Rainbow
Pandean
Ferncloud Deserves Better
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Post by Pandean on Sept 15, 2019 17:10:20 GMT -5
Hey I submitted OCs to that one!! And I liked it!! Thanks I just thought it was too similar to Lost Stars, with the cat who has seizures, and the strange voice, even though, I started it before I even read AVOS, and before Lost Stars came out, but I don't want to look like I was copying you know? Yeah, I get that. Still thought it was cool.
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Post by Deleted on Sept 15, 2019 17:12:54 GMT -5
Thanks I just thought it was too similar to Lost Stars, with the cat who has seizures, and the strange voice, even though, I started it before I even read AVOS, and before Lost Stars came out, but I don't want to look like I was copying you know? Yeah, I get that. Still thought it was cool. Thanks I'm still probably going to continue it though, because it seems to be everyone's favorite lol
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Post by mintedstar/fur🦇 on Sept 15, 2019 18:15:20 GMT -5
Pfft. Yeah, a club would be rather cool. I keep meaning to restart a chat in the WFF, but I've yet to get around to it.
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Post by phantomstar57 on Sept 15, 2019 20:01:14 GMT -5
Thanks I started reading your fic, I love it so far, I find it interesting, that Daisy and Millie, the two ex-kittypets were two of the ones being the most harsh with her I t is odd that I never really noticed that before! But when I did those scenes I tried to keep the canon in mind, and thinking how they would react to a queen Kye's size. Maybe also feeling a touch of jealousy. .. weird how things come out sometimes.
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Post by Deleted on Sept 15, 2019 20:03:40 GMT -5
Thanks I started reading your fic, I love it so far, I find it interesting, that Daisy and Millie, the two ex-kittypets were two of the ones being the most harsh with her I t is odd that I never really noticed that before! But when I did those scenes I tried to keep the canon in mind, and thinking how they would react to a queen Kye's size. Maybe also feeling a touch of jealousy. .. weird how things come out sometimes.Oh, that makes sense My kitten Tony is possibly a quarter Maine Coon, if his father is who everyone thinks it is, but it can't be known for sure, but he's pretty big. He's only 9 or 10 months old, and is already about 10 lbs. My cat Barry, her father was 25 lbs, but I was told that he's a Ragdoll
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Post by phantomstar57 on Sept 15, 2019 20:05:15 GMT -5
Don't mind me, I'm just sitting here grinning over the fact that both of you seem to have met and are having a really helpful discussion which I am totally not making notes on for my own writing. LOL Minted! I see you lurking!
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Post by phantomstar57 on Sept 15, 2019 20:09:51 GMT -5
I t is odd that I never really noticed that before! But when I did those scenes I tried to keep the canon in mind, and thinking how they would react to a queen Kye's size. Maybe also feeling a touch of jealousy. .. weird how things come out sometimes.Oh, that makes sense My kitten Tony is possibly a quarter Maine Coon, if his father is who everyone thinks it is, but it can't be known for sure, but he's pretty big. He's only 9 or 10 months old, and is already about 10 lbs. My cat Barry, her father was 25 lbs, but I was told that he's a Ragdoll Ragdolls can get pretty big, too. I bet Barry was beautiful! My Kai who Kyestrom was fashioned after was 25 pounds. I used his pix for the illustrations. My current male Maine Coon, Darwin is about 20 pounds.
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Rainbow
Pandean
Ferncloud Deserves Better
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Post by Pandean on Sept 15, 2019 20:14:11 GMT -5
Yeah, I get that. Still thought it was cool. Thanks I'm still probably going to continue it though, because it seems to be everyone's favorite lol DO EEET
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Post by Deleted on Sept 15, 2019 20:14:31 GMT -5
Oh, that makes sense My kitten Tony is possibly a quarter Maine Coon, if his father is who everyone thinks it is, but it can't be known for sure, but he's pretty big. He's only 9 or 10 months old, and is already about 10 lbs. My cat Barry, her father was 25 lbs, but I was told that he's a Ragdoll Ragdolls can get pretty big, too. I bet Barry was beautiful! My Kai who Kyestrom was fashioned after was 25 pounds. I used his pix for the illustrations. My current male Maine Coon, Darwin is about 20 pounds. Aw, that's really sweet Darwin is a big boy! The biggest cat I've had so far was 14 lbs. Barry did not take after he father in the size department, she's only 5 lbs, and she has short fur. The only Ragdollish thing about her, is that she flops when you hold her on her back. This is Barry
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Post by Deleted on Sept 15, 2019 20:15:48 GMT -5
Thanks I'm still probably going to continue it though, because it seems to be everyone's favorite lol DO EEET Okay I was actually thinking about updating it tonight or tomorrow, I've started slightly getting back into writing
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Post by Neekwanakwaki (Cloud) on Sept 16, 2019 0:13:19 GMT -5
I too am a writer but so far I'm on writers block due to taking classes and such. Just two more years and I'm graduating with my Bachelor's 🙌.
I'm currently writing a novel about my tribe's reservation in Texas. Not people, but what we call "Rez dogs" ayyee.
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Post by Cheetahstar on Sept 16, 2019 1:25:07 GMT -5
Best fic? I'm realllly enjoying this one author, Hissing Willows. I love their firestar riverclan au fic and their power of three au fic so far I really like Hissing Willows too, never thought that I would find Lionblaze (paw for now) of all cats interesting. IKR? I can't wait for the 2nd book in the power of three one
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Post by Jayie on Sept 16, 2019 7:12:30 GMT -5
It’s technically a comic, not exactly a straight up fanfic, but one of the best Warriors fan stories I’ve read is Twin Shadows by Cushfuddled on DeviantArt. It’s an AU of the first series where Rusty doesn’t join ThunderClan until much later. It’s so clever and well-written in how it shows all the implications of that small change, the art is fantastic, and the pairings in the fic and the LGBT representation are awesome. Here’s a link to the first page: www.deviantart.com/cushfuddled/art/Warriors-Twin-Shadows-Page-1-538896132
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Post by ~Sapphire~ on Sept 16, 2019 8:57:02 GMT -5
In terms of best fics, I'm going to copy over my list from last time this came up (all the fics are on this site)Catch me going through this thread noting down new fics
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Post by phantomstar57 on Sept 16, 2019 9:56:00 GMT -5
Ragdolls can get pretty big, too. I bet Barry was beautiful! My Kai who Kyestrom was fashioned after was 25 pounds. I used his pix for the illustrations. My current male Maine Coon, Darwin is about 20 pounds. Aw, that's really sweet Darwin is a big boy! The biggest cat I've had so far was 14 lbs. Barry did not take after he father in the size department, she's only 5 lbs, and she has short fur. The only Ragdollish thing about her, is that she flops when you hold her on her back. This is Barry She's beautiful!!!
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Post by phantomstar57 on Sept 16, 2019 9:58:09 GMT -5
Thanks I started reading your fic, I love it so far, I find it interesting, that Daisy and Millie, the two ex-kittypets were two of the ones being the most harsh with her I t is odd that I never really noticed that before! But when I did those scenes I tried to keep the canon in mind, and thinking how they would react to a queen Kye's size. Maybe also feeling a touch of jealousy. .. weird how things come out sometimes. In looking at it later I realized, when I wrote it, that Daisy and Millie were scared of her!
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Post by Jayie on Sept 16, 2019 10:08:13 GMT -5
Hey I submitted OCs to that one!! And I liked it!! Thanks I just thought it was too similar to Lost Stars, with the cat who has seizures, and the strange voice, even though, I started it before I even read AVOS, and before Lost Stars came out, but I don't want to look like I was copying you know? Yeah, I had a similar problem with my post-TLH fanfic series EOTW. I started writing it before Bramblestar's Storm was even announced, and I had the lake flooding and ThunderClan escaping from their flooding camp as the plot of the first book. There were other elements that weirdly paralleled AVOS, including predicting a few names like Shadowkit and Yarrowleaf. ^^ I worried about it at first, but I figured as long as I came up with my story stuff on my own and it just happened to turn out similar to canon later, there was no need to worry myself over changing it to be different from canon.
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Post by Deleted on Sept 16, 2019 10:40:52 GMT -5
phantomstar57Thank you That makes that they would be afraid of her JayieThat's awesome actually Either you're psychic, or really good at predicting things XD The name thing happened to me, but in a different fic, I gave two ShadowClan characters, the prefixes Yarrow and Slate, before I even knew there'd be a Yarrow and a Slate in ShadowClan lol However, unlike in the real series, my Yarrow and Slate were mates, but you know, anything can happen, they're both single pringles.
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Post by Jayie on Sept 16, 2019 10:50:08 GMT -5
phantomstar57 Thank you That makes that they would be afraid of her Jayie That's awesome actually Either you're psychic, or really good at predicting things XD The name thing happened to me, but in a different fic, I gave two ShadowClan characters, the prefixes Yarrow and Slate, before I even knew there'd be a Yarrow and a Slate in ShadowClan lol However, unlike in the real series, my Yarrow and Slate were mates, but you know, anything can happen, they're both single pringles. Yeah, and weirdly enough, my Shadowkit is also (spoilers for Tigerheart’s Shadow) the halfClan son of a ThunderClan-born she-cat who joined ShadowClan later in life, though it’s a different she-cat, and he gets raised in ThunderClan instead. I also made Tigerheart leader of ShadowClan, a rebellion in ShadowClan being an important plot thread, and Clans losing territory to a rogue army and having to shelter in ThunderClan’s camp. I love it when weird coincidences like that happen in canon that happen to reflect my fic. ^^ And very true, maybe Yarrow/Slate could still happen in canon.
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Post by Deleted on Sept 16, 2019 11:08:06 GMT -5
phantomstar57 Thank you That makes that they would be afraid of her Jayie That's awesome actually Either you're psychic, or really good at predicting things XD The name thing happened to me, but in a different fic, I gave two ShadowClan characters, the prefixes Yarrow and Slate, before I even knew there'd be a Yarrow and a Slate in ShadowClan lol However, unlike in the real series, my Yarrow and Slate were mates, but you know, anything can happen, they're both single pringles. Yeah, and weirdly enough, my Shadowkit is also (spoilers for Tigerheart’s Shadow) the halfClan son of a ThunderClan-born she-cat who joined ShadowClan later in life, though it’s a different she-cat, and he gets raised in ThunderClan instead. I also made Tigerheart leader of ShadowClan, a rebellion in ShadowClan being an important plot thread, and Clans losing territory to a rogue army and having to shelter in ThunderClan’s camp. I love it when weird coincidences like that happen in canon that happen to reflect my fic. ^^ And very true, maybe Yarrow/Slate could still happen in canon. That's crazy! I'd ship it, they could make a cute couple lol I wouldn't mind of Puddleshine's family line continued on
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#FF55A3
Name Colour
Apricity
Bravelands is too slept on.
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Post by Apricity on Sept 16, 2019 15:36:40 GMT -5
A fanfiction I still love to death is The Shadow Outcast series. Rereading a bit now makes me realize it's not flawless but I still adore the concept and other elements. www.wattpad.com/story/1333830-book-1-warriors-the-shadow-outcastA close second is "Thawing a Frozen Heart", also for a concept I've always been interested in. The writing quality also plays a role, because without it, I can't get too invested with the errors sticking out at me. www.fanfiction.net/s/10678261/1/Thawing-A-Frozen-HeartI must include the Unmasked series, because while the concept couldn't grab me alone, the writing quality and the way emotion is described pulled me in. www.wattpad.com/story/51236530-un-maskedI haven't read a lot of bad fanfictions, mostly because I avoid or barely read them and dig for the good ones, but there is The Better Choice, as others have named. I find the concept interesting, but not the execution. I also read a bit of an unfinished fanfiction from a now deleted account about Ferncloud x Daisy. So many cats were out of character, especially Dustpelt. The author was one of the people that hates Dustpelt with a passion for developing feelings for Ferncloud when she was an apprentice, and sees him as cruel and abusive towards her.
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Post by phantomstar57 on Sept 16, 2019 15:50:20 GMT -5
phantomstar57 Thank you That makes that they would be afraid of her Jayie That's awesome actually Either you're psychic, or really good at predicting things XD The name thing happened to me, but in a different fic, I gave two ShadowClan characters, the prefixes Yarrow and Slate, before I even knew there'd be a Yarrow and a Slate in ShadowClan lol However, unlike in the real series, my Yarrow and Slate were mates, but you know, anything can happen, they're both single pringles. Yeah, and weirdly enough, my Shadowkit is also (spoilers for Tigerheart’s Shadow) the halfClan son of a ThunderClan-born she-cat who joined ShadowClan later in life, though it’s a different she-cat, and he gets raised in ThunderClan instead. I also made Tigerheart leader of ShadowClan, a rebellion in ShadowClan being an important plot thread, and Clans losing territory to a rogue army and having to shelter in ThunderClan’s camp. I love it when weird coincidences like that happen in canon that happen to reflect my fic. ^^ And very true, maybe Yarrow/Slate could still happen in canon. I had to just mention this. .but I'll put it in a spoilerTigerheart does become Tigerstar in the books :-) As he did in my fics and probably so many others before we knew about it LOL I too love when conon stuff in a fic ends up being in the books, but, my problem is my oCs turned the Clans upsidedown and inside out and certain things never happened. . .but, certain events such as a death,or natural disaster, are fixed points in time and sometimes cannot be changed. delayed maybe, but not changed. . .before I continue with my next fic, I have to finish reading the newest books.
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𝓣𝓲𝓷𝓾𝓿𝓲𝓮𝓵
Warrior Fanatic
All hail me, the flower-flushing queen of Prague
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Post by 𝓣𝓲𝓷𝓾𝓿𝓲𝓮𝓵 on Sept 16, 2019 16:25:11 GMT -5
Okay, so I've said which was the worst for me, but I forgot to say the best. For me, it's the Echoes of the War series.
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Post by embertuft on Sept 16, 2019 16:35:27 GMT -5
I don’t really know what to say about good and bad fanfics.. there have been some on Wattpad that I’ve discovered. It’s also to the sort of point in my writing and think, I really didn’t write that well enough, it looks crap and it’s cringy, which I’ve why I’ve quit so many of my fanfics. Luckily I still have one running on Wattpad but honestly I still think my writings pretty bad
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Post by Jayie on Sept 16, 2019 16:46:33 GMT -5
Okay, so I've said which was the worst for me, but I forgot to say the best. For me, it's the Echoes of the War series. Aw, thank you, I’m glad you liked it that much.
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Post by lynxpelt the visionary on Sept 18, 2019 19:01:15 GMT -5
This fandom has so many good fics in it! Some of my personal favourites would definitely be:
Snatched: the Story of Snowkit by Prin Pardus The Poisoned and the Pure by Swyfte Dawn Frost by KatieK101 Falling Smoke by Kiwikirk Sidestep by Unknown Soldier Shadow LEGACY by Blue741776 Safe Haven by Empress Tansy Blazing by Hissing Willows Flooded by Wolfgrowl Tinystar's Beginning by Twilidramon
And for fics in more unorthodox (but equally AMAZING) styles like comics or poems: the Hawktalon Comic Saga by Hawktalon Twin Shadows by Cushfuddled EOAR by Painted Serenity Five Truths by KatieK101 Warriors What Ifs? by Bookreader525 Darktail's Tales by IWalkBlindlyIntoTheShadows
Ahhh
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Post by Viperstrike on Sept 18, 2019 20:04:10 GMT -5
I don't really read fanfiction, so I don't really know any good fics. But every once and a while I'll stumble across something bad.
The Better Choice is one of them. Didnt like that one at all.
I don't remember what this next one was called, but I once stumbled across a fic were the Clans were super sexist and treated all she-cats badly because one time a she-cat did something bad, now all of them had to be punished. Something like that. So all of the female characters were treated like crap and there were really creepy undertones and behaviors. I didn't make it past the first few chapters.
Also any of my stories. They're so bad. I hate them.
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Post by littlerøse on Sept 18, 2019 20:19:57 GMT -5
There was one fanfic I read on the old site that was amazing, but it's been so long I don't remember exactly what the title was or what it was about. It might have been Perfection, or something similar. It was set in a clan would kill cats with any imperfection. I remember there was a kit born blind, but right as she was being executed, she saw. There was another scene where the main character had a dream in which the sky was orange and purple. Anyways, it was pretty dark, and I never finished it, but it was really well written. I wish I could find it again.
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Post by ᴄᴏɴɪ﹣ғᴇʀᴏᴜs on Sept 19, 2019 7:50:54 GMT -5
So the worst fanfic I’ve ever seen is probably Hidden Prophicies (that’s a deliberate spelling error; the title actually has that). The author has little to no idea what they seem to be writing and... it’s typical Mary-Sue-ishness. They didn’t get the concept of **** properly and downright insulted one of their ‘flamers’ (who was a troll, but still) by inserting the person in the story as a villain. ...Not the best thing I’ve seen. I had more fun reading the reviews than the story itself. Best? Man, there’s a lot! I think my favorites out there on the Forums are (F for finished reading, C for currently reading) Where There Is Smoke by mintedstar/fur🦇 (F) How The Mighty Fall by ᴛᴜᴇsᴅᴀʏ (F) New Blood by phantomstar57 (C) Curse by » ѕнαdσω ⚔️ (C) And there’s Lost and Wonder by @specdetective There’s a bunch of comics on the forum that are legendary too: Rocky Destiny by Sparrow, Broken Glass by tiger beetle, and the series done by Hawktalon,, are my favorites. On FFN: Dawn Frost, The Impossible Life of a SkyClan Warrior by KatieK101 Blazing Storm and Po3 rewrite by Hissing Willows Tinystar au by Twilidramon And all one-shots written by lorwell - give them some love! On another note, another bad AU fanfic I’ve read: a FireBlue Au called Burning Blue. It’s about Fireheart x Bluestar and while if it were written some sense, it could be okay (never good, but I’d be neutral if it were written with some logic behind it) but it has none of that. There’s no explanation whatsoever, and the events are mismatched - the story takes place around A Dangerous Path but Yellowfang’s alive even though I’m pretty sure she’s dead by the fire? And also Silverstream and Graystripe are broken up because Silverstream is now with Blackclaw, aka Mistyfoot’s mate... not a good look.
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Post by Deleted on Sept 19, 2019 8:01:12 GMT -5
So the worst fanfic I’ve ever seen is probably Hidden Prophicies (that’s a deliberate spelling error; the title actually has that). The author has little to no idea what they seem to be writing and... it’s typical Mary-Sue-ishness. They didn’t get the concept of **** properly and downright insulted one of their ‘flamers’ (who was a troll, but still) by inserting the person in the story as a villain. ...Not the best thing I’ve seen. I had more fun reading the reviews than the story itself. Best? Man, there’s a lot! I think my favorites out there on the Forums are (F for finished reading, C for currently reading) Where There Is Smoke by mintedstar/fur🦇 (F) How The Mighty Fall by ᴛᴜᴇsᴅᴀʏ (F) New Blood by phantomstar57 (C) Curse by » ѕнαdσω ⚔️ (C) And there’s Lost and Wonder by @specdetective There’s a bunch of comics on the forum that are legendary too: Rocky Destiny by Sparrow , Broken Glass by tiger beetle , and the series done by Hawktalon, , are my favorites. I started reading Hidden Prophicies, I'm on the allegiances right now, the hardcore traditional namers probably had a heart attack at this part lol
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