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Post by Lórien on May 17, 2017 18:08:43 GMT -5
-BreezeClan Joining Page-
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Rank | Gender | Age (Moons)| Sexuality (optional)
Physical Description (including fur type and color, tail, eyes, and coat markings, etc.)
Detailed personality (including weaknesses and strengths, tendencies, etc) | Family and/or crush | Background/History| Other |
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Post by Deleted on May 17, 2017 19:00:42 GMT -5
will make more characters later.
{ Daraliheart }
Warrior | Male | Thirty-nine moons | Heterosexual
Daraliheart's name could not be more suiting both for his appearance and his personality. Much like the bird that is his namesake, he is a very boastful, yet bulky cat, sporting a thick build, well-trained muscles, and big paws. His fur is shorthair and always well-groomed, primarily jet-black. The only disruptions to this color are dashes of white marking his chest, nose and snout. Given his larger appearance and the countless scars littering his body, it's no wonder that some find him intimidating. Though in actuality, Daraliheart is quite gentle when it counts. His eyes are a copper color.
Daraliheart is proud to a fault - always too busy boasting and showing off to think logically. Often times he puts 'being the best' before his own safety or the safety of his tribemates. Of course, he could never purposefully cause harm to a comrade. It's more a matter of him not thinking things through completely, or him generally being too thick-skulled to consider others. Towards she-cats especially Darali is practically a whole new cat - laid-back, caring, but annoying flirtatious. Nearly a complete opposite of his regular immature self. A deeper part of Daraliheart thinks he behaves so childishly is because he's afraid to grow old, or afraid of a boring life. Not that he'd ever reveal such feelings, of course. Daraliheart has a weird habit of twitching his ears/tail or thrashing his left hindleg when being forced to wait for something. He's rather impatient like that, thinking he should be everyone's number one priority. Leaving his pelt even the slightest bit messy also irritates him, and he frequently is found furiously nipping at knots whenever he gets the chance. | N/A | Born and raised in the tribe. | Other |
[ ashera ]
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{ Ryenpetal }
Warrior | Female | Thirty-two moons | Bisexual
Ryenpetal is a more petite she-cat, truly the dainty flower she-cats are generalized to be - no pun intended. She has little muscle to brag, and next to no fat on her bones to bulk her up. Since birth she's always been quite thin, it's nothing too odd for her, though sometimes she does feel a bit self-conscious. Fortunately, the body shape she has does have it's advantages. Quick as a dlulin, this one, with pawsteps lighter than a vizari's! Metaphorically, of course. Ryenpetal has a shorthair pelt colored mostly ginger, with darker classic tabby stripes. She has a white mask, white toes, and a white chest, belly, and tail-tip. Her eyes are greenish-yellow.
Ryenpetal is truly a 'dainty flower' both in appearance and personality, with her most notable personality traits being her politeness, agreeableness, and general quietness. It is awfully rare for Ryenpetal to display any real hostility, and yet rarer for her to talk excessively, raise her voice, or voice any differing opinions. The reason for which she strives so hard to stay on every cats' good side is likely because of her fear of being, well, disliked. If alone with someone she's close with, it's a lot more often for her to speak her mind, though still not too often. Other than that, though, Ryenpetal can also be described as a very energetic and stedfast cat, always ready to get up and go and try her hardest at everything. This leads to her commonly overworking herself - because she can only do so much, being a bit smaller and a lot less powerful than some other cats. She refuses to give in or show weakness (in that regard), though, so she'll come back to camp with prey even if it means half-killing herself in the process. | Ryenpetal falls head-over-paws for any cat that looks at her for longer than a second. She's ah, quite the romantic. | Born and raised in the tribe. She was a rather weak and sickly kit, and nearly died at one point. Even today, she's quicker to fall ill than most others. | Other
[ ashera ]
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Post by Lórien on May 18, 2017 5:31:48 GMT -5
@animefreak
Okay! I'll add those in now.
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Post by Deleted on May 18, 2017 6:08:14 GMT -5
My tribe charries turned into warriors! { Shadowpool }
Medicine cat | She-cat/Female | 38 moons | Bisexual
Shadow looks exactly like her name, a sleek black she-cat with a long coat that is usually well-groomed.She does have a white marking on her forehead and a white forepaw, but otherwise those are her only markings. Muscles gently ripple under her thick, long pelt, but they are very hard to see. Her build is quite sturdy and compact, but it looks delicate at first glance. Her eyes are probably her most distinguishing feature, a startling hazel colour that is actually splashed with green, blue, and a bit of amber. They shine in the light very easily and almost always look like they are twinkling slightly.
Shadow is the ideal healer, supposedly. She has the perfect touch when coming to injuries, a surprisingly good memory, and intelligence that surpasses most cats. Her personality however... It has its flaws for sure. She can be very overprotective in good or bad ways, always trying to heal her patients to the fullest extent possible when letting them go. She has her firm beliefs that will never be shaken even by the most persistent cat, making her horribly stubborn. Often she will try and be very motherly to everyone or sweet but for the most part she is quiet and prefers to be a 'shadow', like her name. She is also very worried about what cats will think of her, and gets very panicked when a cat tries to make a long conversation with her. She always has more of a flight rather than fight response but that's just natural for her, and she is supposedly very cowardly and weak but still tries to put others before herself. Often Shadow has a tendency to go into her own dream world and forget about what is really going on, frequently misplacing things or getting lost in though. This is probably her most distinctive trait. | None | Shadow was born in the tribe | None |
[ BrambleIsBack ]
{ Seedtail }
| Warrior | Tom/Male | 20 moons | Straight
Seed is a very small tom, nearly the size of an apprentice. He has a ratty dark brown tabby coat that always seems to be lightly matted or tangled, in a messy state all the time. His tabby marking are slightly hard to see but they are there, and he has a white underbelly that is very prominent. His paws, ears, and legs are quite ridiculously long and look slightly comical but he is quite self-conscious about them. He has very blunt, short claws that are no good for much except hunting, but definitely not for fighting. His eyes are dark brown and aren't very interesting.
Seed is quite a noble warrior and will think nothing of dying for his clan, not afraid of anything and ready to charge into battle without hesitation. He is very social with everyone and tries to make as any friends and connections as possible to reach his goal of becoming deputy one day. This young tom has ambitions and he is bound to eventually achieve them, working very hard. He can often be clingy and act desperate sometimes to be 'cool', and comes off as fake sometimes or makes bad attempts to be funny. Every single day, he tries to act all selfless and goes on as many patrols as possible, but everyone knows about his lifelong goal: the only motivation for all this work he's putting into everything. Some cats love him for his apparently charming personality, but a lot of others don't really admire him at all. He is quite clueless when coming to relationships but would try his hardest anyways.| He has a little bit of a crush on Petal | Seed was an abandoned kit and was taken in by the Tribe | None |
[ BrambleIsBack ] |
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Post by Blaze ♡ on May 18, 2017 10:50:04 GMT -5
I do require some assistance, if you don't mind. ^^;
My female's name is usually Littledove, although I saw that you don't want names that are tied to earth. What suffix should I use then? LittleblossomWarrior | Female | 25 moons | Heterosexual
This she-cat may look like a deity from the skies, with her pure white fur and willowy figure. Yet looks can be rather deceiving with this young female. She is quite rambunctious and most cats never see it coming when they judge her by appearances. Littleblossom has ivory white fur with no impairments from other colors, she is pure white. Her fur is soft to the touch, almost like a domesticated rabbit. She has slender, willowy figure with long legs. She does have rounded shoulders that give her that softer appearance. She has no ridges or sharp muscle lines, nor bones that stick out. She is graceful, which fills most stereotypes about females yet her soft complexion does hide strong and nimble muscles under her snowy coat. She has round light blue almost gray eyes. If you do not know Littleblossom well enough, you would think that she is a well-mannered and sophisticated feline. Yet appearances need to be maintained, therefore Littleblossom allows cats to assume that and doesn't say much of the matter. Mostly because she is dying of amusement internally. In all reality, Littleblossom is a wild card. This she-cat lives for the wild side of life. She wants adventures and dangers, not some boring life where she can't reach her full potential! She likes to have fun, like climbing the tallest tree in the territory or scaling up mountain cliffs to get a beautiful view of the territory. It is a surprise that she hasn't died yet. She is typically in the medicine cat den for a cut or torn claw or a tear in her ear. Don't get me wrong, Littleblossom is a lovely feline and quite charismatic too. She knows how to handle a crowd with a swish of her tail and beautiful smile. She is compassionate towards her clanmates and would do anything for her clan, within reason. Littleblossom has entertained the idea of slowing down and starting a family as she is getting older, yet it does not appeal to her. She has high standards, even when it comes to her crushes. First off, they need to be handsome and smart. She would never get with a mouse-brained tom nor she would entertain the thought of raising a family with one. If she is going to be mates with someone, they have to simply be the best, so that their kits would be perfect and revered by the clan. Mostly importantly, Littleblossom would want someone to match her. She wants someone who is brave and supportive to who she is. She is not some dainty she-cat, she is a warrior, one of the fiercest cats in the world. | She has no crush or mate, as of now. | She was born into the clan. | Other | [ Blazeheart<3 ]
Ebonfeather
Warrior | Male | 31 moons | Bisexual
This young tom’s sleek fur seems to glisten under the moonlight. Ebonfeather is a traditional tabby tom. His base color is close to a platinum gray with silvery gray flecked mottled in with it. His tabby stripes are thick and swirl in slight spiral-target splotch along his flanks. His tabby markings end at mid leg then, it is a paler gray shade. He has light blue-green eyes, which sometimes appear to be gray. He is a semi-tall tom with a weight of ten pounds. He has strong legs, which allows him to climb trees with ease and he is a strong swimmer, like much of the clan.
Ebonfeather is an amiable tom. He is moderately friendly to his clanmates and somewhat tolerates rogues and loners. He tries to be as companionable as he can be. He does enjoy being alone, therefore sometimes he perishes throughout the day at odd times before reappearing back. Ebonfeather is an intelligent tom. He has an elastic memory, which helps him excel as a fighter and strategist. Though he typically doesn't share that he knows more than what most think he knows, this tom has his secrets. He is a loyal tom, and would defend Breezeclan and it's honor until his death if he has to. Unfortunately along with being loyal, he is also stubborn and closed-minded. He is dedicated to his ideals and standards. Once he gets something in his mind that he believes is right then he refuses to change his opinion. Ebonfeather is smart and he is one of the optimum fighters in the clan. He can sometimes get too involved and become ruthless when he fights. Though, generally his ruthless stays confined to just his fighting ability and he hides it well enough. He ensures that it isn't made visible in his social aspect of life. | He was born into the clan, although his family has passed away. Ebonfeather has no crush or mate. | Ebonfeather's family history is not a pleasant story. When he was a young kit, there was sickness in camp, especially within the nursery. His mother and sister, Bluekit both caught the sickness. He was separated from his family and fostered by another queen. His mother and sister died before he was 5 moons old. His father, Swifthowl had been estranged ever since then, Ebonfeather does not a relationship with his father. Yes, they have a few kind words here and there but Swifthowl was never there for him. Due to most of his family dying within moons of each other, he has developed the fear of losing his loved ones. If he is extremely close to someone, he will typically show protective tendencies. It is one of his worst fears. | Other |
[ Blazeheart<3 ]
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Post by Deleted on May 18, 2017 11:12:02 GMT -5
{Leuyunblossom}
Warrior | She-cat | 16 moons | Heterosexual
Leuyunblossom is a very light gray she-cat, with a very long body, and legs. Her fur is a medium length, which she likes to groom quite a lot, making it very soft. She has a white muzzle, and underbelly. She has big eyes, that are colored a lovely dark blue. She thinks that are eyes are her best feature. Her nose is a little bit smaller than average, and it's colored black. Her paws, much like her nose, are just a little bit smaller than average, but she's more self conscious about her paws. They have tiny little scratches all over her paws, which her fur mostly covers up. Her tail is long, and it has a white tip.
Leuyunblossom is an incredibly hard working cat, and does her very best to insure that she's one of the best warriors in the clan. Leuyunblossom devotes most of her time into patrols, and she likes to do them as fast as she can. Leuyunblossom can often be found running around in open fields, making sure that her stamina is up to snuff. Mistfeather is a very introverted cat, and doesn't like spending prolonged amounts of times with other cats. She finds a great way to escape conversations is to leave and run around. Leuyunblossom laughs very easily, and she finds a lot of things funny, she's easily amused. Leuyunblossom is a very anxious cat, and she can get herself worked up very easily, and one of the way that she tries to deal with this is to claw at her paws, hence some of the small scars that are there. Leuyunblossom quite likes to hunt, even though she doesn't do it very often, she likes to practice it. Leuyunblossom has a huge fear of the Vizari, but she is to ashamed to tell anyone else about it.
| She has a crush on Daraliheart but she fears that she's to young. |She was abandoned as a young kit, but quickly discovered by the clan. | None |
[ Swiftpaw slash ]
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Post by Lórien on May 18, 2017 15:45:57 GMT -5
@brambleisback Accepted! I actually added them in earlier but I forgot to tell you whoops. Blaze ♡Hm, you could look in the prey/predator area of the clan! I think it may be under the Cats. But other then that they are good! I'll add in Ebonfeather. @swiftpawslash Sorry to be slightly picky, but when I make clans I normally don't like members having the prefix of the clan name. Everything else is good, but could you possibly change the "Breeze" part? Thanks! |
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Post by Blaze ♡ on May 18, 2017 16:05:24 GMT -5
Alright. The only problem with those is that none of the predators nor prey have tendencies to be pure white.
I will go look up some different suffixes or fantasy animals ^^;
What do you think about...
- Littlecloud
- Whiteblossom
- Littleblossom
- Bloomcloud
- Northblossom
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Post by Lórien on May 18, 2017 17:24:34 GMT -5
Blaze ♡Those all sound good. Littleblossom sounds really cute. However, if you want here's a predator that I just happened to finish up! Fits her quite well in my opinion. Not sure if you would like it as a suffix though. Srin- The Srin is a surprising predator, always being rather unpredictable. It’s very elegant and stands high on four strong, tall legs. It has a smooth pure white coat with a long whip-like tail (which may be employed as a weapon when needed) that also brings attention to a large head with short fangs. The bite contains venom despite the teeth’s rather normal appearance. Its large paws make it hold a strong appearance to the Maned Wolf found on Earth. However, this predator is not unbeatable.
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Post by Blaze ♡ on May 18, 2017 17:38:52 GMT -5
Oh man. You are making me choose. xD I really like Srin!
Littlesrin? I could always abandoned the 'little' part of her name. lol.
If you need another idea for a predator, Asena and Amarok are mythical wolf creatures.
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Post by Lórien on May 18, 2017 17:55:53 GMT -5
Oh whoops lol! Oh thanks! I might change the names up a bit since I don't want to use really names (knowingly) though.  |
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Post by Deleted on May 18, 2017 19:50:50 GMT -5
The deed is done.
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Post by Lórien on May 20, 2017 10:46:35 GMT -5
Sorry for taking so long to get back to you, but I'll add your character now! |
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Post by Armageddidn't on May 20, 2017 11:25:13 GMT -5
{Zebrapaw}
Apprentice|Female|6 1/2|Asexual
A white she-cat with black tabby stripes, sort of like Bumblestripe. She has bright blue eyes and long fur.
She's adventurous, and often testy. She tends to hunt frequently, often alone. Her strengths are speed, agility, and hunting. Her weaknesses are she lacks the strength to fight off a warrior alone. | N/A |She was apparentally born to kittypets and abandoned.| N/A |
[shimmerheart]
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Post by Lórien on May 21, 2017 11:15:14 GMT -5
Armageddidn'tEr, sorry but I would like a few changes. Kits become apprentices at 7 moons in this clan, and in this world there isn't anything as a Zebra. I also don't mean to be picky but I normally like a little more detail in the forms before accepting. Sorry about that.
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Post by Armageddidn't on May 21, 2017 22:15:28 GMT -5
((Ok I shall change it.))
{Rowanpaw}
Apprentice|Female|8 1/2|Asexual
A light brown cat with green eyes. She has long fur and short whiskers.
She's shy and tries all other options before attacking. She's been known to flee any battle. Her strengths are her ability to talk her way out of almost any situation and her climbing ability. Her weakness is her merciful nature.|N/A|Her parents were loners who fell to dogs while crossing a Twoleg's yard.|N/A|
[shimmerheart]
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Post by Deleted on May 24, 2017 17:13:02 GMT -5
sick looking clan! really love the concept!
posting this here so i can edit it in a little bit.
{Athfang}
Warrior | Molly | Age (Moons)| Sexuality (optional)
Physical Description (including fur type and color, tail, eyes, and coat markings, etc.)
Detailed personality (including weaknesses and strengths, tendencies, etc) | Family and/or crush | Background/History| Other |
[ "not" Christa ]
{Vizaripaw}
Apprentice | Tom | Age (Moons)| Sexuality (optional)
Physical Description (including fur type and color, tail, eyes, and coat markings, etc.)
Detailed personality (including weaknesses and strengths, tendencies, etc) | Family and/or crush | Background/History| Other |
[ "not" Christa ] |
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