steelstar
Writers block... I shall smite thee!
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Post by steelstar on Jan 11, 2017 18:05:15 GMT -5
thanks!
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Post by mintedstar/fur on Jan 11, 2017 18:15:38 GMT -5
No problem.
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Post by EthanTheAnnus on Jan 15, 2017 0:57:52 GMT -5
I love this so much! Fan me if you are doing fans.
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steelstar
Writers block... I shall smite thee!
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Post by steelstar on Jan 15, 2017 1:19:58 GMT -5
Thanks! And I'm not really doing 'fans' but thanks for telling me!
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steelstar
Writers block... I shall smite thee!
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Post by steelstar on Jan 15, 2017 2:34:22 GMT -5
Almost finished writing the next chapter, I know it has been a while since I last updated, but please bear with me.
And if anyone finds out how my rambles got fans let me know XD
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steelstar
Writers block... I shall smite thee!
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Post by steelstar on Jan 15, 2017 2:58:09 GMT -5
Chapter 1 (Unedited) is up! I'm trying to have each chapter at 1000 words, but this one is a lil' bit below that. Not too much. Other than that, I took a little bit of a risk with this chapter, (Bluesky) so let me know if you think that it was out of line.
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Post by cinder on Jan 24, 2017 14:59:04 GMT -5
I like what I've read so far.
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Post by Owlmoon on Jan 25, 2017 14:15:30 GMT -5
A forumer called Dewstripe edited my fan fiction and they are really good. They did Dewy Decimal Editing Service and I think it's on page 2 or 3 of the WFF. They were looking for more fan fictions to edit last I saw. Hopefully they are still active. Its not working. I posted but received no response.
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Post by Owlmoon on Jan 25, 2017 14:16:43 GMT -5
Yeah. It's a great story. You didn't actually get fans from rambles. You got fans for your writing.
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steelstar
Writers block... I shall smite thee!
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Post by steelstar on Jan 25, 2017 18:47:15 GMT -5
Thanks! It is alway nice to hear/see someone say that.
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Post by mintedstar/fur on Jan 25, 2017 23:39:03 GMT -5
Yah, Dewstripe has been gone for a little. I thought that might be the case... Well, if you want a second pair of eyes, steelstar and Owlmoon, I can look over both of your fan fictions. Can't promise I'll catch everything.
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steelstar
Writers block... I shall smite thee!
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Post by steelstar on Jan 26, 2017 0:19:00 GMT -5
That would be great.
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Post by mintedstar/fur on Jan 26, 2017 0:24:15 GMT -5
Okay then. I'll go start now.
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steelstar
Writers block... I shall smite thee!
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Post by steelstar on Jan 26, 2017 0:25:32 GMT -5
Also, amazing sig.
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Post by mintedstar/fur on Jan 26, 2017 0:47:27 GMT -5
Your prologue. Hum... what can I say? Dewstripe used to tell you what specifically was changed and that helped me so much! But I don't really have the time to do that, at least this time. So, what I edited the most (besides missed punctuation every now and again) was the "....something someone says." He/She said. It works better as "....something someone says," he/she said. And that works the same way if the punctuation is something other then a period. If it's an exclamation mark it works the same way. Also, I didn't even notices this until Dewstripe edited my fan fiction. I literally had to look in a Warrior book to check. But the C in Moonclan, Lightclan, ect. should be MoonClan, LightClan, ect.
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Post by mintedstar/fur on Jan 26, 2017 0:50:21 GMT -5
Oh, and I can delete the above once you have it if you like.
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Post by mintedstar/fur on Jan 26, 2017 0:56:24 GMT -5
Ah, thank you. Inversereality let me use it.
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steelstar
Writers block... I shall smite thee!
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Post by steelstar on Jan 26, 2017 1:04:16 GMT -5
Oh, and I can delete the above once you have it if you like. Na, it's fine. I'll go through it and make the changes when I have the time, buuuutt, Fallout 4 is calling me
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Post by mintedstar/fur on Jan 26, 2017 1:05:21 GMT -5
Then you must answer the call.
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