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Post by Puppypaw on Dec 13, 2018 18:15:08 GMT -5
Chapter 1 "M - Mother?" the kit stammered. Her mother was not moving.
The older she-cat's body just lay there, on the cold, hard leaf-bare ground. The she-kit felt tears grow in her soft amber eyes, as she remembered why her mother named her Storm.
"All cats born in storms, like you," her mother had said, "become great someday."
"Will I?" Storm remembered asking. Her mother just purred happily.
And now, the only cat she had known, the cat who had provided her with warmth, food, water, a home, was dead. She hadn't had any littermates, or strayed away from the area they lived in.
Storm felt as if a force was pulling her away. I need to bury my mother.
She pulled her mother to a nearby bush, pulling her beneath the undergrowth. Before she left, she scattered petals on her body. Her favorite ones, rose petals.
"Goodbye, Mother." Storm meowled. "You were always more than my mother to me. If it wasn't for you being my mother, I'd've called you Petal."
Storm weakly walked away, but found herself collapsing soon after.
"Are you okay?!" a voice echoed. She felt her ears ringing. "Hang on!"
The voice mumbled something, but all Storm heard was, "I need... bring... Clan! Hold on!"
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Post by Puppypaw on Aug 2, 2019 17:28:04 GMT -5
Chapter 2 Storm's eyes blunk open.
"Oh, thank goodness!" the familiar voice exclaimed. "You're awake. I'm Goldenrose. What's your name?"
"I'm Storm." Storm said. "Where am I?"
"You're in (Clan)!" Goldenrose exclaimed. Mother had talked about Clans, hadn't she? She said... Storm felt tears come to her eyes. Mom...
"Are you okay Storm?!" Goldenrose asked.
"Y - Yeah." Storm wiped the tears from her eyes. "It's nice to meet you Goldenrose. Well I need to go."
"You were out in the snow alone Storm. I won't let you leave. I've already not been a great medicine cat for my Clan..." Goldenrose said. "You have to recover. I'll tell Shootingstar."
"Excuse me if I'm wrong, but don't cats start with names like yours? Who would name a cat Shootingkit?" Storm asked.
"Her prefix was originally Star, so StarClan changed it to Shooting." Goldenrose said. StarClan?
"StarClan?" Storm asked.
"Where Clan cats go when they die if they were good." Goldenrose said, grabbing some herbs from the herb stash. "Here. Eat these."
Storm ate the herbs. She felt her conscious fading.
"Are you sleepy? Well that's okay. I'll see you in a bit." Goldenrose said, as Storm curled up and fell asleep.
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Post by phantomstar57 on Aug 2, 2019 19:10:59 GMT -5
I like this story so far. Just a note, though. Blunk is not a word. Should be blinked.
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