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Post by what on Jul 15, 2019 17:48:08 GMT -5
so i recently drew my DnD character Katadira, a dwarven cleric. it'd been awhile since i had drawn, and it was my first full body drawing in a long time. it was also the first time i had drawn a dwarf. i showed it to one of my friends and they said her neck was oddly sized, so i need to fix that. her head also looks a bit big to me. is there anything else thati can fix?
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Post by ᴀᴄʜʀᴏᴍᴀᴛɪᴄ on Jul 16, 2019 11:22:37 GMT -5
Dwarves are going to look a little odd anyway just because of the way their bodies are. The neck could be a tad shorter, but tbh other than that I think it looks fine just the way it is. Dwarves are short and stocky by nature so it’s honestly perfect.
Not helpful at all but just thought I’d tell you. Nice art style btw ^^
Edit: I just noticed that one of her boots is a strangely different shade of brown than the other boot and gloves. Figured I’d mention that, unless it was intentional.
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Post by what on Jul 17, 2019 13:58:15 GMT -5
Dwarves are going to look a little odd anyway just because of the way their bodies are. The neck could be a tad shorter, but tbh other than that I think it looks fine just the way it is. Dwarves are short and stocky by nature so it’s honestly perfect. Not helpful at all but just thought I’d tell you. Nice art style btw ^^ Edit: I just noticed that one of her boots is a strangely different shade of brown than the other boot and gloves. Figured I’d mention that, unless it was intentional. thank you! and i don’t know how i missed the boot color thing lol, and i’ll change the neck.
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Post by what on Jul 17, 2019 13:59:14 GMT -5
It looks amazing! I love how you perfected her body shape, though perhaps you could possibly minimize her head size. Other than that I have nothing else to critique. You're doing a spectacular job on how dwarves usually are. thanks for the compliments! and i’ll fix her head (:
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Post by mintedstar/fur🦇 on Aug 2, 2019 13:18:18 GMT -5
This looks good! I can't think of any other improvements.
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