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Post by phantomstar57 on Sept 6, 2016 11:35:15 GMT -5
Then you'll post rest the rest of it |
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Post by Spottail on Sept 6, 2016 19:26:11 GMT -5
Cool I can't wait to read the rest of it
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Post by phantomstar57 on Sept 12, 2016 10:24:16 GMT -5
Well reading the 2nd book of the new series and YIKES gotta go in and change some names. Didn't guess right on any of them LOL plus to add a bit of detail in spots i left vague--oy
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Post by Spottail on Sept 12, 2016 12:23:42 GMT -5
Did ya read the whole thing? I'm still reading mine.
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Post by phantomstar57 on Sept 12, 2016 16:15:45 GMT -5
Did ya read the whole thing? I'm still reading mine. |
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Post by Spottail on Sept 13, 2016 9:23:14 GMT -5
Ah of Sparkpaw and Alderpaw
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Post by phantomstar57 on Sept 13, 2016 13:33:59 GMT -5
Ah of Sparkpaw and Alderpaw
Just not sure how far I can mess with the canon character's history.
And I really wish i didn't have to wait until the end of the arc to see if they bring back Sky Clan and if they do will it be back to the Gorge or back to the lake??
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Post by 🍁Searipple101🍁 on Sept 13, 2016 14:02:49 GMT -5
“Greykit.” Bramblestar gazed down at him. “From this day forth you will be known as Greypaw, and your mentor is Birchfall. I know she will train you well.” Isn't Birchfall a tom?
“Greypaw! Greypaw!” The Clan meowed enthusiastically, and Millie beamed with rare pride, her head lying on Graystripe’s shoulder, but her eyes met Kyestorm’s. Kyestorm saw the silent thank you shining there.
“Rainkit.” Bramblestar looked at the small tom. “From this day forth you will be known as Greypaw, and your mentor is Hollytuft. I know she will train you well.”
That is chapter 6, part one. There are some punctuation mistakes, too. Very good, so far, though. I'll have to read part 2 some other time, however.
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Post by phantomstar57 on Sept 13, 2016 14:39:14 GMT -5
“Greykit.” Bramblestar gazed down at him. “From this day forth you will be known as Greypaw, and your mentor is Birchfall. I know she will train you well.” Isn't Birchfall a tom?“Greypaw! Greypaw!” The Clan meowed enthusiastically, and Millie beamed with rare pride, her head lying on Graystripe’s shoulder, but her eyes met Kyestorm’s. Kyestorm saw the silent thank you shining there. “ Rainkit.” Bramblestar looked at the small tom. “From this day forth you will be known as Greypaw, and your mentor is Hollytuft. I know she will train you well.” That is chapter 6, part one. There are some punctuation mistakes, too. Very good, so far, though. I'll have to read part 2 some other time, however.
Yep Birchfall is a tom! Utter senior moments! I'm in the process of some minor revising as i am reading the 2nd book of Vision of Shadows, and I did not guess very well on warrior names except for Sparkfire! Tho that is only the name her brother thinks she should have had!
Hey take your time LOL May take me time to finish this story anyway. . took me two years to get to Chap 13!
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Post by 🍁Searipple101🍁 on Sept 13, 2016 14:41:44 GMT -5
Two years?? Wow! I try to write a chapter for my fics at least once a week, and I just started another XD I've got three now, so Idk about once a week anymore, but two years...dang!
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Post by Spottail on Sept 13, 2016 17:16:35 GMT -5
Ah, are ya changing the names of Dawnpelt's kits too?
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Post by phantomstar57 on Sept 13, 2016 19:26:43 GMT -5
Ah, are ya changing the names of Dawnpelt's kits too? |
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Post by phantomstar57 on Sept 13, 2016 19:28:09 GMT -5
Two years?? Wow! I try to write a chapter for my fics at least once a week, and I just started another XD I've got three now, so Idk about once a week anymore, but two years...dang!
writing for me/ LOL Then I have a zillion other things I am into as well so everything I do takes longer. |
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Post by 🍁Searipple101🍁 on Sept 13, 2016 19:30:41 GMT -5
Ah, yeah, that makes sense. I kind of forgot you wrote for real, too, like publishing and such. I saw an ad on here before for Khan: A Maine Coon. Your book, isn't it?
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Post by phantomstar57 on Sept 13, 2016 19:41:01 GMT -5
Ah, yeah, that makes sense. I kind of forgot you wrote for real, too, like publishing and such. I saw an ad on here before for Khan: A Maine Coon. Your book, isn't it? |
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Post by 🍁Searipple101🍁 on Sept 13, 2016 19:55:18 GMT -5
Oh, I' so sorry! The same thing happened to my mother a few years ago. She worked at the same place for over 20 years, and then they downsized and laid her off. She found a better job, but still. Do you guys know what you're going to do? Is he going to work again for a couple years, or small jobs? If I can ask, of course.
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Post by phantomstar57 on Sept 13, 2016 20:36:45 GMT -5
Oh, I' so sorry! The same thing happened to my mother a few years ago. She worked at the same place for over 20 years, and then they downsized and laid her off. She found a better job, but still. Do you guys know what you're going to do? Is he going to work again for a couple years, or small jobs? If I can ask, of course. Sure you can ask. I think he's going to take some time to think about what he wants to do, and just enjoy the rest of the warm weather. They gave him severence so we should be good but its a shock to get laid off after 28 years. . . |
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Post by 🍁Searipple101🍁 on Sept 13, 2016 20:39:30 GMT -5
I can understand that. I am quite sorry that it happened. I get that it really sucks. :/ I'm glad you guys will be okay, though! That's the most important thing.
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Post by phantomstar57 on Sept 13, 2016 20:42:45 GMT -5
I can understand that. I am quite sorry that it happened. I get that it really sucks. :/ I'm glad you guys will be okay, though! That's the most important thing. |
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Post by 🍁Searipple101🍁 on Sept 13, 2016 20:44:02 GMT -5
It very well could be, actually. I hope it is.
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Post by phantomstar57 on Sept 14, 2016 0:31:24 GMT -5
It very well could be, actually. I hope it is. |
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Post by Spottail on Sept 14, 2016 8:22:03 GMT -5
Ok ya don't have to, I was just wondering
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Post by phantomstar57 on Sept 14, 2016 9:25:04 GMT -5
Ok ya don't have to, I was just wondering |
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Post by 🍁Searipple101🍁 on Sept 14, 2016 9:51:28 GMT -5
I just hope all goes well for you both!
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Post by Spottail on Sept 14, 2016 12:14:32 GMT -5
If ya need help with the names just tell me
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Post by phantomstar57 on Sept 14, 2016 15:14:03 GMT -5
I just hope all goes well for you both! |
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Post by phantomstar57 on Sept 14, 2016 15:14:35 GMT -5
If ya need help with the names just tell me |
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Post by Spottail on Sept 14, 2016 19:09:04 GMT -5
You're welcome
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Post by phantomstar57 on Sept 28, 2016 12:20:07 GMT -5
Bumpity bump bump
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Post by phantomstar57 on Oct 5, 2016 0:29:56 GMT -5
So sorry I am stalled-just so busy, oh how I want to write. . .
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