Stand Until The End(Story Plan Page)

I just imagined him calling Drake 'Dad' lol yep that's a deathwish. Okay we can add Venom to the almost definite character list. Maybe we could add Nightshade just so we can have a female villain? I'll go to the RP page right now so if you just post a starter we can RP.

Well we thought she would be a good person to write about so there you go

Huh

What have we done

We have created the future (posted a start on the rp page for you)

What?

Villains: Temptation and Venom(Another?)
Heroes: Courtney(?), Sam(?), Alex
Civilian: Tonia
Neutral guy: Ghost

We have room for maybe one more villain and then it looks good to me, next order of business. Would we like to do this in third person kind of view, where it's like warriors, the characters thoughts can be seen but 'I' is not used, it would also be less confusing then everyone being in the first person view.

OR

We can do it in 1st person, we see through the character's eyes. If we did this, we can make it less confusing by putting the name of the chapter and bellow that, the POV. Example. "New Discoveries, POV Courtney(or whomever)

I'm down for Sam being a main character! Fair warning my schedule is gonna get really busy at the end of the month bc school will be starting up again and I work... and am going to be teaching myself how to make video games/making a prototype of my own game but I'm so down. Especially bc Sam is a character from one of my future video games and really want to develop their character and backstory more.

I do have a few ideas and slight critisims.
I do like the idea of having the old and new viewpoints of the different aspects of the Hero and Villain heirarchies would be great bc every story really has to hav e new perspective to introduce you to it while still moving the plot along (Otherwise it's 10 pages of boring intro)
I also like the idea of everyone who is an author having only 1 main character, except for Leo. I think that, since it is her rp and she rps the two leaders of the Vils and Heros that should should write both of them... as they are her characters and they are vital to the rp.
Slight suggestion (That is mostly up to Clover) I think Nightshade and Evergreen would be very interesting main characters bc they have the sister dynamic (Even if Myra doesn't know yet) and so far Nightshade has had a lot of interaction with Sam which would lead to Sam interacting with Myra. (But that's just from the Sam aspect as well. There is plenty more to explore there)

I do think we should remove the fact that John and Alex discovered the Villain HQ. there are a couple reasons for this.
1. None of the Heroes knew that the Villains were organized together, let alone organized enough to have a HQ.
2. It was a little premature in the rp and I think it would mess up the pacing with the story, especially with Sam being kidnapped and the whole reason they don't get rescued right away(Allowing the Villains to perform tests and torture on them) is because nobody knows what happened and where to find them.
3. Idk if the Villains should have an underground sewer HQ if they are heavily involved in the government... seems a little unprofessional lol xD
4. We could add it later in the story around rescue time


those are just a few of my thoughts! Obviously we don't have to use all of them lol. That's just part of brainstorming as a group

Also that's why I would like to write from Alex's perspective, because I feel she has a interesting story, but her tragic past doesn't hold her down, her powers have plenty of flaws and I feel it's cool that she is so powerful yet has a large lack in understanding how to use it(though in times of extreme need, control will probably fall in line with non-control). She's also a interesting character I created, sarcastic and rude at times, yet so hidden and yet open. She is new and does not have all the answers, all she knows is some villain(in her opinion) killed her parents years ago, but her mission is not to get revenge but to avenge who they where, not who killed them. So her story is interesting and I feel she can be helpful to the story plot, as well as provide some fun and yet intense moments.

I mean, her character continues to grow, I recently decided to choose what her power comes from, a thing I call magical energy, which she draws from herself and her emotions, as well as magic, which is why in times of great emotion(fear, anger, sadness, excitement) her mind subconsciously or consciously uses her power.

I got bored again, so sorry about all...that XD

Interesting layout but I think the colors are too hard on the eyes

I think the Prologue should be Temptation talking to an assembly of his Villains and of some of the corrupted government.
He should be talking about getting revenge and how all the Heroes are just like causing Chaos and getting in the way of progress and structure to society or something.

I also think we should come up with names for the respective groups of Villains and Heroes bc Villains don't necessarily know they are Villains(at least not all of them) they usually have a reason for why they do things and think they are doing whats best for them/the world/society/etc.

Maybe the Prologue can be his plans, and Chapter one could be Dragon and Super's prospective of it!

The Noble Dragon

If you want, I can make a new Private Message group and invite you, that way we can submit chapters there to be proofread. 

Okay tell me your ideas and if there's any images you have already found and have in mind then post them and I'll have a look!

I will soon probably, the idea is different colored eyes, one is red and one is blue

It is interesting, but the eyes belong to the same thing(or look like it),  but because of the choices, and what these choices make them, the eyes are different colors, red(not slitted though) eye, and a bright blue cyan eyes. One doesn't look good or evil, but I think it looks cool(I worked on it, probably for a hour or so...)

I will probably post it soon(maybe tomorrow)