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Post by FåwnFrøst on Mar 28, 2017 21:36:06 GMT -5
Okay. I've edited the first chapter and now it's like it's brand new! Shadowpaw's character is now more in-depth, the powers have been explained a bit, and I've made it so it flows better.
Check it out!
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Post by mintedstar/fur on Mar 28, 2017 23:52:32 GMT -5
I'll check it out tomorrow, as I have to go soon.  |
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Post by FåwnFrøst on Mar 31, 2017 22:30:55 GMT -5
Any new readers?
I'm working on chapter 2 soon, so be prepared!
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Post by mintedstar/fur on Apr 3, 2017 0:01:45 GMT -5
Is prepared. :3
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Post by perfectlypink♥ on Apr 3, 2017 21:34:18 GMT -5
I like this story so far! Could you add me as a fan?
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Post by FåwnFrøst on Apr 3, 2017 22:05:02 GMT -5
Gladly! You're up there now!
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Post by mintedstar/fur on Apr 7, 2017 2:23:05 GMT -5
By the way, I love the edited chapter. It flows better and explains the powers a lot more.  |
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Post by FåwnFrøst on Apr 7, 2017 7:31:21 GMT -5
By the way, I love the edited chapter. It flows better and explains the powers a lot more. Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it! Also, it has taken me forever to actually get started on the second chapter, but I'm hoping to have it done this weekend. |
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Post by FåwnFrøst on Apr 8, 2017 18:39:42 GMT -5
I'm like halfway through the second chapter! Yay! I feel really sad about it though because I don't want to be putting my character through all this. Poor Shadowpaw.  |
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Post by mintedstar/fur on Apr 9, 2017 5:15:36 GMT -5
Know it makes them stronger in the end.  |
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Post by FåwnFrøst on Apr 9, 2017 18:43:10 GMT -5
I'm in the middle of chapter two because for whatever reason my computer restarted and didn't save it. I'm hoping to have it up soon, though!
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Post by mintedstar/fur on Apr 9, 2017 18:44:31 GMT -5
I hate when that happens. >.<
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Post by FåwnFrøst on Apr 9, 2017 20:03:09 GMT -5
I know! And I had written the first version before I went to bed so of course it didn't stay in my brain.
Hey, how did you get your signature to change? It's really cool.
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Post by mintedstar/fur on Apr 9, 2017 20:39:40 GMT -5
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Post by FåwnFrøst on Apr 11, 2017 7:29:15 GMT -5
My internet's been weird so I haven't been able to work on chapter 2, but now I can! I'm hoping to get it done by friday (famous last words)
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Post by FåwnFrøst on Apr 15, 2017 12:32:48 GMT -5
So I missed my deadline (that'll happen a lot) but Im about halfway through it, which, knowing how long I'll make it, will probably end up more like a fourth of the way done. I really hope to get it up by monday, though!
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Post by mintedstar/fur on Apr 15, 2017 20:42:35 GMT -5
Really looking forward to it! |
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Post by FåwnFrøst on Apr 21, 2017 6:38:31 GMT -5
I'm really, really sorry, but I don't think I'll be able to get chapter two up anytime soon. I've had a crazy week (ACT testing every day, I can't find my kitten, and I'm swamped with homework) but I am trying to work on it as much as I can.
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Post by mintedstar/fur on Apr 25, 2017 12:45:26 GMT -5
Don't worry about it. All that stuff comes first. |
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Post by FåwnFrøst on May 5, 2017 17:33:12 GMT -5
Reading through this and seeing how many times I've let you guys down... I've had some free time this week and and about 2/3 of the way done with the chapter!  |
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Post by mintedstar/fur on May 5, 2017 18:17:45 GMT -5
Cool! Can't wait! |
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Post by Deleted on May 29, 2017 3:52:58 GMT -5
.This is very interesting. Me likey.
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Post by FåwnFrøst on May 29, 2017 10:37:14 GMT -5
. This is very interesting. Me likey. Thanks! Chapter two should be up soon, so stay tuned! |
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Post by FåwnFrøst on May 29, 2017 13:22:34 GMT -5
Long-awaited chapter two is up! Not as long as chapter one, but I decided to end it there because if I didn't stop I'd write forever. Can't wait to see what you guys think!
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Post by кєѕтяєℓ on May 29, 2017 15:03:09 GMT -5
It's amazing! It better not take that long for you to get the next chapter up, I can't wait to see what happens!
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Post by FåwnFrøst on Jun 4, 2017 21:25:28 GMT -5
It's amazing! It better not take that long for you to get the next chapter up, I can't wait to see what happens! Knowing me, it'll probably be another month  (that was a joke) |
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Post by Deleted on Jun 6, 2017 2:05:48 GMT -5
It's amazing! It better not take that long for you to get the next chapter up, I can't wait to see what happens! Knowing me, it'll probably be another month (that was a joke) Lol |
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Post by FåwnFrøst on Jun 24, 2017 11:20:20 GMT -5
Working on chapter 3! LOL it's been another month. I'm too busy for this.  |
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Post by FåwnFrøst on Jul 6, 2017 14:53:34 GMT -5
Chapter three is UP! finally |
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Post by FåwnFrøst on Jul 8, 2017 10:52:46 GMT -5
 I had sarasaurus make some cool art of Shadowpaw! |
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(that was a joke)