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Post by Deleted on Jul 31, 2016 18:23:33 GMT -5
Basically, what you would've wanted to see or were expecting to be done for the final book of the omen of the stars series. Or if you want, what made you satisfied with the ending of the last hope.
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Post by Uмвяᴀ on Jul 31, 2016 18:57:02 GMT -5
I wish that the final battle wasn't so rushed. It ruined a lot of the emotions of the deaths and made the Dark Forest cats seem lame.
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Post by Feathertalon on Jul 31, 2016 19:02:54 GMT -5
The final battle should have been more. It was too rushed and not even well written, especially Firestar's death.
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Post by Deleted on Jul 31, 2016 19:18:54 GMT -5
The battle should have been longer and more detailed. The deaths should have been written better.
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Post by kinkajou on Jul 31, 2016 19:48:51 GMT -5
All the cats that died from off-screen greencough should've died in the battle
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Post by nem on Jul 31, 2016 19:58:38 GMT -5
Everyone should've died.
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Post by Rανєη'ѕ ƑƖιgнт on Jul 31, 2016 23:28:48 GMT -5
Some of the older cats should have died instead of younger ones like Foxleap.
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Post by Cloudshadow on Aug 1, 2016 4:01:26 GMT -5
The battle itself should have been more organised. The DF went through the trouble of touring the Clan territories only to just jump them rather than having an elaborate scheme of how to effectively eliminate the clans. They should have set traps, separated patrols and cats so that they were easier to pick off, etc.
Plus the clans talked about how they could help eachother but they all fought in their own camps. I kind of feel like they should have somehow ended up in the same place and fought united as they did with BloodClan. Now THAT was an epic finale to a series.
Not to mention how poorly the DF used and 'converted' the trainees to.
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Post by Cheyenne on Aug 1, 2016 11:43:20 GMT -5
Death? It happens in almost every book after all
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Post by Deleted on Aug 1, 2016 13:41:33 GMT -5
Death? It happens in almost every book after all There was death in the last hope. Just not as much as many fans wanted |
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Post by Bluebell on Aug 2, 2016 4:30:25 GMT -5
The Dark Forest appearing more vicious.
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Post by Dancing_Totodile on Aug 2, 2016 10:09:39 GMT -5
The battle should of been longer and Firestar's death should of been explained better.
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Post by Pupachu on Aug 2, 2016 12:30:13 GMT -5
I wish they had more of the older characters in StarClan. And maybe having the Fourth not be someone so obvious like Firestar. There could have also been a lot more emotion
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Post by Card against Humanity on Aug 2, 2016 13:25:27 GMT -5
More deaths and longer, more detailed battle secenes would be a good start.
I hear that the original manuscript for the book was a lot different but HC made the Hunters change it for whatever reason. Which is a shame, as it probably would have been better then what we got.
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Post by Deleted on Aug 2, 2016 14:19:14 GMT -5
The battle should of been longer and Firestar's death should of been explained better. I definitely agree with this. People were debating for so long whether it was a tree or his wounds that killed him. |
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Post by Cloudshadow on Aug 2, 2016 14:22:05 GMT -5
More deaths and longer, more detailed battle secenes would be a good start. I hear that the original manuscript for the book was a lot different but HC made the Hunters change it for whatever reason. Which is a shame, as it probably would have been better then what we got. I've heard that they were going to make Midnight a bad guy and have Bramble flee when he realised he had to be leader because he was scared he was going to be like Tigerstar. If that's why they really were going to have happen then I'm glad they changed TLH because I feel like that's out of character for Bramble and it doesn't make sense why Midnight would all of a sudden turn against the clans when she's only vet helped them. |
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Post by kinkajou on Aug 2, 2016 14:34:35 GMT -5
More deaths and longer, more detailed battle secenes would be a good start. I hear that the original manuscript for the book was a lot different but HC made the Hunters change it for whatever reason. Which is a shame, as it probably would have been better then what we got. I honestly feel sorry for the Erins. It's like they can't write what they want to. Seriously, HC even chooses character's names now (like how Kate wanted the name Sparkfire) I wish Midnight turned out to be a villain. If you look closely, there's actually some foreshadowing of this |
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Post by Card against Humanity on Aug 2, 2016 14:35:03 GMT -5
More deaths and longer, more detailed battle secenes would be a good start. I hear that the original manuscript for the book was a lot different but HC made the Hunters change it for whatever reason. Which is a shame, as it probably would have been better then what we got. I've heard that they were going to make Midnight a bad guy and have Bramble flee when he realised he had to be leader because he was scared he was going to be like Tigerstar. If that's why they really were going to have happen then I'm glad they changed TLH because I feel like that's out of character for Bramble and it doesn't make sense why Midnight would all of a sudden turn against the clans when she's only vet helped them. Honestly, while I agree that Midnight suddenly turning against the clans is pretty OOC, I get the feeling that there were going to be more deaths in the original and HC changed it. I think I heard that was part of the reason why it was changed? Idk. Anything would have been better then what we got imo |
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Post by Card against Humanity on Aug 2, 2016 14:36:12 GMT -5
More deaths and longer, more detailed battle secenes would be a good start. I hear that the original manuscript for the book was a lot different but HC made the Hunters change it for whatever reason. Which is a shame, as it probably would have been better then what we got. I honestly feel sorry for the Erins. It's like they can't write what they want to. Seriously, HC even chooses character's names now (like how Kate wanted the name Sparkfire) I wish Midnight turned out to be a villain. If you look closely, there's actually some foreshadowing of this Whoa really? Well honestly I've always disliked HC for a multitude of reasons and hearing that they made Kate change a character name for no reason isn't exactly helping |
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Post by Cloudshadow on Aug 2, 2016 20:30:52 GMT -5
More deaths and longer, more detailed battle secenes would be a good start. I hear that the original manuscript for the book was a lot different but HC made the Hunters change it for whatever reason. Which is a shame, as it probably would have been better then what we got. I honestly feel sorry for the Erins. It's like they can't write what they want to. Seriously, HC even chooses character's names now (like how Kate wanted the name Sparkfire) I wish Midnight turned out to be a villain. If you look closely, there's actually some foreshadowing of this  there was? Would you be able to find some quotes? Just out of curiosity. I really should go back and read the books again but I don't have time anymore these days  |
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Post by kinkajou on Aug 2, 2016 20:45:05 GMT -5
I honestly feel sorry for the Erins. It's like they can't write what they want to. Seriously, HC even chooses character's names now (like how Kate wanted the name Sparkfire) I wish Midnight turned out to be a villain. If you look closely, there's actually some foreshadowing of this there was? Would you be able to find some quotes? Just out of curiosity. I really should go back and read the books again but I don't have time anymore these days Purdy warned the Clan cats to not do what Midnight said (go over the mountains) She gave Sol a bunch of knowledge about the Clans ...okay that's it but it's something |
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Post by Cloudshadow on Aug 2, 2016 20:49:28 GMT -5
I'm guessing she wanted the cats to go over the mountains so Feathertail could fulfill her prophecy.
Yeah, I've always wondered why she would share all that with Sol. I always assumed he just charmed and manipulated her but you'd think she'd be smarter than that...
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Post by Ligerfrost on Aug 2, 2016 20:54:11 GMT -5
Ivypool should have died
Breezepelt should have died
Confrontation between Thistleclaw, Bluestar, Whitestorm and Snowfur would have been appreciated.
Ashfur should have made an apprenticeif for no other reason then to prove where he belonged.
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Post by Cloudshadow on Aug 2, 2016 20:58:45 GMT -5
Cinderheart should have been the 4th since she was the only other cat that was 'reincarnated'. I feel like this may have been their original idea but then for some reason changed their minds.
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Post by Wicked Witch on Aug 13, 2016 17:39:19 GMT -5
Lionblaze being amazing in battle like he's been shown to be. Maybe a few difficulties here and there.
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Post by ʀʜʏᴇʟʟᴀ on Aug 13, 2016 17:57:18 GMT -5
I'm guessing she wanted the cats to go over the mountains so Feathertail could fulfill her prophecy. Yeah, I've always wondered why she would share all that with Sol. I always assumed he just charmed and manipulated her but you'd think she'd be smarter than that... She is. What Rock says (especially the bolded part) implies she was fully aware of the consequences. |
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Post by Cloudshadow on Aug 13, 2016 18:14:21 GMT -5
What Rock says (especially the bolded part) implies she was fully aware of the consequences. So the whole point was to make the clans ready for the great battle? |
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Post by Lightflame on Aug 13, 2016 20:10:03 GMT -5
Ivypool vs. Mapleshade had so much build up, but never happened.
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Post by Deleted on Aug 13, 2016 20:11:47 GMT -5
Way more cats kicking the bucket
That would have been more realistic
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there was? Would you be able to find some quotes? Just out of curiosity. I really should go back and read the books again but I don't have time anymore these days 
