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Post by tiger beetle on Oct 12, 2017 8:10:18 GMT -5
that’s good 💃 sorry for taking so long to respond I keep forgetting this is active again
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Post by Maplestone360 on Oct 12, 2017 20:17:33 GMT -5
I will always be around if Ash to Ash needs it because Ash to Ash = <3
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Post by tiger beetle on Oct 12, 2017 21:01:21 GMT -5
thank you 💃
I think I’m going to tentatively say I probably will rewrite it
still not 100% sure but...I want to
I want it to be more different from the real series, too, because I think that hurts it
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Post by mintedstar/fur on Oct 13, 2017 13:45:35 GMT -5
Do you have any ideas on where you want it to go?  |
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Ash to Ash
Oct 16, 2017 12:06:17 GMT -5
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Post by tiger beetle on Oct 16, 2017 12:06:17 GMT -5
yeah
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Post by mintedstar/fur on Oct 16, 2017 15:48:39 GMT -5
🎃 o.o That's cool!
But now I'm curious.
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Post by Maplestone360 on Oct 16, 2017 15:50:05 GMT -5
Well, there's going to be plenty of Jayfeather, of course. cx |
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Post by tiger beetle on Oct 17, 2017 22:20:00 GMT -5
well that goes without saying I think  |
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Post by tiger beetle on Oct 17, 2017 22:28:54 GMT -5
-ThunderClan...obviously getting kicked out of their home was bad, but after that, they got off pretty easily. Can’t have that.
-I chickened out of killing Squirrelflight at the last moment, but that means everything leading up to it is written “wrong” for a scene where she survives.
-Breezepelt should be developed.
-Although I like Dawnstream, I really think I should put the Third in ThunderClan...
-More with Rock.
-Actually write Lionstorm in the final battle.
-Why shouldn’t it be ThunderClan that helps the Tribe!?
I’m sure there’s more but it’s like 11:30 pm I’m tired |
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Post by mintedstar/fur on Oct 17, 2017 22:54:38 GMT -5
🎃 Good points that.
The first one seems like it will be the most interesting.
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Post by tiger beetle on Oct 17, 2017 23:03:24 GMT -5
I think putting the Third in ThunderClan will help a lot with some other points...
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Post by mintedstar/fur on Oct 18, 2017 0:00:05 GMT -5
🎃 Yeah, probably.
It would certainly make things interesting.
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Post by tiger beetle on Oct 18, 2017 20:58:29 GMT -5
the gears are turning,
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Post by mintedstar/fur on Oct 18, 2017 21:29:59 GMT -5
🎃 *insert grinding noise*
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Post by tiger beetle on Oct 18, 2017 23:18:39 GMT -5
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Post by mintedstar/fur on Oct 19, 2017 1:14:33 GMT -5
🎃 *insert sound of screeching and breaking metal*
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Post by tiger beetle on Oct 19, 2017 11:34:43 GMT -5
uh oh that doesn’t sound good
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Post by mintedstar/fur on Oct 19, 2017 18:57:08 GMT -5
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Post by Maplestone360 on Oct 20, 2017 6:31:16 GMT -5
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Post by tiger beetle on Oct 20, 2017 19:24:08 GMT -5
new update: I’ve had a Vision I know what I want to write now let’s see if it ever happens
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Post by mintedstar/fur on Oct 20, 2017 20:00:45 GMT -5
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Post by tiger beetle on Oct 20, 2017 21:02:45 GMT -5
I’ll try 😵
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Post by mintedstar/fur on Oct 20, 2017 22:40:03 GMT -5
🎃 Do it! Do it! You can do it! You can do it!
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Ash to Ash
Oct 21, 2017 22:18:34 GMT -5
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Post by tiger beetle on Oct 21, 2017 22:18:34 GMT -5
listen I just had a week to do my math homework and Didn’t that’s the level of commitment I have
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Post by mintedstar/fur on Oct 22, 2017 2:02:16 GMT -5
🎃 *pats* Yeah, well, at least Maths more important. ^^
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Ash to Ash
Oct 22, 2017 14:56:34 GMT -5
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Post by tiger beetle on Oct 22, 2017 14:56:34 GMT -5
by that I meant I didn’t do my math homework despite having a week
there’s still time...
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Post by Maplestone360 on Oct 22, 2017 19:01:22 GMT -5
Same. I often do my homework at the last minute partly because I just flat out forgot I had it. Cough. Like right now.
Oops. |
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Post by mintedstar/fur on Oct 23, 2017 0:10:17 GMT -5
🎃 Ah. Misread. ^^
I have a constant lowkey fear I'll never have enough time, so often to my schoolwork almost as soon as I get it.
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Ash to Ash
Oct 23, 2017 10:43:02 GMT -5
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Post by tiger beetle on Oct 23, 2017 10:43:02 GMT -5
I did the first two problems (there are 3 but #3 has multiple parts)
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Post by mintedstar/fur on Oct 23, 2017 11:42:34 GMT -5
🎃 Better than none.
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