your othercharries and you will always have patrols Emeraldpaw)
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May 25, 2017 15:40:20 GMT -5
Post by Deleted on May 25, 2017 15:40:20 GMT -5
(um...I don't really understand. What do you mean?)
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