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Post by phantomstar57 on Aug 2, 2016 13:03:57 GMT -5
Hi Code from the old forums. Credit to me and Brownie for the EASY TUTORIAL page for helping me configure it to here! Feel free to ask me to change colors. ..
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Post by mintedstar/fur on Aug 2, 2016 13:18:00 GMT -5
Did you replace all of the < with [ ? Or just the first and the last one.
I've also heard the some codes don't work as well because these forums are wider the WCF forums.
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Post by phantomstar57 on Aug 2, 2016 15:38:44 GMT -5
Did you replace all of the < with [ ? Or just the first and the last one. I've also heard the some codes don't work as well because these forums are wider the WCF forums. All of them. |
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Post by phantomstar57 on Aug 2, 2016 15:39:36 GMT -5
This is true, but I'm hoping that you still have a good 40-50 years left.  My goodness that would be awesome LOL I'd be over 100 years old!! |
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Post by 🍁Searipple101🍁 on Aug 2, 2016 19:18:00 GMT -5
I finally got a chance to read up to chapter 3! Though I usually don't like stories with cannon charcters in them, this one is pretty good. Characters I know are portrayed pretty well. I can honestly say I'm not a fan of names like "Demon B," "Kyepaw," and "Indikit" I can see why they are in there like that. However, I very much like the Maine Coons as characters, so far. I'd have to say Demon B is actually my favorite.
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Post by phantomstar57 on Aug 2, 2016 21:11:34 GMT -5
I finally got a chance to read up to chapter 3! Though I usually don't like stories with cannon charcters in them, this one is pretty good. Characters I know are portrayed pretty well. I can honestly say I'm not a fan of names like "Demon B," "Kyepaw," and "Indikit" I can see why they are in there like that. However, I very much like the Maine Coons as characters, so far. I'd have to say Demon B is actually my favorite. |
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Post by 🍁Searipple101🍁 on Aug 2, 2016 21:14:54 GMT -5
I just might, but I might not. We will see, I guess :3 Maine Coons are also very pretty cats, but I personally love Egyptian Maus and the ever popular Domestic Shorthair, since all the cats I'v ever had(which is a lot) were Domestics. Maus are just so beautiful, though.
Also, I updated BoB a little bit ago if you haven't seen and want to read it tonight.
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Post by 𝕊𝕙𝕒𝕕𝕠𝕨 on Aug 2, 2016 21:55:49 GMT -5
I can get more later for you!
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Post by 𝕊𝕙𝕒𝕕𝕠𝕨 on Aug 2, 2016 21:58:20 GMT -5
I can get you forum layouts, or I can make a new one.
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Post by phantomstar57 on Aug 2, 2016 22:52:29 GMT -5
I just might, but I might not. We will see, I guess :3 Maine Coons are also very pretty cats, but I personally love Egyptian Maus and the ever popular Domestic Shorthair, since all the cats I'v ever had(which is a lot) were Domestics. Maus are just so beautiful, though. Also, I updated BoB a little bit ago if you haven't seen and want to read it tonight.
I have my sixth and seventh Maine Coons now. The guy in my Avatar was my 1st in 1990-a dapper Tuxedo Coonie off old fashioned lines. I based Demonkit/paw on him. maine Coons are just wonderful cats-I will always have at least one in my house! Now to base a future character on my present two, and the Bombay lookalike, my black short hair, Orion!
I just saw you have Chap 24 up! I have to go to bed now but I will definitely read it tomorrow!! Keeping the email so i can go right to it. |
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Post by phantomstar57 on Aug 3, 2016 8:33:50 GMT -5
I can get you forum layouts, or I can make a new one. |
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This is a drawing I made
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Post by Spottail on Aug 3, 2016 8:44:13 GMT -5
Wow! That was worth the wait, I can't wait for chapter 14!
And how do I get my stories from the old site, onto the new site?
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Post by phantomstar57 on Aug 3, 2016 8:53:20 GMT -5
Wow! That was worth the wait, I can't wait for chapter 14! And how do I get my stories from the old site, onto the new site? |
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Deputy
This is a drawing I made
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Post by Spottail on Aug 3, 2016 8:58:45 GMT -5
Ok, I'll try that. Thank's Phantom.
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Post by mintedstar/fur on Aug 3, 2016 12:48:53 GMT -5
Did you replace all of the < with [ ? Or just the first and the last one. I've also heard the some codes don't work as well because these forums are wider the WCF forums. All of them. No idea then.  I'm just as confused as you. That should work... |
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Post by phantomstar57 on Aug 3, 2016 18:43:45 GMT -5
No idea then. I'm just as confused as you. That should work... |
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Post by phantomstar57 on Aug 4, 2016 10:08:32 GMT -5
Hi Code from the old forums. Credit to me and Brownie for the EASY TUTORIAL page for helping me configure it to here! Feel free to ask me to change colors. .. |
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Post by 🍁Searipple101🍁 on Aug 4, 2016 13:10:54 GMT -5
Very exciting chapter for chapter 4! Still loving Demonstone so much, and now I have a very fond affection for Phantomkit as well. He's adorable and already looking out for the other kits. However, I did find some mistakes in the writing.
“Of course!” Kyepaw yowled, and followed Squirrelflight out of the camp, and down into the forest. Kyepaw remembered her lessons, and walked on silent pads, bushy tail tucked to her body. She quelled the urge to twitch it. Leaves rustled, and she heard the chittering of foraging squirrels. Squirrelflight hung back, and vanished into the undergrowth, her pelt melting into the browns, rusts and golds of the brush A green blush of new leaves covered everything. Ahead, two squirrels raced around the base of a tree, digging in the leaf litter, chattering at each other. Kye dropped to her stomach, and crawled, step by step, halting if one of them liftedits head. She watched every speck of ground for crispy leaves.
Out of her peripheral vision she spotted Squirrelflight paralleling her, heading for the other side of the tree. She kept her lessons in her mind. Concentrate! Move slowly, yet keep those hind legs tucked for the final pounce! The larger squirrel chattered at the other, and scurried toward Kyepaw, digging in the soil. Kyepaw judged the distance. The instincts of her long gone ancestors screamed in her blood, as she exploded from her crouch. The squirrel jerked upits head, but she landed her huge paws on its back, slamming it into the ground. She wasted no time delivering the kill bite to the back of the neck, then shook it for good measure. She salivated as the blood ran in her mouth, but resisted the urge to tear into the prey and gobble it up. She remembered; elders, injured Warriors, Queens and kits came first! The other squirrel screamed on the other side of the tree before silencing abruptly. Squirrelflight trotted over from behind the tree, dragging her kill, and seeing Kyepaw, her eyes widened with pleased surprise. She let go of her prey.
There were also times where you mentioned her as "Kye," and once in Part 1 where she was "Kyestorm" before her name.
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Post by 🍁Searipple101🍁 on Aug 4, 2016 13:15:36 GMT -5
I just might, but I might not. We will see, I guess :3 Maine Coons are also very pretty cats, but I personally love Egyptian Maus and the ever popular Domestic Shorthair, since all the cats I'v ever had(which is a lot) were Domestics. Maus are just so beautiful, though. Also, I updated BoB a little bit ago if you haven't seen and want to read it tonight.
I have my sixth and seventh Maine Coons now. The guy in my Avatar was my 1st in 1990-a dapper Tuxedo Coonie off old fashioned lines. I based Demonkit/paw on him. maine Coons are just wonderful cats-I will always have at least one in my house! Now to base a future character on my present two, and the Bombay lookalike, my black short hair, Orion!
I just saw you have Chap 24 up! I have to go to bed now but I will definitely read it tomorrow!! Keeping the email so i can go right to it.1990? I wasn't even born yet XD The cat in your avvie is very beautiful, though. I love tuxedos, but I've never had one myself. I pretty much like and think any cat is beautiful, but, you know :3 By the way, the kits in your banner for chapter 4, I think it was(my memory is bad lol), gosh they are all amazing. Do you make the banners yourself, because that art is really, really good. |
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Post by phantomstar57 on Aug 4, 2016 13:16:57 GMT -5
Very exciting chapter for chapter 4! Still loving Demonstone so much, and now I have a very fond affection for Phantomkit as well. He's adorable and already looking out for the other kits. However, I did find some mistakes in the writing. “Of course!” Kyepaw yowled, and followed Squirrelflight out of the camp, and down into the forest. Kyepaw remembered her lessons, and walked on silent pads, bushy tail tucked to her body. She quelled the urge to twitch it. Leaves rustled, and she heard the chittering of foraging squirrels. Squirrelflight hung back, and vanished into the undergrowth, her pelt melting into the browns, rusts and golds of the brush A green blush of new leaves covered everything. Ahead, two squirrels raced around the base of a tree, digging in the leaf litter, chattering at each other. Kye dropped to her stomach, and crawled, step by step, halting if one of them liftedits head. She watched every speck of ground for crispy leaves.
Out of her peripheral vision she spotted Squirrelflight paralleling her, heading for the other side of the tree. She kept her lessons in her mind. Concentrate! Move slowly, yet keep those hind legs tucked for the final pounce! The larger squirrel chattered at the other, and scurried toward Kyepaw, digging in the soil. Kyepaw judged the distance. The instincts of her long gone ancestors screamed in her blood, as she exploded from her crouch. The squirrel jerked upits head, but she landed her huge paws on its back, slamming it into the ground. She wasted no time delivering the kill bite to the back of the neck, then shook it for good measure. She salivated as the blood ran in her mouth, but resisted the urge to tear into the prey and gobble it up. She remembered; elders, injured Warriors, Queens and kits came first! The other squirrel screamed on the other side of the tree before silencing abruptly. Squirrelflight trotted over from behind the tree, dragging her kill, and seeing Kyepaw, her eyes widened with pleased surprise. She let go of her prey.
There were also times where you mentioned her as "Kye," and once in Part 1 where she was "Kyestorm" before her name. |
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Post by 🍁Searipple101🍁 on Aug 4, 2016 13:21:39 GMT -5
You're welcome, and I know the feeling. I have to write everything in Wordpad, which has no spellcheck or anything, so I either have to catch it while writing on there or look for red, jagged lines when I paste it all on here. I am the typo Princess, but don't quote me on that because I'm not a princess in any other way XD
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Post by phantomstar57 on Aug 4, 2016 13:27:54 GMT -5
You're welcome, and I know the feeling. I have to write everything in Wordpad, which has no spellcheck or anything, so I either have to catch it while writing on there or look for red, jagged lines when I paste it all on here. I am the typo Princess, but don't quote me on that because I'm not a princess in any other way XD
Thanks again for seeing those!
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Post by 🍁Searipple101🍁 on Aug 4, 2016 13:47:11 GMT -5
No problem! Every writer needs to someone to proof the works; I know I really do. Besides, writers help each other out |
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Post by phantomstar57 on Aug 4, 2016 14:22:49 GMT -5
Egyptian Maus are beautiful. Actually my Phantom was a domestic Shorthair of Siamese descent, but for this story I made him a Maine Coon since he thought he was one LOL. He and Khan were best of buddies, and he was so smart.
I have my sixth and seventh Maine Coons now. The guy in my Avatar was my 1st in 1990-a dapper Tuxedo Coonie off old fashioned lines. I based Demonkit/paw on him. maine Coons are just wonderful cats-I will always have at least one in my house! Now to base a future character on my present two, and the Bombay lookalike, my black short hair, Orion!
I just saw you have Chap 24 up! I have to go to bed now but I will definitely read it tomorrow!! Keeping the email so i can go right to it. 1990? I wasn't even born yet XD The cat in your avvie is very beautiful, though. I love tuxedos, but I've never had one myself. I pretty much like and think any cat is beautiful, but, you know :3 By the way, the kits in your banner for chapter 4, I think it was(my memory is bad lol), gosh they are all amazing. Do you make the banners yourself, because that art is really, really good.
And thank you!
All the kits in the banner made from photos of my own Coonies as kittens, except Phantomkit. The real Phantom was a DSH of Siamese descent but he was Khan's (brown tabby) best bud and thought he was one LOL.So I just turned him into a Coon kit.
I did make all the chapter banners as well. The main one Skyfall tweaked for me adding the grass elements and it fits so well. My big red Maine Coon Kai, who I lost in Jan of 2015 is the model for Kyestorm. I did a combo of altered photos and freehand drawings to do the illustrations for this story.
It will be fun writing more stories since my Abby is one little hellion, yet she is so loving and cute and pretty LOL. Unlike Indy, she is not bratty at all just so full of mischief and even tho she's 9 months old she does not want to grow up! She's like a giant kittenbrain! She will be a fun character to use in a future story. Her full name is Kitty Up's Abilene Khaleesi and even tho her half brother Darwin is so much larger, she rules his life LOL. Just mulling in my head what their names would be and developing charcater profiles for a future tale with Kyestorm's 3rd litter. . . Thanks agian for finding those booboos I thought I caught all the misplaced Kye's and Kyepaws/storms, but I guess when i had to re-upload I didn't recheck the original files on the computer! DOH |
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Post by 🍁Searipple101🍁 on Aug 4, 2016 15:05:59 GMT -5
Eh, you're never too old to love cats!
All your kitties sound so cute <3 Your banners are seriously so good, too! I do all my stuff -banners, all the profile pics I've had so far, any artwork I post at all- myself. I draw everything and gosh does it cramp the hand. I wish, still, I could get a more realistic look that your banners have. Realistic I can only do semi-well in graphite pencil. Can I ask what art program you use for your banners to make them look like that and to tweak photos?
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Post by phantomstar57 on Aug 4, 2016 20:42:19 GMT -5
Eh, you're never too old to love cats! All your kitties sound so cute <3 Your banners are seriously so good, too! I do all my stuff -banners, all the profile pics I've had so far, any artwork I post at all- myself. I draw everything and gosh does it cramp the hand. I wish, still, I could get a more realistic look that your banners have. Realistic I can only do semi-well in graphite pencil. Can I ask what art program you use for your banners to make them look like that and to tweak photos? |
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Post by 🍁Searipple101🍁 on Aug 4, 2016 20:53:45 GMT -5
Wow, sounds like some hard work, and I thought drawing everything was hard! They turn out so great, though! I'm more of an artist than a writer, as art is my favorite hobby, so even though you're writing is good, I find your banners to be the best part XD
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Post by phantomstar57 on Aug 5, 2016 8:27:17 GMT -5
Wow, sounds like some hard work, and I thought drawing everything was hard! They turn out so great, though! I'm more of an artist than a writer, as art is my favorite hobby, so even though you're writing is good, I find your banners to be the best part XD |
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Post by 🍁Searipple101🍁 on Aug 5, 2016 9:50:50 GMT -5
What other things have you written? Like, would I be able to look up anything online to read and such? I'm not much into most sci-fi things, but I'm willing to give some stuff a shot since you are a really good writer.
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This is a drawing I made
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Post by Spottail on Aug 5, 2016 10:06:35 GMT -5
Wow! I didn't know you were 59 years old, I'm only 27. Also all of my stories are almost up. I got the Christmas story up and your welcome to check it out I'm still working on some changes Just to worn ya. and I got The survivors 2, 3, and 6 up. 5 and 4 are coming.
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I'm just as confused as you. That should work...