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Post by Dragoness on Jun 2, 2017 17:02:39 GMT -5
I'm almost finished with the history, and I have a vague idea of the territory. Again, so sorry I haven't been much on, but school's been absolutely awful this spring and I simply haven't have the excess time and energy to work on this. It's great to see that someone has finally claimed AlderClan, and I still really want to get this to work!
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Post by Ƈσяαℓ Mєямαι∂ ღ on Jun 2, 2017 17:04:57 GMT -5
this is my second shot at it, so me, too
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Matija
BRO I REMEMBERED MY PASSWORD
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Post by Matija on Jun 2, 2017 17:15:35 GMT -5
How is the intro?
Intro:
Your tail swishes around to the loud bush, a faint ruffling noise it heard as you approach it, you can feel your hairs starting to brisle. You brush it off and continue on your way, still you feel a gaze on your pelt, swiftly turning again you see a small ginger kit and a large chocolate tabby. "W-who are you?" You ask, cursing yourself for stuttering in front of these cats. "I am Volestar and this is Foxpaw", only then do you remember how hungry you were, "I have to go.." You whisper, starting to back up away from these strange cats. A small one starts, "You are trespassing on our territory, but not meaning harm, and you aren't a Clan cat. So that gives me the right to attack you" You start to bristle up waiting for an attack that never comes, "Foxpaw! Don't scare our guess" The Tabby begins to turn to you, "Young one, you show promise, would you consider joining AlderClan?" Yoy flick a ear, trying to pick if you would be welcomed to the Clan and if you want to be around them. With hesitation you whisper "Yes"
"Then welcome to AlderClan"
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Post by Ƈσяαℓ Mєямαι∂ ღ on Jun 2, 2017 17:18:53 GMT -5
wow. That was quick. But maybe a line or two longer if that's okay?
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Matija
BRO I REMEMBERED MY PASSWORD
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Post by Matija on Jun 2, 2017 17:39:19 GMT -5
Your tail swishes around to the loud bush, a faint ruffling noise it heard as you approach it, you can feel your hairs starting to brisle. You brush it off and continue on your way, still you feel a gaze on your pelt, swiftly turning again you see a small ginger kit and a large chocolate tabby. "W-who are you?" You ask, cursing yourself for stuttering in front of these cats. "I am Volestar and this is Foxpaw", only then do you remember how hungry you were, "I have to go.." You whisper, starting to back up away from these strange cats. A small one starts, "You are trespassing on our territory, but not meaning harm, and you aren't a Clan cat. So that gives me the right to attack you" You start to bristle up waiting for an attack that never comes, "Foxpaw! Don't scare our guest" The Tabby begins to turn to you, "Young one, you show promise, would you consider joining AlderClan?" You flick an ear, trying to pick if you would be welcomed to the Clan and if you want to be around them. With hesitation you whisper "Yes". "Then welcome to the Clan of the sneaky and cunning"He said leading you with a flick of his tail, you come across a clearing of trees with many cats inside greeting you with mainly happy glances. "Everyone shall welcome our new Clan mate...."
How is this?
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Post by Ƈσяαℓ Mєямαι∂ ღ on Jun 2, 2017 17:39:58 GMT -5
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Post by Ƈσяαℓ Mєямαι∂ ღ on Jun 2, 2017 19:45:47 GMT -5
looks good! Don't forget to tsp prey and predators as well (remember, you're in the forest, so think Thunderclan)
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Post by Ƈσяαℓ Mєямαι∂ ღ on Jun 3, 2017 15:01:28 GMT -5
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Post by Ƈσяαℓ Mєямαι∂ ღ on Jun 3, 2017 18:08:52 GMT -5
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Post by Ƈσяαℓ Mєямαι∂ ღ on Jun 3, 2017 18:16:17 GMT -5
✯ [ will not be able to update the front pages for about a week. my keyboard broke, so I'm waiting for my dad to send me a new onw. (I'm on my boyfriend's laptop for now, but I can't stay on long) ]
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Post by Ƈσяαℓ Mєямαι∂ ღ on Jun 3, 2017 18:19:35 GMT -5
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Post by ~Skyblaze~ on Jun 4, 2017 13:48:33 GMT -5
Oh cool, Alderclan was claimed!
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Post by Ƈσяαℓ Mєямαι∂ ღ on Jun 4, 2017 17:46:00 GMT -5
✯ i should be able to be back on by Friday, so I'm hoping we can get this up by June 15th. All we need is the history, territory, and camp, for two clans, I need to finish the joining page, and we need to decide who will run the all the other pages. I can probably do up to 3, but I'd rather only take two. I will definitely take the border page.
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Post by Dragoness on Jun 4, 2017 17:57:59 GMT -5
Sounds good! I'll try to finish everything by then, although I wouldn't mind a little bit of help on the territory.. I could probably run up to two additional pages as well.)
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Post by Ƈσяαℓ Mєямαι∂ ღ on Jun 4, 2017 18:04:06 GMT -5
✯ ʀᴀɪɴʟᴇᴀғ 🍁 you said you wouldn't mind helping? Can you help Dragoness with DepthClan Territory?
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Bisexual
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ʀᴀɪɴʟᴇᴀғ 🍁
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Easing back in
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Post by ʀᴀɪɴʟᴇᴀғ 🍁 on Jun 4, 2017 20:22:58 GMT -5
✯ ʀᴀɪɴʟᴇᴀғ 🍁 you said you wouldn't mind helping? Can you help Dragoness with DepthClan Territory? Certainly! Let me catch up on a few things. :3
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Post by Ƈσяαℓ Mєямαι∂ ღ on Jun 4, 2017 20:34:04 GMT -5
✯ ʀᴀɪɴʟᴇᴀғ 🍁 you said you wouldn't mind helping? Can you help Dragoness with DepthClan Territory? Certainly! Let me catch up on a few things. :3 Of course. Love your siggie btw And tagging Dragoness so she knows you'll help
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Post by Deleted on Jun 5, 2017 10:51:39 GMT -5
Ohh Coral can I join? I will part of DepthClan.
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Post by Ƈσяαℓ Mєямαι∂ ღ on Jun 5, 2017 12:17:11 GMT -5
Ohh Coral can I join? I will part of DepthClan. Every clan has been claimed, but once everything is up, of course you can join!!
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Post by Deleted on Jun 5, 2017 15:05:04 GMT -5
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Post by Dragoness on Jun 5, 2017 15:30:01 GMT -5
✯ ʀᴀɪɴʟᴇᴀғ 🍁 you said you wouldn't mind helping? Can you help Dragoness with DepthClan Territory? Certainly! Let me catch up on a few things. :3 Thank you! Maybe you could write a little bit about the camp (the high rock, each of the dens, etc)? I'm not feeling very inspired atm
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Post by Deleted on Jun 6, 2017 1:55:26 GMT -5
Ƈσяαℓ Mєямαι∂ ღ I love your avatar it's adorable! A little chibi corgi mermaid. There's nothing cuter than that!
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