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Post by Deleted on Oct 12, 2016 20:24:12 GMT -5
the first chapter is called "seven years old, but my flow is so cold"
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its here
Oct 12, 2016 20:25:12 GMT -5
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Post by Deleted on Oct 12, 2016 20:25:12 GMT -5
i want a detailed review immediately after u finish it. stat
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Post by Cheyenne on Oct 12, 2016 20:26:47 GMT -5
What's weird is that the boy on the cover is actually pretty cute...but what about his personality?
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furry and fabulous
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Post by kiddo on Oct 12, 2016 20:27:42 GMT -5
What's weird is that the boy on the cover is actually pretty cute...but what about his personality?
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Post by Deleted on Oct 12, 2016 20:28:15 GMT -5
What's weird is that the boy on the cover is actually pretty cute...but what about his personality? honestly so far im really upset because he seems like a decent kid but like why is a fetus writing a book
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Asexual
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Post by Невыносимая коммунизм on Oct 12, 2016 20:28:42 GMT -5
What's weird is that the boy on the cover is actually pretty cute...but what about his personality? He looks like he's 8
I won't judge though
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Post by Deleted on Oct 12, 2016 20:29:05 GMT -5
i want a detailed review immediately after u finish it. stat doing it by the chapter
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its here
Oct 12, 2016 21:36:41 GMT -5
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Post by Deleted on Oct 12, 2016 21:36:41 GMT -5
Apparently there aren't actual chapters so I'm like halfway through and here's my review so far
You can tell it's written by a fetus and probably edited by a fetus. It's not awful but there's periods where all other punctuation should be. There's really no storyline or anything, just a big collection of ramblings. He talks more about his older cousin and Jesus than himself so far tbh. He keeps trying to write out the beats of songs?? Like not just once there's tons of him just going "bum bum duh dum nuh nuh nah dum dum" they honestly just get super uncomfortable to read after a while. there's tons of little lists of thing like "my top five life lessons!!" and they're also not awful but theyre still written by a five year old. There's a "how to make a video go viral" tutorial and it's my favorite part it's just stuff like "put lots of work in". There's a random chapter that just talks about Michael Jackson that's real interesting
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Post by Sanders on Oct 12, 2016 21:40:16 GMT -5
i can't believ you actually did it
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its here
Oct 12, 2016 21:42:54 GMT -5
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Post by Deleted on Oct 12, 2016 21:42:54 GMT -5
i can't believ you actually did it the second I replied I ordered it I've spent far more on a joke
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Post by Sanders on Oct 12, 2016 21:44:14 GMT -5
i hope it's everything you dreamed it would be
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