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Post by 𝕊𝕙𝕒𝕕𝕠𝕨 on Feb 12, 2017 5:01:25 GMT -5
I'm still deciding on what to enters, Secrets(Shadestar story), or Broken Dreams(Dappledream's story). One is sweet and uplifting, the other is kind of sad and heart breaking...)
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Post by 𝕊𝕙𝕒𝕕𝕠𝕨 on Feb 12, 2017 5:08:59 GMT -5
Dang Peony made me sad... ![:(](//storage.proboards.com/6575102/images/RCFqazfvhbMAeE5hIhD3.gif)
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Post by Deleted on Feb 12, 2017 5:23:11 GMT -5
☁︎ out of character ☁︎ gUYS STOP KILLING ME HEART
☁︎ roleplay ☁︎
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Post by Novi on Feb 12, 2017 10:39:04 GMT -5
It's a good story, Lynx, but i would likebto point at that just because Dappledream and Yellowclaw were friends doesnt meant Dapple and Snowfawn were
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Post by 𝕊𝕙𝕒𝕕𝕠𝕨 on Feb 12, 2017 12:45:10 GMT -5
I never said they where? She was just tagging along with Snowpaw and Yellowpaw.
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Post by Novi on Feb 12, 2017 12:47:24 GMT -5
Hm...I guess that's just the sense that I got. Especially since in RP Dapple said something about how they used to play tag together. Whatever. Still well written
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Post by 𝕊𝕙𝕒𝕕𝕠𝕨 on Feb 12, 2017 12:50:48 GMT -5
Eh, I meant to imply that they where acquaintances, but Dapplepaw usually wanted Yellowpaw's company and would tag along. That's why whenever Snowpaw is gentle and asks Dapple what is wrong, Dapple responded semi-harshly to her, because it's something to only be trusted with friend. But I can see where you got it from.
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Post by 𝕊𝕙𝕒𝕕𝕠𝕨 on Feb 12, 2017 12:52:03 GMT -5
Hm...I guess that's just the sense that I got. Especially since in RP Dapple said something about how they used to play tag together. Whatever. Still well written Honestly, Dapple might have gotten Snow confused for a different old friend. Or made the fact up, sometimes I sway my characters the ways I think fits them best, or causes to most drama in RP.
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Post by possumstep on Feb 12, 2017 12:52:59 GMT -5
good morning! i ended up spending like two hours this morning drawing a weird mewtwo that appeared in my dream. wow i've got writer's block for the noisekit story, so i don't know if i'll end up finishing it today either.
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Post by 𝕊𝕙𝕒𝕕𝕠𝕨 on Feb 12, 2017 12:53:52 GMT -5
The original vibe of that story was betrayal, as I was going to add her Starclan thoughts but decided against it. Then it turned to sadness, and maybe a little hope.
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Post by 𝕊𝕙𝕒𝕕𝕠𝕨 on Feb 12, 2017 12:55:46 GMT -5
So which should I enter guys, Broken Dreams or Secrets?
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Post by Novi on Feb 12, 2017 12:57:27 GMT -5
Show us Possum xD Dun know about everybody else, but major pokemon nerd over here. Lol
Whichever you want Lynx
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Post by possumstep on Feb 12, 2017 13:00:53 GMT -5
well alright!! i'll also put in the original dream writeup. all in a spoiler tag cuz its a bit long. also has slight body horror ![](https://68.media.tumblr.com/04af70c5703df6ea9040476fdd7d9062/tumblr_ol9vhltm6i1smae2vo1_1280.png) ![](https://68.media.tumblr.com/6b7fcbf50692732bd82bb27265895ae6/tumblr_ol9vhltm6i1smae2vo2_1280.png) had a dream where it was revealed that there’d be new free dlc for pokemon sun and moon, which not only added a new postgame plotline and extra battle tree trainers, but a bunch of new pokemon and forms for existing pokemon as well. a ton of the new forms were like… “ancient forms”, though the only one i can remember is “ancient passimian” which looked like oranguru but frillier and with an old-timey, earth palette. more interestingly was this, which i thought was a new mewtwo form but was actually its own pokemon, called “xeritwo”. i remember going onto bogleech’s pokemon reviews to see what he thought of these new reveals, and he actually posted the leaked origin of xeritwo, which was that it was a living psychic manifestation of mew’s fear of its own clone. i also remember him saying that he found the design somewhat lackluster at first, and then it revealed its second appearance. he didn’t give it a rating, though, because he decided to hold off on that until the dlc was released to ensure he knew everything important to know before passing a final judgement on it. i couldn’t tell if the red growths on it were meant to be gemstones, eyes, blisters, or bizarre external organs. they were very shiny, and pulsed in and out of its body rhythmically, like a heartbeat. most people were theorizing it’d be either psychic/dark, pure psychic, pure dark, or bring back the ???-type i woke up to realize that the sun/moon credits theme were playing in my earbuds from my ipad, and with a surprisingly clear memory of what xeritwo looked like.
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Post by Novi on Feb 12, 2017 13:10:23 GMT -5
That's so weird. It makes me think of some freaky clown xD
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Post by faundestwishes on Feb 12, 2017 14:13:07 GMT -5
Poor little medicine cat had such high dreams... Medicine cats falling in love is like, always so sad too.. and idk which one you should submit Lynx, a lot of us seem to be going for sad themes, so Broken would fit, but then you could have an outlier like Sitting Pretty by submitting secrets. Also, thank you, it was unintentional for the feels but it started and went so..x'D
Pokemon nerd over herreee That'd be a freaky mewtwo variation to see in game O0O
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Post by Hawkeyes258 on Feb 12, 2017 15:43:52 GMT -5
Afternoon!
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Post by Novi on Feb 12, 2017 15:48:51 GMT -5
I'm alive ![:D](//storage.proboards.com/6575102/images/Zk1a5XUEHw6Q8FG1L5Qy.gif) Dont know how. Still procrastinating on the important things in life. But I'm here. Lol. How's life been?
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Post by Hawkeyes258 on Feb 12, 2017 15:52:03 GMT -5
Yup
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Post by Cinnamon Roll on Feb 12, 2017 16:47:48 GMT -5
Possum, I love your art! That mewtwo form/manifestation thing is..very creepy,but in a good way lol. 𝕊𝕙𝕒𝕕𝕠𝕨 I think my choice would be Broken, since I found that one to be a little easier to follow story-wise, vs the other which felt a bit more disjointed to me? Not sure how to describe it, but I think that the second piece you wrote is just slightly better. But pick whichever one you want! I think both would make good additions to the story contest. Also I'm gonna cast my vote for non-canon on the Dappledream story, at least where Yellowclaw is concerned. His characterization/interactions are just a little bit off for me to feel like it portrays him accurately.
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Post by 𝕊𝕙𝕒𝕕𝕠𝕨 on Feb 12, 2017 16:50:00 GMT -5
I can change it, I just didn't really know how to portray a younger version of him, can you describe how he would act at the news for me that way I can edit it?
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Post by 𝕊𝕙𝕒𝕕𝕠𝕨 on Feb 12, 2017 16:52:46 GMT -5
Plus the Dappledream story was written because I was board as flip and wanted to make something depressing and slightly hopeful. Plus, I thought it would help with a possible plot upcoming with Dappledream, if Nido approves it. It extremely odd(The plot is), so this will help others understand her if I do it. And why she chooses to do what she chooses to do.
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Post by 𝕊𝕙𝕒𝕕𝕠𝕨 on Feb 12, 2017 16:54:24 GMT -5
Also thanks Cina ![:)](//storage.proboards.com/6575102/images/lNtnPuxeCzkaKMNYVXVv.gif) . I appreciate your support in me entering, it is nice to see people who are very kind and caring, so thanks! I might write another one soon, I'm bored again....
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Post by Cinnamon Roll on Feb 12, 2017 17:06:26 GMT -5
Hey, yeah, no problem! It's your contest lol of course you should enter!
So Yellowclaw, especially as an apprentice was always kind of "married to his work", so he takes the warrior code and his duties really really seriously. Not to the point to where he can't be flexible, but so that he's kindof a stiff, stick in the mud at times. He would probably react to Dappledream's confession with confusion and shock, but not in anger. He wouldn't want to hurt her feelings, since she's his close friend, but he also would never dream of ever doing something to go against the rules. It's conflicting for him though since medicine cat celibacy isn't necessarily a rule in the warrior code, but the news is still very unsettling for him. And of course he did love Dappledream, but it wasn't in a romantic kind of way. He respected her and loved her devotion and her spirit. Upon her death he feels a lot of sorrow and is really upset at himself for not handling her confession better, and he wishes he could have helped her to understand that just because she doesn't have a mate doesn't mean her clanmates don't love her.
All in all, Yellowclaw was a semi-serious apprentice who became a very quiet, solemn, lonely warrior when his two closest friends died in his youth. He never took a mate because he felt like he couldn't bear to love any individual cats more than he loved his clan as a whole- he was afraid to lose someone close to him again. Dappledream's death was the beginning of a slippery slope for him where he became a very secluded, private cat.
Sorry for the wall of text. I just... I love my cats dearly and I love talking about them LOL
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Post by Novi on Feb 12, 2017 17:11:43 GMT -5
Something I'm curious about. Did Dapple choose to be a medicine cat? I feel like if having a mate was so important to her, why have the one job where it was against a code?
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Post by Cinnamon Roll on Feb 12, 2017 17:13:46 GMT -5
Oh, That's a good question!
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Post by possumstep on Feb 12, 2017 17:16:20 GMT -5
CINNAMON ROLL YOU ARE SO GOOD WITH CHARACTERS AND PLOTS LIKE........... you're so skilled at writing character analysis and i'm honestly a little jealous!! impressive.....................
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Post by Novi on Feb 12, 2017 17:19:24 GMT -5
Saame. That skill be on point <3
But, like, I don't mean anything mean by it. But from the way Dapple acts, it seems to me like she's always had this thing where she needed to be loved? And only a mate could make her really feel that? I dunno. Just the vibes I'm getting
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Post by Cinnamon Roll on Feb 12, 2017 17:21:45 GMT -5
It's all experience possum I swear the only reason I'm good at this is because I'm a dumb kid who spends her time world building instead of going outside lol Practice makes perfect, I guess? And I've been a roleplayer since I was in the 5th/6th grade so its been a v long time.
So in other words, throw away your free time to making fictional cat characters and someday you will also make overly complex felines with sad backstories! (lmmfaofjdfkds do not do that omg seriously your cats are gr8 already, I just go way too in depth)
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Post by Novi on Feb 12, 2017 17:24:54 GMT -5
Hm...when did I star RPing? I think I picked up the warriors books around 4th/5th grade. Got on the forums some time in middle school. Was on and off for a while...so at least 6 years?
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Post by Cinnamon Roll on Feb 12, 2017 17:33:02 GMT -5
How to become a """Professional""" Roleplayer in 10 Steps:
Step 1: Find a subject youre interested in, make fan characters and talk about them with others Step 2: Find a forum and start actually playing out scenarios with your characters Step 3: Build/Find an engine to not only type out your roleplay but live it (i.e an mmo/world generator) Step 4: Escape the toxic environment of said communities and become a headworld hermit Step 5: Start writing fanfiction/offshoot series for fan characters within the universe Step 6: Tweak it slightly so it's not plagiarism, publish books and wait for them to become popular Step 7: Go BACK on the original roleplay forums you messed around on for teh nostalgia Step 8: "Oh you guys are so nice I'm not even good" Step 9: ????? Step 10: Profit.
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