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Post by mintedstar/fur on Aug 29, 2016 17:47:03 GMT -5
So how are you doing, Sea?
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Post by 🍁Searipple101🍁 on Aug 29, 2016 19:03:55 GMT -5
Iffy, to be honest. Nothing unusual for me, though. Thanks for asking  |
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Post by mintedstar/fur on Aug 30, 2016 17:04:48 GMT -5
So, any idea who I should draw (from Born of Blood) next?
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Post by 🍁Searipple101🍁 on Aug 30, 2016 20:53:06 GMT -5
Hmmmm...how about Crowpaw? He's just a big, black tom with green eyes, and if you want to show his left side, he has a long scar running down his side, like almost vertical and just behind his shoulder.
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Post by 🍁Searipple101🍁 on May 3, 2017 17:18:39 GMT -5
That random bump so my precious story doesn't get deleted.
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Post by 🍁Searipple101🍁 on May 8, 2017 19:03:10 GMT -5
I'm bumping everything up.
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Post by 🍁Searipple101🍁 on May 9, 2017 13:34:24 GMT -5
I'm just gonna bump this up. Don't mind me.
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Post by 🍁Searipple101🍁 on May 11, 2017 14:11:01 GMT -5
bumpers
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Post by Owlmoon on May 11, 2017 17:37:04 GMT -5
I demand to be made a fan!  |
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Post by 🍁Searipple101🍁 on May 11, 2017 17:47:14 GMT -5
Lol, okay XD I really need to update that anyway.
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Post by 🍁Searipple101🍁 on May 12, 2017 22:55:01 GMT -5
This gets a bump now.
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Post by 🍁Searipple101🍁 on May 14, 2017 21:18:39 GMT -5
bump
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Post by 🍁Searipple101🍁 on May 21, 2017 14:09:57 GMT -5
bump
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Post by 🍁Searipple101🍁 on May 25, 2017 0:12:11 GMT -5
dat bump
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Post by 🍁Searipple101🍁 on May 29, 2017 22:50:24 GMT -5
boop
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Post by 🍁Searipple101🍁 on Apr 20, 2018 17:27:50 GMT -5
Old but gold
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Post by phantomstar57 on Apr 21, 2018 20:15:33 GMT -5
Cool. I don't think I had the chance to finish reading this one.
Reminds me I should bump the other NEW BLOOD stuff so they don;t get lost.
If I am not already fanned please fan me.
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Post by 🍁Searipple101🍁 on Apr 22, 2018 10:32:36 GMT -5
Sure! I need to finish New Blood, but I j=haven't been doing much reading at all for a good while. Oops.
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Post by phantomstar57 on Apr 22, 2018 14:37:12 GMT -5
I did finish but plan to reread the end and refresh my memory. I see I am already a fan. 
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Post by 🍁Searipple101🍁 on Apr 22, 2018 15:20:07 GMT -5
Yep. You and Mint have been my most loyal fans, and I vastly appreciate it. You guys really helped me to love writing, simply by being there to read what I do.
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Post by phantomstar57 on Apr 23, 2018 11:25:32 GMT -5
Yep. You and Mint have been my most loyal fans, and I vastly appreciate it. You guys really helped me to love writing, simply by being there to read what I do. |
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Post by 🍁Searipple101🍁 on Apr 23, 2018 13:15:33 GMT -5
I'm very glad of that! Once I finish Ravenskull's Dream, I will probably start working on another fic right after. I've got details and ideas already, lol. Too many ideas for me to do!
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Post by Pyropelt on May 6, 2018 17:19:32 GMT -5
Hey! I liked your story a lot and thought it was good! I love how you described the action scenes, and even how patience wasn't boring.
Duskfrost was interesting! I like how he was tactical and a good thinker. Also I like how he cared for Darkpaw a bit! It was sad when he died.
I liked how you didn't have Duskfrost fawn over Sagepaw and become mates with her.
Oh my gosh I did not expect the ending at all! I mean I thought at first that he would be caught, but after time went on I forgot about it. I really like how he considered Specklewing a cat that he cared about above all others, since she's his littermate.
I like how you distanced Duskfrost from others by saying how that others felt like an emotional reaction normally, and it was kind of introspective or him thinking to himself.
Overall, this was a great story!
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Post by 🍁Searipple101🍁 on May 7, 2018 13:07:52 GMT -5
Thank you so much for reading it! I'm glad it seems done so well even though it's only my second ever fanfic. I know my writing has improved a lot since this story, but I will always love this one. I'm really glad others do too, and I like reading what specific things about a story that others liked. So, thank you for telling me! Duskfrost is definitely one of my favorite OC's ever, too.
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Post by Pyropelt on May 8, 2018 22:27:37 GMT -5
You're welcome! I love stories like this, with psychoanalysis and subconciousness! I really love how you delved into his thoughts without making it boring, since some stories just drag on and on with thoughts.
Yeah I can tell that you've gotten better! But it still sounds like you, so I liked that aspect too.
Oh plus how you describe blood is neat too!
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Post by 🍁Searipple101🍁 on May 14, 2018 20:18:53 GMT -5
I'm glad it wasn't boring. I always find what characters are thinking to be interesting. But, I do have an interest in psychology, so that might be why. It's just hardly ever boring for me. But I am glad it wasn't boring for you, too! Always good.
How I describe blood? From what I know, it's usually calling it crimson or red, maybe occasionally life essence. I'm glad you like it, but doesn't seem as creative to me, unless I'm missing something awesome I wrote? Please explain XD
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Post by 🍁Searipple101🍁 on Oct 12, 2018 20:22:29 GMT -5
This is a bump to ensure I don't lose this story accidentally.
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Post by 🍁Searipple101🍁 on Mar 15, 2020 18:04:35 GMT -5
This is a bump, so it's not lost.
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DM me if u want
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