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Post by Brownie on Apr 24, 2017 9:50:12 GMT -5
actually having inspiration for this what is thissssssss anyways just a plotting update: up to pXX is plotted nothing detailed, just basic what's happening and where the different plots will begin/end more of a timeline than anything but the new-POV-every-three is still a thing that I'm trying to continue
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Post by Brownie on Apr 25, 2017 23:17:24 GMT -5
more votes are good
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Post by Brownie on Apr 26, 2017 21:59:57 GMT -5
you know I was going to go on a rant about my hair last night I'm glad I didn't
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Post by Brownie on Apr 26, 2017 22:38:23 GMT -5
guess who also don't let me do lineless again plz but yeah out of all the group, Rose probably has the least screentime. She's p cool, but alas that just isn't how things panned out. anyways, she's a cream she-cat with white spotting and ginger patches. fluffy; if I'd draw her, she'd have the rounded fur type.
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Post by Brownie on Apr 27, 2017 20:20:46 GMT -5
I keep refreshing this like it would write itself if I did?
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Post by Brownie on Apr 28, 2017 8:24:54 GMT -5
I'm doing it again help
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Post by Brownie on Apr 29, 2017 10:48:08 GMT -5
a dozen = 12
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Post by Brownie on Apr 30, 2017 12:15:28 GMT -5
but a baker's dozen is 13
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Post by ☾ Cʀᴇsᴄᴇɴᴛ ☽ on Apr 30, 2017 18:10:31 GMT -5
Hello! Sorry this is so late, but I'm loving the latest installment. I can't wait to explore new worlds and such. That's always my favorite part of stories.
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Post by ~Sapphire~ on May 1, 2017 16:05:18 GMT -5
"... And now we're just going to pop into the local alternate universe to round off the night!"
In all seriousness, though, the new part is great! The early world-building is definitely paying off.
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Post by Brownie on May 1, 2017 18:24:51 GMT -5
thanks guys
I just want to doodle Siva tbh I like the colors I'll have to pallete it for y'all in the meantime because a full on art takes too long and I have finals ripppperoni
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Post by Brownie on May 2, 2017 9:35:50 GMT -5
also ten votes wowza also may work on a rambling crossover real quick for this cuz why the heck not
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Post by Brownie on May 2, 2017 11:00:08 GMT -5
heh also it won't make much sense unless you've been making a personal study of every little thing I've written on this site but it's more for me reference wise. Also poor little child I think I'm going to headcanon the Touched as Fox's son and the Svan as Blizzard's father "Please."
My fur stood on end, the tips sparking a faint violet. "I told you not to bring your curse here," I hissed, towering over the smaller tom. His wide eyes glinted purple in the violet glow.
His ears were pressed back and fear-scent rolled off him in waves, but he held his ground as he pleaded. He was loyal, I'll have to give him that. "But your Clan, you can beat Vella."
I snorted at his innocence. "Of course we could."
"Then why--"
"BUT," I interjected, "then we'd anger Tigris and Mooneater and Wuul and all the rest of your foul Guardians. They're weak, pathetic really but though your Guardians are kit's play, there's always the chance Thromin would come and I'm not putting my Clan to the same fate as yours! Do you think I want to watch my Clan -- my family -- enslaved for generations to the whims of the Guardians? Watch, mind you, they'd keep me sane. They'd keep me alive, just long enough to watch all of my friends and family descend into madness. Do you think I'd risk all that just to help some cats seasons travel away? Mind you, half of your cats don't even WANT to be rescued. We'd have to fight them too, and half of them are Touched."
The tom stammered beneath my paws, unsure of what to do. I let the violet flare up again, enough to make him skitter a few pawsteps backwards before recovering his composure. "P-p-please. You are our only hope."
I turned my back, leaving him to find his own way back. "Too bad your situation was hopeless to start with," I muttered, letting the violet sparks fade as I jumped into the darkness.
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Post by Brownie on May 2, 2017 15:29:35 GMT -5
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Post by Brownie on May 4, 2017 15:39:03 GMT -5
did a few pallate tests for Siva and wowwwza it's bright for being a broken world xD
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Post by Brownie on May 6, 2017 22:21:13 GMT -5
currently distracted writing my skyrim backstory xD this poor little guy he just wanted to be respected and then he gets sent through an ancient dwemer portal to another dimension and by the time he comes back his bros are both dead and he can't go back to morrowind because his Guild blames him for their deaths and are actively searching for him so he has to make a living in skyrim until he's strong/influential enough to return and set things straight.
kinda feel bad for him his bros were never really nice to him but they took care of him since he was young </3
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Post by Brownie on May 7, 2017 20:26:39 GMT -5
poor little Rasha </3 I'm going to have to put this up when I'm done I love this kid
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Asexual
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do you walk in the valley of kings? do you walk in the shadow of men who sold their lives to dream?
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Post by ᴛᴜᴇsᴅᴀʏ on May 10, 2017 14:15:43 GMT -5
hhhhhhhhhhhh i am caught up and i am blown away, so please get me on the update list. this is clever, it's unique, and best of all, i love sparkpaw. also redtalon, tbh. he's a good kitty. i love him. really, though, you have a way with bringing characters to life (bonus points for the nickname "ghosty," haha; it's so cheeky and given that tempestpaw was kind of in a medical stupor at the time, i'd love to see it haunt him), and they all have such vibrant personalities. wonderful work in that respect. willowpaw also deserves a mention for being so young but so composed. i feel ya, kiddo. you have my sympathies. the only thing that seems weird is that you use 1st person for tempest and 3rd for spark, even though you label your chapters with the name of the pov cat. it was really jarring to jump between the two, so i'd encourage you to pick one and stick with it. other than that, i'm not seeing any major flaws or plotholes, so you're doing good work! also... is there any significance in the pretty much even spread of apprentice shards? my plot point senses are tingling.
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Post by Brownie on May 10, 2017 14:50:04 GMT -5
haha thanks sometimes I wish they weren't so real then they'd stop fighting me for plot points
it was more meant to be told by Tempest, so he wouldn't refer to himself in third nor spark by first.
and it was 100% just how it fell. Spark wouldn't have done anything other than run in circles all day and stone can't hunt to save his life. Lake could have become a hunter I suppose but that little chubby child wouldn't have enjoyed that at all. Rose didn't pull her stone at the same time, she's a good deal older than the others. Tempest and willow are obviously plot points tho xD it's nice to have a good variety tho and lets me introduce the stones better so it all works out in the end.
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Post by Brownie on May 15, 2017 10:39:24 GMT -5
//sits on thread
Little update I guesss I've been here and there working on this, but (as is p obvious) Siva will be formally introduced and whatever I make it look like is how it'll be. No going back on the first impression. So I'm doing a bunch of forward work to make sure I won't contradict myself later on and/or change my mind on how I want this world presented. Because I have a few ideas and I really like them all but some fit the needs better than others. So yeah the chapter is pretty much done plot-wise I'm just making sure I get the details fine tuned so that everything is just perfect for all the later parts. Also coming up with some quirks of the world and adding in some flora and fauna while I'm at it.
Anyways, as writing goes, I'm also working on a little short to be premiered probably this week if life goes to plan. Lore wise, it's in the same universe as the Gifted from 100 one shots and unedited. But the castle isn't a ruin ;D
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Post by ✲ριкαƒυєу✲ on May 16, 2017 19:36:20 GMT -5
Hi! Just letting you know I'm still reading/keeping an eye on this. I just always forget to post (oops) lol.
Idk if you have a fan list, but feel free to add me if you do. Also, you please ping me with any updates so I make sure I follow c:
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Post by Brownie on May 18, 2017 21:55:47 GMT -5
bopppo
and will do
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Post by Brownie on May 30, 2017 17:26:13 GMT -5
gonna pretend I didn't forget about this yepyep
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Post by Brownie on Jun 7, 2017 22:31:19 GMT -5
started this what month march three months later six parts this is the exponential decay of my writing career kids
EDIT WAit december so like half a year holy stars
also guess what y'all I may maybe probably kinda sorta want to make a pride month special because ever since I wrote the tour thing I've headcanoned Heather and Otter as leb and I really want to write that now thoughts maybe even for the tuesday challenge?
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Post by Brownie on Jul 12, 2017 10:45:14 GMT -5
dunno
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Post by Brownie on Jul 13, 2017 20:40:02 GMT -5
I wrote like three paragraphs of this?? so proud dunno how I want the rest to be though, so there's that but I have a bit done, like a page and a half
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Post by Brownie on Sept 4, 2017 15:11:19 GMT -5
I don't have an update but I did doodle a bunch of little creatures for Siva
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Post by Brownie on Sept 4, 2017 19:52:03 GMT -5
started the second half of part VII I don't know how to end the first half though, nor how to really get this second half going. MEHHHHH WRITING IS HARD
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