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Post by ρłαgυegı .. on Aug 2, 2016 0:12:52 GMT -5
brief introduction.
Hello, I'm Plaguegi. Those of you that know me have probably seen me around, even though I tend to lurk more than I actually post. Perhaps you've seen my art or stumbled across a few stray rps? Either way, I decided now would be a good a time as ever to venture more into the realm of writing on wcrf. I would love to get tips and advice, so feel free to post ways for me to improve my writing! This is my first stab at a fanfiction here, and something I may need help with continuing. A bit of encouragement goes a long ways, so perhaps leave a comment or like if you enjoy? I'll update chapters as often as I am able, but of course I have work and the upcoming school year to worry about too. But anyways, if you have read this far, thank you for taking an interest in my work and humoring my rambling. ♥
summary.
The world has always been a cruel and unforgiving place, even in the eyes of pampered kitty pets whom have barely known the true hardships of a solitary life. One such kitty pet is Harrigan; born into the realm of two legs and collars and pellets of hard kibble and bowls of cream. Everything he's known has taken a change for the worst: whatever he may have done wrong, he doesn't know, but he's been abandoned mid-travel in the hot desert of New Mexico. Wandering a few miles on his own, he's hit by a passing car and left to the heat.
Fortunately for the poor fellow, a feral comes to his rescue- someone whom had the patience and determination to protect and aid his slow healing process. Harrigan, upon recovery, figures the strange cat to be Festus: a fellow victim to the harsh nature of two legs when he was abandoned on the road side as a mere kitten with his five siblings and mother in a box. Struggling with the aftermath of his injuries and his companion's slowly showing age, Harrigan and Festus endure the heat and the beasts scavenging for dwindling water supply and food sources in the midsummer heat.
With Harrigan's astounding ability to lure bad luck onto his path and Festus's waning health, the two find themselves confronted by the prospect of a new life, one neither are entirely prepared to delve head first into. With their brotherly bond growing, again does tragedy strike and the two are forced to take a new look on life as they know it and re-evaluate their options. Defying odds and adventure is a must for these two, but the upcoming obstacles that lay in their path may prove just a bit too much even for the most savvy of rogues.
So we enter a world where even the best things in life can be no more than a lie, and Harrigan and Festus must come to terms with being left for dead.
directory.
Post One: Brief Introduction, Summary, Directory. Post Two: Table of Contents, Discovered Characters. Post Three: Contests and Awards, Fans, Reviews. Post Four: Credit. Post Five: Prologue. Post Six: Chapter One. Post Seven: Extra Save
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Post by ρłαgυegı .. on Aug 2, 2016 0:13:06 GMT -5
table of contents.
Prologue ................................................ Page One. X Chapter One ........................................... Page One. X Chapter Two ........................................... Page One. X Chapter Three ......................................... Page One. X
discovered characters.
Harrigan: tba
Festus: An older Abyssian tom with short, coarse fur and pale yellow eyes. Reclusive, clever, and resourceful. Introduced as Harrigan's savior and guide throughout LFD.
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Post by ρłαgυegı .. on Aug 2, 2016 0:13:19 GMT -5
fans.
ѕαcяєɗмσση Brownie ᴛᴜᴇsᴅᴀʏ
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Post by ρłαgυegı .. on Aug 2, 2016 0:13:32 GMT -5
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Post by ρłαgυegı .. on Aug 2, 2016 0:13:58 GMT -5
Prologue.
In a world so large, it was easy to feel small. Insignificant. A little blot on the path that no one bothered to look at. Yet, as he lay on the hard and cracked thunder-path, he felt... large. Heavy and easily seen against the faded stone beneath him. His blood boiled in his veins and his fur felt as if it would fall off at any given moment, his sides rising and falling with each stuttering inhale that brought to him a slow ache resonating from hip to shoulder. Half of his face flattened by the boiling hot stone beneath him, only one eye was cracked open enough to see the world around. The sun was high and the path was silent, the thin and sparsely placed trees overhead offering virtually no shade to the cooking feline.
Seconds ticked by like minutes, and minutes like hours. He was fading, alone in his own empty head with nothing but the feeling of ants and grit in his fur to keep him company. And then- a drizzle. Not rain, no, it rarely rained. But a cold dab of liquid on his maw that, for the slightest second, encouraged him to respond. He didn't. And then another spatter, this time right at the crease of his lips where it could dribble into the side of his too dry mouth. His tongue moved, seeking out the fluid and absorbing it on contact. Another few drops and- for the first time in nearly two days- he moved. A subtle gesture, but his jaws slowly parted to bare a small portion of his fangs and allow the stale water to dribble in. It came in a small stream now, pooling in his maw while he tried so desperately hard to swallow it, all the while spilling out the side and forming a dark stain on the ground that would soon begin to fade with the relentless heat.
When the flow stopped, he wanted to cry out in protest. Please, don't stop. The first coherent thoughts he'd had since he had been hit, something he now tried to punctuate through meager words that came out more as a warbled squeaking. Silence answered his desperate and unintelligible pleas.
Again, he was left to the overbearing sunlight and the wicked heat. His belly growled where he lay, mind roused by the water his parched throat had been wet with hours ago. There was absolutely no breeze, the air was dry, and the pulse of heat flared most violently at his back- west. The sun would be setting soon, and then he could get a brief reprieve before the sounds of the creatures coming alive at night would frighten him. Or so he had thought, until he heard the light trot of oncoming paw steps. Again water spattered on his muzzle, his teeth parting now to swallow greedily whatever he was given. Only this time he had drank his fill, the onslaught of water stopping now. Something cold and damp was laid beside his head, just within access of his tongue should he extend it and smelling of earth and mud. A short stretch of silence, a shuffle, and the overbearing heat on his spine ceased. He had been cast in shade- something his bent and broken body now thanked with a rush of relief.
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The most miserable part of his predicament, he'd decided the night prior, was the cold. Yes. The cold was worse than the heat. He could barely shiver when the temperatures dropped so suddenly, and even the slightest breeze chilled him to the bone. His toes and nose would go numb, he'd long ago lost all feeling in his tail, and he couldn't even ball up and attempt to gather body heat. What's worse is, during the day, he could at least see hazy black shapes through his partially opened eye. At night he was blind to what roamed, even if he heard it all.
But not tonight.
Tonight he had his guardian. Another cat, he had determined, but one that didn't speak and left him be for the most part. As the cold settled upon them, coarse fur brushed against his own thinning and scraggly pelt, gathering heat between the two of them and helping to keep the injured tom comfortable well into the night. It was one of his decent sleeps, one devoid of dreams and excluding the noises and weather about him. But of course, all good things came to an end. In this instance, it was the warming daylight that would leave hi scorched and drained for the third time- and now the absence of his guardian. His pale pink tongue washed over his whisker pads and lapped at the surely soon to evaporate water, one ear twitching where he lay to pick up the faint sounds of... a fight?
Yes, it was a fight. Nearby, too. He could hear snarling and garbled tones, accompanied by the thump of bodies landing on compact dirt and the scrabbling of claws for a proper foothold. His heart began to thump violently in his chest, a fear-struck rabbit that battered at the cage his ribs created and tried desperately to flee. Had he been able, he would've roused enough to pull himself away. Unfortunately, he lacked the strength even to open his eyes. The brawl, while in reality lasting only a few minutes, felt like a life time to him. A time in which he squeezed his eye fully shut, cracked it open, repeated the process, and continued to force it wider. At last his blurry vision began to clear, color and shapes defining themselves to his sight for the first time in days. The sounds had since silence, but now he could see a lone figure.
His eye darted about in it's socket, searching for the second party to the fight, but found nothing. So at last his pupil shrunk against the light and honed in on the one whom remained. Their pelt dusty and now colored by occasional splatters of scarlet, clumped by dirt and fur and twigs jutting from short coarse fur, he met pale yellow eyes and swallowed, trying to speak. In the end, all to emerge from his throat was a rasp. Those same yellow eyes stared harshly upon his prone figure, until- without a sound- his savior left. They kicked what the injured tom now recognized as a ball of shriveled moss away, leaving him devoid of any water yet again as they strode from sight. Panic flared in his chest, he staring after them with one eye bleary with exhaustion and a pelt that slowly began to roast in the early morning sunlight.
And now, he thought: Save me.
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Post by ρłαgυegı .. on Aug 2, 2016 0:14:14 GMT -5
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Post by ρłαgυegı .. on Aug 2, 2016 0:26:55 GMT -5
extra save.
Feel free to post. ♥
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Post by ѕαcяєɗмσση on Aug 2, 2016 0:31:54 GMT -5
This is a very interesting concept! Certainly not bad for your first fanfic either. I'm guessing you got your experience from lots of rping perhaps? Either way, I'm curious to see how this will go. Consider me a fan!
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Post by ρłαgυegı .. on Aug 2, 2016 0:37:55 GMT -5
that and the occasional little splurges i'll do whenever i'm bored, but yea haha thank you! it's great to see somebody likes it already for having only a few decent paragraphs written up <3
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Post by Yoshimi on Aug 2, 2016 0:40:23 GMT -5
As said above. Not bad for your first fanfic. Love the descriptions of the New Mexican desert
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Post by ρłαgυegı .. on Aug 2, 2016 0:42:44 GMT -5
thank you! i'm afraid I don't know too much about it, but i'm researching and hoping i'm getting the terrain/weather accurate c;
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Post by Brownie on Aug 2, 2016 10:52:48 GMT -5
Ahhh this looks to be amazing. <3 Fan me plz.
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