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Post by embertuft on Mar 4, 2019 16:16:22 GMT -5
I like it! I think Sorrelpelt might be my favorite character - the dynamic of clan cats being manipulated and blackmailed by outsiders is super interesting to me, so I'm a bit biased in that regard. On that note, however, I think that relationship (such that it is) is actually done really well! Night is an imposing, threatening character, and it makes sense that Sorrelpelt would be afraid of him. I'm not sure how much of a threat Night could pose to the entire clan - I don't think he and his gang could wipe out the whole thing, but he could definitely do a lot of damage, so while his threats are maybe a little over the top it doesn't ruin the fear Sorrelpelt feels. Then again, he might have wacky Dark Forest powers we don't know about, so it's hard to tell. But yes this fic is EXCELLENT and I'm delighted by it! Aaah thanks so much!!
Yes, Sorrelpelt is a bit of a twisted one. Had so much happen to her and step in the wrong places. Unfortunately, Night doesnβt have any Dark Forest powers (none of them believe in StarClan or Dark Forest except Mercury). I really donβt wanna give too much away, but Sorrelpelt knows Night quite well. His threats may seem way exaggerated right now and too over the top... but youβre just gonna have to wait and see :3 The Clan that Sorrelpelt is in (StormClan) is actually quite small, and they are being starved from Sorrelpelt being blackmailed, which means theyβre even more vulnerable.
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Post by SmugGull on Mar 4, 2019 16:20:46 GMT -5
Ahhh that makes sense!
I didn't figure Night had Dark Forest powers, but you never know...authors are tricksy. Can't wait to see what kind of history Night and Sorrelpelt have.
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Post by embertuft on Mar 4, 2019 16:22:37 GMT -5
Ahhh that makes sense! I didn't figure Night had Dark Forest powers, but you never know...authors are tricksy. Can't wait to see what kind of history Night and Sorrelpelt have. hehehehehehehehehehe Might he be linked to another couple of cats, too. Take a look at the StarClan cats, I recommend. Some links may arise, if you find them, Iβm unsure. (Not Haretooth)
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Post by Pince on Mar 4, 2019 21:45:05 GMT -5
Sorrelpelt burned Honeypaw's mother. But in all seriousness I like Sorrelpelt because in my opinion she is the most likeable. Not that the other characters are bad but I think she is the most mature. However, my opinions might change in later chapters. I really like Honeypaw though.
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Post by embertuft on Mar 5, 2019 0:41:00 GMT -5
Sorrelpelt roasted Honeypaw's mother. But in all seriousness I like Sorrelpelt because in my opinion she is the most likeable. Not that the other characters are bad but I think she is the most mature. However, my opinions might change in later chapters. *burns* I havenβt decided how to write her in next chapters, maybe there might be a little bit of dislike for her actions, but she has her rightful reasons. But Sorrelpelt is the best boi to me too. Whats your opinion on Honeypaw? Sheβs somewhat like a main character but actually is quite minor compared to some others that come up.
Eee spoilers
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Post by embertuft on Mar 9, 2019 4:49:38 GMT -5
Drew a little Sorrelpelt cause i was bored.
Chapter 7 will be released sometime this weekend, whenever I feel motivated. I haven't lost interest, I just canβt be bothered right now.
(Sorrelpelt)
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Post by embertuft on Mar 11, 2019 16:00:28 GMT -5
Chapter 7 half completed bump
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Post by SmugGull on Mar 11, 2019 16:21:43 GMT -5
*squints at the last post*
I feel like I missed something.
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Post by embertuft on Mar 11, 2019 16:32:11 GMT -5
*laughs awkwardly* Well this is what happens if Ember stays up past the sleeping schedule
Posting in the wrong thread
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Post by phantomstar57 on Mar 12, 2019 16:04:12 GMT -5
This looks interesting-will read when I get a bit of time. Going thru over 250 emails. .
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Post by embertuft on Mar 13, 2019 11:06:23 GMT -5
Sorrelpelt burned Honeypaw's mother. But in all seriousness I like Sorrelpelt because in my opinion she is the most likeable. Not that the other characters are bad but I think she is the most mature. However, my opinions might change in later chapters. I really like Honeypaw though. Yay, little gal Honeypaw getting some love <3
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Post by mintedstar/furπ¦ on Mar 15, 2019 17:46:32 GMT -5
Read all the chapters in one go, ha ha.
I'm liking Greynight, personally!
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Post by embertuft on Mar 16, 2019 2:52:45 GMT -5
Read all the chapters in one go, ha ha. I'm liking Greynight, personally! Well done Greynight is a one Iβm particularly fond of, after Thrushfoot.
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Post by embertuft on Mar 24, 2019 10:48:52 GMT -5
Chapter 8 Up!
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Post by mintedstar/furπ¦ on Mar 24, 2019 16:00:39 GMT -5
Neeeeeeeeeew chapter! (which I hope to read soon)
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Post by embertuft on Mar 25, 2019 16:10:53 GMT -5
Neeeeeeeeeew chapter! (which I hope to read soon) <3
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Post by embertuft on Mar 25, 2019 17:45:13 GMT -5
I think I mightβve just found a song that goes perfectly with Finding The Past, in the view of Honeypaw, although I havenβt written up the chapters of which it would fit her, and some other characters.
i suppose it can relate to Haretooth and Sorrelpelt, in a way.
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Post by embertuft on Apr 5, 2019 13:53:38 GMT -5
Chapter 9 bump!
May contain a lil Dapplepaw scene
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Post by embertuft on Apr 15, 2019 14:55:32 GMT -5
New front cover!
And maybe some other things...
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Post by mintedstar/furπ¦ on May 6, 2019 17:44:54 GMT -5
Whoops. I'm not on the fan list. Fan me please!
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