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Post by Scarfur on May 12, 2017 19:22:54 GMT -5
"But she knew not what it felt like to care for those younger warriors. She did not know how to choose a deputy from he clan, nor how to treat the clan like family." Hawkfur meowed, tilting his head as he thought about it, "I believe that was her fist life as well, if I remember correctly, motherhood."
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Post by Moonblazer on May 12, 2017 19:34:10 GMT -5
"Well. She treated me perfectly well." Hawkfury mumbled almost to himself, though he perked hearing the other tom. Motherhood. Such a strange life, yet one he was sure was important. He mewed. "I wonder what lives Swiftstar recieved."
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Post by Scarfur on May 12, 2017 19:42:23 GMT -5
"I don't know, I wasn't there at the time." Hawkfur shrugged his shoulders.
(I think Scarstar was there, but I don't remember what life she gave if she was....)
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Post by Moonblazer on May 12, 2017 19:47:02 GMT -5
"Yea. Me neither. Because I was still alive, with grey on my muzzle and craziness in my eyes." Hawkfury snarked back with a snicker. He shook his fur again, sighing. "Coming here and feeling and looking young again was great."
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Post by Scarfur on May 12, 2017 21:28:27 GMT -5
(Scarfy doesn't know what to say or do anymore...)
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Post by 🌙Moonpower🌙 on May 20, 2017 22:17:06 GMT -5
To add to thunderClan:
Sparkpaw- Little black she-cat with golden stripes crackling across her pelt and green eyes. Sparkpaw is very energetic and never seems to run out of energy. It's hard for her to sit still and at times she can be very impatient. She does have a short-fuse and can snap at cats pretty quickly, but she's extremely loyal and proud of her Clan. Daughter of Sunthroat and Vinefur, her brothers are Jaypaw and Pantherpaw. Her mother, Vinefur, died in an attack on the ThunderClan camp by rouges. Killed in a fox attack. (Moonpower)
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Post by Firebelly on Jun 7, 2017 21:37:37 GMT -5
To add to RiverClan:
Nightpaw- Jet black tom with one amber eye and one blue eye. Quiet and shy, he doesn't talk much to anyone except his family. Born to Rosefrost and Phantomspots. Killed defending Orchidpaw and Stonepaw in a fox attack (Firebelly )
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Post by Moonblazer on Jun 7, 2017 21:45:32 GMT -5
Add to Riverclan:
Scalepaw- A black, ginger and white spotted tom kit with big blue eyes and thick fur. Scalepaw was named for his ginger and black spots on his pale silver, almost white pelt. He is a rather large kit. Scalepaw is a playful and happy little tom who wants nothing more than to have fun and explore. He's very curious though, and tends to get into tough spots. He's bad at hiding or showing his emotions right. Was born to Rosefrost and Phantomspots. Died from a brutal fox attack that also claimed his brother, Nightpaw. (Moonblazer)
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Post by Moonblazer on Jun 7, 2017 21:46:34 GMT -5
Scalepaw's eyes burst open, stars swirling around his paws. He stared blankly for a moment, only to whimper and sniffle in realization. He had died. He hadn't even been able to say good-bye to his family.
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Post by Frozen on Jun 11, 2017 12:00:21 GMT -5
RiverClan:
Scalepaw- Black, ginger and white spotted tom kit with big blue eyes and thick fur. Scalepaw was named for his ginger and black spots on his pale silver, almost white pelt. He is a rather large kit. Scalepaw is a playful and happy little tom who wants nothing more than to have fun and explore. He's very curious though, and tends to get into tough spots. He's bad at hiding or showing his emotions right. Was born to Rosefrost and Phantomspots. (Moonblazer )
Nightpaw- Jet black tom with one amber eye and one blue eye. Quiet and shy, he doesn't talk much to anyone except his family. Born to Rosefrost and Phantomspots. (Firebelly )
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Post by Firebelly on Jun 18, 2017 19:45:23 GMT -5
Nightgaze opened his eyes slowly, taking a deep breath. He looked around Starclan and let out a breath he didn't realize he had been holding. He knew he was dead. He had to be.
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Post by Moonblazer on Jun 18, 2017 20:12:53 GMT -5
Scalefur dashed to Nightgaze, whimpering as he saw that his little brother had died too. He ran up and pressed his head to Nightgaze's side, sniffling. "We're both here...oh, Nightgaze, it should have been just me...I-I'm so so sorry..."
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Post by 🌙Moonpower🌙 on Jul 9, 2017 12:40:52 GMT -5
TO add to ShadowClan:
Pinestep
Dark brown tabby with two white front paws. His eyes are a dark blue that almost look like the night sky. He is kinda disappointed to be the only tom in a litter of four, but he tries to make friends with other kits outside his family to deal with that. Wants to be a strong and powerful warrior of ShadowClan. He thinks male medicine cats are weird for wanting more to do with herbs than practicing battle moves. (has no idea yet that his father was once a medicine cat). Brightflame and Bumbleskip's kit. Brother to Vinemask, Cherryvine, and Lightcloud. Mentored by Oakstalk. Mentored Hawkpaw for a short while, but Hawkpaw was assigned a new mentor after Pinestep led her to steal prey in WindClan's territory. He was punished by being sent to the apprentice den for a few moons. (Howlingthroat)
Lightcloud
Silver and white she-cat. There might be random stripes of gray on her pelt. She has blue eyes. Curious and watchful, but runs head first with her sister's if they start making trouble. She thinks it's funny that both her parent's names start with B, unlike other parents. She is a little intimidated by other Clans. Especially mean warriors. Brightflame and Bumbleskip's kit. Sister to Cherryvine and Vinemask and Pinestep. Mentored by Roseleaf. Mentored Leaffrost. (Howlingthroat)
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Post by 🌙Moonpower🌙 on Jul 17, 2017 22:18:48 GMT -5
I noticed Rabbitdash didn't get added:
-Rabbitdash-
A slim brown tom with one white paw and yellow eyes. Rabbitdash is loyal, strong, a little head-strong, and proud. He greatly cares for WindClan and could never leave them, even after his forbidden love with Oceantide. There are times when Rabbitdash can seem cold and easily persuaded but he'll always listen to his leader's orders. Clanborn and the son of Tunnelmud. His kits are Dashclaw and Harewhisker. He died of old age with the regret not telling Dashclaw how proud of him he was. (Moonpower)
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Post by Scarfur on Aug 19, 2017 15:42:23 GMT -5
(I don't know why I'm doing this, I guess I just feel like there should be some kind of communication between Duskwhisper and Cherrydapple, especially now with Blazer's story.)
Duskwhisper sighed softly, looking around Starclan for a certain she-cat. He didn't know how he was going to talk with her, as he was still learning how talking worked, but he knew he had too. He had questions for her, and really wanted to know the answer to one important question. Why? Spotting her down by a river, cleaning her fur silently, he got to his paws and padded over to her, dipping his head slightly, "Ch-Cherry...da-dapple..." Recently, he had learned that pronouncing names was by far the most difficult thing when it came to speaking, as each name was two words, but he could never seem to find the ability to pronounce both words together.
"Hum?" Cherrydapple asked as she cleaned her fur, looking up until amber met gold. Her eyes grew wide and she jumped back in surprise, not expecting to see the silent tom so close to her, and certainly not expecting him to speak with her. "What is it, Duskwhisper?" She asked, shifting her weight to try and calm down so her fur would lay flat and not remain bristled.
"Do you...Do you h-hate me?" Straight to the point, Duskwhisper stared at her with unwavering golden eyes. He found himself rarely chatting just to chat, and preferred to just get to the point of a matter, rather than dragging everything out with other random conversation words. Had he been yelled at by many other cats about this? Most likely so, but then he'd also turn it around and remind them that he had not spoken while he was alive.
"Why would I hate you Duskwhisper? You are a clanmate, one I have watched grow up from the time you were a kit." Cherrydapple purred softly, but the sound was almost nervous, unsure why the usually silent tom was intent on questioning her feelings for a clanmate.
Duskwhisper tilted his head to the side, a small hiss escaping from behind his teeth as he watched her, listened to her. Always purring, but always so closed-hearted, keeping secrets close to her heart. He never liked that about the she-cat, though he had never gotten the chance to say so. "You...You a-abandoned me...cl-claimed I was...was a lost kit."
Cherrydapple hissed right back at him, her fur now bristling again, but not with surprise, but complete anger. "What are you talking about? I never abandoned you, I brought you to the clan!"
Duskwhisper rolled his eyes, growling softly, "I am not..." He paused, struggling to find words in his limited vocabulary. "M-Mouse....b-brained...I could n-not speak, I-I didn't have r-rocks for brains. T-The clan s-said you l-lost y-your kits, b-but then you b-brought one back...a s-sunrise later."
"I don't know what makes you think any of this. I found you in the forest after I had lost my own kits. Froststorm and Mudstrike took you in so that you could grow up with siblings." Cherrydapple said coldly, though there was now a nervous look in her eyes. She knew the gossip that had been going around the camp, though no one had ever outright accused her of anything.
"N-Not a game...D-Did you give m-me to them...be-because I couldn't speak?" Duskwhisper asked, eyes narrowed and claws unsheathed as his patience was being tested.
"And if I did?" Cherrydapple challenged, glaring at the younger tom, her own claws digging into the ground under her now.
Duskwhisper sighed softly, calming down slightly as he watched her, "n-nothing...C-Can't change past, only c-curious who, real mother was." He said simply, shifting his weight before turning and starting to walk away with only a flick of his tail.
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Post by Moonblazer on Aug 19, 2017 16:25:13 GMT -5
I LOVE IT SCAR.
This helps me characterize these two as well. Thank you!!!
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Post by Scarfur on Aug 19, 2017 16:41:14 GMT -5
(hehe, not a problem. I was reading your Hawkfury's Storm and thought it would be interesting to see their interactions with each other. Duskwhisper is fully aware who his mother is, thanks to the rumors about her, but knows not who is father is, the only cat in Windclan who does is Cherrydapple, and she took that to her grave. Sadly, it's not until after his death that he is able to confront her, and even then she tries to keep it a secret, all because he was born incapable of speaking.) If you need any other interactions between characters, let me know, I'll toss something together!)
(And I am simply loving Hawkfury's Storm, the interactions between Hawkpaw and Scarfur are hilarious XD Can't wait to see what comes up.)
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Post by Moonblazer on Aug 19, 2017 17:02:21 GMT -5
(Thank you so much! I hope I'm writing the characters in a way that makes them enjoyable to read! Scarfur and Hawkpaw have toooons more interaction, so don't worry! ^^ )
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Post by Scarfur on Aug 19, 2017 17:08:39 GMT -5
(You are, and I'm loving little bouncy Eaglepaw! Makes me wonder what happened that turned him into the calm, mature warrior that I remember rping him as XD. So many interactions that I can't wait to see, and so many interesting deaths... Gosh, that sounded bad...)
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Post by Moonblazer on Aug 19, 2017 17:32:27 GMT -5
(No no, that's one of the best parts of a story. The events that change a cat's personality from kithood to adulthood. Eaglepaw is actually one of my favs to write! I love his design.)
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Post by Scarfur on Aug 19, 2017 17:43:22 GMT -5
(When I said that sounded bad, I was talking about the interesting deaths comment XD seeing so many of my dear kitties die in a different perspective is gonna be weird!) (Bwahaha, Eaglepaw is such a dear! Reading Hawkfury's Storm is so interesting, it's weird seeing them all come to life outside of a rp)
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Post by Moonblazer on Aug 19, 2017 17:44:29 GMT -5
(I'm glad to hear it! I'm trying to give it that fun rp feel but also a genuine Super Edition feel as well.)
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Post by Scarfur on Aug 19, 2017 17:51:14 GMT -5
(Well it's definitely working in my book!)
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Post by Moonblazer on Aug 19, 2017 17:55:59 GMT -5
(dawwww im blushing! Well, college will either make the chapters faster or slower but we'll see!)
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Post by Scarfur on Aug 19, 2017 18:48:42 GMT -5
(Haha, I know that pain!)
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Post by Moonblazer on Aug 19, 2017 19:01:28 GMT -5
(I gotta do more fanart too, lol. Eagleheart's definately gonna get a design, his eyes captivate me. I love multi-colored eyes on cats.)
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Post by Scarfur on Aug 19, 2017 19:16:12 GMT -5
(Same here, when I first made him, funny, him and Scarfur are the only two who kept their original designs (Back from 2009-2010). They are also basically two different forms of mary/gary-sues (Appearance wise at least, seriously...Scarstar is basically a female Tallstar with extra scarring in appearance...), I tried so hard to balance that with personalities when I brought them back from the depths of forgotten rps)
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Post by Moonblazer on Aug 19, 2017 19:18:19 GMT -5
(Woah. That's actually pretty cool, learning about all these old characters!)
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Post by Scarfur on Aug 19, 2017 19:30:42 GMT -5
(Yeah, Redpetal was there too! I think I had her under a different name though, and different appearance. Scarfur had a mate named Tanglefur back then (Personal relationships being why it was Tanglefur then and Hawkfur now XD), and she had kits! She didn't become leader until after her death though, when she was reincarnated as a cat named Scarsoul. That clan was definitely a strange place, but it was the first time they came alive. *There was also the failure that was Stealthstar, but Scarfy shall not get into that mess XD*) (And to go into the extremes of Mary-sue past horrors, Scarfur was originally created as the daughter of Tallstar and a cat named Moonflower, born two weeks before the clan migration to the lake territory XD The ONLY thing that remained from that was the fact that Moonflower died in kitbirth, same as Jasmineleaf did, and Tallstar died when she was still young, just like Blackfrost. The rest of her life is pretty much the same, except originally she was nearly killed by a fox, not a badger. Don't know why I changed that, but oh well.)
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Post by 🌙Moonpower🌙 on Sept 4, 2017 11:05:02 GMT -5
Stonestar of RiverClan, rped by Feather :3, was a tom with blue eyes and a pelt that blended like the gray pebbles at the bottom of a river bank. His mate was Fogstorm.
Nightstar of SkyClan, formerly of RiverClan, was rped by Shadowstreak. She was a night black she-cat with green eyes. She disappeared before her leadership ended.
Cometstar of ThunderClan, rped by Eagletalon!!, was a larger tom with green eyes. His pelt was a blend of grays and oranges, streaking like a comet that shot across the sky.
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