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Post by mintedstar/fur on Jul 18, 2017 15:43:36 GMT -5
Panel 1: *background chatter* Introducing new character: Monny ??? / Male / Paranormal Panel 2: Over there is Marick and Monny Panel 3: Monny? Is that the same Monny that you and Taylor rant about so much? Panel 4: *feet shuffle* Yah... Panel 5: *background chatter* Monny has what we call "mixed blood". He was given powers by both Will and another Paranormal. Panel 6: *background chatter* Because of this, he has a few extra powers... But is mentally unstable. Panel 7: Monny: Hey! Get over here! / Both Jo and Clarisa: Yes, Sir! Panel 8: They say that he can read the future as well... And that he supported Will C. Morgen of all cats. Panel 1: You call yourself Jo, right? Panel 2: bubble 1: Yes... bubble 2: Taylor says I'm not supposed to talk to you. Panel 3: bubble 1: *whisper* Doesn't that mean not talking? bubble 2: Don't get chummy with me. Panel 4: Monny: I've never met a murderer before. Jo: Wahhhh?! Panel 5: Marick: Hey! Don't go looking at me like that! Panel 6: (background) Monny! Monny: You will kill the ones closest to you. Not out of anger, fear, or hate... But because you have to. You should trust the three, but you will fail them. Panel 7: (I really hope that's readable. x.x ) Panel 1: You said that I should talk to Marick about the Feline War. / Yes? Panel 2: Well, as you know, I didn't really get a chance. So, I thought maybe...? Panel 4: Fine. Panel 6: My face is timeless. Even forty years ago I looked the same as I do now. Panel 7: How many Warriors do we have left? / Not enough. Panel 8: Impossible! Where is Rattlesnake? He did this, he should fix it! / I think it might be as we feared. He was killed in the last fight. Accept it. Panel 9: We have to hurry. It's started to rain. Uppppdate! Owlmoon tiger beetle --cato phoenix spiritdeath ~Sapphire~ tinybreeze
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Post by mintedstar/fur on Jul 18, 2017 15:45:27 GMT -5
Oooow. Sorry about the hard to read mini-bubbles in the last page. x.x If anyone needs me to, I can put what it says below the pages.
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Post by mintedstar/fur on Jul 18, 2017 20:22:14 GMT -5
I also outline another page and worked on a few more thumbnails just now, so an update is in the future.
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Post by ~Sapphire~ on Jul 29, 2017 3:21:29 GMT -5
I like Manny already ...Even if his prophecy is kind of sinister...
How is the future update going? I'm intrigued...
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Post by mintedstar/fur on Jul 29, 2017 11:09:50 GMT -5
Monny is a beautiful child. <3 And yep! Very sinister!
-.- Still hovering somewhere in the future, sadly. Thumbnails are waaaay out there in future comic land. Actual outlined pages? One. Sad, isn't it?
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Post by ~Sapphire~ on Jul 29, 2017 11:35:36 GMT -5
Monny. Sorry. Could you maybe do those transcripts below the comics?Does that mean he gets to show up again though? Please? Aww! Well, whenever you're ready. I'm glad there's something in the works though
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Post by mintedstar/fur on Jul 29, 2017 11:39:22 GMT -5
Doing that now! Yep, yep! Well, if this was going slower, he would have been a main character of comic 2, but this is working out well, so he'll be a prominent background character later on. When we hit the mid-way point, he starts to turn up again.
We will get to see more of the different council members! Like MacAlpine and Larry Davis.
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Post by mintedstar/fur on Aug 1, 2017 15:23:54 GMT -5
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Post by ~Sapphire~ on Aug 3, 2017 17:02:49 GMT -5
That's... A cheerful outlook. Thanks for doing the transcripts. I will look forward to seeing him and the others later! (Does this mean comic 2 isn't happening, or are you just waiting for this one to finish / slow down?)
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Post by mintedstar/fur on Aug 3, 2017 17:30:53 GMT -5
Yes...very cheerful. But considering we know all three of them lived (Clerisa's in the council, as well as Leaves, and Honey is Jo's denmate) clearly not everyone died. Though you will notice we haven't seen anyone with butterfly wings.
I've still got to finish it, actually. x.x Thank you for the reminder. I...do not know yet. Comic 2 might still happen. Depends on when I finish this one and whether I don't...uh...end up writing it all for The Game before that actually happens. xD
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Post by ~Sapphire~ on Aug 4, 2017 16:49:41 GMT -5
True, true. I'm not sure "everyone but three are going to die" is much better though o.o
Ah, right cx I'll have to catch up on the game then and find everything out that way.
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Post by tiger beetle on Aug 4, 2017 17:01:10 GMT -5
it took me a little longer than I'd like to admit why that cat's name was familiar sorry it took me so long to see this update but I haven't been checking very regularly
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Post by mintedstar/fur on Aug 4, 2017 17:10:54 GMT -5
*chuckles* Here's how that happened: I was looking through my old comic plans, at all the paranormals in the Council, with the purpose that a few would be ex-clan cats. One cat, then called Porus (as in Poor us) Leaves, as well as Clarisa Fern, caught my eye because their last names could, in theory, be warrior names. So, I thought, what could go with a the plural suffix '-leaves'? I figured 'Dappled'leaves. And 'Green'fern for Clarisa.
Clarisa actually had a ThunderClan mate (she was WindClan) whose name was Adderfang. Adderfang = Abernathy Fang. He turns up in some of The Game short stories.
Come to think of it, that gives me an interesting idea. I think I'll make it so Jo's a descendant of Claire... I'll have to edit the short story so Claire's last name is Pree, but that isn't a large change.
Any, sort of musing out loud. None of the above is really supposed to make sense yet anyway. @.@
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Post by mintedstar/fur on Sept 22, 2017 2:36:04 GMT -5
This still exists! School's been dragging me down, but I really will try to update before the month is out.
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Post by mintedstar/fur on Sept 30, 2017 13:34:12 GMT -5
Poll up! Please vote.
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Post by mintedstar/fur on Oct 3, 2017 17:40:57 GMT -5
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Post by mintedstar/fur on Oct 17, 2017 11:53:08 GMT -5
(*cough* Updating tomorrow. Someone voted quantity, so updates will start to be every week instead of every month. I'll have to see if I can do updates through scanning still or if they'll be pictures with some computer editing. )
Fun fact to hold you till... let's say we'll update ever Friday, Saturday, or Sunday, depending on my schedule? School has its teeth in me Monday-Tuesday, pretty much.
The names Marick, Oliva, and Ame (the fake name Will used with Sam) are all based of names from a book series. This used to be a fan fic off Morganville Vampires, these three characters taking some of their characteristics from the three vampire main characters: Myrnin, Oliver, and Amelie. Marick the scientist, Oliva the fighter, and Ame the strategist, that is.
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Post by mintedstar/fur on Oct 19, 2017 0:49:21 GMT -5
🎃 Update is almost done.
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Post by mintedstar/fur on Oct 19, 2017 1:03:30 GMT -5
🎃 Sigh... getting the alarm that I need to head to bed. I'll get it up tomorrow.
Note to readers: The pure white word bubbles will not last. But the computer text will. So sorry about the next 1-2 pages that have it and then we switch again. ^^
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Post by mintedstar/fur on Oct 19, 2017 17:21:12 GMT -5
🎃 Honestly not sure which is better. My editor when I scan and it all comes out white-washed, or my camera where we get deeper colors, but grey backgrounds instead of white.
Also, tell me what you think of not having my hand-written word bubbles. cx I might keep the 'changing the background to white' on them, since it isn't too hard to do.
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Post by mintedstar/fur on Oct 19, 2017 17:22:25 GMT -5
🎃 I think I'll try the other camera next time. If this doesn't work out, I'll just switch back to scanners.
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Post by ~Sapphire~ on Oct 21, 2017 14:51:45 GMT -5
Yay, update! :3 The paranormal war backstory is so sad... Is it just impossible for normals and paranormals to get along? Also, I'm actually liking the grey backgrounds with white speech bubbles. It provides pretty nice contrasts.
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Post by mintedstar/fur on Oct 21, 2017 15:10:26 GMT -5
...Why is it only now that I noticed I updated in reverse order. XD Oh my gaH! As in, the last page is the one you are supposed to read first and so on... Can I laugh any harder?
And I'm glad the grey background works! I thought that it drowned out the lines a little... The war was really sad. Not a lot of cats made it though and even fewer Paranormals. So far, we know that Clerisa, Honey, and Leaves made it through. Claire, being Jo Pree's *takes breath* great-great-great-great grandmother, also survived, but she was a Normal, so is, of course, dead now. Rattlesnake made it through, as well as Clerisa's ex-mate, Abernathy. Apart from them, that's about all. Also, for anyone wondering how the paranomals that made it through are some how either related or knew one enough, it was because near the end of the war they were reduced to one fighting group of about 20 cats. Out of those 20, 5-8 lived.
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Post by ~Sapphire~ on Oct 21, 2017 16:17:38 GMT -5
Gah x'D
The lines are still clear to me. Although you'd need to keep colouring in the speech bubbles. The poor cats... How many paranormals were there to start with, then? (I'm interested to meet those other possible three cats, if they do appear)
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Post by mintedstar/fur on Oct 21, 2017 17:30:21 GMT -5
I got it right sooner or later. Yeah, I'll continue doing it if it's working. Hum... of the original army, there was about 3 clans worth. (They might appear. Don't know about this comic, but if there's another one...)
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Post by ~Sapphire~ on Oct 22, 2017 6:31:37 GMT -5
It's even better the right way round :3 And only a few survived... Wow... (Guess I'll just have to wait and see then)
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Post by mintedstar/fur on Oct 22, 2017 13:23:09 GMT -5
XD I should hope so!
(Yep! Next, we're actually going to see more of the Council.)
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Post by ~Sapphire~ on Oct 22, 2017 14:58:09 GMT -5
*is stoked*
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Post by mintedstar/fur on Oct 27, 2017 11:35:38 GMT -5
Update will be going up today or tomorrow.
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