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Post by LightBringer on Jun 6, 2017 13:08:48 GMT -5
AshBlaze bursts out laughing, and shakes his head a bit. "well done both of you. you are fairly evenly matched!" he praises as he pads over to the entangled apprentices. carefully, he begins to get them unstuck.
DuskHeart mreows in amusement, and walks over as well, helping the tom untangle the two young cats. once they are untangled, she steps back. "FoxPaw, what would you say are ElmPaw's weaknesses?"
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Post by Mother Dark on Jun 6, 2017 13:19:00 GMT -5
"He was just ready to take me down with brute strength and didn't think about how I might manage to knock him over." Foxpaw chirped. "Though he was pretty strong and made sure to get me off his back right away."
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Post by LightBringer on Jun 6, 2017 13:24:46 GMT -5
DuskHeart nodded. "good!"
AshBlaze, getting what DuskHeart is doing, turns to ElmPaw. "and what are FoxPaw's weaknesses?"
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Post by Mother Dark on Jun 6, 2017 13:26:52 GMT -5
DuskHeart nodded. "good!"
AshBlaze, getting what DuskHeart is doing, turns to ElmPaw. "and what are FoxPaw's weaknesses?" "She might have over thought her moves a little they weren't as fluid as they could have been and that last move was overconfident because she could have moved so I didn't bring her down too. But she's quite fast." Elmpaw said. Looking up for confirmation from AshBlaze.
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Post by LightBringer on Jun 6, 2017 13:28:50 GMT -5
AshBlaze nodded. "good! FoxPaw, why dont you help ElmPaw slow down his thought a bit, and actually think as he fights?" the tom asks the young she-cat
DuskHeart purrs. "and ElmPaw, you can help show FoxPaw how to move more fluidly as she fights as well."
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Post by Mother Dark on Jun 6, 2017 13:30:58 GMT -5
"Umm how can we do that?" The apprentices say at the same time trying not to laugh about it.
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Post by LightBringer on Jun 6, 2017 13:36:22 GMT -5
"FoxPaw, as you do more complicated moves, explain what youre doing as you do it. this will help ElmPaw understand the process a bit more" this part comes from DuskHeart
"and ElmPaw, talk FoxPaw through what i taught you. when we did some basic stuff in camp, i explained to you how to become more fluid in your movements. do that with FoxPaw" AshBlaze finished.
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Post by Mother Dark on Jun 6, 2017 13:44:29 GMT -5
"FoxPaw, as you do more complicated moves, explain what youre doing as you do it. this will help ElmPaw understand the process a bit more" this part comes from DuskHeart "and ElmPaw, talk FoxPaw through what i taught you. when we did some basic stuff in camp, i explained to you how to become more fluid in your movements. do that with FoxPaw" AshBlaze finished. "Okay should we start again?" Foxpaw said.
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Post by LightBringer on Jun 6, 2017 13:46:54 GMT -5
both mentors nod in answer.
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Post by Mother Dark on Jun 6, 2017 13:54:03 GMT -5
"Okay so I'm just moving towards you watching what you're doing Elmpaw. Thinking about what you might do." Foxpaw said trying to help him see how she thought through it.
"And I'm focused on where I want to hit you so my motions are fluid because I'm not forcing the action." Elmpaw said reaching out to slash her face with imaginary claws as he swung to her side.
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Post by Mother Dark on Jun 6, 2017 13:57:51 GMT -5
(Just so everyone knows we have an elder so if there are bad apprentices they can take care of her. Feel free to add more elders or warriors.)
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Post by Mother Dark on Jun 6, 2017 14:03:17 GMT -5
(BIG ANNOUNCEMENT. PLANNING HAS BEGUN FOR THE FIRST GATHERING BETWEEN PHEONIXCLAN AND ORCHARDCLAN. TO ENSURE IT GOES SMOOTHLY, PLEASE GO TO THE LINK PROVIDED AND FILL OUT THE REQUESTED INFORMATION. THANK YOU!
wcrpforums.com/thread/36102/pheonixclan-orchardclan-gathering-planning?page=1&scrollTo=1250701 )
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Post by LightBringer on Jun 6, 2017 14:12:44 GMT -5
AshBlaze nodded in approval. "good!" he praised them.
DuskHeart shushed him in annoyance, knowing they needed to focus on each other right now and not be dsitracted by their mentors.
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Post by Mother Dark on Jun 6, 2017 14:18:38 GMT -5
"While you are focused on instructing me I will," she paused darting underneath Elmpaw quickly and pushing up before darting out again and shoving his flank," do that do you are off balance."
Elmpaw rocked on his paws and shot out a paw trying to swipe at Foxpaw.
She darted aside and while his paw was in the air she gave him a final shove so he fell over. "Instead of worrying about getting a bit on me you should have focused on your balance so I didn't get you off your paws." She said jumping onto his flank and working her paws on his belly and face.
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Post by LightBringer on Jun 6, 2017 14:21:26 GMT -5
AshBlaze and DuskHeart watched from their spots.
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Post by Mother Dark on Jun 6, 2017 14:27:59 GMT -5
Elmpaw managed to roll away and threw Foxpaw on the ground as he did. He pinned her. "You mean like that he said. Lightly putting his paw on her throat.
"Sort of" she said as he raised his paw to do a slashing motion "but you didn't think about this " she said slamming her hind legs into his stomach.
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Post by LightBringer on Jun 6, 2017 14:34:21 GMT -5
AshBlaze winced at the sight, and chuckled. FoxPaw was a good fighter, thats for sure. ElmPaw would learn a lot.
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Post by Mother Dark on Jun 6, 2017 14:37:14 GMT -5
(Its kind of fun battling myself it's like cool move but look at this one and I saw that coming because it's just me XD)
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Post by Mother Dark on Jun 6, 2017 15:02:50 GMT -5
Foxpaw lay on top of Elmpaw so he couldn't fight back. "Okay can we take a breath now?" She asked panting a little.
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Post by Mother Dark on Jun 6, 2017 15:06:48 GMT -5
@rainbowclaw sending a warrior to find your cat now though I'm not sure we have any warriors open right now to mentor her so it might be a waiting game)
Oakbriar sighed and padded out of camp. She wandered off away from clan borders.
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Post by Hawkeyes258 on Jun 6, 2017 17:44:35 GMT -5
Here)
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Post by Armageddidn't on Jun 6, 2017 17:49:28 GMT -5
"He mighta probably jumped off a cliff according to some other cats and a loner rescued him and I have NO IDEA where that loner lives." Featherwind mewed even faster.
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Post by Mother Dark on Jun 6, 2017 18:07:57 GMT -5
Before Darkstar leaves camp she calls out "Willowpaw why don't you come hunting with me."
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Post by Mother Dark on Jun 6, 2017 18:08:57 GMT -5
"He mighta probably jumped off a cliff according to some other cats and a loner rescued him and I have NO IDEA where that loner lives." Featherwind mewed even faster. "What?" Basilwhisker said unable to understand why this was happening.
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Post by Armageddidn't on Jun 6, 2017 18:17:18 GMT -5
"Yeah, I don't know either. Please don't shred me..."
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Post by Hawkeyes258 on Jun 6, 2017 18:20:37 GMT -5
(Ack that's me XD. Also do we need any more cats or like more toms to she-cats?)
Willowpaw leaped to her paws and quickly raced over to Darkstar. "I'm here"!
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Post by Mother Dark on Jun 6, 2017 19:53:18 GMT -5
"Yeah, I don't know either. Please don't shred me..." "Its not your fault is it?" Basilwhisker asked nonchalantly until he noticed how worried her words had seemed.
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Post by Mother Dark on Jun 6, 2017 19:55:54 GMT -5
(Ack that's me XD. Also do we need any more cats or like more toms to she-cats?) Willowpaw leaped to her paws and quickly raced over to Darkstar. "I'm here"! I don't know off the top of my head but I don't worry about everything being equal we might need a few more warriors I have to double check that ratio.) "I'm going hunting why don't you come with me." Darkstar said to the apprentice.
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Post by Armageddidn't on Jun 6, 2017 19:57:56 GMT -5
"Not really.... Unless you count me testing Frostpaw as my fault." Featherrwind mewed.
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Post by Mother Dark on Jun 6, 2017 20:00:51 GMT -5
"I don't know that I can but you should tell me the whole story. I might get angry but I will do nothing to harm you." Basilwhisker said.
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